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將來有空時，我想去維也納一遊。我是在幾年前在網上看到文章後，對這個城市開始感到興趣。當時我還是大學生，沒有很多錢，不能想去就去。雖然我沒有錢，但還能上網查資料。除了在網上找見聞，還從圖書館裏借了幾本旅遊指南來看。我覺得維也納這個城市挺適合我。它是一個藝術都市，有幾位我喜歡的畫家都是來自哪裏。對於超愛逛博物館的我來說，真是願望成真啊！除了藝術，維也納的咖啡館也很有名，做的糕點挺出色。有一種蛋糕，叫薩赫蛋糕，裏面有果醬與幾層巧克力，聽說非常好吃。我本來想在去年十二月時去維也納的，可是疫情爆發後，甚麼地方也去不了。希望一兩年後，世界各地情況會有改善，我終於可以去哪逛一逛。
July 9, 2021
Bandara Nuuk
Nuuk adalah ibukota Grønland (Tanah Hijau). Di kota itu ada universitas dan gedung utama. Populasinya 18000 jiwa. Pemerintahan sedang membangun bandara besar. Sekarang ada bandara besar di Kangerlussuaq, tetapi tidak ada banyak orang di kota itu. Di Nuuk ada banyak musisi dan insinyur.
July 9, 2021
Sentences 25 – 27 (Diary)
1. Although China has not issued a law to ban LGBTQ+, attitudes towards homosexuality have become more conservative recently, with almost all official WeChat accounts of universities and local LGBTQ+ communities being blocked a few days ago :(
2. If Google, Facebook and other tech giants stop offering services in Hong Kong, what's the difference between Hong Kong's internet control and mainland China's?
3. The role of labels is not of dictating the details of human behavior, but to provide a way for people to better understand themselves.
July 8, 2021
Смол-тоук
Нескольких недель назад я услышал в подкасте, что в некоторых больших городах в России присутствует феномена "смол-тоука". В Америке этот феномен иногда меня мешает, беспокоит. Я считал что в России и русскоязычных странах я от него буду свободен. Но теперь кажется что, то феномена покорит весь мир. Не знаю если это хорошо или нет, но мы ничего не можем делать об этом. Как ваши мнения о "смол-тоук"? Вы за или против?
Спасибо за внимание и исправления)
July 8, 2021
Comment avoir des bonnes relations avec vos collègues ?
Aujourd'hui, je vais répondre à cette question : comment avoir des bonnes relations avec vos collègues ? Je pense écrire ma réponse sur deux points : travail et hors de travail.
Au niveau de travail, il faut qu'on soit coopératif. C'est-à-dire, on doit écouter des opinions des autres, mais également doit exprimer nos opinions pour servir à l'équipe. Afin d'avoir son utilité, on fait mieux d'avoir plein de connaissances en étudiant davantage et obtenant des expériences que les autres ne semblent pas d'avoir acquis. Ces efforts augmentent nos valeurs dans l'équipe et ainsi les relations se renforcent.
Côté hors de travail, on a besoin de communiquer. Pour l'atteindre, tout d'abord, on devrait saluer. C'est vraiment important, car ça montre que je le reconnais et je suis prête à avoir des conversations avec cette personne. Ça facilite la communication dans le futur et nourrit la confiance entre des personnes. Même pendant la petite pause, on peut demander des nouvelles de cette personne devant la machine à café pour mieux se connaitre. Cette petite chose s'entasse un par un, et crée l'ambiance dans laquelle on peut avoir recours l'un à l'autre quand des problèmes se produisent.
Cela dit, il faut savoir que chacun a la distance qu'il veut tenir avec les autres, et on ne devrait pas la franchir brusquement. On doit respecter les vies privées des autres : s'approcher trop peut empêcher d'inspirer confiance.
July 8, 2021
Journaleintrag 1: der Körper
Hallo. Ich heiße Nicole. Ich lerne Deutsch und ich nehme Deutch-Klassen in Universität.
Deise woche, ich lerne "der Körper." Ich habe Problem mit die Worte "die" und "der." Ich kenne das Wort "der Arm," aber ich habe Problem mit die Worte wie "die Arme." Ich muss mehr Plural Worte lernen.
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Graduation Speech
Dear students. Dear faculty. Respected community of mothers, and fathers who are in streaming. First of all, I would like to thank you for the opportunity to formally bid farewell to this magnificent graduating class.
I want to say a few words. I will talk about three ideas: about the dream, about courage, and about patience. And I want to give you three advice
About the dream:
It’s natural and necessary that, in these occasions, the student body be always the protagonist. However, I would like you to allow me to tell a brief anecdote about your teachers, about the teachers who have spent so many hours, we have spent in a classroom with you.
About a month ago, I don’t know if you have noticed , we decide to put a TV in the teacher’s room; we connected it to computer, we put Internet. The idea is that it uses as a window for good practices and as an information panel. But it was a bit cold and technical, so we decided to make a little game to give it a less ‘formal’ use
We set up the typical Who’s Who game. We asked colleagues to send a photo with half their current age, anonymously, and the rest of us had to guess who it was.
I was in charge of receiving the images and .. , when I was receiving them, I was storing them in the cloud, Drive of course; but as I was uploading then, I began to notice that they all looked a bit alike, that they all had something in common, I would say that there was a pattern in all of them. Days want by, more and more photos were sent and I still didn’t know what they had in common.. in the end I almost forgot it.
But one morning, I walked into a classroom, I don’t know exactly which one or when, I looked at my students and I understood the key. All those photos of the teacher's youth had a connection with the students, something that was enough to look into their eyes to understand. What the students and the photos of their teachers' youth had in common was illusion. That illusion for the future without limits. The illusion that comes from knowing that you have all the time in the world to achieve anything.
It is possible that sometimes, maybe soon, when you are in college or in vocational training, or in a job, you will look at people older than you, with a steady salary, a house, a family and maybe you think you would like to have all that, maybe you think that would be a good end, …. but believe me you are wrong. There is not a single one of these people 'who seem to have their life figured out' who wouldn't trade places with any of you right now.
And they would not change for your radiant physique, not because you are stronger, or faster or better looking or even because you have better health or learn some things faster.... We would trade for any of you to get to have that illusion in your eyes. The illusion that was in the youthful photos of your teachers.
However, it is true that time will also pass for you.
Mountaineers say that what gives a route its character is the most difficult stretch. Well, what gives life its character is that it is ephemeral, that everything we have will eventually disappear.
So my first piece of advice is: 'stay dreamers for as long as you can'.
My second idea is about courage; and I also want to start with a story. A few weeks ago, I talked to some friends who had first-hand knowledge of the case of the teacher who sadly died in Marbella after receiving a vaccine. These friends are doctors and they told me that they knew, from the beginning, that the official information was not correct. In the end, it all came out but they thought with sadness that nobody wanted to tell the truth. They felt that the specialist lacked courage
We will never be as brave as we were young. You may need courage many times in your future. You may need to tell the truth to your partner, your boss, your friends, or yourselves. If you have a boss who, shall we say, 'doesn't think much', you will find that many will agree with him even if he is not right. If you are the boss, you will see that there are people who never disagree with you. Be wary of all that. All the great social conquests: civil rights, freedom, democracy, the end of slavery, etc., etc., have been made not only thanks to very intelligent people, but thanks to very brave people. Society needs you to be bold and courageous.
That's my second piece of advice: stay courageous as long as possible.
Finally, I want to talk about patience. And it’s not patience with your family, or with your teachers or with your friends. It's patience with yourselves. They say that we live in the ‘comparison society’ . You only have to pick up your mobile for a few seconds to receive dozens of messages from people who are having a great time anywhere in the world. We know so many people directly or indirectly that we are always going to look bad if we compare ourselves with them. There will always be people who are prettier, nicer or more intelligent. However, all those people around us, around you, lack something fundamental: They are not you.
The social scientist S.Pinker wrote “Life and happiness depend on an infinitesimal fraction of ordered arrangements of matter". Which, roughly translated, "twitter style" means, "it's almost a miracle that we are alive" :-) But also, that ordered arrangement of matter that each one of us is, has consciousness. And it is unique.
Each of us represents a unique perspective of the Universe. And when we are no longer here, that perspective, that gaze, will disappear with us. So don't compare yourself.
In everyday life, when we don't like a TV programme, we change it. When a car disappoints us, we try to buy another one. We can change our job, our city, our partner... but we can't change ourselves for another person. So we are all we have and it is good to develop the mental strength to maintain that awareness.
Throughout your life there are bright and joyful moments ahead of you; but there are bound to be darker moments. Always remember that you represent a unique way of understanding the world. Have the patience to deal with it and that will give you the strength to keep your calm when things go wrong.
So here is my final piece of advice: be patient.
Let me sum up the three pieces of advice: stay dreamers, be brave and be patient.
Thank you all very much.
It has been a pleasure and an honour to address you all.
July 8, 2021
Il faut faire attention aux réseaux sociaux
J'utilise les réseaux sociaux de temps en temps parce que je pris en compte ma identité digitale. Ce qu'on publie peut avoir une grande importance dans notre carrière professionnelle. C'est pour ça que mes comptes de Facebook, Twitter et Instagram sont inactives et j'utilise seulement LinkedIn pour des raisons professionnelles.
Je pense aussi que c'est un perte du temps. Les études disent qu'on passe plusieurs heures par jours avec les réseaux sociaux. Je préfère lire ou étudier un autre sujet par exemple. À l'époque j'ai fait des publications sur Facebook pendant des fêtes ou d'autres événements mais maintenant c'est juste un rappel d'anniversaires pour moi.
July 8, 2021
Ecosphere
Ich habe vor kurzem eines der coolsten Dinge entdeckt. Es heißt "Ecosphere" und ist ein selbstkonservierendes Aquarium. Es ist ein geschlossenes Ökosystem, das heißt, dass das Sonnenlicht Algen produziert, die die Garnelen innen ernähren, und die Abfälle der Garnelen werden von den Bakterien in Nährstoffe zerlegt, die wiederum die Algen ernähren. Ich fand es unglaublich, als ich zum ersten Mal darüber gehört habe.
https://www.amazon.com/EcoSphere-Closed-Aquatic-Ecosystem-Sphere/dp/B005IZOB5M
July 8, 2021
My Cambodia Journal
My mother and I were riding on elephants was in Cambodia. Around 10 minutes away to an entrance of Angkor Wat, which was famous World Heritage site, we could ride on the elephants. It was a little scary, but I was so excited and felt amuse with it.
Angkor Wat was splendid structures and so large that our guide explained a lot about its history, but we became really tired because of hot weather in summer. After that, the guide took us a small water restaurant by a boat. She told us that there were huge crocodiles in that river long time ago, but they were killed and now it was safe to swim. To tell the truth, I was frightened when I heard it and tried not to fell to a river.
Another big event to us was to got on a hot-air balloon, which was connected with metal wire not to fry feely high. It raised us around 30 yards high so quickly and we enjoyed ourselves by seeing a marvelous Cambodia landscape. It could stay there was only 15 minutes, though it was an unforgettable experience for us.
Overall, travel to Cambodia was successful!
July 8, 2021
Die Simpsons: Moe
In der Serie "Die Simpsons" gibt es einen Barkeeper, der Moe heißt. Die Schriftsteller der Simpsons bilden Moe ab als ein sehr gemeines und hässliches Mensch, trotzdem zeigen sie uns in den früheren Staffeln, dass Moe sehr lieb sein kann. Vor Kurzem habe ich an eine Szene erinnert, die spielt sich in einer frühen Staffel ab.
Bart ruft Moe immer an, um Scherzanrufe zu machen. Bart fragt danach, ob es ein Mensch mit einem lustigen Namen bei der Kneipe gibt und Moe kündigt zur Kneipe an, dass es einen Anruf für Herren Soundso gibt. Die ganze Kneipe - außer Moe - lacht. Danach bedroht Moe Bart, "Wenn ich dich abgreife, wird es dir Leid tun!" Während Bart das Telefon auflegt, kommt Marge ins Zimmer und befiehl ihm, zur Kneipe zu gehen, um Homer zuhause zu bringen. Wenn Bart Homer findet, sagt Moe plötzlich, dass er seine Stimme erkennt. Bart wird wegen der Scherzanrufe nervös, aber es erweist sich, dass Moe begeistert ist Bart noch mal zu sehen. Die ganze Sache mit den Scherzanrufe wird vergessen und die Handlung verwandelt sich.
Ich glaube aber, dass Moe weiß, dass Bart die Scherzanrufe macht. Wie ein guter Kerl, spielt er damit. Ich weiß, dass die Simposons nur eine Serie ist, trotzdem mag ich, wenn es viele Schichte in einer Geschichte gibt. (Ich habe gerade die Verbindung der zwei Wörter bemerkt)
Danke schön fürs Lesen :)
July 8, 2021
環境的問題於新生詞
我剛剛花了半個小時看從去年的高級中文書的材料。在小文章裡，作者描述中國2007年藍藻爆發的情況。這個藍藻不但影響各城市的環境，而且肆虐家家的飲水。由於藍藻傳播許多地方，20万斤魚也死了。雖然我還沒看藍藻傳播的原因，我已經學到了很多。這個作者用描寫的生詞，將來我肯定會有機會使用。所以我寫到了我最喜歡的新生詞，因為我覺得寫生詞是最好的學習習慣。我平常用一個軟件叫Pleco差和收藏新的生詞。不過，軟件裡面已經有好多沒學好的生詞。這是因為我看中文電視的話，常常需要差生詞和不要忘記它們。或者有時候我突然要知道怎麼用中文說一個詞，像“牛油果”或者咖啡研磨（我不確定這是對的說法）。雖然我有太多生詞我要學，我覺得這個不是一個問題。希望明天我會看完那個文章和有時間練習語法。
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Output practice
These days I am focusing on English output practices.
As you know, there are two major things, speaking and writing.
My short term goal is to get a higher score on a speaking test.
So I tried to practice speaking first.
But it was not improved enough because of lack of vocabularies.
I changed my strategy to improve my composition skills.
With more collocations which I found in the dictionary, my skills improve bit by bit.
Now, I can spit it out more fluently.
I will do my best with constant practice.
July 8, 2021
Sebastians dag
Igår vaknade Sebastian klockan sex. Han var trott! Sedan åt han frukost och drack kaffe, mellan tittade han på läsplatta och sin telefon. Nästa åkte han till jobbet. Han är en flygvärdinna och tog flygbussen till jobbet. När han kom till jobbet pratade han först med sina kollegor. De pratade om vad de gjorde på helgen. Han gick till flygplanet. Där delade han ut kaffe och te till passagerare. Flygplanet landade i Paris. Där fikade Sebastian med sina kollegor. De skattade om ett bra skämt. Sedan åkte han tillbaka till Sverige med flygplanet. Han gav passagerare en varm måltid och skattade med piloter i sittbrunnen. När hans arbetsdag var slut, åkte Sebastian hemifrån. Han åt hämmat framför tv:n. Han gick och laggade sig halv tolv.
July 8, 2021
C'est jeudi
Tout le semain j'ai été très stressé au mon travail. J'ai eué beaucoup de formalités administratives qui sont mon responsabilité. Mais ca problème n'est pas faut de rire sauf la mien. Je suis désordenné dans mon maison et plus encore dans mon travail. Je ne peux pas attendre à vendredi. Seul un plus jour !
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July 8, 2021
헛소리만 하는 사람을 대하는 법
남들과 대화할 때 상대방의 입견하고 의견을 존중하는 것이 매우 중요하다. 상대방이 내가 듣기 싫은 말을 하더라도 잘 듣고 그 사람이 왜 그렇게 생각하는지를 파악하면 대화도 돼고 무엇을 새로 배울 기회도 생긴다. 그러나, 어떤 사람은 이치와 사실과 완전히 반대되는 말을 하고 자신의 입견과 생각만이 맞는다고 우긴다. 그런 사람은 끝까지 남의 말을 안 듣고 자신과 의견이 다른 사람들을 비웃기까지 한다. 그런 사람들 대하게 되면 어떻게 해야 하는지 열심히 생각해 보았다. 나는 그런 사람을 만난 적이 한 두 번은 아니다. 결국에 그런 사람과의 대화를 아예 피하는 것이 가장 좋다고 알게 되었다. 물론, 대화를 피하는 것이 보통 별로 바람직하지 않은 조치인데 내 경험상 그런 사람은 진지한 대화를 원하는 것이 아니다. 무엇보다 자신과 똑같이 상각하는 맞장구를 쳐줄 사람을 원한다. 솔직한 대화를 원하지 않는 사람과의 대화는 참된 대화보다 벽돌에게 소리를 지르는 것과 더 비슷하다. 벽돌은 아무것도 듣고 배우지 못하고 결국에 나만 피곤해진다!
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