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Feb. 1, 2024
L'étude
Aujourd'hui, je n'avais pas des courses, mais jusqu'à présent je suis en train de faire mes devoirs. Je l'y commencé à midi. Je ne sais pas si c'est une obsession, habit ou seulmenet responsabilité. Certaines japonais m'apelle «勉強家» , qui signifie une étudiante diligent. Honêtement, j'étais différent il y a deux années. Depuis que j'ai entré dans ma école, je fais mes devoirs presque toute la journée.
Feb. 1, 2024
Heavy Rain
Heavy rain drop faster and faster. Once the raindrop reach the ground, it spread out to several parts, and then draw ripples on the thin water surface.
A small bird still search for food in such a heavy rain. It ignores both the danger of being caught by standbys and the possibility of rushing to death. Maybe it have old parents or small babies who can’t earn their life, just the same as us?
A car is driven slowly, coming to the bird closer and closer, and finally drive over the bird. This car didn’t stop at all, it keeps moving forward without any feeling, because the driver doesn’t know what had happened.
The rain becomes heavier, having no signal to stop.
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Neuer Tag neues Glück
Liebe Freunde,
ein neuer Tag (und ein neuer Monat) ist da und wir müssen unser Leben leben und das Beste daraus machen. Der Tag ist grau und regnerisch. Die Nachrichten sind entmutigend und wecken den Wunsch, eine Seite über lustige Tiere zu finden und stattdessen deren Nachrichten zu lesen. Aber gibt es Dinge des Alltags, die unsere unmittelbare Aufmerksamkeit erfordern. Und so geht es. Hier gibt es nicht viel zu berichten, aber muss ich jeden Tag etwas schreiben, um eine Gewohnheit zu schaffen. So, hier bin ich. Und dann bin ich weg.
Habt alle einen glücklichen Tag.
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Ich fahr nach Montreal heute
Ich fahr nach Montreal heute. Es ist ein Reise für meinem Arbeit. Ich werde arbeiten in einen Krankenhaus, Royal Victoria Hospital. Ich bin Auditor für einem Unternehmen, das helfe pharmazeutischen Firmen um neuen Medikamenten zu testen.
Ich mag diese Stadt, weil ich kann mein Französich nutzen und Poutine essen. Ich mag auch den Schnee, hier in Nashville es fast nie schneit.
Feb. 1, 2024
A continuation of the story of my old friend (35)
I wrote about my old friend who took English lessons together in my last entry.
It was a story for over 10 years ago.
He baked some Biscottis for out teacher and me because he worked at a bakery.
I even bake Biscottis following the recipe that he taught me.
I took lessons with him for about a year, but he started skipping lessons frequently and eventually didn't turn up at all.
I kept taking lessons without him for a while.
I studied there for three years in total and quit.
One day after a long time I quit the school, I bump into the teacher at a convenience store.
We talked catching up each other because it's been a while.
However, he looked like he hesitate to say, but told me "Actually, he who took lessons with you passed away..."
I was speechless by the shock. I was really sad.
I sometimes remember him while baking Biscottis.
Jan. 31, 2024
Warum wir noch keine außerirdische Leben entdecken?
Wir denken und in Religionen oft davon erwähnt, dass die Menschen das einzige intelligente Lebenswesen seien. Bisher haben wir noch keine unheimliche Leben in der Außenwelt beobachtet oder von ihnen kontaktiert wurden. Aber es ist fast undenkbar, dass nur wir in diesem Universum, in dem zahlreiche Sterne und Planeten vorhanden sind, leben. Durch einige Gründe können es erklärt werden kann. Erstens sind wir, wie wir für uns schon halten, echt speziell und glücklich, als ob wir das Lotto gewonnen haben, sodass die Bedingung der Erde für das Leben perfekt geeignet ist, während in anderen dunklen Ecken des Universums viele Lebensform oder Civilizationen früher als wir aussterben, weil die Umgebung zu gefährlich sind, um Leben zu ermöglichen. Zweitens können die Technologie zum Transportieren zwischen Sterne schwer zu entwickeln, denn sie setzt voraus, dass das Wesen die Energie einem ganzen Stern ausbeuten kann, sodass sie Fahrzeuge aufbauen können, um sich schnell im Weltraum zu bewegen. Es scheint derzeit dann, dass noch niemand diese Fähigkeit bereits entwickelt hat. Noch eine grausamere Grund wäre, dass die Zerstörung einer Spezies von sich selbst unvermeidbar sein könnte, wenn sie genug technologisch fortgeschritten sind. Möglicherweise werden wir dem gleichen Schicksal verfolgen und irgendwann in ferner Zukunft aus das Universum verschwinden.
Jan. 31, 2024
Joseph-Antoine Boullan, tra santità ed esoterismo (2a parte)
Nel 1854, Boulan lascia la congregazione del Preziosissimo Sangue per stabilirsi a Parigi e diventa il redattore principale di una rivista liturgica chiamata "Le Rosier de Marie" ("Il Rosaio di Maria"). Durante un viaggio a la Salette, luogo di apparizioni mariali contestate, incontra Adèle Chevalier, religiosa belga conversa del convento di Saint-Thomas-de-Villeneuve a Soissons. Questa donna, conosciuta negli ambienti monastici como una miracolata, è presumibilmente stata guerita dalla cecità, e attira molta gente con le proprie predizioni e dichiarazioni esaltate. Sceglie presto il prete como direttore di conscenza, e insieme scelgono di dedicare la loro vita all'azione riparatrice. "Si tratta di offrire a Dio, a titolo di riparazione o soddisfazione, preghiere speciali o sofferenze fisiche o morali cristianemente accettate, anzi sollicitate, in modo da compensare, in una certa misura, le offese continuamente fatte alla Maestà Divina dai peccatori non pentiti."
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Le IA et le futur
C'est un thème interessant. Je suis en train de réussir le cours de Langues Modernes et Traduction, puisque mon objectif est soit devenenir un traducteur, soit devenir un interprète. Mais avec la révolution des IAs, tant moi comme des autres personnes sont en danger de perdre notre travail.
Aujourd'hui il n'y a pas un traducteur en ligne qui peut traduire parfaitement toute phrase, mais ils ont devenus plus frequentes. Les entreprises connaisent ces outils, et les traducteurs sont payés moins ou directement ils ne sont pas engagés.
Quoi qu'il arrive, je pense qu'avoir un plan B est une bonne idée, en cas de que nous ne pourrons pas rivaliser cet instrument. Cependant, il est effrayant... Quelle est la limite de la technologie ?
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The Chelsea Detective2
The main character Max Arnold is around 55years old. He wears a suit and commutes by bike.
I think he is a little bit clumsy but he is so kind.
I've been to London twice, so I feel nostalgic about the cityscape in the drama.
Watching this drama will helps me learning English.
Because they speak British English so clearly. And I can catch their conversation a little.
Now, I'm watching this drama with Japanese subtitle.
I hope I can understand their conversation without subtitles.
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L’opération finale de l’affaire du chalet Asama
L’attaque avec une boule de démolition par les policiers sidéra les téléspectateurs aux living-rooms du pays entier. La stratégie ; détruire les murs et le toit du chalet avec la boule de démolition pendue à la grue afin que l’équipe y pénètre de la façade et du haut. On fit venir le plan du bâtiment pour mettre ce plan en œuvre. Croyant que les preneurs se trouvaient au deuxième étage, et l’otage au premier (en réel, ce dernier était aussi au deuxième étage), la police commença par détruire exclusivement l’escalier avec la boule destructrice pour que les militants ne puissent pas descendre au premier étage. Cette opération était extrêmement délicate car si l’impact avait été trop fort, le chalet soi-même aurait été démoli et tombé de la falaise.
Jan. 31, 2024
Japanese homework ようと思う・思っている
Please correct my homework! The sentences were originally in Romanian, but I translated them into English. (Also, I know that there shouldn't be spaces between the words, but I'm a beginner, and it's easier for me to write this way.)
ようと思う・思っている
1. I’m thinking of buying a new car next year.
来年 新車を 買おうと 思って います。
2. I’m thinking of studying abroad in Japan.
日本に 留学しようと 思って います。
3. I’m gonna buy some books and study by myself.
本を 買って、自分で 勉強しようと 思います。
4. I'm going to wake up early tomorrow.
明日は 早く 起きようと 思います。
5. When my Japanese gets better, i’m planning to study Korean as well.
日本語が 上達した とき、韓国語も 勉強しよう 思って います。
6. I’m planning to live in Italy for 2, 3 years.
イタリアに 2,3 年 住もうと 思って います。
7. I'm going to study at the library from now on. (これからは)
これからは 図書館で 勉強しようと 思います。
8. I’m thinking of picking up a new hobby. (はじめる)
新しい 趣味を 始めようと 思って います。
9. I think i’m gonna buy the blue one.
青を 買おうと 思います。
10. I think i’m gonna start a diet again.
又 ダイエットを 始めようと 思います。
Jan. 31, 2024
Estar de acuerdo en no estar de acuerdo
Es posible mantener una relación fuerte a pesar de tener discusiones. La comunicación y habilidades de resolver conflictos son claves que pueden promover el crecimiento personal. También, las discusiones plantean riesgos de la salud mental y el resentimiento que pueden afectar la estabilidad de una relación.
Las desavenencias pueden llevar a desarrollar habilidades de comunicación, ya que las parejas aprenden a expresar sus pensamientos y sentimientos de manera más clara. Además, practicar con formas de expresarse que son adecuadas mientras manteniendo el respeto pueden alentar a los lazos de confianza. Las parejas pueden desarrollar estrategias efectivas para resolver conflictos y solucionar problemas juntas. Superar desafíos juntos, incluyendo las discusiones, puede contribuir al crecimiento personal y relacional. Especialmente, comprometerse es crucial a fomentar los vínculos familiares.
Por el otro lado, la acumulación de resentimiento debido a discusiones frecuentes pueden llevar a la acumulación de problemas no resueltos, fomentando el resentimiento y erosionando la conexión emocional. Las discusiones pueden afectar negativamente el bienestar y salud mental de una manera duradera. Igualmente, muchas personas carecen las habilidades sociales a resolver conflictos familiares y no quieren transformar sus patrones de comportamiento a crecer personalmente. Existe la posibilidad para escalar los conflictos al niveles de la violencia doméstica o el abuso emocional. En algunas situaciones, es mejor que las parejas separen a intervenir de relaciones perjudiciales.
Discusiones son inevitables en las relaciones personales. Sin embargo, las habilidades de comprometer y resolver conflictos son esenciales a robustecer los lazos familiares. Cuando las parejas carecen la habilidad de resolver los problemas, surge la posibilidad de consecuencias dañinas. Un equilibrio de las discusiones es necesario a mantener una relación perdurable y prevenir daños insoportables.
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Con mèo của mình
Con mèo của mình tên la Kiwi. Kiwi ba tuổi rưỡi rồi. Mỗi ngày, Kiwi dậy khoảng sáu giờ sáng và bước trên ngực mình vì con đói bụng. Khi con làm gì đó, mình cũng dậy. Mình đánh răng rồi cho Kiwi ăn. Sau đó, mình bắt đầu làm việc ở nhà. Sau giờ làm, mình và Kiwi đi chơi. Con thường ngủ cả ngày nên có rất nhiều năng lượng buổi tối. Mình thường chơi với Kiwi trong ba mươi phút. Lúc đêm, con ăn thêm và nằm trên giường với mình. Đôi khi, mình tự hỏi con có những mơ. Mình yêu Kiwi. Mình cảm thấy rất hạnh phúc vì con là bạn thân của mình.
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Sounds I Hear 2
(I want it to be like a casual novel. Like Amy Tan.)
Now it has become decades ago, but around that time there was a pair of birds coming almost everyday at the kitchen window and reciting an interesting song. They were very modest in appearance and slim middle sized birds. Once, when I went outside to the small gallery at the light well of the apartment building, I had a chance to see them very short distance. They were sitting on the fence there showing their back to me and I witnessed their long tails. There were several seconds before they flew away saying kakakakakaka... I think they delayed to notice me. Their name turned out to be 'mourning bird.' It was a very unexpected name to me because their voice was, soft but rather, eccentric and amusing. They say hoot, hoot, hoot, like owls, but in a higher tone, then once in the phrase it becomes about one octave higher and say 'He'. I don't know what they were mourning about, but they have not visited me for quite some time.
Jan. 31, 2024
My old friend in an English lessen (34)
I had taken English lessens at an English school in my town about 10 years ago.
I took a group lessen with a man who works in a bakery.
I'd like to write about the memory with him today.
He was very shy, and didn't talk much, but when a teacher asked questions, he replied well.
He said that as he worked in a bakery, sometimes he bake cookies at home for his family.
The other day, he brought some cookies called "Biscotti" for our teacher and me.
It was so good, so I asked him the recipe.
It wasn't difficult for me to make, so I was able to make it at home.
After a while, he skipped some lessens frequently.
The teacher told me that he seemed like he wasn't feeling good.
I'm going to write the rest of this story tomorrow again because it's going to be long.
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