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Oct. 27, 2022

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Challenge, Day 27

Today is the twenty-seventh day of my daily English challenge.

This morning, I went out to PC shop. I bought a lot of papers blank. I am not sure my sentence is correct.

After caming at home. I cooked a red pasta Tunisia. It was delicious!

This afternoon, I watched a video in English on YouTube. My aim has always been to be a good lestener and to get used to hearing English. Then, I spoke to a friend over Skype in English. I have prepared to him a great surprise. I met my Mom to a friend over Skype. He was really surprising to see Mom! Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected me a bunch of sentences.

To be honest, I want to keep improving my English for me and especially for my best friend. I would like you proud of me.

I am grateful for this web-site and everyone who as helped me.

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Challenge, Day 27

It was delicious!

Then, I spoke to a friend over Skype in English.

I am grateful for this web-site and everyone who as helped me.

Challenge, Day 27

Today is the twenty-seventh day of my daily English challenge.

I am not sure my sentence is correct.

It was delicious!

This afternoon, I watched a video in English on YouTube.

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courageuse19

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Challenge, Day 27


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Today is the twenty-seventh day of my daily English challenge.


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Today is the twenty-seventh day 27 of my daily English challenge. Today is day 27 of my daily English challenge.

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This morning, I went out to PC shop.


This morning, I went out to PCto the computer shop. This morning, I went to the computer shop.

This morning, I went out to a PC shop. This morning I went to a PC shop.

This morning, I went out to the PC shop. This morning, I went out to the PC shop.

This morning, I went out to PCto the PC/computer shop. This morning, I went to the PC/computer shop.

This morning, I went out to PC shop. This morning, I went out to PC shop.

I am not sure if the comma is necessary.

I bought a lot of papers blank.


I bought a lot of papers blankblank sheets of paper. I bought a lot of blank sheets of paper.

I bought a lot of blank papers blank. I bought a lot of blank papers.

Adjective before the noun

I bought a lot of blank papers blank. I bought a lot of blank papers.

I bought a lot of blank papers blank. I bought a lot of blank papers.

*Adjective before noun*

I bought a lot of blank papers blank. I bought a lot of blank papers.

I am not sure my sentence is correct.


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I am not sure myif sentence is correct. I am not sure if sentence is correct.

Hypothetical possibility/speculation needs if “I wonder if she’s there yet.”

After caming at home.


After caoming at home., After coming home,

When I got back home, = more natural

After caoming at/returning home. After coming/returning home.

After caoming at home. After coming home.

You could also say, "after going home" which does sound better in my ear anyways.

After caoming at home., After coming home,

After caoming at home., After coming home,

"At" would imply that you have already arrived home. This is also not a complete sentence.

I cooked a red pasta Tunisia.


I cooked asome red pasta Tunisian pasta. I cooked some red Tunisian pasta.

I cooked a red pasta called Tunisia. I cooked a red pasta called Tunisia.

I cooked a red pasta TunisiTunisian pasta. I cooked Tunisian pasta.

Had to Google that. XD

I cooked a red pasta Tunisian pasta. I cooked a red Tunisian pasta.

I cooked aTunisian red pasta Tunisia. I cooked Tunisian red pasta.

Adjectives generally go before the nouns. I am assuming that you meant to say you cooked pasta from Tunisia, or in the style of a dish from Tunisia, therefore, you would call it "Tunisian".

It was delicious!


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This afternoon, I watched a video in English on YouTube.


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ThisIn the afternoon, I watched a video in English video on YouTube. In the afternoon, I watched an English video on YouTube.

This afternoon - talking of it in the future (it hasn’t happened yet) In the afternoon - reflecting on the past

ThisIn the afternoon, I watched a video in English on YouTube. In the afternoon, I watched a video in English on YouTube.

My aim has always been to be a good lestener and to get used to hearing English.


My aim has always been to be a good leistener and to get used to hearing English. My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearing English.

My aim has always been to be a good leistener and to get used to hearing English. My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearing English.

My aim has always been to be a good leistenering and to get used to hearlistening English. My aim has always been to be a good listening and to get used to listening English.

"Hearing" is usually used when you notice a sound or something like that. When you are paying attention to something intently, we use the word "listen".

My aim has always been to be a good leistener and to get used to hearing English. My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearing English.

My aim has always been to be a good leistener and to get used to hearing English. My aim has always been to be a good listener and to get used to hearing English.

Then, I spoke to a friend over Skype in English.


Then, I spoke to a friend overon Skype in English. Then I spoke to a friend on Skype in English.

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I have prepared to him a great surprise.


I have prepared to him a greata big surprise for him. I prepared a big surprise for him.

I have prepared to him a great surprise for him. I have prepared a great surprise for him.

I have prepared to him a great surprise. I have prepared him a great surprise.

I have prepared to him a greata huge surprise for him. I have prepared a huge surprise for him.

I have prepared to him a greatd a big surprise for him. I had a big surprise for him.

The object, "him", should go after the verb. Also, because it already happened it should be in the past. Usually, we would just say that we "have a surprise".

I met my Mom to a friend over Skype.


I metintroduced my Mmom to a friend over Skypehim. I introduced my mom to him.

I metintroduced my Mom to a friend over Skypeit as well. I introduced my Mom to a friend over it as well.

I metshowed my Mom to a friend over Skype. I showed my Mom to a friend over Skype.

I metintroduced my Mom to a friend over Skype. I introduced my Mom to a friend over Skype.

I metintroduced my Mom to amy friend over Skype. I introduced my Mom to my friend over Skype.

Your friend met your mother. You introduced her. The way it is written makes it sound like you didn't know your mother before the Skype call.

He was really surprising to see Mom!


He was really surprisinged to smee Momt her! He was really surprised to meet her!

He was really surprisinged to see Mom! He was really surprised to see Mom!

Past tense use the past participle not the gerund

He was really surprising to see my Mom! He was really surprising to see my Mom!

He was really surprisinged to see Mom! He was really surprised to see Mom!

He was reallvery surprisinged to smeet my Mom! He was very surprised to meet my Mom!

"Surprising" makes it sound like is was doing something to you. "Surprised" refers to the state or emotion that he was in.

Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected me a bunch of sentences.


Then, we talked a little bit in Spanish and he corrected me a bunch of sentences for me. Then we talked a little bit in Spanish and he corrected a bunch of sentences for me.

Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected me on a bunch of sentences. Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected me on a bunch of sentences.

Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected me a bunch of my sentences. Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected a bunch of my sentences.

Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected me a bunch of sentences for me. Then, we talked a little in Spanish and he corrected a bunch of sentences for me.

Then, we talspoked a little in Spanish and he corrected me a bunch of sentences. Then, we spoke a little in Spanish and he corrected a bunch of sentences.

"Me" is unnecessary.

To be honest, I want to keep improving my English for me and especially for my best friend.


To be honest, I want to keep improving my English for me, and especially for my best friend. To be honest, I want to keep improving my English, and especially for my best friend.

To be honest, I want to keep improving my English for meyself and especially for my best friend. To be honest, I want to keep improving my English for myself and especially for my best friend.

To be honest, I want to keep improving my English for meyself and especially for my best friend. To be honest, I want to keep improving my English for myself and especially for my best friend.

I would like you proud of me.


I would like you to be proud of me. I would like you to be proud of me.

I would like youthem to be proud of me. I would like them to be proud of me.

I would like youhim/her to be proud of me. I would like him/her to be proud of me.

I would like you to be proud of me. I would like you to be proud of me.

I would like you to be proud of me. I would like you to be proud of me.

I am proud of you!

I am grateful for this web-site and everyone who as helped me.


I am grateful for this web-site and everyone who as helped me. I am grateful for this website and everyone who as helped me.

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I am grateful for this web-site and everyone who has helped me. I am grateful for this website and everyone who has helped me.

I am grateful for this web-site and everyone who as helped me. I am grateful for this website and everyone who as helped me.

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