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Der Mann aus Neukaledonien
Ich bin schwul und als ich zum ersten Mal in Japan zu einem Schwul-Klub gegangen bin, habe ich einen Mann kennengelernt. Er war nicht Japaner - das konnte ich sofort sehen. Er hat mich angesprochen und am Anfang hat er mir gesagt, dass er aus Frankreich gekommen ist. Nach ein paar Minuten hat er mir gesagt, dass er in der Tat aus Neukaledonien gekommen ist.
Das war das erste Mal, das ich von diesem Land gehört habe. Leider habe ich es niemals besucht, obwohl ich insgesamt fast neun Jahren in Japan gelebt habe. Nun ja, es liegt nicht so in der Nähe von Japan, aber es ist näher als von Brasilien oder Europa.
Der Mann hieß Olivier, glaube ich. Er war älter als ich. Ich war 21 und er war 28, vielleicht. Ich weiß es nicht mehr. Von dem Klub sind wir zusammen zu seinem Hotel gegangen. Er arbeitete als Flug... Wie sagt man das auf Deutsch? Cabin crew.
Wir haben eine tolle Nacht gehabt. Romantisch und angehenm. Ich habe mit ihm dort übernachtet und am nächsten Tag sind wir spazieren gegangen. Er hat meine Hand mehrmals in der Öffentlichkeit gehabt. Wie sagt man? Wir sind Hand in Hand spazieren gegangen? Sagt man das so?
Ich fühlte mich glücklich. Aber er war nicht soooo oft in Osaka und nach dem zweiten Treffen, hat er mir lange nicht mehr schreiben. Wie lange kann ich mich nicht erinnern. Eines Tages hat er mir geschrieben, dass er auf Land in Neukaledonien war und jemanden getroffen hatte.
Ich war wütend auf ihn und wollte ihn nicht mehr sehen. Was habe ich ihm geschrieben? Kann mich nicht an alles erinnern, aber am Ende habe ich "Viel Glück" geschrieben.
Ich weiß nicht, ob das gut war. Wir hatten zweimal getroffen und es war gut, aber ich kann nicht sagen, dass wir eine echte und feste Beziehung hatten. Ich war trotzdem verletzt, dass er mir lange nicht geantwortet hatte. Nun ja, was konnte ich tun? Vielleicht hätte ich das Gleiche machen sollen, wenn eine solche Situation mir noch einmal passieren wäre.
Das Problem war eher sein Schweigen als die Tatsache, dass er mit jemandem geschlafen hatte.
Beziehungen sind schwierig. Menschen sind schwierig.
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
Confrontaciones de hermanas
Cuando éramos jóvenes mi hermana menor y yo no nos llevábamos bien con nuestra hermana mayor. De ser las dos chicas se veían obligadas compartir un baño mientras yo tenía mi propio. Otro factor que motivaba eso era que mi habitación estaba en la planta baja mientras las de mis hermanas estaban en el primer piso que, salvo el del cuarto principal, solo contaba con un baño común. No obstante el compartir el baño intensificaba la tensión entre las dos. Mi hermana mayor tenía la actitud de que ella era la que mandaba y cuyas preferencias tenían prioridad encima de las mías y las de mi hermana menor. La mayor tenía la costumbre enjuagar su ropa en la lavamanos y en su baño había dos como para cada hermana tenía su propia. Un día la menor llegó a casa y vio que la mayor había ocupado su lavamanos con la ropa de ella. Al parecer eso fue la gota que colmó el vaso y para desocupar su lavamanos, la menor recogió la ropa y la tiró en el inodoro. Claro que cuando la mayor se dio cuenta se enojó muchísimo. No obstante felicité a mi hermana menor por haberse defendido a la mayor y por no dejar que la mayor saliese con la suya.
April 30, 2022
the hotel
That hotel wasn't not so good them the pesonal was not so helpless and nice and the bedroom a bit dirty and bed to hard .The food terrible and cold my clothes was not good washed . The bathroom was but good clean and fresh the hand towel white and good scent. But the lunch was terrible the sandwiches was dry. The out side great I was so high. The elevator always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and I was in 20 floor and I must wear my suitcase self and me self water taken and my keycard has not work for three hours . Than I by the beach was was there full with garbage . By tennisplace given only one bat and a dirty ball. Still what in my free drink was a hair. This hotel was really bad and unhygienic.
April 30, 2022
the hotel
That hotel wasn't not so good them the pesonal was not so helpless and nice and the bedroom a bit dirty and bed to hard .The food terrible and cold my clothes was not good washed . The bathroom was but good clean and fresh the hand towel white and good scent. But the lunch was terrible the sandwiches was dry. The out side great I was so high. The elevator always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and I was in 20 floor and I must wear my suitcase self and me self water taken and my keycard has not work for three hours .
April 30, 2022
the hotel
That hotel wasn't not so good them the pesonal was not so helpless and nice and the bedroom a bit dirty and bed to hard .The food terrible and cold my clothes was not good washed . The bathroom was but good clean and fresh the hand towel white and good scent. But the lunch was terrible the sandwiches was dry. The out side great I was so high. The elevator always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and I was in 20 floor and I must wear my suitcase self and me self water taken
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
방탄복을 뚫는 소총 개발 완료
뉴스에 따르면, 소구경화기 제조업체 SNT모티브가 방탄복을 뚫을 수 있는 차세대 소총의 개발을 완료하였다. 전에 잘 쓰이던 비슷한 총과 비교하면 이 새로운 소총이 파괴력과 탄도의 안정성이 많이 높아졌다. 그리고 필요에 따라 총의 다양한 부분을 교체할 수도 있다.
이 새로운 총에 대해 알게 되었을 때 2가지의 생각이 떠올랐다. 하나는 인간들의 창의력이 정말 무한하다는 생각이었다. 우리는 무엇을 창조할 때, 잠시 동안 만족해한 뒤 더 좋은 것을 만들고 싶다는 욕심이 생긴다. 이미 우리에게 있는 물건, 기술 등을 끊임 없이 개선시킨다.
2번째 떠올린 생각은, 인간이 정말 무서운 존재라는 것이었다. 이 세상에서 사람의 몸을 찢고 분산시키고 파괴할 수 있는 무기가 얼마나 많은데 이렇게 강한 소총이 정말 필요한 것인가? 우리는 왜 문제를 해결해야 할 때 평화로운 방법을 찾는 것보다 상대방을 더 쉽게 죽일 수 있는 무기의 개발에 더 많이 집중하는 것인다? 기술의 진도가 훌륭한데 그 기술이 초래할 수 있는 고통과 파괴가 공포스럽다.
April 30, 2022
solution to climate change
In this modern world, climate change is one of the biggest problem. To ensure the earth is habital place for a long time, we need to tackle with climate change problem. My idea for climate change is promote electric vehicle and construct nuclear power plants.
The main cause of climate change is greenhouse gases. To reduce the amount of greenhouse gases, changing the way of transportation should taken into consideration.
In fact, electic car does not produce mush greenhouse gases like methan, carbondioxide, etc.
It is obvious that we need electricity to be able to use electric vehicle. Nuclear power plant will enable us to produce electricity in a clean way like windmill.
April 30, 2022
Mala maca
Obitelja od moja muz ima nova maca. Bila je jako bolesna. Ali obitelj od moje muz brinuci vrlo dobro sa nju.
Ja sam vrlo ponosna na mala maca. Ona je vrlo jaka.
Oni nisu znali ime sa nju, ali sad oni znaju ime: "Kuga"! Jer ona prezivjela je macka kuga.
Oni su dobili macka od glupa zena. Ona znala da macka je jako bolesna ali ona nekazala da je ona bolesna i nezastitila svoju macicu. Moja sogorica spasila je macica. I sad maca je vrlo sretna, ali jos slaba.
Nadam se da je ona cijelo zdravo uskoro!
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
L'examen Oral
Bonjour !
Je vais parler sur l'idée sur le titre 'un changement pour être heureux ?'. L'idée est qu'on pourrait être heureux, si on fait un changement dans sa vie. Ce changement le pourrait être de poste, de vie, se mesurer à de nouvelles tâches ou responsabilités. Le texte est sur un site qui parle sûr dans la gestion de carrière et le recrutement en ligne. Le directeur général de ce site a dit que << Les Français veulent toujours mieux et plus >>.
Je vais présenter quatre idées sur le sujet :
- D'abord, je vais commencer avec l'idéalisme de la vie et l'heureux de célébrités. Comme beaucoup de gens pensent que s'ils auraient leurs vies qu'ils peuvent être heureux comme ils le présentent.
- Deuxième point, je vais faire une comparaison avec l'heureux des gens dans les payes pauvres et les payes d'occasions comme les Français.
- Troisième point est les gens qui toujours reprochent leurs tristes à quelque chose, donc ils n'ont jamais content avec sa vie.
- Enfin, je vais présenter mon avis sur le sujet.
April 30, 2022
Le Crayon
J'ai me souvenir d'un proverbe que j'ai entendu autrefois. C'est "Le crayon est plus fort que le sabre". Je suis d'accord, mais qu'est-ce que ça veut dire exactement? Le crayon est utilisé tous les temps par plein de gens . Par exemple de dessinateurs, d'auteurs, de profs et cetera. Pour moi ce proverbe signife que on peut plus arriver avec de crayon que le sabre. Le sabre est seulement utilisé pour le combat mais c'est différent avec le crayon. Le crayon est un outil d'expression qui peut inspirer des gens par plusieurs sortes.
April 30, 2022
Proposal: an ad for a Junior management position (C1 CAE)
You work for an advertising agency and a new junior management position has opened in your department. Your boss has asked you to make a proposal on what skills and qualities the ideal candidate should have. Read the ad below and make your own suggestions about the candidate’s skills, giving reasons for your opinion.
Junior Management position in Advertising Agency.
Candidate should be able to work in a team structure.
Write your proposal.
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(What could make it sound more natural? )
Requirement for the new junior management position: a proposal.
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ntroduction
The main aim of this proposal is to describe the skills and personal aptitudes the candidate, for the new open position in the agency, shall have. Both involve an appropiate academic background, expertise, as well as, specific personal qualitites.
Academic requisites
Although it should not be a mandatory topic having a degree at advertising or psychology, both are good examples for prospective candidates to understand the area of knowledge with which a professional in advertising often work. In any case, the candidate should demonstrate a basic theoretical background in advertising relating techniques.
Expertise
Despite the fact the ad is for a junior position, a minimal experience may be required in order to ensure the candidate (Synonyms?) knows how an advertising company develops their work daily.
Personal skills
This may be the most determining category for the human resources department to elect the best applicant for this job. Creativity and a good aptitude to work into a group would be essential. Creativity is the most important tool for an advertiser and it is feeded by other colleagues’ ideas in the team into a brain storming session. In this regard, the candidate must be able to accept professionally other people’s critics and improving by this mean. Lastly, despite this company has an almost horizontal hierarchical structure, final decisions are taken by senior staff, therefore junior personnel usually have to deal with a completely different result from what they expected to originally.
Conclusion
All in all, a basic general theoretical and practical background should be required in either junior position. In addition to the ability to work in group and all that it involved to are indispensable in this job.
April 30, 2022
Report: how to improve our school
Introduction
The purpose of this report is to enumerate some improvements that could be carry them out in the outskirts of our school.
Main upgrades
The two principal improvements should be executed are:
- Alternative sports equipment. The school already has popular's sports facilities as basketball and football fields. But, I think it's important giving to the students the opportunity to practice other less popular sports such as tennis, volleyball, baseball...
- Green areas. In the school we don't have any natural space to spare. The placement of a park near the school would to be a good way to disconnect during the classes breaks.
Other improvements
Although the school neighbourhood is quite safe, sometimes there are fights with students from nearby schools. Hire security personnel could help to reduce these awkward situations.
Last but not least, it's very usual to see traffic jams in the first and the last classes times. I should recommend to set up parking spaces in the surroundings or increase the scholar buses number.
April 30, 2022
What does a boy who likes you do?
What they do depends on which period they are in. Different of them will show different behaviors for girls. There are three periods:
1. Boys who first have a heart on loving a girl are shy, stupid and reckless. They like to play tricks on grils and make them mad in which hide boy ‘s ill at ease. Most of them don’t have courage to say “I love you. You make me heartbeat.” directly to girls. We should understand and be tolerant because they are kind and not mention to make you angry.
2. Boys who have some experiences on this are stable and alerted. They are hesitating but they don’t afraid of expressing their love. They start thinking about if they can hold this love or not. They start balancing love and reality. They may love you but won’t tell you because they are not afraid but just want to be more responsible for you.
3. Boys who have experienced love a lot of times are gentle. They are mature which they can handle most things so make you feel they are perfect. The reason they have been so perfect is not only they are rich and old, but also they have a strong heart that can protect you and give you warmth and security.
The above are my observations about three periods of boys. I hope you can cherish them no matter what period the boy who loves you is in. They just show different things which taste different favors. I hope you can have a good love experience.
Thank you for reading, have a lovely day!
April 30, 2022
What it means to study astronomy
Some people argue that there is no use to study astronomy, and we have to care about earth more than night sky. Having said that, The United States spend approximately 0.5 per cent of its GDP to space exploration, for instance. Why the astronomy matter, and is it worth 0.5 per cent of GDP? From my perspective, the importance of astronomy and astrophysics can's be overlooked in terms of both our sense of value and advance of science.
First, astronomy is important because it can change our sense of value. In ancient world, people strongly believed that the earth is a centre of the universe. Researching about the heliocentrism was illegal because it will not follow the bible. But as you know, the fact that earth is orbiting around the sun, and we also found other star systems in outside of the solar system. This finding gave us the perspective that "we are not special as we thought". This is one of the example of the astronomy changed our way of thinking.
Secondly, astronomy is important for development of science. Unlike astrology, astronomy is a branch of science that based on the observational facts. For example, when the presence of electron discovered, nobody knows how to use it. But scientists believed that someday it will distribute the development of science. Then as you know, electron is essential for today's modern world. Same as electron, someday we will notice the importance of astronomy.
In conclusion, Astronomy is important because it can change our sense of value, and it will distribute our society someday.
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
The possibility of extraterrestrial life
I believe in the existence of extraterrestrial life, the living organism found in the outside of the solar system. Existence of aliens deserves further research, even scientist not sure about the presence of extraterrestrial life. From my perspective, The probability of extraterrestrial life is very high.
Thanks to the astronomer's work, we can argue that the presence of hundreds of millions of galaxies in our universe. Every single galaxies has countless stars. This is why I believe alien. The universe is too big for the mankind and creatures on the earth. Now scientists believe that living organism emerged by the process called chemical evolution. It means life can be made from chemical compounds.
As counterexample, some scientist argue the fact that mankind sent so much amount of radio wave to the space for over 200 years. But no one recognize it. So maybe it indicates there is no intelligent in 200 light years away from earth. However, this argument cannot back the inexistent of life up.
Bottom line, Even if there is no extraterrestrial life within 200 light years of Earth, I believe in the existence of aliens because the universe is so large and life can be created from compounds.
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
Pregunta del día: que ves cuando miras a las estrellas?
En primer lugar, ¡casi no veo las estrellas! La gran mayoría de mi vida he vivido en grandes ciudades con mucha contaminación de luz que previene que se vean las estrellas. Hace mucho tiempo que no voy de camping o a un lugar suficientemente apartado y lejos de una ciudad. Pero para responder a la pregunta directamente, lo que veo en las estrellas es un recordatorio de que tan pequeños somos los seres humanos y que la tierra también es minúscula en comparison con lo demás de nuestra galaxia. Me da un sentimiento de profundidad - que solo soy una parte microscopia de un proceso infinitamente más grande. Es como darse cuenta de golpe que lo tan improbable es la experiencia que presenciamos en este planeta. Es casi un sentimiento espiritual: tratar de comprender o sacar significados o lecciones de algo tremendamente grande y misterioso
April 30, 2022
30 avril 2022 - les murs
Comme on a démangé dans un nouveau appartement l’année dernière, ma mère nous interdit de faire plus des dessins sur les murs ou coller des posters ou stickers. Alors désormais, sur les murs grises de ma maison, il y a simplement quelques pièces de dessins et pas plus, parce qu’on veut créer une ambiance artistique.
Mais dans notre vieux appartement, c’était les photos prises quand ma sœur et moi jouaient le rôle de princesse, et les notes d’études. Ce n’était sûrement pas une ambiance artistique ou quoi que ce soit et c’était très désordonné. Pourtant, je pouvais faire n’importe quoi sur ces murs et donc c’était plutôt libre !
April 29, 2022
April 29, 2022
La honte
Je déteste si quelqu'un m'ingnore, plus exactement quelqu'un qui semble faire comme je suis ami avec lui mais quand il ou elle est avec leurs autres amis on fait comme je ne suis pas là. Malheureusement je fais la même chose aujourd'hui mais parce que je voulais l'ignorer mais parce que je suis "pénible". C'est passé déjà beaucoup de fois. Donc, désormais je veux parler avec les gens que je considéré d'amis, la communication est importante. Je ne veux pas ce que c'est se casser à cause d'une seule malentendu.
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