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I Love Swimming
I learned swimming in 2014. Since then, I go swimming every summer.
I still remember the feeling when I was swimming last year. I went swimming in the morning a few times. The sun shone the water. The water flew like diamonds. It was so quiet and pure under the water. When I swam into the water, I felt like I swam into another world which only belonged to me. I thoungt a lot of things, nobody disturbed me. When I raised up my head out of the water for taking a breath, I heard so many noise. I knew that I was back to the reality world. But I swam into the water soon. I entered my own world again. In and out, again and again.
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Ich habe mir einen Computer gekauft. Der Computer ist sehr schnell. Ich bin so glucklich.Ich mag es,weil es grosse kapazitat hat.Der Compuer war gar nicht teuer.Es war preiswert. Ich habe es durch Liveanfnkt gekauft.Du weisst ja schon,dass wir im online lernen,deswegen wollte ich neue Computer kaufen besonders mein alte compuer ist nicht schnell
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What's one way you might become eccentric in your old age?
I will probably be an elderly anarchist who still listens to post-hardcore punk and has a weird haircut (probably a silver-white bob). I am a bit eccentric now, so I suspect it will get worse while I'm getting old. Hopefully, I will have more tattoos than I have now, learn some difficult language (Chinese would be awesome) and do tai-chi. I hope I will be able to grow my own vegetables and collaborate somehow with my neighbourhood. I basically want to be your punk-hippy-sweet grandma next door.
July 7, 2021
Mein Chef hat mich beleidigt
Letzte Woche habe ich zur Arbeit eine Trägerbluse angezogen und man könnte meine Schulter sehen. Auf meine Schulter habe ich ein Tattoo. Mein Tattoo ist ein Wort: "temporary" mit Großbuchstaben geschrieben. Die Schriftart ist schlampig und nicht sehr ordentlich, aber sie ist so, weil ich es so wollte. Es war mit Absicht gemacht. Ich kann mir natürlich vorstellen, dass sehr viele Menschen sie nicht schön finden würden. Ich mag sie sehr. Ich habe noch keine Sekunde bereut. Zurück zum Thema, hat mein Chef dieses Tag zum ersten Mal meine Tattoo gesehen. Er hat zuerst nichts gesagt, aber nach ein paar Stunden haben wir über ein Design gesprochen und ich habe einen Vorschlag gemacht. Dann hat er gesagt, dass mein Vorschlag dumm ist und ich keinen Geschmack habe. Dann hat er gesagt, dass er es verstanden hat, sobald er mein Tattoo gesehen hat. Ich war wirklich schockiert. Ich habe nur gesagt, dass es Geschmackssache ist.
Ich war so schockiert, aber konnte nichts sagen, weil in diesem Moment mir nichts eingefallen hat. Ich fühlte mich so beleidigt und war sehr wütend, weil niemand das Recht zu beurteilen hat. Es ist auch sehr unprofessionell und unethisch, dass ein Chef sowas zu einer Praktikantin sagt, die halb so alt wie er ist. Es ist auch ein Teil meines Körpers, der ich nicht verändern kann. Ich finde es sehr taktlos, weil vielleicht, wenn es jemand anderes wäre, hätte dieser jemand sich für sein Tattoo schämen können. Jeder ist in den unterschiedlichen Ebenen des Selbstbewusstseins und es kann das Selbstbewusstsein des anderer Menschen zerstören.
July 7, 2021
Routines for Studying English
There are many daily routines to improve my English skill.
Early in the morning, I listen to radio shows which are speaking and writing in English.
After that, I read children's books out loud.
These days, I am adding one more routine to speak more than one minute about any topic in English.
I also study during lunchtime.
I take dictation about the contents that I practiced in the morning.
If I have a free time at work, I watch visual contents about my favorite topics like tea, note taking and traveling in English.
Before going to sleep, I write down my journal which is my favorite routine.
I try to practice all of routines on a daily basis.
I hope I can speak more fluent in English.
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Journal
The same meaning can be expressed in different ways, therefore when I correct people's writing, I try to correct as little as I can as long as they do not have grammatical mistakes. Some sentences don't have basic mistakes, and they are just not perfect, so I think I shouldn't change them because they don't have mistakes while they are just not perfect. The process of improvement should be gone through by writers. In these corrections, most of them are just slightly adjusted. We can fully understand you even if I didn't change a word, and furthermore, what I have changed doesn't mean that the original sentences are not correct, it's just my preference.
No doubt there were many stars in the sky during summer nights and I believe there are still stars in the countryside now. Back then, not just children in my family, there were many children in my village, and about more than ten children.
I don't think my English is good because so far I can't speak it fluently. If you talk to me in English, I will get stuck in our conversation. I can only speak simple sentences, and very slowly. It often happens to me that I don't know how to express my thoughts during conversations.
Yes, life with no goals is really terrible, therefore I often keep having goals in every period of my life.
Canada always leaves me an impression that it is not too hot even if it is in summer. I didn't expect where it could constantly be over 35 degrees Celsius before you told me.
The reason that I replied to you so late is that we held a ginger planting class for some farmers in another city during the past few days. I will send you some videos about this training.
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엄마와 바다
오늘은 마음이 좀 복잡하다. 내가 많이 사랑하는 사람이 요즘 많이 힘들어하고 있고, 그 모습을 보고 나도 마음이 많이 아프다. 그 사람을 도와주거나 치료해 줄 수 있었다면 좋겠는데 그렇게 쉽게 해결되는 문제가 아니라서 마음이 또 아프다.
할 것도 없는 데다가 생각 정리 좀 필요해서 바다에 갔다. 그리고 가는 길에 미국에 계시는 부모님에게 뭐하냐는 메시지를 보냈다. 우리 엄마는 거의 바로 답하셨고 예감이 있으셔서 그런지 바로 "괜찮냐고" 물어보셨다. 그래서 엄마와 동영상 통화 걸었고 나는 울먹이며 엄마에게 상황을 설명해 주었다. 엄마는 역시 좋은 조언을 많이 하셨고 엄마의 목서리를 들으면서 바다를 보는 것이 나의 마음을 어느 정도 편하게 해 주었다.
이 문제는 내가 고칠 수 있는 문제가 아닌데 그래도 그 사람의 옆에 있어줄 수 있다.
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Journal
I looked up Independence Day on the internet and learned that it's the national day of the US. I wish great Americans a happy independent day.
Yes, among the four seasons, summer is the season that rained a lot. During summer, you need to take your clothes outside to dry, otherwise they will go mouldy.
Indeed, money is a good thing, but if making money affects our life quality, I'd rather not earn the money.
The reason why the Chinese government prohibits members of the national staff from owning private business I think is that the government is afraid that the members will distract their focus from their public position. It's not that they may use their authority to influence their business, because they usually don't have any power, they just earn a little hard-earned money by their own hard work.
It's really nice that the US doesn't have any law to prevent civil servants from doing business. If this is true, I really wish I could live in America.
I am very happy to hear that your products are very popular among your customers and I hope your team will do it better.
I am for sure that retirement at fifty is just a beautiful dream, therefore you don't expect it. But the retirement for women in China is indeed 55. If you work in state-owned enterprises, the retirement age for women is 50.
Yes, every time I drink green tea, I kind of vomit. Now I just drink black tea occasionally, because black tea is cooked tea. It's said that it has the function of warming the stomach. Speaking of hot water, I can't help laughing because this is what foreigners always laugh at. Maybe people think drinking boiled water is very good for one's health and this is true, but it doesn't have special cure functions for humans. For me, even if I am Chinese, I rarely drink boiled water unless I am thirsty, so just being natural, drink it when you want and remember that it doesn't have special functions.
Delta virus was indeed emerging in Guangzhou, but only after one month did it overcome. Now in China, we have good controls on coronavirus, and we have a normal life.
The day when your messages came, I indeed did something not as usual. I cycled to an old street that was 18 kilometers from where I live. When I returned home, I found that my shoulder was sunburned.
The reason why I replied to you so late is that we held a few days of ginger planting training after I got your messages. I will send you some pictures and videos about this training.
Okay, let's stop here. See you next time.
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In passato, ogni rete sociale aveva la sua specialità. Oggi metto in banco Instagram. Permetteva solamente il caricamento di fotografie nelle prime versioni. Gli utenti non potevano allora usare l'applicazione per caricare storie in tempo reale o esporre video. Non c'è bisogno ribadire che per chi non usava la piattaforma all'inizio questa modalità li parerebbe noiosa. Ma anche se sono una di quelle persone, non condivido quest'opinione.
Per me, Instagram è stata e sempre sarà adeguata solamente per le foto. Il formato originale era perfetto; ogni utente poteva esprimersi mediante un reticolo di foto, e nient'altro. Questo presentava una sfida, siccome ognuno doveva pensare all'allineamento dello scatto e al posizionamento degli oggetti in modo da scattare una foto che potesse rappresentare al meglio la sua giornata. Perciò, tutte le bacheche somigliavano le esibizioni che si può trovare nei musei.
Però cos'e successo oggi? Instagram sembra niente più di una replica di Facebook, con gli utenti che sfruttano al massimo dell'uso di video in diretta, storie con etichette e filtri e anche guide personali, curate dagli utenti stessi. È vero che questi strumenti hanno aiutato Instagram a diffondersi lungo il mondo digitale, poiché ci sono adesso più di individuali che usano la piattaforma (fra gli utenti, ci sono molte marche che promuovono i loro prodotti e videografi che usano la piattaforma per sviluppare le loro carriere attraverso il potenziamento dei loro curricoli.
Ciò nonostante, ha valuto la pena che Instagram abbia perso la sua singolarità? Forse sì, per gli abitanti del mondo digitale, che vogliono potenziare ogni volta di più le reti sociali per guadagnarsi da vivere. Ma lungo il tragitto, abbiamo perso qualcosa di unico; qualcosa che non possiamo mai recuperare salvo l'impiego di un sito di archivio.
July 7, 2021
It is Rainy
Today, it is rainy all day and I didn't go out. The weather forecast says it will be rainy and cloudy next week, so I'm fed up with it. I don't dislike rain per se but dislike it causes high humidity and makes me being short of exercise. Additionally, I cannot dry my clothes without going to a laundromat, which costs time and money.
July 7, 2021
Une introduction à propos de moi
Bonjour ! Je m'appelle Giang et j'ai treize ans. J'habite à Vietnam, plus précisément à Ho Chi Minh-ville. Comme vous l'avez probablement déjà deviné, je suis vietnamienne. Je suis étudiante à l'école, donc je ne travaille pas. Dans ma famille, il y a 5 personnes. Ce sont ma grandmère, mon père, ma mère, ma soeur et moi. Ils sont très gentils et je très (très !) s'aime. J'adore lire les livres et je peux parler de livres tous les jours sans m'ennuyer. J'ai lire 200 livres dans 2020, et j'espère lire 210 livres cette année. Très ambitieux, je sais, mais j'en ai déjà lu plus de la moitié ! Aussi, j'aime faire de la badmiton comme un sport. Je joue avec mes ami(e)s. C'est la fin. Merci d'avoir lu~
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Dia sete de julho
Em 2008, a minha mãe trouxe mim e a minha irmã para California, Estados Unidos.
O meu pai não pôde ir connosco porque ele tinha de trabalhar.
Ele foi o funcionário público. Ele não tive feriás longe.
Nós viajámos do Estados Unidos por cerca de dois semanas.
Foi primeiro vez eu viajei para o lugar longe de o meu pais o que é não localizado de Ásia.
Nós fomos de avião e o tempo passado há 13 horas.
Nós morámos da casa da amiga da minha mãe, localizado em Los Angeles.
A amiga da minha mãe tive a irmã; além disso, nós jogámos junto.
Elas vivemos do apartamento grande.
De facto, achei que todas coisas em Estados Unidos foram grandes, comparado das coisas em Taiwan.
-segue-
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۱ درس ششم
پیراهنم رنگ بنفش است.
زبان انگلیسی مشگل است و زبان فارسی آسان و شیرین است.
ما زبان انگلیسی میدانیم.
من زبان فاوسی نمیدانم.
ما به استادمان با زبان فارسی جواب میدهیم.
کتب تر روی میز من است.
این مداد رنگ سبز است.
این گل بوی خوش دارد.
ما در دانشگاهی تهران درس میکمیم.
پدر و مادر دوستم تابستان در ده زندگی میکنند.
اسم تو چیست؟
اسمش چیست؟
من نمیدونم اسم این زن چیست.
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¡Hola!
¡Tengo acentos! Los buscé un lugar qué pudedo escribir en español. Hoy, trabajé. Trabajo el lunes a el domingo. Sin embargo, en la semana proxima, tengo la semana todo libre. Estoy un poco consado, pero entiendo qué practicando el español cada día es muy importante para hablar fludio.. Espero qué seguir mejorando. ¡Aprendiendo el español ha sido divertido! ( Está es divertido porque todavída aprendiendo jaja)
¡Gracias para su corectiones!
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