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Mi primera entrada
Hola todos!
Hoy escribo mi primera entrada en LangCorrect.
Yo estoy aprendiendo español durante un año.
Uso cuatros materiales diferentes para aprender.
Uso Duolingo para aprender palabras nuevas.
Hablo con mi maestra de español, Laura, en Preply cada miercoles durante una hora.
Recientemente, empezo usar "Dreaming Spanish" para practicar mi comprensión auditiva.
Y ahora, empezo usar esta plataforma.
Sept. 15, 2025
My dad's secret
When I was in primary school, I always thought my father's hair can't grey since,I haven't never seen him to barber shop nor dry his hair at our home. It wouldn't be surprising when teacher taught us greying of hair start when you reach 50 years old, I shouted "You're such a liar! not even single hair on my dad's head is grey!“ Everyone looked at me like I'm an idoit. I feeled embrassing but still believed what I said. That evening when my dad picked me up at the school, I immediately asked him "Dad, you haven't been dyed your hair, haven't you? your hairs are natural?" Dad turned his head and speak with confident "Son, where do you this's from? Of course, I dyed my hair. Who would want other to see his old hairs?" Since then, I learn that Teacher can be right sometimes.
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Sept. 15, 2025
Daily Life: Part 19
Qingdao will have a giant rain after two days. To be honest, most people don't like rainy days, because it will interrupt their plans. But for me, it is a good opportunity to get more money; there are some people who need to be sacrificed. Why not me? I feel honored that I could help another person during a rainy day. maybe they are aged, paralyzed, or children. I have to say that these people need to pay attention to take care of themself. Since I decided to be a temporary deliver, I need to respond. Also, I have ordered a raincoat and anti-slip slippers for myself. I prepared everything that I think I need to have on a rainy day. ok, now, I'm about to go home and take a shower. Chatting with my parents about what's happened today. At the end of the day, I wish all of you guys having a good one!
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Sept. 15, 2025
No tempo da Maria Cachucha
Encontrei num website 55 expressões que se são crendo a ser usadas no dia a dia dos portugueses. Não sei se seja a verdade. Não tenho a certeza de como usar algumas delas na conversa. Vou inventar as situações com essas expressões, uma a uma, para provar se as compreendo corretamente.
1. Duas amigas encontram-se depois do longo tempo.
- Olá! Como estás? Não nos vemos há séculos.
- Que surpresa! O que fizeste com o teu cabelo? Onde é que o teu rabo-de-cavalo?
- Ha-ha, foi no tempo da Maria Cachucha. Cortei há uns meses.
Pode ser usada assim?
Sept. 15, 2025
Un stent
Peter n’a que 43 ans. Il est marié et a deux petits garçons. Peter était en bonne santé, ni gros ni trop lourd. Il est travailleur indépendant et j’imagine qu’il travaille de longues heures. Ayant une jeune famille, je me doute bien qu’il a beaucoup de temps de soit se détendre soit faire des exercices.
La semaine dernière, il s’est plaint d’une douleur au bras. Sa femme a immédiatement appelé l’ambulance. Peter a été rapidement transporté à l’hôpital. Aux urgences, le médecin a prescrit de nombreux examens car il soupçonnait que c’était une crise cardiaque.
Bien que le résultat de la majorité de ces examens soit négatif, le médecin n’était pas satisfait et il a prescrit un autre examen, plus sophistiqué. Le résultat était que Peter avait deux artères bouchées et le chirurgien a posé deux stents.
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Sept. 15, 2025
My trip to Switzerland: Day 3, afternoon
After the hike at the First, my wife and I headed back for the cable car station at the main tourist area in Grindelwald. We were tired, but we sticked to our original plan of a hike at Meannlichen. We took a trail called Panorama Hiking Trail, that took us around 2 hours to Kleinen Scheidegg. In the middle of the trail, we saw a herdsman guiding a herd of cows with their herding dogs and a procession of them walking in the opposite direction. It was my very first time to see herding and a very pleasant experience for us. The view from the trail was also scenic and by far exceeded my expectation. After the trail, we headed back to the main station in Grindelwald in which we could find a train to go to the nearest station to our hotel. I was filled with the satisfaction with the pleasant hike, but I was also a bit pissed off by one difficult-to-understand event. When we were heading to the main station, I passed by a shop to buy a cigarette as there was a smoking stand. When I was about to lid fire on a cigarette, a cashier who rang up the sale of the cigarette took away the stand which was right in front of me. I was a bit offended, because I saw a pile of ash on the stand and felt like that cashier intentionally took it away so I cannot smoke there. We actually had a bit of difficulty in communication when I bought the cigarette and that might have annoyed or irritated the cashier, but I am pretty sure I tried to keep behaving in the best way I can do. I anyway tried not to be obsessed with this too much, because I didn't want to let this event, regardless which person was bad, ruin all the great experiences I had so far on this day. After the train, we grabbed some delis at a supermarket and ate them in our room of the hotel. We also went to a self-service pub nearby our hotel. Pouring beer by myself was much fun and all beers I tried were delicious. I was glad that the day was over with this nice new experience.
Sept. 15, 2025
Dîner avec nos amis
C’était une soirée très géniale. Nous avons été invités à dîner chez nos amis. Nous nous entendons très bien et nous sommes amis depuis 40 ans. Nous avions travaillé dans le même hôtel et dans la même année nous avions déménagé à l’Australie.
Nos enfants ont le même âge et pendant leur enfance nous avions fait beaucoup de vacances ensemble. Maintenant, nos filles sont adultes et elles vivent dans une autre ville, mais notre amitié continue et nous nous voyons souvent.
À 18:30h, nous sommes allés chez nos amis. Ils vivent dans la banlieue voisine, seulement 15minute à vol d’oiseau. Comme j’ai remarqué, nous travaillions dans un hôtel et ils étaient chefs professionnels. Comme toujours, le repas était délicieux. Nous avons parlé de tout et de rien et la soirée s’est terminée en beauté.
Sept. 15, 2025
Nettoyage de printemps
Officiellement, le printemps a débuté le premier septembre. Bien qu’il soit printemps, il fait encore froid. Malgré la météo j’ai le pas vif et léger. Cette hiver a été rude et les jours étaient nuageux et gris. De plus, il pleuvait beaucoup.
Ce week-end, j’ai décidé de faire un grand nettoyage, un « spring clean » comme on dit en anglais. Je suis consciencieuse et fais le ménage régulièrement. Je passe la serpillière et l’aspirateur, je nettoie les salles de bains, les chambres et la cuisine.
En ce qui concerne le nettoyage de printemps, en plus, je vais nettoyer des fenêtres, ranger des étagères et des placards. Je possède des vêtements que je ne porte plus et j’ai l’intention de les donner à und boutique caritative. Oui, le week-end sera chargé mais enrichissant.
Sept. 15, 2025
Day 1
I started this app for level up of my English skill especially writing.
Anyway, I think you need self-introduction.
I'm a college student in Japan. And I'm learning English because I want to get high score of TOEIC.
Do you know TOEIC? This is an English exam which is famous in Japan.
TOEIC is consisted of four skills. Listening, Reading, Speaking, and Writing.
Maybe, it's too hard but I'll do my best!!
Sept. 15, 2025
family
My parents are in their fourties. Both my mom and dad are 42 years old. I love my parents very much. They are funny and I feel good with them. But sometimes they are very strict. If I meet friends they want me to be home by 8 pm. And they don't let me go to school in clothes that I like. They are strict, but I know that they only do this for my good and because they are worried about me.
Usaully it is my mother who i get on better with. She is very understanding and helps me with a lot of good advice. I also talk to my father about problems, but less often because he works a lot.
My parents get on well with each other. They discuss everything together, if they don’t have the same opinion, they try to reach an agreement without an argument. They love each other and they love me very much. They are very nice parnts.
Sept. 15, 2025
family
I love my siblings very much. If there is a problem, we talk about it. We laugh a lot together at family dinners. We may be siblings, but each of us has a different personality. I don't think I want to change the current situation. I really love my siblings and I get along well with them.
My parents divorced 10 years ago. My mother had a great responsibility to raise three children alone. But she was only a single mom for a few years. She met my foster father 7 years ago and we have been living together ever since. They got married two years ago. I quickly fell in love with my new father. His name is László Kovács. He's a very good dad. He has very good sense of humor. He loves us very much. He supports and helps us. He can always make me laugh. He is sometimes nervous about his work, I can understand him. It is difficult to work in 3 shifts.
My mother is pretty and beautifull women. She’s medium leight. She’s got blond, cury hair and greenish brown eyes. She heart of gold. Basically I take after my dad in looks, but I have got mother’s character. We atre both very affecttionate. She can always make me laugh. There are a lot of features I admire in her as person, such as how organized and responsible she is, how loving and caring she is towards her family and others. Sheis very family-oriented: her most importent aim is to have a happy family. She does everything for us. She is really unselfish she never thinks about herself, but alwys thinks of other people first. I wish you would take care of yourself more.
Sept. 15, 2025
Estoy triste
Hoy estoy triste porque escribí ayer y anteayer, pero nadie quiere corregir lo que escribí. No lo entiendo. Yo siempre corrijo a los demás. Regresé a mi casa y la encontré muy caliente. ¿Puede ser que haya algo mal con mi aire acondicionado? Ojalá que no. Estoy tratando de escribir aquí cada día, pero se está haciendo más difícil porque me estoy quedando sin temas sobre escribir. Si alguien tiene algunas sugerencias, se le agradecería mucho. Gracias por leer y por su ayuda.
Sept. 15, 2025
Family
The most important word in my life is family. I love my fmily. So when I hear this word I think of peolple who are happy thogether, who love each other. I think of mum, dad, sister, brother, grandparents, aunt, uncle, and cousins. They are the people who I can rely on when I need them. I know that my family will always be there for me. We support each other.
I have a big family, we are five: my mother, my father, my brother, my sister and myself.
I have a sister and a brother.
My sister is 2 years younger than me. Our personalities are completely different. She is lazy and grumpy. While I am hardworking and persistent in my goals. I try to guide her on the right path. We are different but we still understand each other well. When she is sad, I always try to comfort her and give her good advice.
My brother is a year older. There is not much of an age difference between us. I used to not get along with him. We had a lot of disagreements and fights. But over time, I have come to like him more. We have a lot in common and we help each other achieve our goals. We share our problems and help each other. Our taste in music is similar.
Sept. 15, 2025
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Sept. 15, 2025
Mi Ciudad
Estoy en una ciudad antigua y bonita. Esta en el este de China. Tiene muchos edificios antiguos y calles estrechas en donde el tiempo se para. Las casas tienen muros blancos y techos negros, y junto a ellas estan los ríos bonitos, en donde paseamos en bote. La vida aquí es despaciosa y pacífica. Me encanta.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (2/12)
Un breve saggio sulla lingua giapponese (2/12)
Nessuna lingua è più difficile di un'altra. Siamo tutti umani. Però leggere il giapponese è duro. Certo, non è impossibile: migliaia di stranieri imparano a farlo ogni giorno. Ma è un enorme investimento di tempo ed energie. Il sistema di lettura giapponese è dieci volte più complicato di qualsiasi alfabeto europeo.
Ci sono due alfabeti fonetici giapponesi, il hiragana e il katakana con circa 47 lettere. Dico "circa", perché ci sono alcune lettere più antiche che si vedono in qualche poste, ma non sono ufficiali e non sono insegnante a scuola (ne parleremo più avanti.) Linguisticamente, i due alfabeti sono identici, ma sono scritti diversamente. Ad esempio, la lettera "sa" è scritta "さ" in hiragana e "サ" in katakana. Ogni "lettera" giapponese è o una vocale o una combinazione di vocale e consonante. L'unica lettera che è una consonante a pieno titolo è la lettera "n". "ん" in hiragana e "ン" in katakana.
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Sept. 14, 2025
Fast Fashion
Fast Fashion ist ein Begriff, der beschreibt, ein Modell in der Modenindustrie, bei denen Klamotten sehr schnell und in großer Mengen hergestellt und verkauft werden. Diese Produkte auszeichnen sich durch schlechte Qualität, aber sie sind günstig, daher sind für jeder erreichbar. Das Problem ist, dass wegen der schnellen Veränderungen des Trends und der schlimmen Qualität der Kleidungen, den sich beispielweise nur ein paar Mal benutzt werden könnten, enden alles schnell im Müll.
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