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Les discours du futur maire
La circulation est difficile, je suis optimiste pour résoudre ce problème.
Les jardins sont importants, une concurrence de jardinage aura lieu.
La pollution de l'air est à cause du gaz co2, j'interdirai la circulation des voitures polluantes.
Les jeunes ont des difficultés scolaires, j'aiderai les jeunes à être moins nerveux pour leur futur
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The pros and cons of social media in today's society
Nowadays social media takes an integral part of the modern world, and it is hard to overrate its significant role. Of course, there are many advantages and drawbacks of using social media in our daily life. In my point of view, social media might give us numerous pros so that it would be silly not to use them. The main advantages are listed down below.
The biggest and the most important advantage of social media is connectivity, the opportunity to connect with anyone and anywhere, if you have an internet connection. For example, today we don't need to travel in order to speak with a foreiner and we’re able to do it without much effort sitting on the chair, learning or sharing our opinion or thoughts. Another crucial benefit is the ability to be connected with your beloved, your family, so it becomes much easier to live in a distance with them, because we don’t feel this distance when we’re able to interact with them anytime.
Another important advantage is promoting your services or goods using social media. Local businesses can save a lot of money by not buying expensive advertisements on TV and contact their audience without intermediaries. As well as blogers, for whom social media became a place to work and earn money by giving people interesting or useful content. Social media actually is a reason for the appearance of a new stratum of people - videoblogers.
Another big advantage which I can’t miss is using social media for being updated on actual news. While news on TV and web sites are biased, using social media can show us real facts and existent situations without interpretation.
Meanwhile there are some drawbacks of using social media. In my point of view the main issue is the vulnerability of our privacy. In reality you don’t even need to be a hacker in order to find much personal information about a person, users of social media mostly are ready to share their personal data. But this fact doesn’t cancel out the risk of hacking, which is also very probable. The attackers can get your personal data and share it on the internet.
One of the other cons is the risk of becoming addicted to social media. It leads to excessive use and wasting time, not having enough physical activity and so on. It is especially dangerous for youth, their excesive use also can lead to mental issues due to comparing themselves with others. By the way, today’s social media with short videos, like Tiktok, might be very addictive because they give our brain dopamine, the “feel-good” chemical.
In conclusion, even though social media has very harmful drawbacks, it's impossible to imagine our life without all the benefits it gives us. The sole way to mitigate drawbacks is to prevent excesive use of social media by being conscious and disciplined enough.
Thank you!
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À propos de moi
Bonjour tout le monde!
J'ai récemment appris ce site et j'ai décidé d'essayer écrire.
Cette année, je commencerai ma première année d'examens importants, donc je dois travailler dur pour améliorer mon français.
Je m'appelle Gideon et j'apprends le français depuis quatre ans à l'école. La langue me plait beaucoup parce que j'adore apprendre la riche culture française, goûter la cuisine français, comme les croissants, les escargots, la Soupe à l'Oignon Gratinée, écouter des chansons françaises telles que "La vie en rose", "Hier encore" et aussi les plus nouvelles chansons par exemple, "Tourner dans le vide" et "Tous les mêmes".
Un peu à propos de moi est que j'apprécie jouer au tennis et frapper les balles très fort pour évacuer le stress dans ma vie.
Les trois mots j'utiliserais pour me décrire sont: dynamique, travaillant et bavarde.
Un endroit où je voudrais voyager est Japon parce que la ville et la campagne sont très pittoresques, la nourriture japonaise est ma préférée et les nouvelles technologies que possède le Japon sont étonnantes.
Merci beaucoup de votre lecture et j'espère écrire bientôt.
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(D5) Should children be made to do chores around the house
In my opinion children must learn how to do chores at home. I think those are basic skills that they will need in the future. They have to know how to do everything at home, like, for example: put the dishwasher on, how to wash their clothes, keep the house clean, and so on. I believe learning these things will help them to know not only how to do these tasks but also, they will experience the effort that one has to do in order to maintain one’s house.
It is a pretty common quarrel the one involving the chores at home. So, if they know how to do everything and the amount of time and effort required, they will be able to live alone in good conditions and, in case they share their life with a partner, they will be more understandable with the chores that the other party is doing at home.
Since the household chores are inevitable, even if one has not to do them, this knowledge will help them to keep their things clean and empathies with those doing the hard work.
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Texto 4
Este otoño yo y mi hijo solían viajar casi todos los domingos (correcto?) / Este otoñyo solía viajar con mi hijo casi todos los domingos (correcto?).
En estas breves viajes exploramos los alrededores rurales de la provincia en que vivimos. Cada vez cogimos el tren en la estación más próxima de nuestro pueblo, o hacíamos transbordo en el capital de la provincia. En el último caso tenemos que ir allí en autobús. Normalmente salimos no muy temprano, yo dejo unas horas para caminar por la montaña y el campo para volvernos a casa no muy tarde.
En uno de los primeros viajes buscamos una cascada, cuál fotos vi anteriormente en internet. En fotos parecía maravilloso. Pero después de horas de búsqueda encontramos solo su sitio completamente seco. Pero otro domingo fuimos a otro sitio, donde encontramos una cascada viva.
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Lunedì
Mi sono svegliata presto. A me non piace per niente, ma agli altri sì. Devo svegliarmi così per fare le faccende domestiche prima di andare al lavoro.
Sto bevendo un caffè mentre scrivo qui. Aspetto una consegna, spero che arrivi prima di uscire di casa.
Vado in ufficio a piedi, ci metto quasi 45 minuti per arrivarci.
Mi allenerò un po' con la Switch per iniziare la giornata bene.
A domani.
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Русские люди, понимающие английский. Пожалуйста!
Русские люди, понимающие английский. Пожалуйста, проверьте мой перевод первой главы "Девочка с которой ничего не случится".
Tomorrow, Alica is going to school. It will be an interesting day. All her friends and acquaintances called her on the videophone and congratulated her. Truly, already for three months, Alica herself has been giving no peace to anybody. She has been incessantly talking them about her future school.
The Martian booth gave her something amazing, a pencil case, which nobody can open yet, neither me nor my subordinates, including two scientists and main engineer of the zoo.
Шуша said, «I will go to school together with Alice, checking whether there will be a teacher experienced enough to teach Alica effectively?
Surprisingly, there was a lot of fuss about it. In my memory, when I first went to school, Nobody made such a fuss about these things. Now the turmoil had lessened a bit. Alica left for the zoo in order to say goodbye to бронтея.
And then, it got quiet at home, I decided to write some stories about Alica and her friends’ life. I will send these stories to Alica’s teacher. It will be useful for her to know that she will have to deal with such a frivolous person. Probably, these stories will help the teacher to educate my girl.
In the beginning, Alisa was a child-like child, until she was three years old.
As proof of that, I am going to write the first story. However, already in one year, when she came across бронтея, her ability to do everything inappropriately, to disappear at the most wanted time and to discover even accidentally things that could not be done by the force of the greatest modern scientists, appeared. Alica can extract benefits from good relationships for herself, but nevertheless she has a lot of true friends. Likewise for us, her parents, it is very hard. After all, we cannot stay at home all the time; I work at the zoo, and our mother constructs houses, also often on other planets.
I want to warn Alisa’s teacher in advance. Probably, also for her, it will not be easy. I let her listen carefully to the absolutely true story, which happened to the girl called Alica in various places and in space over the past three years.
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Un boulot à Paris. Apparement ils ne parlent pas anglais!
J'ai just accepté un travail à Paris. À cause de ca, j'ai commencé à researcher les comportements et les modes de vie des Parisiens.
Apparement les Français ne parlent pas anglais. Quelle surprise pour moi!
Honêttement, je ne peut pas comprendre pourquoi les français ont choisi ce desision. Generallement, les français sont celebre pour leur intelligence. C'est un pay qui a donner le monde les grands cerveaus comme Descartes, Curie, et Voltaire, mais pour sa langue, les français ont choisi à dire «Mcdos» au contraire de «Mcdicks». Tout ma vie j'avais penser que les Français ont le cuisine le plus fantastique du monde. Mais avec ce nom, comment peut-on demander un burger sans rire?
Malheureusement aprés disputer ce problem avec le ressources humaines de mon entreprise futur, j'ai realisé que le chance de changer la langue de tous les Parisiens sera un peu difficile. Parce que ce fait, j'ai decidé que je dois apprendre le français. Je pense qu'il ne sera pas trés difficile. Je doivent être modeste ainsi je pense qu'il prend peut-être un ou même deux semaines. Cependant, je vais appeler le McDonalds «McDicks» encore!
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将来を描く
皆さん、こんにちは、ベトナムから来まし@@@@と申します。今日は「私の未来を描く」について皆さんにお話をさせていただきます。
皆さん、自分の未来は予測できますか？何が起こるかは誰にも分からないと思います。もちろん私にもそんな人間以上なことができません。将来の人生がどうなるかはわかりませんが、どんな暗くても明るくても私は最高の自分になりたいと思っています。
私は10月に@@@学校に来たばかりで、短期間ではありましたが、たくさん大切なことを学びました。卒業した後は大学に入るつもりです。大学で、国際関係を学び、将来はベトナムと日本の外交関係を強化するために働きたいと思います。未来に向けて毎日一生懸命頑張ります。
実は私も将来に対して非常に不安を感じていた時期がありました。今までも心の中で覚えています、あの日は私が高校に落ちたんだの日です。眠れなくなるほど頑張ったとしても、結局はできなかった自分を責めるしかありません。 15歳の私は本当に迷っていました「あ、もういい、無理だ。」、「どうせ失敗するからもうやりたくない！」、「私役に立たない人間だ。」。皆んなさんは失敗時、私と同じ思いを抱いたことはありませんか？もちろん、そう思わない人もいると思います、それはとっても良いです。でももし皆さんは私と同じなら、どんなに失敗しても自分にチャンスを与えてみてもいいんじゃないでしょうか？
私は当時も最近も、何にも希望を抱かなければ、失敗の痛みは怖くないと思っていました。けれども、成長への道には必ず間違いを犯すことを教えてくれた大切な人がいました。私がしなければならないのは、やり直す機会を自分に与えることです。将来の自分がどうなるかはわかりませんが、一つだけ確信しているのは自分の未来を決して諦めないということです。
将来は苦くても甘くても、それはまだ私の人生の一部です。将来は失敗を恐れず、自分にも人生にも優しくなれる人になりたいと思います。前向きな気持ちを持ち続けることが大切ではないでしょうか？私と同じ、将来に絶望を感じたことがある方は、あなたも愛され、信頼され、将来に希望を抱くことを思い出してください。
私を導いてくださった先生方や友人のおかげで、今日、勇気を出してこの演説会に立つことができました。結果がどうであれ、「今日も頑張りました、私」と胸を張って言えると思います。皆んなさん、これからも前に向かって頑張りましょうあの素晴らしいな未来へ。
以上で私の発表を終わりました。ご清聴ありがとうございました。
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Kevin's English Room （17）
I like the YouTube channel "Kevin's English Room" and this is the continuation from my last post.
They often introduce American snacks and it always interesting for me.
I often order snacks that I saw on their channel online.
When I received the crackers "Goldfish" I was surprised having so much amount of crackers.
I couldn't find just right amount of them on Amazon.
The Goldfish might not be top tier, but they were pretty good.
They introduced the snack "Fritos" in the video I watched today.
Now I really want to try it.
They said that it's similar to the Japanese snack "Tongari Corn"
The two guys apart from Kevin said that Tongari Corn is better.
I'd like to see which is tasty.
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Zufällige Berggedanken
Liebe Freunde,
da bin ich wieder. Heute möchte ich über Berge schreiben. Und möglicherweise einige der Ausdrücke verwenden, die ich kürzlich gelernt habe.
So lass uns anfangen.
Ich bin in einer sehr flachen Gegend aufgewachsen. Es gab dort nicht einmal Hügel, geschweige denn Berge. Es hatte seine Vorteile. Man könnte überall mit dem Fahrrad fahren. Jetzt lebe ich in einer bergigen Gegend. Die Stadt ist von ihnen umgeben und man kann sie von jedem Punkt aus sehen. Ich mag Berge, weil man sie von weitem sehen kann. Die hügeligen Straßen der Stadt eignen sich nicht zum Radfahren. Stattdessen gehe ich viel zu Fuß.
Erlich gesagt, ich war enttäuscht, dass der größte Teil der Stadt mit Beton bedeckt ist. Aber die Berge stehen jederzeit zum Wandern zur Verfügung und es gibt dort keinen Beton, natürlich. Es ist schön, dort zu gehen, ob mit meinen Freunden oder alleine. Normalerweise gehe ich am Wochenende wandern, aber heute ist Montag und ich muss arbeiten. Schade. Das Wetter ist wirklich schön. Aber ich kann die Berge schon von weitem sehen und meine nächste Wanderung planen.
Ich wünsche euch allen eine gute Woche.
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Day 6: Sentence Mining
Would you believe me if I told you that you can learn new vocabulary by watching Youtube videos? Well, that's what I've been doing these days. Whenever I found a word that I didn't understand, I copy the whole sentence from the subtitles, then I paste it on an Anki card, I also highlight the word which I'm interested in. Finally I wrote the definition in English and I also paste a screenshot of that video and an audio recording of that sentence from the same video. I use Sharex, a software to record audio from your computer and take screenshots. For me it's a little bit tricky to use it because my computer is so slow, it's still funny although.
Jan. 15, 2024
Test for applying Civil servants
Yesterday, the test results of applying civil servant came out, hundreds and thousands examinee rushed into the website and this huge flow made it impossible to logged in.
I finally reached this page and found that I had failed out. In the position that I replied, eight hundreds citizens replied at the same time, which just wanted two. Other positions were faced more applicant and less requirement.
Why is it so hit for civil servants replying? Because the economic situation is not good nowadays. More and more merchants get interrupted, and countless people lost their jobs. Civilizations lost their hope for the future. People think that civil servants may not have a high salary, but the job is so stable that can offset its shortcomings.
Over eight million Chinese applied the job for civil servants, 10 percent arising than last year. The test became more difficult, on the other hand, the score of admission raised year by year.
If the economy still keeps continues downturn, many of the loser may keep fighting next year.
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