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Why should you go for your dream?
Because you live for only once in the world. You come to the world, not for living, you come to the world for experience. Dream are your goals. It will be very boring if you only work and work without goals in daily lfie.
There is a very famous quote:”You pay the same cost for big or small goals, why don’t we choose the big one?”
You won’t have passion if your live in your life without dream. At least go for
your dream based on think which you want yourself be better and have psaaion!
May 19, 2022
vor zwei Tagen
Vor zwei Tagen, mein Vater ist nach Deutschland gefahren. Er hat seiner Enkelin, die ist fünf Jahren alt, betreut. Meine Frau und mein Hund sind im Wald gegangen. Ich habe Deutsch gelernt. Am Abend, wir haben zusammen eine neue Serie namens ‘‘Erşan Kuneri‘‘ gesehen. Es war schön für Zeit verbringen. Vor dem zu Bett gehen, habe ich ein paar Seiten in einem Buch gelesen. Das Buch des Namens ist ‘‘Atomic Habits‘‘ und es ist über diese Gewohnheiten. Ich habe meine Gewohnheiten verbessert zum Beispiel ıch habe meine täglichen Aktivitäten geschrieben.
May 19, 2022
May 19, 2022
A Reply
The first thing I want you to know is that you have a really nice American accent and you don't speak too much in your lessons, so no worries.
Doing two hours of speaking practice every day is very easy for me. I don't do two one hour slots of speaking in a row, I only do it separately at different times.
Skilled English teachers seem like they can make a long time short, so when lessons are over, students feel that there are still a lot of things that they haven't spoken about and want to make the lessons become longer.
Not skilled teachers are the opposite, and their lessons are boring. Students will feel bored during lessons, don't have the desire to speak and just want to finish the lessons early.
In fact, it's not that students speak in lessons all the time. They have many pauses, for instance, listening to teachers to reply to their questions, discussing topics with their teachers, in the process of thinking of how to make sentences. Anyway, teachers only speak when students want them to, and only try to perfect students' expressions, telling them the most natural sentences.
As to letting students know that the teachers are listening to them, I believe that contact with students by eyes and slightly nods is better than saying "yeah" "okay" etc.
I don't mind telling you about my two favorite teachers. The male teacher is Allan and the other female teacher is Jazmine. Their tutoring fees are from 5 to 8 dollars per hour.
May 19, 2022
Un samedi libre
J’habite dans une petite ville donc les choix peuvent être limités. Mais, si la météo est agréable, je suggère la plage. Nous avons un magnifique lac où tu peux aller faire du ski nautique. Après, on pourrait aller dîner sur la terrasse au centre-ville. Nous avons beaucoup de bons restaurants même si c’est une petite ville. Alors, on pourrait visiter la boîte de nuit ! Ensuite, j’aime jouer au bowling - je suggère un jeu là-bas.
May 18, 2022
Il concorso del cinema
A chi di dovere,
Mi chiamo Matteo, sono uno studente del cinema. Da qualche anno scrivo una rubrica del cinema sul mio blog si titola "Il schermo argento".
Il mio film preferito è senza dubbio "Breakfast at Tiffany's". È una commedia romantica in cui un uomo si chiama Paul è uno scrittore senza lavoro, e una donna si chiama Holly lavora come una zoccola. I due si incontrano nel loro edificio di appartamenti a New York City, si conoscono di più, si innamorano, e infine decidono come fare con le loro vite.
Se fossi invitato a recitare un ruolo in questo film, sarei interpretato il commesso a Tiffany's, che ha inciso un annello a giocattolo come un regalo da Paul a Holly.
Accetterei volontieri un ruolo nella Sua prossima produzione.
In attesa di una Sua risposta,
Matteo Di Annunzio
May 18, 2022
May 18, 2022
El verano
Por fin, hace sol y temperaturas elevadas! Durante las ultimas semanas de abril hacia tanto lluvia y tuvimos que encender la estufa, y quemar la leña que estuvimos ahorrando para el invierno.
Por otro lado, con la lluvia tenemos muchas flores en el jardin., y muchas flores silvestres en el camo, las mas bonititas hace mucho tiempo. Con el llegado de verano hay muchas cosas para hacer. Tenemos que limpiar la calima de las terrazas, pintar las paredes y cortar las hierbas malas.
Solo podemos trabajar en las mañanas. Por las tardes hace tanto calor y tomimos siestas.
May 18, 2022
Une dictée
Il y a environ une huitaine, j'ai découvert un compte Twitter qui s'appelle « Mashup par HugoDécript ». Beuacoup de ses tweets sont accompagnés avec des vidéos courtes durant 30 secondes à 1 minute. Dans les tweets récents avec Joyca, que j'avoue que je ne connais pas vraiment, et Hugo parlent assez vite en mangeant des syllabes, ce que j'ai trouvé comme un bon exercice pour la compréhension orale des conversations familières. Je vais écrire ci-dessous mon texte de dictée, et je voudrais que vous me corrigiez après avoir écouté la vidéo, dont le lien est ici -> https://urlz.fr/ijpv
Avant de faire cet entraînement, j'ai vérifié les règles de cette communauté LangCorrect, dans lesquels je n'en ai trouvé aucune qui interdit la dictée de vidéos, d'autant plus que je n'ai absolument aucune intention d'utiliser vos corrections à des fins commerciales. Pourtant, veullez m'indiquer si ce billet contient un élement d'infranction, je vais effacer tout de suite ce billet. (les règles de la communauté est ici -> https://langcorrect.com/community-guidelines/)
En plus, en raison de caractères de cette vidéo coupée à partir d'un live streaming, je n'arrive pas vraiment à en saisir le contexte. Si cela pose des problèmes pour corriger ma dictée, dites-le-moi également s'il vous plaît pour que j'aille chercher d'autres vidéos qui conviendraient davantage à ce genre d'entraînement.
Hugo : Dans sa pluie dans le chat il n’arrive plus à parler
Joyca: Sa pluie dans le chat ?
H : Ouais, ouais. Il y a pluie le mec
J: Il y a la pluie de...
H : Bah chais pas(je ne sais pas), intempérie il est trop bizzare mec..
J : Merde
H : Ouais, désolé les gars pour la douche. C’est trop cheleu (louche).
Mais chais pas chais pas si t’as noté un truc bizarre j'ai pas mis plus mec..
J: Merde. il pleut et les gens n’ont pas de parapluie ?
H: Littéralement, ouais, il pleut et ils ont même pas de parapluie
J : On dit, on a..il faut arrêter cette vanne ?
H : C’est ah c’est trop lent
J : Mais qu’est-ce qui se passe...ah c’est trop lent ?
H : Ah, on peut continuer encore ? Ça ça on dit quoi (,,,)
J : Que, que, que disent les gens !? est-ce qu’ils passent un bon moment ou est-ce qu’il veulent que je parte !?
H : On me dit an opé avec K-Way qui est possible
J : Avec qui !?
H : Avec K-Way la marque.
J : Tellement il pleut là dans le chat ?
H : Tellement il pleut...
J: Mais c’est dingue.
May 18, 2022
May 18, 2022
Give directions 4
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me. Do you speak English?
A: Just a little.
B: Could you please give me some directions?
A: Sure. Where are you headed?
B: l’m looking for the YaKosupermarket.
A: Oh, that’s not far. First, turn left at that corner, then turn right at the next corner. When you come to the T, turn left. If you walk little bit from there you'll see on your left a big building with a red sign on it. That building is the YaKosupermarket.
B: Turn left. Turn right. Turn left at the T. Then I'll see a building with a red sign. Is this ok?
A: Yeah, It’s perfect...Maybe, haha.
B: Don’t get me confused!
A: I’m sorry, haha. It's all good. You'll be all right!
B: Haha. Ok! Thank you so much!
A: You're welcome.
May 18, 2022
Give directions 6
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi, what’s wrong?
B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, do you know where it is?
A: Metro?
B: Yes.
A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure. Are you in a rush?
B: No, not really.
A: I have some time so I can find it on my phone and take you there, if you want?
B: Oh, really?
A: Of course!
B: Thank you!
A: Anyways, what kind of store is it?
B: It’s a wholesale market. It sells groceries like Costco.
A: Ok. Is it spelled like M-E-T-O-R-O?
B: No. It’s M-E-T-R-O.
A: Oh, M-E-T-R-O. Ok. It's in this city, right?
B: Ah~, probably.
A: Okay, haha.
B: Wait a sec, I'll check again too.
A: Is this it?
B: Oh, yeah. Yes, that's it!!
A: A: Hang on a sec, I'll search the route. Oh, it said it’s about a 5-minute walk from here. This way then. Let's go.
B: Alright, let’s go.
A: Ah, wait. Oh... M, G...It's closed today.
B: Seriously?
A: Yeah, it says so.
B: Oh...gosh.
A: Haha. Gotcha!
B: Heyyy!
A: Sorry, I've been wanting to say "gotcha", haha. As long as I live in Japan, I don't have many opportunities to talk with foreigners.
Did you really believe me?
B: Yeah. You got me. Which is it really? haha.
A: The truth is, it’s open. Don’t worry.
B: Oh, okay, haha.
I'm glad to hear that.
A: Yeah. Good for you.
Anyways, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way here to Japan?
May 18, 2022
Give directions 5
Could you please help by correcting anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
You can change the order of the sentences, or do whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
Also, I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreigners.
I look forward to your constructive comments.✍️
By the way, "A" is me and "B" is a foreigner.
B: Excuse me.
A: Hi, how may I help you?
B: I'm looking for a store called Metro, do you know where it is?
A: Metro?
B: Yes.
A: Sorry, I'm not quite sure. Are you in a rush?
B: No, not really.
A: I have some time so I can help you find it on my phone and take you there, if you want?
B: Oh, really?
A: Of course!
B: Thank you!
A: Anyways, what kind of store is it?
B: It’s a wholesale market. It sells groceries like Costco.
A: Ok. Is it spelled like M-E-T-O-R-O?
B: No. It’s M-E-T-R-O.
A: Oh, M-E-T-R-O. Ok. It's in this city, right?
B: Ah~, probably.
A: Okay, haha.
B: Wait a sec, I'll check again too.
A: Is this it?
B: Oh, yeah. Yes, that's it!!
A: Hang on a sec, I'll search the route. Oh, it said it’s about a 5-minute walk from here. Ok, right. This way then. Let's go.
B: Yes, let's go.
A: Anyways, did you check to see if the store is open today?
B: Ah~, No, haha.
A: Haha. Okay. Let me check.
Oh, saaaafe!
B: Is it open?
A: Yes. It says they are open from 9am to 10pm on weekdays.
B: Oh, good. That’s a relief.
A: Yeah, good for you.
Anyways, why would you go to a wholesale market when you came all the way here to Japan?
May 18, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 74
Summary no. 74
Sergeant Brunswick set off as soon as Mrs Groynes passed on to him the terrible news that Masie had been reported missing. On his way to the town centre to meet up with Vince, he started to play out the worst scenarios in his mind. However, that was not to try and come up with plans to find her—he was simply too distraught to do that. It took him a while to make out Vince in the rain. The bad weather would surely hinder the search. When he finally joined Vince, he was greeted by a furious Vince that blamed him for Masie’s disappearance. Still, Vince had also some information to share. When he had last saw her, Masie was going out with a Twitt-something. Although Vince couldn’t remember the name exactly, it was enough for Brunswick to think of constable Twitten. His mind raced with terrible thoughts.
May 18, 2022
Eine Prinzessins Abenteuer
Vor langer langer Zeit, es gab eine Prinzessin, die ihre hinterlistige Stiefmutter überzeugte, freundlich zu werden; die der grausame Drache veränderte, Menschen zu helfen; die der Hochnäsig Prinz lehrte, ein beliebte Leiter zu werden. Dann jeder war glücklich und alles war gut, außer der Prinzessin.
Jeden Morgen ging sie draußen und sprach mit den Mensch, und jeden Tag bekam sie die Antwort, wir hatten genug zu essen, genug zu tragen, und genug Zeit für die Vergnügen. Bitte machen Sie kein Sorgen! Also lächelte die Prinzessin sich natürlich auch sehr groß.
Dann ging Sie zurück in der Schloss, aß die leckeres Gerichte mit dem Prinz, tanzte mit dem Drache, und spielte Golf mit ihrer Stiefmutter und Stiefschwester. Am nächste Morgen ging sie wieder draußen und fragte nach den Mensch, und so weiter. Der Prinzessin erinnerte an, was die Fee segnete sie mit bei ihre Hochzeit: sie werden nie sterben, und alles werden so gut wie jetzt bleiben. Es war aber ein Fluch! Niemand hatte sie über die Langweiligkeit gewarnt. Sie war glücklich nur jede Nacht, wenn sie über ihre früher Abenteuer und Arbeit träumte.
Eines Tages konnte sie endlich ihre Langweiligkeit nicht halten. Am Morgen redete sie mit den Menschen, aber sagen sie: Prinzessin, Sie sind sehr lustig. Guten Tag und bis Morgen! Am Mittagessen sagte sie mit dem Prinz, aber sagte er: meine Schatz, möchtest du mehr Regionale Spezialitäten? Noch besonderes schönes Kleid? Mehr Diener? Die Prinzessin seufzte. Sie übersprung die Tanz mit dem Drache und ging ins Bett für die ganze Nachmittags. Dann die nächste Tag. Und die nachste Tag. Sie erlaubte niemand in ihrer Kammer zu gehen, außer dem Diener, der Essen brachte. Am dritten Tag brachte der Diener ein Glas Apfelsaft als Frühstück.
Die Prinzessin trank es, dann plötzlich stand sie auf und wanderte am Flur entlang, bis zur eine kleine schwarz Tür. Sie öffnete der Tür langsam, ging ins Zimmer und saß neben der verwunschen Feuer. Aus der Schatten ging eine alte Dame.
Die Prinzessin fühlte ihre eigene Herzschlag erstmal in langer, langer Zeit.
“Bist du die böse Hexe? Willst du mein Leben, mein Schatz, oder meinen Status?” dann seufzte, “das ist aber egal, bitte nehmen, alles was du willst von mir.”
Die Hexe aber seufzte auch, “Es tut mir Leid meine Prinzessin. Nachdem Ihrer Hochzeit, konnte ich nicht mehr die bose Hexe sein. Ich bin jetzt die nett Hexe und helfe jeder Mensch, weil die Geschichte hier schon fertig ist. Aber kann ich sich noch helfen. Ich weiß, was Sie eigentlich wollen. Wenn Sie bereit sind, kommen zurück ins Zimmer und gehen im Feuer. Sie werden kein Schmerzen fühlen. Aber zuerst nehme ich ein Stuck Ihre Erinnerung, mit der mache ich eine Kopie von dir, hier zu bleiben. Jedes Land braucht eine Prinzessin.”
Die Prinzessins Herz schlagte lauter und lauter. Sie schloss ihre Augen und trat nach vorne. Das Feuer umarmte sie wie eine warme Bett im Winter, und die Prinzessin fühlte sich tiefer und tiefer in der Wärme absinken, dann endlich verloren. Als sie ihre Augen wieder geöffnete hatte, schaute sie die fremde Augen einer Frau. Es war ein neue Land.
May 18, 2022
May 18, 2022
Ein kleine Geschichte
'Das gehört nicht mir.'
'Was? Ich habe gedacht, es war deine handtasche.'
'Nein, meine Handtasche ist gelb und ich trage es mit mir. Sieh!' Die Frau zog ihre gelbe Handtasche hoch.
Der Lautsprecher in den Zug klang: "Bitte informieren uns wenn du eine unbekannter Koffer finden. Es können ein Bomb sein."
Die Leute sah einander in die Augen. SIe kriechten plötzlich unter die Stuhlen.
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Schritte waren zu hören. Ein Kind kam und nimm seine Tasche und geh weg.
May 18, 2022
The Felicity
I think the answer is "not", but I also think, the money can help a lot to get the happiness. The question here is that some people are happy with little money. By the other hand, some people with lot of money they aren't happy either. I sure the manner as we face the life is very importat for us to get the felicity. Also, an important thing at life is to have a health. Because with a good health, is easier to get the happiness.
May 18, 2022
Heute
Heute, bin ich um sechs Uhr aufgewacht. Um halbe sieben, habe ich Meditiert. Bis sieben Uhr von acht Uhr, habe ich Deutsch studiert danach Kaffee verbreitetet. Ich hatte ungefähr zwanzig Minuten Sport. Danach Sport, habe ich Unterricht am Vortag wiedergeholt. Meine Frau und mein Hund sind um zehn Uhr aufgewacht. Ich habe unser Frühstück vorbereitet. Fast immer haben wir Eier und Käse gegessen zum Frühstück. Nach dem Frühstück sind wir im Wald gegangen spazieren. Im Wald gibt es viele natürliche Schönheit. Wir haben diese Naturschönheiten genossen. Heute haben wir etwas Überraschendes im Wald aufgefallen. Der Wald braucht niemanden, um schön zu sein.
May 18, 2022
18 mai 2022 - Coup de main
Racontez-nous le coup de main le plus surprenant que l’on vous a donné.
Je me souviens que quand j’étais dans la deuxième année de l’université, seulement quelques jours avant du examen finale, j’ai eu 3 ou 4 questions que mes camarades et moi n’avaient pas encore trouvé la bonne solution. À ce temps-ci, je ne savais pas à quel professeur je pouvais demander l’aide et comme c’était des questions des examens précédents, les professeurs n’avaient pas très envie de donner une réponse concrete. Alors j’ai tourné sur ma dernière ressource - une jeune dentiste très gentile qui a fixé mon dents avant. Comme nous ne nous étions pas vu depuis un an, et pour moi, elle était déjà dentiste, j’étais donc très nerveuse d’envoyer le message. Mais elle m’a répondu vite avec des réponses très détaillées et a dit qu’elle était contente de m’aider. Elle a même demandé son camarade pour des questions qu’elle n’était pas 100% sûres.
May 18, 2022
Mercy-killing and Right-to-die
It's the first time I've written such a long article. I know there must be lots of mistakes,so please correct me. I would be very grateful if you could give me some advice on writing.
Mercy-killing and Right-to-die
During COVID-19 epidemic, a Japanese doctor revealed that a hospital in the United States had euthanized a patient who was infected severely with no hope of survival and couldn’t afford the medical care, which has sparked heated discussion all over the world.
Decades have witnessed advances in medical knowledge and technological means that has brought unprecedented opportunities for humanity. Medicine has made huge strides in extending human life: advanced life support technology(such as defibrillation and ECMO), kidney dialysis, intravenous/enteral nutrition, organ transplant and so on. Although advanced medical technologies can delay death, many end-stage patients know in their heart that death is still unavoidable. Furthermore, they may spend more resources and suffer more in the process of delaying death. So in the final stages of disease progression, euthanasia is the most desired option for the most of them.
Many people hold the view that euthanasia is a mercy killing, which means that it’s a painless and happy way to die. Patients always make the decision to euthanize after weighing their own quality of life and financial ability and that should be respected, because when a meaningful life is no longer possible, the burden on his family will only be heavier. Moreover, euthanasia allows patients to maintain a natural and intact state of life until the end of life, thus they can pend the last time of life with peace of mind and maintain their own dignity.
It is doctors' duty to save lives and heal the wounded, but it is not the only duty as relieving the suffering of patients is also significant. For a terminally ill and extremely distressed patient, it is more humane to relieve his suffering, rather than take futile methods to increase excruciation. If various measures are taken and there is only more pain on the road to death, they are far from the purpose of medicine. Doctors euthanize patients according to their wishes, which is in line with humanitarian principles. And to some extent, it reflects the pursuit of humanitarianism, which can be seen as a menifestation of the progress of social civilization. In addition, from the perspective of social benefits, stopping ineffective medical treatment is helpful for the rational use of medical and health resources.
Although there are so many reasons supporting euthanasia, some worries cannot be ignored. First of all, euthanasia reflects a negative attitude towards life. People should bravely challenge the disease, instead of ending their lives prematurely, beause great emotional damage will fall on their families and friends if they take off all the heavy burdens through euthanasia. Next, nowadays medical is developing so rapidly that some currently untreatable diseases may be conquered by the medical community within a year or two. Then it would be a great regret for the patients if they choose to die prematurely.
Many murderers working in the medical field satisfy their perverted desires by massacring people at the convenience of their jobs. It would be a great opportunity for them to escape criminal responsibility if both society and the law support euthanasia, because it’s unable to determine whether the patient actually choose to be euthanized by themselves. In addition, it cannot be ignored that some patients request euthanasia because they consider themselves a burden to the family, especially in rural areas where medical insurance has not yet been fully implemented. People feel that death is the best way to solve the problem once they get a serious disease and they are actually killed by poverty, which is a very inhumane social phenomenon. Let’s take Netherlands for example. Since euthanasia was legalized in this country, the number of people who died through euthanasia has risen year by year, and the standard of euthanasia has been constantly being lowered, which suggests that the evolution of euthanasia is spiraling out of control.
There is still a lot of controversy on the issue of euthanasia. But no matter whether we support euthanasia or not, we should put the interests of the patient first, respect the patient's autonomy, and leave the decision to the patient and his family of whether to give up medical supporting.
May 18, 2022
¿Si Amanda puede volver a estar juntos con su exnovio?
Hola Amanda. Creo que es una cuestión interesante y mismo tiempo muy seria. La leí cuando hacía ejercicio con mis amigos. También nos la discutimos, pero todavía no hicimos ninguna conclusión. Así que la seguía pensado en coche, en casa, y en la clase. Ya he pensado mucho cómo me ocuparía de esa. Yo que tú me sentiría molesto todos los días. Tu artículo me da cuenta de que aunque la relación de una pareja se rompe, pueden ser no solo enemigo, sino también amigo. Es increíble para mí. A propósito, recuerdo una historia semejante de mi tío. Es muy divertida escucharla. Cuando fue joven, a menudo mi tío y tía rompieron pero pronto se recuperaron porque de todo corazón se amaron. Sin embargo, mi tío se enojó por cualquier cosita frecuentemente y luego mi tía le dijo que entonces no quería seguir la relación. Por supuesto mi tío se arrepintió poco tiempo después. Ahora no está enojado con tanta frecuencia. Para terminar, te aconsejo que vaya a ver si tu exnovio es el tipo de persona que quede reflexionar sobre sí mismo. Si no, te recomiendo que no empiecen la relación de nuevo.
May 18, 2022
葉書を貰う、お願いします。
葉書を貰う、お願いします。
Send me a card, please
数日前、仲間は郵便局へ行って、切手を買った。
Few days ago my best friend told me, she need to buy some stamps.
切手を買う？
Buy stamps?
今はデジタル世代です、周りの友達に今でも（海外と地元）郵便を使うの方がいますか？
This is 2022 how many of you will go to post office to buy a stamp and post a card or letter to your local or oversea friends?
結構長い間に郵便局へ行きませんでした。
Because she hadn’t been to post office for such long time.
今切手のデザインと形も驚かされた。
She was surprised by the latest stamp design and quality.
昔は切手の後ろに舐めて、封筒に貼る必要です。
In the old dates we need to lick the back of stamp first then stick on the letter.
昔の切手カタチは四角と矩形だけ。
In the old dates the stamp is always in square or rectangular shapes.
これは全部を変わった。
All these has been changed.
だから、郵便局へ行って、私に葉書を送るください。
Please go to your near post office buy a stamp and send a postcard to me.
May 18, 2022
Send me a card, please
Few days ago my best friend told me, she need to buy some stamps.
Buy stamps?
This is 2022 how many of you will go to post office to buy a stamp and post a card or letter to your local or oversea friends?
Because she hadn’t been to post office for such long time.
She was surprised by the latest stamp design and quality.
In the old dates we need to lick the back of stamp first then stick on the letter.
In the old dates the stamp is always in square or rectangular shapes.
All these has been changed.
Please go to your near post office buy a stamp and send a postcard to me.
May 18, 2022
Lettre au maire
Objet:Lettre de recommandation
Monsieur Le Maire,
Je vous écrire cette lettre parce que je suis une citoyenne qui vis dans cette ville.Les habitants de l'immeuble et moi-meme sommes choqués a cause de cette décision.Nous vous demandons de réfléchir de nouveau a ce projet qui selon nous va a l'encontre du bien-etre des Parisiens.
Tout d'abord, j'habite dans cet immeuble depuis de nombreuses années et cette rue a toujours été piétonne donc si vous la changer, les habitants de l'immeuble vont s'opposer a vous.Cela cause un gros probleme.Cette rue est la rue piétonne la plus célébre de France.Par conséquent, la fermature de cette rue affectera également les touristes.
Ensuite, cependant cette idée élargit la zone pour les autobus mais en meme temps cela peut causer de perdre sa notorité de la région.Je me demande si cela est bien réfléchi.Ainsi que avec ce changement la maire va dépenser beaucoup d'argent.
Enfin, je pense que ce projet augmentera la taux de la pollution de l'air d'ailleurs cela entrainera des nuissances sonores dans le quartier.Je voudrais vous rappeler que votre campagne d'électorale était pour un meilleur environnement.Si vous voulez réaliser cela, cela ne sera pas possible que si vous ne renoncez pas cette décision.
En conclusion,pour toutes ces raisons,nous vous demandons de nouveau annuler ce project et de penser aux conséquences négatives.
En espérant une réponse positive de votre part, je vous prie d'agréer mes meilleures salutations.
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