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Palahniuks Inspiration um Fight Club zu schreiben
Ich erinnere mich an das erste Mal, als ich von Fight Club gehört habe. Ein Typ in der Schule hatte mir gesagt, dass ich den Film sehen müsse und ich erinnere mich, dass ich gedacht habe "Fight Club? Was ist das für ein Name? Muss ein scheiß Blockbuster-Actionfilm sein". Siehst du, ich habe damals nicht viel von meinem achtklässlichen Kollegen gehalten. Und ich hätte nicht falscher liegen können, der Film wurde zu einem meiner aller Zeiten Favoriten. Wenn überhaupt, verändert es das Leben. Ich habe das Buch von Palahniuk nie gelesen, aber ich kenne die Geschichte, die es inspiriert hat. Anscheinend war Palahniuk einmal in einem Kampf und nachdem er geschlagen wurden war und wieder zur Arbeit zurückgekehrt war, war er fasziniert, als er herausfand, dass niemand fragte, warum er so schrecklich aussah. Er erkannte, dass dies zu machen zu einer persönlicheren Interaktion führen würde und seine Kollegen kümmerten sich nicht genug darum. Sie waren komplett egal. Wie denn können die Menschen im 21. Jahrhundert echte Interaktion finden? Vielleicht ist eine Bruderschaft, in der sich die Leute für Sport einander kämpfen und für einen gemeinsamen Kampf kämpfen, ein guter Anfang. So dachte er, glaube ich.
June 27, 2021
El reto de junio-día veintisiete
No tengo una estación favorita porque cada una es especial. Las hojas en otoño son hermosas y hay un refrescante frió en el aire. En invierno me gusta ver como nieva desde la ventana de mi habitación mientras bebo coca caliente y me quedo calentita bajo una manta. Las flores de primavera son tan coloridas, y verano es divertido porque la escuela está fuera y podemos viajar.
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
Vingt-septième jour
Ma saison préfère est l’hiver. Cela dure seulement ici pendant environ deux mois, donc j’attends toujours avec impatience. J’aime boire du thé épicé avec du jaggery, promenades dans les soirées froides, le brouillard (fog?) dans le ciel, le matin paresseux au lit, les arbres nus qui ont l’air tristes.
Penser à cela me donne.. (“thinking about this makes me long for the cold”, je ne sais pas comment écrire ça).
June 27, 2021
Vingt-sixième jour
Si je pouvais inventer une chose, ce serait un portail qui permette de voyager partout dans le monde. Quelque chose de similaire à l’apparition dans « Harry Potter ». Je pourrais rendre visite à mes amis ou les événements artistiques quelles j’ai voulu assister. Internet a rendu le monde semble plus petit, mais le monde physique est encore hors de notre portée.
June 27, 2021
Vorteile und nachteile das Internets;
Ich bin der meinung, dass das internet viele vorteile und einige nachteile hat,aber im vergelich vorteile uberwiegen.weil man nicht nur lernen, sondern arbeiten kanm. Einmal wollte ich Deutsch lernen , weil auf dem land lebe, habe ich keinen Deutschlehere gefunden.Deshalb habe ich im internet gesurft,dann konnie ich einen Deutschlerher finden und jetzt habe ich schon ein paar unterrichtstunden bekommen. Ich kan sagen, das hat prima klaampt.zum. anderersite muss man auch aufpassen , weil nich alle informationen im internet richtig sind. Deshalb man nicht alles galuben sollte ,weil es viele Hachers gibt
June 27, 2021
Mein lieblingste Cousin
Ich habe einen Cousin, der für mich fast wie ein älterer Bruder immer gewesen ist. Er ist zwanzig Jahre älter als ich und vor drei Jahren, als ich 20 war, hatte er einen Sohn: eine fast mystische Symmetrie. Mit ihm habe ich u. a. Terminator und Matrix gesehen, Rock- und Metallmusik entdeckt und ein Interesse für Epistemologie und Philosophie entwickelt. Kurz gesagt, dank ihm sind vielen neuen Welten für mich geöffnet worden.
Leider ist er vor einigen Jahren nach eine andere Provinz umgezogen, deshalb können wir uns nicht so oft sehen wie früher. Hoffentlich werde ich auch ein Vorbild für sein Kind sein. Vielleicht werde er in zwanzig Jahre über mich auf italki schreiben?
June 27, 2021
我最喜歡的季節 — June Writing Challenge #27
有的人有一定最喜歡的季節，也有跟我一樣不可以選擇的人! 如果人問我最喜歡什麼季節，我覺得很難答應。我覺得各季節都有好的，也有壞的。這是關於季節我的想法:
1. 春天: 春天，天氣變溫暖，花開放，世界非常漂亮! 春天時，我很喜歡去公園散步。可是，在韓國，因為黃沙空氣質量有時候很不好。
2. 夏天: 如果跟我一樣喜歡去海邊游泳的話，夏天最好! 夏天時，我可以放假去哪裡玩。更加我和我老公夏天時過生日。反過來說，韓國的夏天非常悶熱。我很討厭悶熱的天氣!
3. 秋天: 秋天時，葉就變真漂亮。天氣也很舒服。我覺得韓國的秋天太短!
4. 冬天: 冬天是個很有意思的季節 — 有聖誕節，也有新年。但是，冬天日太早就黑了。更加，我不怎麼喜歡冷的天氣!
June 27, 2021
私が一番好きな季節 — June Writing Challenge #27
ある人は一番好きな季節があります。それに私と同じ一番好きな季節を選ぶことが難しい人もあります。季節それぞれは長所と短所があると思います。これは季節について私の意見です：
１．春：春には、天気も暖かいと、花も咲くと、世界はきれいです！でも、韓国は春時黄砂があるので空気が汚いです。
２．夏：夏は海に行って泳ぐことができるのでいいです。そして私の誕生日と夫の誕生日は夏です。でも、私が夏の蒸し暑い天気が嫌いです！
３．秋：秋野紅葉もきれいと、てんきもいいです。韓国の秋はあんまり短いと思います！
４．冬：冬はクリスマスと信念があるので面白いです。でも、日はあんまり短いです！そして寒い天気があまり好きではありません。
June 27, 2021
How to Read Books More effectively
While reading more than 100 books per a year, I always think that there is nothing remained.
As heavy book readers said, reading books is a good way to increase thinking power.
Most of them write notes taking on the book black spaces.
As following their way, I think it makes me boring to read books.
I need to find new ways to read more effectively, especially increasing my thinking depth.
I hope there is a way for suitable me.
June 27, 2021
Day Twenty-Seven: What is Your Favorite Season?
My favorite season is spring because it's a warm and comfortable temperature, and I associate it with a fresh start. In Japan, the beginning of the year is in April, so people tend to start their new life in spring. Also, I think spring is an exciting season because cold and short-days winter end and it's toward summer.
June 27, 2021
How I study my target languages
My target languages are English, French, Esperanto and Arabic. I don't really sit down to study them except for Arabic. I watch on youtube a video lesson once a week. I write a diary everyday, and each day I write in a different language. First, I write a page without looking up anything, to see to what extent I'm able to express myself in my target laguages. Then I look up the words I don't know and submit my piece of writing on platforms like langcorrect or hinative so people can help me to correct it. Then I take notes of vocabulary and useful sentence structures. I also listen to music, read and watch videos in my target languages.
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
Crêpes Méchante
HIer nous avons trouvé un cafe qui aimer les chiens. c'est 13 kilo à notre motel. Mes chiens ont aime le friandise que les avaient recu. Malheursement, la nouriture pur les humans n'etais pas bonne. J'ai commandé les crepes, mais les crepes etaient sans gout et 3 centimetres epaisse avec un banane cru et quelque morceaux de fraises sechees eparplle sur le top. Quelle horreur.
Merci
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
Gramática - time expressions with hacer
Hace dos años que estudio ruso en la universidad.
Vivimos aquí desde hace cinco horas.
Hace diez horas que no has comido, por eso te sientes mal.
Ella no ha dicho nada desde hace tres días.
Hace cinco horas que caminamos por las calles, y todavía no lo hemos encontrado.
Hace mucho tiempo que no hablo español.
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
I bought a couple of sushi from a grocery store.
"What items were on your last grocery list?"
I bought two packs of sushi at a grocery store yesterday evening. I'm glad I live in Japan as you can easily buy several small sushi dishes at grocery stores.
One of the packs I got had two pieces of Inari-sushi and two pieces cut of Maki-sushi. ( The way I wanted to say with "two pieces cut" is like two pieces from one roll of Maki-sushi by cut out. )
Another of the packs had three pieces of Anago(sea eel)-sushi.
You can buy a lot of variety of preserved meals at grocery stores. There are not only portions for two or three people but also small portions for one person.
June 27, 2021
A Scrap of Paper.
> "One day, I found a scrap of paper. A strange message was written on it..."
I wondered who wrote it and why.
"How come on the earth this scrap has been here?"
"From the beginning, are these letters alphabets?"
... I'll make several question sentences about the scrap for my practice.
What does the scrap say?
What does the scrap show?
What does the message mean?
When was the message written?
Why was the message written?
With what the message was written? Inked pen, pencil, or…?
How was the message written?
How do I read the strange message?
I wonder if I can pronounce the message?
What if the scrap would burnet to disappear after I finished reading it?
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
To Try to Relax When I Can't Sleep at Night.
"What do you do if you can’t sleep at night?"
One day, I was using an app called "寝たまんまヨガ" for these days. The name literally means you do yoga keeping the posture you lying (by listening to the voice guidance).
It seemed to be a good way to relax several parts of my body, especially when you ready to sleep.
Maybe this is one of my lessons; I try to relax my whole body and calm my mind when I can't sleep at night.
In order to relax my body, I closing my eyes try to tense and loosen my muscles while I breathe deeply.
( To be honest, I haven't been sure how I should put these way relaxing muscles with the yoga-ish method because I didn't know much about verbs related to the body parts. That's why I googled a bunch of collocations of "muscle." )
June 27, 2021
June 27, 2021
Journal
I think there are two types of jobs in China. One is that you work for yourself (to be a boss) or you work for a private enterprise. The other is that you work for the government. People who work for the government are still divided into two types: one is called civil servants and another is called staff of public institutions. I belong to the last type.
My department is responsible for the training of agriculture and farmers in my district. My work is not too busy, and my salary is also not too high, but it's enough to live my life, I think.
I don't think the clothing store makes me a lot of money, which only provides my younger sister a job.
Actually, decades later, I ran business again. The reason was that I didn't want to live poor life conditions for lifelong, l have to change it. This time I made a lot of money, and I bought several apartments, fancy cars and shops. I was so delighted during that period and also, I worked hard too. But as a member of the national staff, I am not allowed to run any business according to some strict rules released by my country. To avoid any trouble caused by running a business, I had to get divorced and all the property was transferred to my wife-that was the only safe way.
Now, it seems I don't have the desire to run businesses again unless I am desperately in need of money. But I do like running business because I think it is a cause that is fair and you can fully show your talent in it. I have experience of running a business and I also have a lawyer's qualification, so I still think no matter what I do, I can do it well because I always have the confidence to make money.
When we were young, we had strong bodies even though we didn't do any exercise. But when people are over their fifties, it seems their body gradually gets worse and worse. So I think I have to pay more attention to my health, so I decided to ride.
Before, I exercised by walking, but in recent years my legs often feel hurt when I walk a little long. However, riding a bicycle is not like that. Your legs don't need to suffer a lot and the riding speed is moderate, so I can see beautiful scenery while cycling.
Yes, I am still working. The retirement age for men in China is sixty, so there are still six years left before my retirement.
The bike your friend has is called 折叠自行车 in Chinese. I did check this kind of bicycle before I decided to buy one, but in the end I gave up because it's too small and I didn't feel comfortable riding it.
Yes, I learned about the collapse of a building in Miami, Florida, at the very beginning. The first thought when I heard the news was that "thank goddess, you already left there". I was very sad to learn that news, so I pray for people who are dead or injured in that accident. I don't want to hear about this kind of news anymore and I wish people all over the world a happy and peaceful life. God bless them.
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