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Sept. 23, 2022
Scambi linguistici
I scambi linguistici in un quadro scolastico sono sempre più comuni ovunque nel mundo. Studenti da un paese dato passano un po' di tempo (spesso alcune settimane o un mese) in un paese straniero nella famiglia di un corrispondente, e questo va poi nella loro famiglia. Gli obiettivi sono diversi: in primo luogo, questi scambi si suppone aiutano gli giovani a migliorare le lingue che imparano, grazie all'immersione in un ambiente dove sono constritti a parlare le lingue in questione. In secondo luogo, i soggiorni gli offrono opportunità di scoprire una cultura diversa (come funziona la scuola all'estero, come vive la gente, ecc). Infine, favoriscono i relazioni interculturali sviluppando amicizie tra i giovani.
Bene. Questo è la teoria. E come dice il proverbio (non so se la stessa arguzia esista in italiano): "vorrei vivere in Teoria, perché in teoria, tutto va bene".
Il mio primo scambio linguistico era con Germania. Avevo un corrispondente tedesco. Cuando io sono andato in Germania, tutto è andato bene, ma cuando è venuto egli, è stato totalmente diverso. Gli mancavano la sua famiglia e i sui amici. Naturalmente, abbiamo visitato luoghi insieme, giocato ecc, ma era apatico, non gli piaceva niente, e a volte, era proprio insopportabile e la tensione è cresciuta tra noi.
Penso che fossimo troppo giovani e immaturi (avevo 13 anni, egli 12). Al liceo, passare alcune settimane lontano dai sui cari è ancora difficile. Qualche anno dopo, la mia nipote ha anche fatto un scambio con una corrispondente tedesca al liceo, e hanno avuto gli stessi problemi di noi.
Anche in materia di lingue, il mio scambio è stato un spreco, perché non parlavo tedesco affatto bene e il corrispondente quasi non parlava francese, perciò, abbiamo parlato inglese tutto il tempo!
Sept. 23, 2022
Sept. 23, 2022
日本語の文法１６
A.なり
１．私は自分なりのやり方で、料理を作っています。
２．親は心配するかもしれませんが、子供は子供なりに心配する。
３．やたしいくはないから、N2をつけるなら、うけるなりに、準備しなければ、無理でしょう。
４．お金がないといいながら、姉は買い物ばかりしている。お金がないなら、ないなりに、生活しなければならないべきだ。
５．外見がいいほうがいいと思うかもしれませんが、いくら外見が良くても、それなりよくないことがあると思います。
B.に違いない
１．服装をみて、しんさんは社会人にないと思った。
２．山田さんのことだから、夏休みにはきっと日本語を勉強するに違いない。
３．最初はつめたいに違いないとおもっていたが、実は優しい人だった。
４．はっきり言わなかったが、山田さんが仕事をやめるのはストレスがたくさんあるからに違いないです。
５．山本さんは結婚すれば、転職するに違いない
Sept. 23, 2022
Sept. 23, 2022
ちゃんこが食べたいです！
日本語のクラスでは、相撲取りの生活についての本文を読んだ間に、ちゃんこという料理を覚えました。教科書によると、ちゃんことはいろいろな食材に入れた料理です。肉類とか、魚介料理とか、豆腐とか…
結局グーグルで画像検索したら、おいしそうな料理の写真が見えるようになりました。「えええ、食材がいっぱい！」と思い、その時から本当に食べたいです。
はじめに、残念ながら食べさせないと思います。力士ではなく、一般的な大学生なのです。弱い痩せている女性はちゃんこをもらわないかもしれません。しかし、日本に住んでいる人によると、ネット上のちゃんこのレシピがあります。そして、鍋いらずちゃんこのレシピもあるので、特別な道具を買わなくても大丈夫でしょう。
いろいろな日本料理が食べたく、ちゃんこは例外ではありません。食べすぎるのでお腹は痛くなってしまっても後悔しません。
Sept. 23, 2022
What makes a good neighbor?
Whether you want it or not, neighbors are those who are going to spend most of their time next to you, literally. Thus, there are a substantial number of qualities to look for in a good neighbor. Particularly, having a quiet, helpful and nonaggresive neighbor is indispensable for enjoying an above average life quality.
In the first place, quiteness constitutes a greatly appreciable attribute which is unfrequently found among most neighbors. I, personally, have long experienced extremely noisy neighbors. Never have I had more sleepless nights than during this unfortunate time of my life in which lack of concentration posed a persistent issue. As a matter of fact, my stress levels soared due to these incoveniences.
Furthermore, the individual living next door is someone to turn to when needed. Compelling stories about neighbors who eventually became close friends abound. This friendships usually comes as a result of a kind act.
Moreover, aggresiveness is an undesirable behavior which persists in many individuals. I have sadly seen firsthand the actions of a person who tried to avoid peacefulness above all. At the end, these people get involved in a plethora of fights with their neighbors, which greatly impacts negatively both parts.
To conclude, having agreeable neighbors is far more beneficial for health than living next to unpleasant people. Therefore, not being loud, assisting others and calmness are greatly appreciated virtues when it comes to neighbors.
Sept. 23, 2022
Spending time alone (V2)
Aristotle, one of the most relevants philosophers of all time, stated, "man is by nature a social being". Does it mean that every person must avoid spending time alone at all costs? Not necessarily. I personally believe that spending time on oneself is definitely better than spending time on a social context.
In the first place, being alone gives people the opportunity for introspection. When someone spends time on their own, they can acquire a considerable amount of knowledge by reading. They can practice skills they have long wanted to master. They can even reflect upon their own life and improve it. Thus, spending time alone is indispensable for personal improvement.
Furthermore, solitude makes people stronger. When certain people are alone, they do not depend on anyone to survive. That self-sufficiency will eventually result in increased emotional intelligence, as they do not need another individual to support them. These people who have mastered the remarkable art of loneliness are those who will not get hurt by anyone.
Additionally, some people may find going out tiresome. Personally, I believe that hanging out with friends is a stressful activity. Walking, taking busses or even driving, money permitting, is notoriously difficult in Bogotá. Traffic jams abound here, therefore, being at home helps people feel more relaxed than having to go through all these ordeals.
To conclude, I strongly believe that spending time alone is far more beneficial than spending time with friends. Being alone enables people to grow emotionally and intellectually. Some individuals may even feel more relaxed by staying at home.
Sept. 23, 2022
Sept. 23, 2022
Thoughts on education (V2)
The question of how to best educate students is a highly debated subject. On the one hand, a substantial number of individuals believe that dynamic classes are more enjoyable for students. On the other hand, it is claimed that serious lessons are more understandable. Hence, formally presented classes are definitely better than any other type of education.
In the first place, serious classes allow people to focus solely on the subject matter, whereas an "entertaining" lesson negatively impacts students' ability to concentrate. In this sense, a more formal class model is useful when a professor is teaching a hard science, such as Mathematics, since pupils are fully absorbed by the logical reasoning behind the task at hand.
Furthermore, a formal lesson leaves a good impression of the teacher on the students. When I was in highschool, I had a Mathematics teacher who used this approach when explaining. I remember being amazed with this magnificent way of teaching, which made me held this professor in high regard. As a matter of fact, this class inspired me to pursue a career in engineering. This exhibits how a serious type of teaching may greatly improve the student learning process.
Moreover, the learning pace is higher in a serious class. By using "entertaining" activities, teachers tend to lose valuable time that may be used for something else, while a serious approach would completely enhance students' use of time.
To conclude, formal lessons allow students to think only about the topic of the class. Additionally, this type of education may inspire people. When teachers use a formal approach, the learning pace of the class is higher. Therefore, as expressed previously, this learning approach significantly enriches the learning experience by many measures.
Sept. 23, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
Reverse culture shock and the media
Today I learned a notion of reverse culture shock, a shock felt when one goes back to his or her home country after a significant period of time living abroad. I studied abroad twice, together for about one and half year, and each time after going back to my own country, I was shocked to see TV news programs not broadcasting informations on foreign countries' events enough.
There are two reasons that can be possible explanations to this reality. One is the limit of language. Japanese is spoken only in Japan, which demotivate the media to delve into and translate what's happening around the world closely. The other reason is immatureness of media. Compared to other developed countries, Japan only posess poor media which doesn't have a passion or sense of responsability to pursue and transmit facts to citizens, not being able to conduct a proper reserach on matters.
This media crisis should owe to other causes, but I've never looked that up throughly. I'd love to read books or articles on this theme.
Sept. 22, 2022
interview with myself
comparison
between two items
０.Q:夏と冬とどちらのほうが好きですか。
A:冬のほうが好き. 家で居心地いいですから。
１。Q: 寿司と天ぷらとどちらのほうがおいしいですか。
A:寿司のほうがおいしいです。
２．Q:頭がいい人とかっこいい人とどちらのほうが好き ですか。
A:頭がいい人のほうが好きです。
３．Q:野球とサッカーとどちらのほうが好きですか。
A:野球もサッカー嫌いです。スポーツが嫌いですから。
Ⓠ野球とサッカーとどちらのほうが人気があるですか。
Ａ。ドイツでサッカーのほうが人気があると思います。
８．Ⓠ春と秋とどちらのほうが好きですか。
A:秋のほうが好きです。たくさん雨があるですから。
１０．Q:日本の生活とドイツの生活とどちらのほうが楽しですか。
Ａ。日本の生活もドイツの生活楽しいと思います。
comparison between three or more items
1.Q:飲み物の中で、何が一番好きですか。
A:水が一番好きです。
２．Q: 世界の町の中で、何が一番好きですか。
A。ドイツでふるさとが一番好きです。
５．Q:音楽の中で、何が一番好きですか。
A:ポップスが一番好きです。アニメとガメBGMも好きです。
６．Q:季節の中で、いつが一番好きですか。
A:冬が一番好きです。
7．Q:クラスの中で、一番いい学生でしたか。
A:いいえ、ぜんぜん一番いい学生じゃなかった。
８．Q:クラスの中で、誰が一番背が高いでしたか。
A:フロリアンが一番背が高いでした。
Sept. 22, 2022
le français et le monde
Ma matière préféré, c'est la géographie. Le monde est très grand, et je trouve ce sujet très fascinant. j'aime travailler avec des cartes, et découverte de cultures différentes. C'est porquoi je voudrais aussi apprendre le langues du monde entier. C'est vital pour voyager souvent. Maintenant, je suis apprendre le français, mais dans le futur, je voudrais apprenderai l'espagnol aussi. J'ai beacoup d'amis que parlent français, et je voudrais parlerai avec qui langue native avec leurs.
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
Regarder un film: cinéma vs maison.
Depuis que je suis petit j'ai toujours aimé aller au cinéma. Mes copains et moi, on avait l'habitude d'y aller chaque vendredi après sortir du lycée. Même s'il y avait un film d'horreur, une comédie ou un film d'action notre visite au cinéma devenait une tradition. Et enfin c'était tout qui était autour du film qu'on adorait : l'odeur du popcorn, les discussions pour choisir un film que tout le monde en avait envie de regarder...
Des fois à la finalisation du film, on achetait quelque chose à manger et on s'amusait tous ensembles.
Je crois que c'est pour ces bons souvenirs de mon adolescence que j'aime encore le cinéma et que je préfère y aller au lieu de rester chez moi pour regarder un film.
Sept. 22, 2022
Le lever du soleil
Non, je n'ai pas vu le lever du soleil cet été. Le soleil se lève trop tôt pendant l'été pour le regarder avant le travail, et je fait la grasse matinée le weekend. Quelquefois je regarde le lever du soleil en hiver quand le soleil se lève plus tard.
Le plus beau lever du soleil que j'aie jamais vu, c'était au Liban en 2016. Mes amis et moi, nous étions allés à une boîte de nuit pendant la nuit. Nous étions quitté très tôt dans le matin et nous avions conduit à la plage méditerranéenne pour attendre le lever du soleil. C'était magnifique, la lumière du soleil sur la mer. Nous l'avions regardé jusqu'à sept heures du matin, et puis nous étions rentrés chez nous.
Sept. 22, 2022
Przyzwyczajenia
"Przyzwyczajenie" co za skomplikowane słowo do opisania to, co jest w szczególnie proste! Kto nie ma przyzwyczajeń? Często są bardzo użyteczne w naszych życiach. Czasami nie mamy nawet świadomości, o ilu je mamy. Co rano, kiedy budzisz się, co robisz? Może, że twoja pierwsza akcja jest popatrzeć na telefon, aby sprawdzić nowe wiadomości. Albo idziesz do toalety, bo niektóre rzeczy nie mogą czekać. Obydwa są przyzwyczajenia. Lub palisz papieros. Przyzwyczajnie mogą też być złe, złe dla siebie, dla swojego zdrowia, albo dla innich też.
Zmieniać swoje przyzwyczajenie, albo mieć nowych jest bardziej skomplikowane. Aby to się udać, trzeba pomyśleć o "wynagrodzeniach": z tymi to łatwiej. Innym sposobem: robić tak, żeby mieć przyjemnością robiąc nowe przyzwyczajenie. To wydaje logiczne, ależ trzeba o tym przypominać!
I teraz, myślę że umiem pisać korektnie "przyzwyczajenie" :)
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
Erster Eintrag
Das hier wird mein erster Eintrag auf dieser Website sein. Da ich bald mein Studium in Deutschland beginnen werde, dachte ich mir, dass es für mich äußerst wichtig ist, dass ich auch meine schriftlichen Kompetenzen übe und meine Fähigkeiten dazu ergänze. Ich habe mir vorgenommen, hier regelmäßig einen Eintrag über verschiedene Themen zu machen. Ich bin der Meinung, dass das wissenschaftliche Schreiben von Texten im Studium eine besondere Wichtigkeit hat und man sich diese Fähigkeit aneignen muss wenn man seinen Erfolg erhöhen möchte. Genau aus diesem Grund bin ich hier. Ab und zu werde ich auch improvisierte Geschichten schreiben falls es erlaubt ist. Ich freue mich auf die Korrektur bzw. das Feedback!
Sept. 22, 2022
La forêt magique
Sur la route d'une de mes promenades que j’ai régulièrement fait, il y a un petit forêt d'abord un étang. C’est très joli et quand je suis dans les bois c’est comme si je suis transporté au endroit complètement différent. Je ne suis plus dans un emplacement urbain. Je suis dans la nature.
J’oublie tous mes sourcils lorsque je traverse les bois. Ce n’est pas plus de cinq minutes avant que je m'approche l’autre côté et je reviens dans le parc où cette petite forêt est située.
Alors que j’arrive à la lisière j’imagine que je laisse toutes les choses qui m'inquiétaient au moment que je suis entré dans les bois. C’est un exercice intéressant pour ma santé mentale.
Sept. 22, 2022
Sept. 22, 2022
2022/09/22
最近，我喜歡看 VTuber。VTuber 是「Virtual YouTuber」的簡稱，在中文翻譯為虛擬主播。透過科技，這些直播主使用虛擬角色的模型來玩遊戲、跟粉絲聊天、跟其他 VTuber 合作做直播。老實說，在我入坑之前，我覺得 VTuber 這個愛好很宅，但看了幾次重播後便逐漸喜歡上，主要是因為我不喜歡打遊戲，但還是對很多遊戲感興趣，通過看 VTuber 直播，也可以體驗一下不同遊戲的故事與玩法。大部分時間，我主要是看重播，有興致時才特別抽時間來看直播。我最常看的 VTuber 都是來自彩虹社 NIJISANJI EN 的 。剛入坑時，我最愛看 Luca Kaneshiro，但現在我推 Ike Eveland。他的設定背景是一位從過去穿越道現代的小說家。我喜歡看他的直播，因為他善於表達自己的想法，而且還很有幽默感。
Sept. 22, 2022
Swimming in the Beach
Today I was walking along the beach, as I commented in other journals, when the sun disappeared behind a clouds. There was not people apart from some people strolling, and only a person swiming in the water, that went out a bit some later. The sand was a bit cool, but when I arrived to the edge, I noted slightly warm this damp sand. Finally, I got in the water, and later some minutes I found me very well into water. In that moment, I was the only person swiming, in a desert beach in front of Barcelona city. In August, there were thousands people in that same beach. A bit later, I went out of the water, and I came back home.
Sept. 22, 2022
夏天更好...
每年冬天到后，我一在外面感受感受凛冽的风就像哭泣。这就是我夸张了，可是即使我出生在欧洲，即使我已经住在这里六年，我的感想还原封不动。
我在加勒比的岛屿之一长大。在那里我们只有两种季节：有雨季，还有旱季。全年温度丝毫不变，总是二十七二十八度左右。你懂情况吗？欧洲的季节比较复杂！
我喜欢夏天，因为这里的夏天跟那里的一样温暖。夏天时这里的太阳不想睡觉；白天长长，夜间短短。我穿的衣服都很舒服，也很宽松。
对比上面的描述和冬天的：寒风凛冽，衣服太重了，白天短短了... 我怎么享受这种季节？没有阳光时我的心情变成很难受。
看我写的后，你同情吗？我觉得当然有人同意。
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