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Conversation about three meals at April 18th 19th 2022
Could you please help correct anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
And I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people
I await your harsh comments!! 💪
By the way,
A is a me.
B is a foreigner.
B: Do you remember what you ate the morning before yesterday?
A: Chinjaoro-su
B: What's Chinjaoro-su?
A: Well.. How can I say...
Chinese-style stir-fry containing thinly sliced green peppers and meat.
B: In what ways is Chinese-style?
A: I guess the sauce is Chinese-style. lol
B: Oh, I wanna try! What about Lunch?
A: I didn't eat lunch.
B: What about dinner then?
A: Yellowtail sashimi.
Have you ever eaten yellowtail sashimi?
B: No.
Is it good?
A: It's good!
B: Which's better, tuna or yellowtail?
A: hmmm, I never thought about it lol
I think I eat tuna more often.
There are many different kinds of tuna.
B: What do you mean?
A: When I want something light, I eat the akami (red meat), usually the chutoro (medium fatty tuna), and when I want something rich, I eat the otoro (fatty tuna).
B: I see. Is the yellowtail fatty?
A: Yeah, it's fatty. But to be honest, sashimi is the same if you put soy sauce on it. Soy sauce is number one. lol
B: No way.lol You'll get fish mad at you.
A: You're right, I take it back. I'm sorry fish. Well have you ever had sashimi?
B: Yes, tuna and hamachi
A: Oh, you've also had hamachi !
Buri and hamachi are the same fish. In Japan, we call this kind of fish "shusse-uo" in Japan.
B: "shusse-uo"?
A: "Shusse" means promotion, and the name of the fish changes as it grows. Just like a person's position in a company changes as he or she grows.
B: I see.
A: Like dolphins and whales, right?
B: Isn't it different from that?
Dolphins and whales change their names based on size rather than growth.
A: Oh, that's right! They are different!
B: Yeah.
Anyway, what did you eat yesterday?
A: Pasta with meat sauce for breakfast, croissants for lunch, and soba stew, fried potatoes, and "餃子" for dinner.
B: What's "餃子"?
A: Dumplings
B: Ah, Gyoza! It's also called potstickers, but maybe only in America. Also what's saba stew?
A: Well... cuisine is going to be hard to explain. I make my soba stew by adding Chicken bouillon powder, bonito flakes, and soy sauce to hot water. After that, I put soba in the there and that's it. It takes only five minutes in my case. The same is true of everything, some people make it easy like me, of course some people stick to cooking, and the way to cook the broth changes depending on the region and the family though.
B: Yeah, I know.
Anyways, you traveled to many countries yesterday, huh? lol
A: Yeah, I went to Italy, France, China and back to Japan. lol
Anyways, why did you ask me what I wanted to eat?
B: Remembering the dishes you ate is good for training your brain. It's said on TV.
A: Ah, you've Stayed sharp my brain for me? Thank you. lol
Then I'll exercise your brain too.
What did you eat the day before yesterday?
May 1, 2022
재 고향과 아칸소주 역사
제 고향 Fort Smith 첫눈에 사소하고 지루해 보여요. 그지만 아칸소주에 2번째 큰 도시하고 미국 개국했을 때 중심되는 역할 했어요. 우리 원래 프랑스의 식민지이였어요, 깃발 안에 이 역사가 반영하고 있어요, 4 개의 나라에 속했어요. 우리의 깃발 디자인: 바깥에는 25개 별이 있는데, 왜냐하면 우리는 25번째 미국의 "state"기 때문이고 안에 4개 별 있어요. 우리 속했던 나라들 상징하기 위해: Confederate States of America, 프랑스, 스페인, 미국예요.
그리고 당신 알다사피 영국, 프랑스, 스페인, 포르투갈, 식민지로 만들기 전에 아메리카 대륙에 아메리카 원주민 많이 있었어요.
남미에서 우리는 그들을 결국 오클라호마에 강제로 쫓아냈어요, 재 고향에서 아칸소주 강에 지나갔어요. 아칸사와 오클라호마 강로 나눠요, 그리고 제 고향은 그 국경과 강 옆에 있어요.
May 1, 2022
Riding toward the new bridge
We went to ride bicycles. Where we wanted to go was the new bridge built across the reservoir. It was near the highway. Last time, we went there it was quite good. Sunshine was nice and we ate bread prepared. We could see the birds that were not seen easily.
But today, it wasn't. There were huge trucks being around. The water is smelly. Dead fishes were floating around the edge of the water.
"It's disgusting."
It reminded the fact my friend told me that the water was very dirty because of the livestock facilities. The waste water would had been flow out from some of the facillities without being disposed properly. I don't know they had been punished.
"Farmers will do rice farming using this water."
We turned around and came back to home. The wind blew strongly. I don't like the wind in this season. I love the sunshine of Spring but hate the wind. It makes my head hurt. Anyway riding a bicycle reduced my guilt for not to exercise and made me feel better.
"I realize we live in the rural area when we ride bicycles."
At home, we ate an orange that we were planning for snacks at the reservoir.
"It's delicious."
May 1, 2022
May 1, 2022
Introduction
Hi everyone,
I am new in this site, this is the first journal I am publishing, so I would like to quickly introduce myself. I am 33 years old, I am from Hungary, but at the moment I live in Austria. I like playing board games, meeting with my friends or relateives, taking a hike and exploring new cities.
I would like to publish journals in this site regularly to practice English and German. At the moment I feel that I don't have problem with comprehension, but my speaking and writing skills are not good enough. In my job I use English on a daily basis, but sometimes it takes quiet a lot of time to write an email.
May 1, 2022
Mon cuisine prefere
Aujourd'hui je voudrais parler de mon cuisine prefere. Je pense que chacun a son cuisine prefere. Si je dois choisiri un, je pense que je choisirai une cuisine italienne. J'adore pates et pizza. Je peux les manger toute le jours. Mais je n'aime pas juste la cuisine italienne. Je crois que chaque pays a le plat que j'aime. Par example la France a le quiche lorraine qu'il j'adore. Je pense que la cuisine americane c'est aussi bon parce que c'est une melange de cuisines tres different et tu peux essayer beaucoup plats de pays different.
May 1, 2022
Lavar los platos, o no
Vivo en el piso superior de una casa en la que actualmente alquilo una habitación y me empeño para mantener los espacios públicos limpios después de que los utilizo. Quiere decir que trato de no dejar platos ni cubiertos en el fregadero, ni cacerolas sobre la estufa, y menos mis objetos personales tirados en lugares donde la gente circula. Sin embargo, me ha dado pereza lavar los utensilios así que en vez de lavar cada uno tras usarlo, dejo que acumulan sobre un estantería en mi habitación. Si bien me permite minimizar los viajes a la cocina y además reducir la frecuencia con la que tengo que lavar cosas, me doy cuenta de que puede provocar un escasez de utensilios en la cocina.
May 1, 2022
Voler
"Parce que le humain ne peut pas voler il cherche autre moyens de le faire." C'est une vraiment jolie citation. Pour moi il signifie que le humain cherchera toujours quelque chose pour progresser. Les Humains ne peut pas voler, donc il y a d'avions et de hélico. Les humains peut mourir facilement, donc il y a de medicines. Comprenez-vous ce que je veux dire, le humain n'arrêtera pas de touver de façons à atteindre son objectif.
May 1, 2022
Tema del día: escribe sobre un personaje sembrando semillas
Amanecía y la luz del sol tenue se asomaba entre las nubes y las montañas en la distancia. Un viento frío y húmedo azotaba la cara de Sarah mientras ella miraba al horizonte, contemplando el trabajo del día y los muchos hectares por sembrar. Este año su papa no ha podido contratar suficientes trabajadores y, para ayudar al negocio familiar, ella y sus dos hermanos decidieron tomar una pausa de un semestre de la universidad y aprender algo sobre la vida de un granjero. La máquina automática para sembrar semillas se descompuso hace una semana y está en un taller. Desgraciadamente, si no sembran las remolachas esta semana, van a faltar el periodo para que crezcan en tiempo para la cosecha. Hoy la suerte no le tocó a Sarah. A ambos de su hermanos les dio la gripa y están recuperándose en casa. Su papá está en el taller (y además su cuerpo ya no es tan apto para este tipo de trabajo), y quien sabe dónde fueron los otros hombres que iban a trabajar hoy. Parada en la sementera, estaba a sola y un poco desmotivada. Ya le dolía la espalda inferior por agacharse y hincarse tanto los días anteriores. Este semestre va a ser mucho más duro que se lo imaginaba.
May 1, 2022
May 1, 2022
May 1, 2022
1 mai 2022 - fourmis
Hier, je passais toute la journée à « jouer » avec les fourmis. Pendant mon petit-déjeuner, j’ai tombé quelques morceaux de pain sur la terre et immédiatement, un fourmi l’a approché et il a appelé ses amis à venir et l’apporter chez eux. Du coup, il y a eu dizaines de fourmis venants et j’ai tracé leur origine - c’était un petit trou dans le coin. Les nombres de fourmis étaient tout-à-faire hors de mon imagination, alors je l’ai mis dans deux boîtes transparents. Mais comme ils coulaient très rapidement, je ne pouvais que enfermer la moitié d’entre eux. Je l’ai laissé dans le balcon et j’allais temps en temps pour les voir. C’était très intéressant d’observer leur comportement. Quand un d’entre eux était coincée dans la jonction entre le couvercle et la boîte, les autres sont venus et ont essayé de l’aider. Cet acte m’a touché et j’ai décidé de les libérer.
April 30, 2022
Der Mann aus Neukaledonien
Ich bin schwul und als ich zum ersten Mal in Japan zu einem Schwul-Klub gegangen bin, habe ich einen Mann kennengelernt. Er war nicht Japaner - das konnte ich sofort sehen. Er hat mich angesprochen und am Anfang hat er mir gesagt, dass er aus Frankreich gekommen ist. Nach ein paar Minuten hat er mir gesagt, dass er in der Tat aus Neukaledonien gekommen ist.
Das war das erste Mal, das ich von diesem Land gehört habe. Leider habe ich es niemals besucht, obwohl ich insgesamt fast neun Jahren in Japan gelebt habe. Nun ja, es liegt nicht so in der Nähe von Japan, aber es ist näher als von Brasilien oder Europa.
Der Mann hieß Olivier, glaube ich. Er war älter als ich. Ich war 21 und er war 28, vielleicht. Ich weiß es nicht mehr. Von dem Klub sind wir zusammen zu seinem Hotel gegangen. Er arbeitete als Flug... Wie sagt man das auf Deutsch? Cabin crew.
Wir haben eine tolle Nacht gehabt. Romantisch und angehenm. Ich habe mit ihm dort übernachtet und am nächsten Tag sind wir spazieren gegangen. Er hat meine Hand mehrmals in der Öffentlichkeit gehabt. Wie sagt man? Wir sind Hand in Hand spazieren gegangen? Sagt man das so?
Ich fühlte mich glücklich. Aber er war nicht soooo oft in Osaka und nach dem zweiten Treffen, hat er mir lange nicht mehr schreiben. Wie lange kann ich mich nicht erinnern. Eines Tages hat er mir geschrieben, dass er auf Land in Neukaledonien war und jemanden getroffen hatte.
Ich war wütend auf ihn und wollte ihn nicht mehr sehen. Was habe ich ihm geschrieben? Kann mich nicht an alles erinnern, aber am Ende habe ich "Viel Glück" geschrieben.
Ich weiß nicht, ob das gut war. Wir hatten zweimal getroffen und es war gut, aber ich kann nicht sagen, dass wir eine echte und feste Beziehung hatten. Ich war trotzdem verletzt, dass er mir lange nicht geantwortet hatte. Nun ja, was konnte ich tun? Vielleicht hätte ich das Gleiche machen sollen, wenn eine solche Situation mir noch einmal passieren wäre.
Das Problem war eher sein Schweigen als die Tatsache, dass er mit jemandem geschlafen hatte.
Beziehungen sind schwierig. Menschen sind schwierig.
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
Confrontaciones de hermanas
Cuando éramos jóvenes mi hermana menor y yo no nos llevábamos bien con nuestra hermana mayor. De ser las dos chicas se veían obligadas compartir un baño mientras yo tenía mi propio. Otro factor que motivaba eso era que mi habitación estaba en la planta baja mientras las de mis hermanas estaban en el primer piso que, salvo el del cuarto principal, solo contaba con un baño común. No obstante el compartir el baño intensificaba la tensión entre las dos. Mi hermana mayor tenía la actitud de que ella era la que mandaba y cuyas preferencias tenían prioridad encima de las mías y las de mi hermana menor. La mayor tenía la costumbre enjuagar su ropa en la lavamanos y en su baño había dos como para cada hermana tenía su propia. Un día la menor llegó a casa y vio que la mayor había ocupado su lavamanos con la ropa de ella. Al parecer eso fue la gota que colmó el vaso y para desocupar su lavamanos, la menor recogió la ropa y la tiró en el inodoro. Claro que cuando la mayor se dio cuenta se enojó muchísimo. No obstante felicité a mi hermana menor por haberse defendido a la mayor y por no dejar que la mayor saliese con la suya.
April 30, 2022
the hotel
That hotel wasn't not so good them the pesonal was not so helpless and nice and the bedroom a bit dirty and bed to hard .The food terrible and cold my clothes was not good washed . The bathroom was but good clean and fresh the hand towel white and good scent. But the lunch was terrible the sandwiches was dry. The out side great I was so high. The elevator always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and I was in 20 floor and I must wear my suitcase self and me self water taken and my keycard has not work for three hours . Than I by the beach was was there full with garbage . By tennisplace given only one bat and a dirty ball. Still what in my free drink was a hair. This hotel was really bad and unhygienic.
April 30, 2022
the hotel
That hotel wasn't not so good them the pesonal was not so helpless and nice and the bedroom a bit dirty and bed to hard .The food terrible and cold my clothes was not good washed . The bathroom was but good clean and fresh the hand towel white and good scent. But the lunch was terrible the sandwiches was dry. The out side great I was so high. The elevator always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and I was in 20 floor and I must wear my suitcase self and me self water taken and my keycard has not work for three hours .
April 30, 2022
the hotel
That hotel wasn't not so good them the pesonal was not so helpless and nice and the bedroom a bit dirty and bed to hard .The food terrible and cold my clothes was not good washed . The bathroom was but good clean and fresh the hand towel white and good scent. But the lunch was terrible the sandwiches was dry. The out side great I was so high. The elevator always going to broken I stuck always there I must use the stage and I was in 20 floor and I must wear my suitcase self and me self water taken
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
방탄복을 뚫는 소총 개발 완료
뉴스에 따르면, 소구경화기 제조업체 SNT모티브가 방탄복을 뚫을 수 있는 차세대 소총의 개발을 완료하였다. 전에 잘 쓰이던 비슷한 총과 비교하면 이 새로운 소총이 파괴력과 탄도의 안정성이 많이 높아졌다. 그리고 필요에 따라 총의 다양한 부분을 교체할 수도 있다.
이 새로운 총에 대해 알게 되었을 때 2가지의 생각이 떠올랐다. 하나는 인간들의 창의력이 정말 무한하다는 생각이었다. 우리는 무엇을 창조할 때, 잠시 동안 만족해한 뒤 더 좋은 것을 만들고 싶다는 욕심이 생긴다. 이미 우리에게 있는 물건, 기술 등을 끊임 없이 개선시킨다.
2번째 떠올린 생각은, 인간이 정말 무서운 존재라는 것이었다. 이 세상에서 사람의 몸을 찢고 분산시키고 파괴할 수 있는 무기가 얼마나 많은데 이렇게 강한 소총이 정말 필요한 것인가? 우리는 왜 문제를 해결해야 할 때 평화로운 방법을 찾는 것보다 상대방을 더 쉽게 죽일 수 있는 무기의 개발에 더 많이 집중하는 것인다? 기술의 진도가 훌륭한데 그 기술이 초래할 수 있는 고통과 파괴가 공포스럽다.
April 30, 2022
solution to climate change
In this modern world, climate change is one of the biggest problem. To ensure the earth is habital place for a long time, we need to tackle with climate change problem. My idea for climate change is promote electric vehicle and construct nuclear power plants.
The main cause of climate change is greenhouse gases. To reduce the amount of greenhouse gases, changing the way of transportation should taken into consideration.
In fact, electic car does not produce mush greenhouse gases like methan, carbondioxide, etc.
It is obvious that we need electricity to be able to use electric vehicle. Nuclear power plant will enable us to produce electricity in a clean way like windmill.
April 30, 2022
Mala maca
Obitelja od moja muz ima nova maca. Bila je jako bolesna. Ali obitelj od moje muz brinuci vrlo dobro sa nju.
Ja sam vrlo ponosna na mala maca. Ona je vrlo jaka.
Oni nisu znali ime sa nju, ali sad oni znaju ime: "Kuga"! Jer ona prezivjela je macka kuga.
Oni su dobili macka od glupa zena. Ona znala da macka je jako bolesna ali ona nekazala da je ona bolesna i nezastitila svoju macicu. Moja sogorica spasila je macica. I sad maca je vrlo sretna, ali jos slaba.
Nadam se da je ona cijelo zdravo uskoro!
April 30, 2022
April 30, 2022
L'examen Oral
Bonjour !
Je vais parler sur l'idée sur le titre 'un changement pour être heureux ?'. L'idée est qu'on pourrait être heureux, si on fait un changement dans sa vie. Ce changement le pourrait être de poste, de vie, se mesurer à de nouvelles tâches ou responsabilités. Le texte est sur un site qui parle sûr dans la gestion de carrière et le recrutement en ligne. Le directeur général de ce site a dit que << Les Français veulent toujours mieux et plus >>.
Je vais présenter quatre idées sur le sujet :
- D'abord, je vais commencer avec l'idéalisme de la vie et l'heureux de célébrités. Comme beaucoup de gens pensent que s'ils auraient leurs vies qu'ils peuvent être heureux comme ils le présentent.
- Deuxième point, je vais faire une comparaison avec l'heureux des gens dans les payes pauvres et les payes d'occasions comme les Français.
- Troisième point est les gens qui toujours reprochent leurs tristes à quelque chose, donc ils n'ont jamais content avec sa vie.
- Enfin, je vais présenter mon avis sur le sujet.
April 30, 2022
Le Crayon
J'ai me souvenir d'un proverbe que j'ai entendu autrefois. C'est "Le crayon est plus fort que le sabre". Je suis d'accord, mais qu'est-ce que ça veut dire exactement? Le crayon est utilisé tous les temps par plein de gens . Par exemple de dessinateurs, d'auteurs, de profs et cetera. Pour moi ce proverbe signife que on peut plus arriver avec de crayon que le sabre. Le sabre est seulement utilisé pour le combat mais c'est différent avec le crayon. Le crayon est un outil d'expression qui peut inspirer des gens par plusieurs sortes.
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