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Przyzwyczajenia
"Przyzwyczajenie" co za skomplikowane słowo do opisania to, co jest w szczególnie proste! Kto nie ma przyzwyczajeń? Często są bardzo użyteczne w naszych życiach. Czasami nie mamy nawet świadomości, o ilu je mamy. Co rano, kiedy budzisz się, co robisz? Może, że twoja pierwsza akcja jest popatrzeć na telefon, aby sprawdzić nowe wiadomości. Albo idziesz do toalety, bo niektóre rzeczy nie mogą czekać. Obydwa są przyzwyczajenia. Lub palisz papieros. Przyzwyczajnie mogą też być złe, złe dla siebie, dla swojego zdrowia, albo dla innich też.
Zmieniać swoje przyzwyczajenie, albo mieć nowych jest bardziej skomplikowane. Aby to się udać, trzeba pomyśleć o "wynagrodzeniach": z tymi to łatwiej. Innym sposobem: robić tak, żeby mieć przyjemnością robiąc nowe przyzwyczajenie. To wydaje logiczne, ależ trzeba o tym przypominać!
I teraz, myślę że umiem pisać korektnie "przyzwyczajenie" :)
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
Erster Eintrag
Das hier wird mein erster Eintrag auf dieser Website sein. Da ich bald mein Studium in Deutschland beginnen werde, dachte ich mir, dass es für mich äußerst wichtig ist, dass ich auch meine schriftlichen Kompetenzen übe und meine Fähigkeiten dazu ergänze. Ich habe mir vorgenommen, hier regelmäßig einen Eintrag über verschiedene Themen zu machen. Ich bin der Meinung, dass das wissenschaftliche Schreiben von Texten im Studium eine besondere Wichtigkeit hat und man sich diese Fähigkeit aneignen muss wenn man seinen Erfolg erhöhen möchte. Genau aus diesem Grund bin ich hier. Ab und zu werde ich auch improvisierte Geschichten schreiben falls es erlaubt ist. Ich freue mich auf die Korrektur bzw. das Feedback!
Sept. 22, 2022
La forêt magique
Sur la route d'une de mes promenades que j’ai régulièrement fait, il y a un petit forêt d'abord un étang. C’est très joli et quand je suis dans les bois c’est comme si je suis transporté au endroit complètement différent. Je ne suis plus dans un emplacement urbain. Je suis dans la nature.
J’oublie tous mes sourcils lorsque je traverse les bois. Ce n’est pas plus de cinq minutes avant que je m'approche l’autre côté et je reviens dans le parc où cette petite forêt est située.
Alors que j’arrive à la lisière j’imagine que je laisse toutes les choses qui m'inquiétaient au moment que je suis entré dans les bois. C’est un exercice intéressant pour ma santé mentale.
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
2022/09/22
最近，我喜歡看 VTuber。VTuber 是「Virtual YouTuber」的簡稱，在中文翻譯為虛擬主播。透過科技，這些直播主使用虛擬角色的模型來玩遊戲、跟粉絲聊天、跟其他 VTuber 合作做直播。老實說，在我入坑之前，我覺得 VTuber 這個愛好很宅，但看了幾次重播後便逐漸喜歡上，主要是因為我不喜歡打遊戲，但還是對很多遊戲感興趣，通過看 VTuber 直播，也可以體驗一下不同遊戲的故事與玩法。大部分時間，我主要是看重播，有興致時才特別抽時間來看直播。我最常看的 VTuber 都是來自彩虹社 NIJISANJI EN 的 。剛入坑時，我最愛看 Luca Kaneshiro，但現在我推 Ike Eveland。他的設定背景是一位從過去穿越道現代的小說家。我喜歡看他的直播，因為他善於表達自己的想法，而且還很有幽默感。
Sept. 22, 2022
Swimming in the Beach
Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind a clouds. There was not people apart from some people strolling, and only a person swiming in the water, that went out a bit some later. The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the edge, I noted slightly warm this damp sand. Finally, I got in the water, and later some minutes I found me very well into water. In that moment, I was the only person swiming, in a desert beach in front of Barcelona city. In August, there were thousands people in that same beach. A bit later, I went out of the water, and I came back home.
Sept. 22, 2022
夏天更好...
每年冬天到后，我一在外面感受感受凛冽的风就像哭泣。这就是我夸张了，可是即使我出生在欧洲，即使我已经住在这里六年，我的感想还原封不动。
我在加勒比的岛屿之一长大。在那里我们只有两种季节：有雨季，还有旱季。全年温度丝毫不变，总是二十七二十八度左右。你懂情况吗？欧洲的季节比较复杂！
我喜欢夏天，因为这里的夏天跟那里的一样温暖。夏天时这里的太阳不想睡觉；白天长长，夜间短短。我穿的衣服都很舒服，也很宽松。
对比上面的描述和冬天的：寒风凛冽，衣服太重了，白天短短了... 我怎么享受这种季节？没有阳光时我的心情变成很难受。
看我写的后，你同情吗？我觉得当然有人同意。
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
HOW TO USE CHINESE NUMBERS
After a preliminary understanding of the Chinese numeral system, we can use them to express percentages, fractions, decimals, multiples, and discounts in Chinese. If you are unfamiliar with the Chinese numeral system, it is strongly recommended to go through this article “HOW TO COUNT NUMBERS IN CHINESE” (https://untanglechinese.com/how-to-count-numbers-in-chinese/) first.
FRACTIONS
The pattern of fractions is the same as the percentage： Denominator分之Numerator. Unlike English, we always say the denominators first and the numerators are expressed second.
Pattern: Denominator分之Numerator.
三分之一 1/3 One-third
三分之二 2/3 Two-thirds
四分之三 3/4 Three-quarters
十分之九 9/10 Nine-tenths
DECIMAL
The decimal point in Chinese is 点. The rule of expressing decimals in Chinese is like that in English.
Pattern: Number + 点 + Number
0.5 零点五 Zero point five
6.7 六点七 Six points seven
3.45 三点四五 Three point four five
77.706 七十七点七零六 Seventy-seven point seven zero six
MULTIPLES
We use 倍 to express multiples in Chinese.
Pattern: Number+倍
两倍 Double
四倍 Four times
十倍 Ten times
苹果的价钱是香蕉的两倍。
The price of apples is double the price of bananas.
DISCOUNTS
折扣 means discount. The Chinese expression for a 10% reduction in English is 10 off or a ten percent discount. In Chinese, we say 九折, which means ninety percent of the original price.
Pattern: Number+折
七折 A thirty percent discount
九五折 A five percent discount
Do you know how to say 15% off and 20% in Chinese?
Thank you for the corrections and if you are interested in learning Chinese, please visit my site: https://untanglechinese.com/blog/
Sept. 22, 2022
092201- The past six months
Hello everyone, incredibly, I have not written for half a year. I experienced a lot during that time.
When I got the offer, I began to prepare for the visa. Sometimes, accidents would happen. The city lockdown blocked my visa schedule, and I have to visit another city to get my visa.
April is really stressful but fortunately, my friends encouraged me to follow my heart. And I got the visa finally at the end of May. It's a struggle time but I fight over it. I would record it in detail in future dairy (maybe, haha. I would love to write more hilarious things actually.)
I played really hard from June to July, I spent a month in a beautiful city. In July, I feel anxious because I would leave my family and nearly all my Chinese friends physically to study in another country.
In August, I took a flight to the USA. Though something makes me embarrassed, most of the journey is great. And I spent nearly a month getting through the jet lag.
In September, I made new friends from orientation and school activities. I hope I could have a friend who is also ambitious about the career and we could talk about how to build our career path. I know the first thing is to be stronger in technology hard skills and be a nice guy to others.
September is nearly finished, I would focus on my study and internship findings the next month, also I would keep learning English. I have a confusion about social activities: how to balance them with my daily life? What's your opinion?
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
我做的事情
昨天我早上上了学。上学前，我洗了澡，吃了早餐。我的早餐是苹果，香蕉，和酸奶。我早餐平时吃苹果，因为苹果是我的最喜欢的水果。
反正，因为我的课只在早上，上学后，我立刻吃午饭。我的午饭是面条和鸡肉。面条是我妈妈买的，因为她那天想吃面条。午餐时，我跟妈妈一起聊天。我们谈到了我的同学们和老师，和我们的生活。吃完午饭后，我做了作业。
下午3点，我和我的中文老师上了一课。我学到了很多，因为我的对话能力很糟糕。说实话，对话能力是我的最大的缺点。剩下的时间，我玩了游戏，看了书。那天，我完了两本书，所以我觉得很满意，因为很久我没完书。
10年前，我只是小孩，所以我不确定我在做什么。我确定当时，我在上学。我小时候，我很喜欢跟我哥哥一起玩游戏，所以我觉得当时我还跟他玩游戏。现在，我偶尔一起玩游戏，因为我们俩有自己的爱好，这些爱好不一样。10年前，我很自由的。我没有很多担心，也没有很多作业。我很想念我的童年，但是我很感谢我现在的生活不错。
Sept. 22, 2022
220921 - 수요일의 문법
1. 범죄의가 너무 한심했으니 부모조차 사랑하지 않았어요.
2. 지성이는 비행기를 정말 좋아하는 데다가 비행사를 되었어요.
3. 커플은 항상 싸웠을 뿐만 아니라 물건도 부서졌어요.
4. 기적이 나거든 저한테 알려 주세요.
5. 남편이 세상을 떠난 후에 미망인이 오랫동안 아무것도 울 수 밖에 없었어요.
6. 우리 개가 최근에 낳았는데 강아지들은 신발만 해요.
7. 많은 옷이 탈의실에 있어서 거울을 안 보일 정도로예요.
8. 아이가 티비를 보다가 소파에서 갑자기 뛰었어요.
9. 마트에 가는 길에 아줌마에게 길로 건너는 것이 도왔어요.
10. 새로운 부장님이 너무 싫어요. 오늘만 해도 세번 지렸군요!
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
The best Gaijin Character?
My favorite character in Kabuto Borg is Loid Ando.
He is an American male who runs a store that specializes in Kabuto Borg machines.
The main characters always hang around there, and he is a kind of a chaperon to them.
He talks in a hilariously irritating gaijin accent.
When he gets mad, somehow he suddenly grows stubble, and his gaijin accent disappears.
Actually, he is also a Borg battler like the main characters.
His machine is called Caesar Caesar Emperor (シーザー・カエサル・エンペラー), and its skill is “Sentimental Outlaw Blues.”
When he uses the skill, a mysterious black man playing the harmonica shows up in the background.
It’s hilarious, and nobody knows who the heck he is.
https://youtu.be/fCpUGKe2saU?t=89
His theme BGM is really cool, but unfortunately, it’s not included in the official soundtrack.
The actual composer uploaded a video where he plays the song with the guitar.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9B9r3UROpUo
Sept. 22, 2022
Time to think a little
My girlfriend asked me to accompany her to a funeral, I didn't want to go but accepted. I didn't want her to get home late at night and alone that's why. When we got there, her co-workers were already there. We greeted them and sat down. She started talking to them and I was silent thinking about life and death, I couldn't think much of death, I thought to myself that I just wanted to have a long and healthy life and to have time to do what I like, after that, I took my phone out of my pocket and started reading a book. When we left, I remember not wanting to go, but now I was feeling thankful because I had time to read, I took advantage of that time.
Sept. 22, 2022
Im new to this website, I like it
I wrote a little entry on my day, I finished it and sent it, but then Oh no! I dint have enough points to upload it, It said I needed to correct other's entries so I could gain more points , haha, that's what I did, I thought my entry was going to saved but painfully it disappeared haha,or perhaps as I'm new here , I don't know where to find it anways I don't want to write it again so I decided just to tell what happened instead.
Sept. 22, 2022
A2. 22.9.22
"Teil 1. Sie sind unterwegs zum Stadtzentrum und schreiben eine SMS an Ihren Freund Sam. Entschuldigen Sie sich, dass Sie zu spät kommen. Schreiben Sie warum. - Nennen Sie einen Ort und eine neue Uhrzeit. Schreiben Sie 20-30 Wörter. Schreiben Sie zu allen drei Punkten."
Hallo Anna,
entschuldige mich, dass ich spät komme. Der Bus hat Verspätung, weil es viel regnet. Ich bin sicher in 10 Minuten dort. Wir treffen uns um 7 Uhr vor dem Kino AAA. Bis gleich.
"Teil 2. Sie haben einen neuen Job. Ihre Kollegin, Frau Jung, lädt Sie und andere Kolleginnen und Kollegen am Samstagnachmittag zum Kaffee ein. Schreiben Sie Frau Jung eine E-Mail: Sagen Sie danke, und sagen Sie, dass Sie kommen. Fragen Sie, ob Sie etwas mitbringen sollen. -Fragen Sie nach dem Weg. Schreiben Sie 30-40 Wörter. Schreiben Sie zu allen drei Punkten."
Liebe Frau Sam,
vielen Dank für die Einladung zum Kaffee. Ich komme bestimmt und soll ich möchte etwas Kuchen mitbringen? Ich kenne den Weg nicht. Könnten Sie mir den Weg zum Kaffee beschreiben?
Viele Grüße
Mity
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
125 palabras 13
Nota: I want to sound authentic, please feel free to leave any type of corrections! (Using ‘ustedes’ form, learning Castilian)
You have been asked to speak at your neighbourhood youth group about the recreational activities available this summer.
Hola a todos, me llamo Fran y me gustaría informarles sobre las actividades nuevas que habrá por este verano para los jóvenes. Los hemos escuchado sus comentarios del año pasado, y ahora vamos a implementar un campamento de verano, para la gente que tiene los edades doce a diecisiete. Pasará dos semanas antes de empezar la navidad. Si les encantaría pasar lo más tiempo posible afuera, esta actividad es para ustedes.
Además, sé que a todos les gustaría ser voluntarios para sus aplicaciones para un trabajo, así que implementaremos trabajo de voluntaria en el hospital local. Recuerdo cuando era joven y esperé que nuestro barrio tiene oportunidades como esta. ¡Estoy muy emocionada por ustedes! Espero que tengan el verano de sus sueños. Como siempre, no olviden hablar con nosotros sobre sus opiniones. ¡Siempre estamos escuchándoles!
Gracias por escucharme.
Sept. 22, 2022
Setenta y cinco palabras 13
Nota: I want to sound authentic, please feel free to leave any type of corrections! (Using ‘ustedes’ form, learning Castilian)
You have been in trouble at school today. Write a letter to your parents about what happened.
Queridos padres:
¡No van a creerlo! Esta tarde no voy a volver a casa hasta las cuatro, porque tengo que ir al castigo. La verdad es que no fui al cole hasta tarde, porque ayer mi día me fue mal, y quería comprar mi bebida favorita. Debido a esto, no tomé al autobús al tiempo correcto y tuve que esperar para el próximo. ¡Qué pena! Saben que me encanta ir al cole y suelo ser una buena estudiante.
Perdónenme,
Los quiero,
Fran.
Sept. 22, 2022
Cincuenta 14
Nota: I want to sound authentic, please feel free to leave any type of corrections! (Using ‘ustedes’ form, learning Castilian)
Write a note to a family member telling them what tasks and chores they must complete at home this afternoon.
Hola hermana:
Esta tarde tendrás que hacer algunas tareas para mí:
1. Limpia el baño.
2. Da comida al gato.
3. Podrías comprarme leche de chocolate por tu camino a la casa del cole, si estás sintiéndote amable. ¡Sabes lo cuánto me encanta!
4. Igualmente, debes hacer tus deberes, no te gustara nada si le digo a mamá, ¿verdad?
Nos vemos esta noche,
Fran.
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