Nov. 23, 2022
Rain
I planned to go shopping to around Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday.
But it was raining so I stopped going out; if I walked to the nearest station, I would be soake.
I will go there after work tomorrow instead.
今日は祝日なので、名古屋駅周辺まで買い物に出かけようかと思っていました。
でも雨だったのでやめました。
最寄り駅まで歩くと濡れてしまいそうなので。
あした仕事帰りに行きたいと思います。
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I planned to go shopping to around Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday but it was raining so I didn't go. If I walked to the nearest station, I would be soaked.
I planned to go shopping around Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday but it was raining so I didn't go. If I walked to the nearest station, I would be soaked.
But it was raining so I stopped going out; if I walked to the nearest station, I would be soake.
We try to avoid beginning sentences with "but" when we write but, in the US, we start sentences with it often when we speak. I thus appended this sentence to the previous one.
"If I walked to the nearest station, I would be soaked." → Nice use of subjunctive case!
I will go there after work tomorrow instead.
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上手に書けています。
Nov. 30, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
I planned to go shopping to around Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday.
I planned to go shopping around Nagoya station because today is a national holiday.
But it was raining so I stopped going out; idecided not to go. If I walked to the nearest station, I would beget soaked.
But it was raining so I decided not to go. If I walked to the nearest station, I would get soaked.
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I hope the weather is nice for you today!
Nov. 30, 2022
Thank you.
Rain
I planned to go shopping to around in Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday.
I planned to go shopping around in Nagoya station because today is a national holiday.
You'll see the pattern "~ around in" pop up in a lot of sentences:
* playing around in the park
* messing around in my free time
But it was raining so I stoppcanceled going out; if I walked to the nearest station, I would behave been soaked.
But it was raining so I canceled going out; if I walked to the nearest station, I would have been soaked.
Nov. 30, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
I planned to go shopping to around Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday.
I planned to go shopping around Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday.
at Nagoya, around Nagoya, in Nagoya, all are okay
But it was raining so I stopped goingdidn't go out; if I walked to the nearest station, I would be soaked.
But it was raining so I didn't go out; if I walked to the nearest station, I would be soaked.
"stopped going out" sounds like you regularly go out and you stopped. "I was sick so I stopped going out."
Nov. 30, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
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I planned to go shopping to around Nagoya station, because today is a national holiday.
I planned to go shopping at Nagoya, around Nagoya, in Nagoya, all are okay
I planned to go shopping You'll see the pattern "~ around in" pop up in a lot of sentences: * playing around in the park * messing around in my free time
I planned to go shopping
I planned to go shopping |
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But it was raining so I stopped going out; if I walked to the nearest station, I would be soake.
But it was raining so I "stopped going out" sounds like you regularly go out and you stopped. "I was sick so I stopped going out."
But it was raining so I
But it was raining so I
We try to avoid beginning sentences with "but" when we write but, in the US, we start sentences with it often when we speak. I thus appended this sentence to the previous one. "If I walked to the nearest station, I would be soaked." → Nice use of subjunctive case! |
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I will go there after work tomorrow instead. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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