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Jan. 6, 2025
Trata de Personas
Escuché un podcast sobre la trata de personas, especificamente la trata de mujeres. La anfitrión del podcast entrevistó a una mujer Colombiana sobre su experiencia de ser objeta de trata por una amiga. Fue una historia muy impactante y triste y obviamente una experiencia fuerte y terrible en su vida. Ser traicionada por una amiga únicamente sería un experimento difícil pero que ella la vendió a una red de traficantes sexuales es algo impensable.
Ella compartió la historia de su llegada a México de Colombia, pensando que iba a trabajar en un restaurante Mexicana, y su situación de vivienda y la realidad del trabajo en un ‘restaurante’ de prostitución. Me impactó mucho que una amiga aprovechara a otra amiga para ganar dinero, especialmente conociendo el sistema de la ‘organización’. Ella nos contó que cuando llegas al lugar, te dice que puedes salir cuando pagues tu deuda. La deuda consiste de los vuelos (normalmente las chicas no pueden darse el lujo de los vuelos entonces la organización darles un préstamo enorme, pero no es evidente que sea un préstamo en el momento), los gastos del uniforme y varias multas del trabajo - obviamente estas son fáciles de conseguir.
Después de que hubiera trabajado en el restaurante por un rato, la pusieron a trabajar en un bar. Ella nos contó que la experiencia fue aún peor. Las mujeres tenían que hacer dos bailes cada noche y había cuartos de sexo al lado del bar para que los hombres pudieran comprar actos de sexo - en este caso las mujeres pudieron ganar mucho más dinero y la oportunidad de alcanzar pagar su deuda fue más probable.
Por último, ella fue rescatada por la policía después de que otra chica se fugara y lo reportara a la policía. Ella pudo regresar a Colombia y a su mama pero no ha hablado mucho sobre lo que sucedió por la pena. También, lamentablemente nunca ha tenido la oportunidad de ver a la amiga y confrontarla por lo que pasó a ella.
Jan. 6, 2025
Jan. 6, 2025
The First Post
Hi,
I just recently got to know about this website and decided to give it a try.
I usually use ChatGPT but I thought this is a much better option than getting feedback from an AI tool.
I love learning and currently pursuing many online courses on Digital Marketing. With this I also want to advance in my writing skills as it is on a very basic scale and after the AI, I was only using AI tools for writing anything work-related. So on this new year I promised myself that I'll upskill myself in this as well.
I am open to all suggestions and feedback to improve and would appreciate all the help I can get.
Thank You
Jan. 6, 2025
N1 Grammar Revision + new exercises
先週には「あっての」と「いかんによって・いんかんで」について勉強します。今回は、復習することと次の文法のポイントを紹介していきます。
復習：
１．「あっての」の意味：Ｂが成立ために、Ａは重要・不可欠
例：住民の努力あっての泰平な時代
２．「いかんによって・いかんだ・いかんで」の意味：Ａ合わせて、Ｂを決める・変わる
例：従業員の給料は個々のパフォーマンスいかんだ。
新しい文法 （文法の意味は自分の言葉で言い換えた）：
１．「いかんでは・いかんによって」の意味：何かをすることによって、具体的な結果・状況になる
例：需給のいかんでは市場価格が上がることもある。
当日の天候のいかんによっては、開催を中止することもある。
２．「いかんによらず・いかんにかかわらず」の意味：Ａの変わりと関係なく、Ｂは変わらない
例：言語能力や今学期の成績いかんよらず、留年させてもらえる可能性がたかい。
具合いかんかかわらず、試合に出るだろう。
Jan. 6, 2025
Uma montanha
Desde o início do ano novo, estou lendo os artigos em português porque eu negligencei essa parte do idioma. É mais facil continuar escrevendo aqui, porque eu não quero quebrar minha streak, mas não há um streak pra ler (por isso não tenho lido muito). Desde que eu comeci, já percebi a quantidade de palavras e expressões que não conheço. Eu sinto que o português é uma montanha, e estou no fundo dela kkkk. Eu sempre soube que aprenendo um idioma era pra vida toda, mas acho que a falta de aprendizado frequente faria a montanha parecer maior.
Apesar disso, eu tenho esperança de que posso alcançar meus objetivos mais cedo do que penso se mantiver minha rotina.
Jan. 6, 2025
Jan. 6, 2025
The old lion
يُحْكَى أَنَّهُ فِيْ أَحَدِ أَحْرَاشِ إِفْرِيْقِيَّا، عَاشَ أَسَدٌ حَيَاةَ أُسُوْدٍ سَعِيْدَةً.
It is said that in one of the African jungles, a lion lived a happy life.
فَقَدْ تَمَيَّزَ بِسُرْعَتِهِ الْفَائِقَةِ وَمَهَارَتِهِ فِي الصَّيْدِ.
It was distinguished by its great speed and hunting skills.
Jan. 6, 2025
Jan. 6, 2025
Na pesquisa de uma transcrição de "E o Resto É História"
Estou a aprender português desde junho de 2024 e gosto muito de ouvir os podcasts para praticar ouvir português nativo e aprender novas palavras. Mas porque sou viciado em ouvir podcasts de um certo nível de complexidade, não suporto ouvir os tão simples que são criados expressamente para ensinar uma determinada língua aos estrangeiros. Então um dos meus alvos de aprendizagem é melhorar o meu nível de português até que consiga perceber quase tudo o que os apresentadors do podcast "E o Resto É História" estão a dizer. Mas o problema é que os apresentadors falam tão rapido que muitas vezes enquanto ouço o podcast não consigo ouvir o que estão a dizer e acabo por perder o foco e não ouvir nada. Por isso, quero escrever um email e mandá-lo para o RTP pedindo se é possível começar acrescer transcrições nos novos episódios para que possa melhorar melhor o meu português. Tenho a certeza que existem muitas pessoas como eu que poderiam aproveitar muito disso.
Jan. 6, 2025
Jan. 6, 2025
Tél
Szeretem a télt. Miért? Nos, számos oka van erre. Németországban már évek óta nem esik a hó, illetve, ha esik, akkor nem tart sokáig. Ez egy előny, mivel nem kell söpregetni, valamint a lakást sem kell annyira felfűteni. Azért is szeretem a télt, mert a reggeli séta közben sokat lehet töprengeni. Nem süt a nap, nem kell izzadni. Séta közben sok új dolgot fel lehet fedezni. Például a sok hibásodást, amelyeket az utcák megszenvedtek a tél alatt. Ezek a lyukak megtelnek vizzel, valamint visszaverődik bennik az utcalámpák fénye. Igy lehet megtakaritani a közvilágítást, azon kívül romantikus látszata is van egy ilyen megvilágított lyuknak. Meg lehet figyelni a híd építkezését is, ami különben már két éve tart. A külföldiek mindig megkérdeznek, hogy miért tart ez olyan sokáig. Hát, mert a németek alaposak, mert nincs elég anyag, mert nem rendelték meg időben, mert az építkezési vezető nem bírta tovább. Különben jó is, hogy nem annyira hideg a tél. Ki sem lehetne gondolni, hogy mi lenne, ha csak nyáron lehetne építkezni.
Visszamentem a lakásomba, ahol arra várok, hogy hajnalodjon és felébredjen a város téli almából. Jó reggelt!
Jan. 6, 2025
Receiving My First Dislike on YouTube
This morning, I found that I had just received my first dislike on YouTube.
I started my YouTube channel to practice my English two or three years ago.
At the time, I was taking a spoken English course on Cambly, an online paid language learning platform. I needed a topic that I was familiar with and could quickly present to my teachers. So, I uploaded some short videos on YouTube and used them as those topics.
By the way, it's quite effective. Alining the subject with your teacher could avoid misunderstandings while learning a foreign language.
Then again, most of my visitors were from my English classes and here. I was kind of used to receiving some likes from time to time.
I was wondering if had I done something wrong or bad on this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/qlNS-U_Afss
Was it about the music that the Little Red Book added automatically for me, which I was not familiar with?
Or was it about the image?
Or the title?
I'm not frustrated, just want to know why and if there's anything I can improve.
Jan. 6, 2025
my essay
our teacher gave us assignment to write a narrative essay ,so here is what i came up
Everything looked fine for the family ,not knowing what tragedy awaited them. The family was blessed by 4 children who still needed their parent’s care. Even living in situation that does not look fine, they were happy . the father, as the head of the family ,bore the responsibility on his shoulder worked at the hospital’s cafeteria every labor works he found that found near by there home . the mother was not also someone like sit at home watch her husband’s hand ; she washed clothes for others , took on any job she could find to help raise their children. Then they welcomed their new guest-their fifth child ,their third daughter -while struggling to live properly.
Not long after their journey of tragedy began. The father fell gravely ill ,and now the responsibility of supporting the family shifted to the mother ; she had to care of her children , earn more money not only to support the family but also for her husband’s treatment. His illness worsened over time , eventually leading to his death . What things make worse than just being left alone to raise five children is losing a man who had always been in her side in her every sad ,happy and struggling moments, but now he is gone ,leaving her to induce all pain by her alone . Then things got become more and more difficult to live without having a proper job and raising 5 children by her own ,which forcing her to make the heartbreaking decision. She decided to give her youngest child to the foreigners ,hoping she they would offer her better life than she could.
Things gradually began to seem improved. The mother started a small business from home , preparing and selling food ingredients. She worked tirelessly ,not wanting to defeat by life tragedy. Her business grew eventually ; first she opened a small shop in her home ,then followed by her large shop in the city market . She even hired employees. At this point she was not longer worrying about raising her children. She eventually bought a house, moving her family from the government-subsidized housing they had lived in.
Time passes, and the family thrived .The family now is living a very good life .The mother is no longer struggling though there is feeling of missing her gone little daughter .Years later ,the daughter, now grown, who was given for foreigners returned to find her biological family. Her foster family was a very nice people . They were even the one encouraged her search and even showed her where her family used to live. unfortunately the family, had already changed their home so she can not find not only her family but also no one who knows about them since the village changes a lot . she searched searched but nothing happened , which she went back to where she come from.
The mother who passes a lots of ups and downs heard that her daughter had come looking for her but failed to find them. Hearing her beloved daughter , the daughter she give up on ,the daughter she missed a lot was here for but did not find her made her to lose her mind. The mother went to crazy ,lost her mind . She even start to look her but have not found her yet . thinking that she might have been with her, if she had known she was her pushed her in state if mental illness. She even went to psychiatrist to get treatment . thinking she just lost the chance seeing her daughter made her sickness more and more worst. As once Jhon Greenleaf Whittier quoted, “Of all sad words of tongue or pen the saddest are these ,’it might have been.’”
Jan. 6, 2025
Trying to learn how to write effectively in French.
Salut! Je m'appelle Iniko. Je me suis dit j'aurais le seal of biliteracy en mon lycee avant Je me receive ma diploma. Maintenant, c'est ma onze ans, et j'ai appris beaucoup, mais, Je ne bonne parle pas. Je suis ici parce que Je voudrais travaille sur mon ecriture avant le mois prochain. Ce ne sera pas parfaite, Je besoin ecrit donc j'ai compris.
Jan. 6, 2025
Jan. 5, 2025
Ma familie et mes amis
Je vais décrire ma familie. J'habite avec ma mère, mon père et mon frère. Il a treinte ans. Mon frère est marrié.
Sa copaine a vingt-sept ans. J'ai un petit ami, il a seize ans et il habite avec son père, sa mère et son frère. J'ai
beaucoup d'amis. Ils sont très cool et ses families sont très réceptives.
Jan. 5, 2025
Jan. 5, 2025
Lenience
Is XXX just a language learning site? Of course, some people think so, while others think it’s a communication site. Some simply ask native speakers questions about grammar and vocabulary, and so on. Some ask further questions and discuss some themes. Either way, the common attitude is to be willing to help each other and be friendly, which is the ideal of a social network system(SNS).
However, last year, I encountered some discussions on the site that left me feeling a bit hopeless and disgusted. They all arose from differences of opinion and evoked bad feelings among the participants. Some of them were abusive. Why are people unwilling to listen calmly to opposing opinions? Why do people insist their owns and refuse to compromise? Why don't they respect the opponent and admit their difference without getting angry? Why do people become emotional when they are opposed? That’s because everyone is human and flawed.
In other words, everyone typically prefers harmony and dislikes conflict . Namely, almost all users believe that SNS should be friendly sites. That's why blocking systems are available on SNS. People tend to block unfriendly people easily as if it were natural for everyone. Since I am not young and not familiar wth SNS, I was first shocked to find out someone had blocked me, but I got used to it. I also would block others who disturb me.
However, ideally, everyone should listen to each other and talk about things despite their differences. Are those who disagree with you unfriendly? I don't think so. In addition, since we cannot know the whole truth about another person on SNS, our relationships feel total fake. With that in mind, we should be more lenient of others. At the very least, the more blocks there are, the narrower our field of visions becomes.
Jan. 5, 2025
Kar yağıyor!
Kar yağıyor! Ağaçları beyaz ve çok güzel var. Ama benim için sürmek çok zor düşünüyorum. Bu havada, insanları iyi lastiklere lazım çünkü yollar buz var. Onlar da yavaş sürmeleri lazım. Bazı yerler kar yağmıyor. Ilık kalır veya soğuk yağmur yağıyor var. Soğuk günlerde çıkmaya sevmiyorum. Böyle günler okumaya ve çay içmeye seviyorum.
Jan. 5, 2025
アイルランド語を使うところ
昨日と一昨日、アイルランド語について書きました。今日も、このトピックをつつけるけど、明日新しいトピックについて書きます。今日は、アイルランド語を使うところについてかきます。仕事で、日常で、アイルランド語はつかいません。それでも、アイルランド語を使うところがあります。
アイルランドで「Gaeltacht」（グウェールチャクト）というところがあります。Gaeltachtではアイルランド語は喋っています。Gaeltachtの人口は2パーセントのアイルランドの人口です。そのところで、学校でアイルランド語を使って、道路標識はアイランド語だけを使います。大体、そのところは西の田舎であります。
Gaeltacht以外、アイルランド語の学校があります。その学校は「Gaelscoil」（グウェールスコルー）というのです。その学校で英語の科目以外、各科目はアイランド語で教えています。私の学校の間に、あまりアイルランド語の学校はありません。今、アイルランドで６パーセントの学校はアイルランド語の学校です。
アイルランド語の部もあります。最近、ダブリンで人気になっています。たいたい、アイルランド語を学びたい大人はその部を入ります。私のフランス人の友達はそんな部を入りました。今、私よりフランス人の友達はうまくなります。
Jan. 5, 2025
Jan. 5, 2025
Bildung als Lebensstil
Wofür ist die Bildung da? Manche sagen, sie ist da, um jungen Menschen auf ihre Karrieren vorzubereiten. Manche meinen, sie soll man klüger, einfühlsamer, und selbstständiger machen. Noch anderen glauben, sie hilft man dabei, sich selbst zu finden. Aber die Meisten sehen die Bildung als Investition worein man eine Zeitlang bezahlt—mit Geld sowohl als auch Mühe—und dadurch was bekommt: entweder eine gut bezahlte Stellung, beeindruckendes Wissen, oder persönliche Klarheit.
Nur wenig sehen die Bildung als Lebensstil—oder vielmehr, als untrennbarer Teil des Lebens. Wir nennen es zwar Ausbildung, aber man kann gar nicht ausgebildet sein—es gibt immer mehr, was man lernen kann. Außerdem geht die Bildung nicht ausssliesslich dem Wissen an, sondern auch das Denken, das Handeln, das sich ausdrucken. Oft wissen wir, zum Beispiel, was das Richtige ist, und machen es trotzdem nicht. Wir benehmen uns nicht richtig, weil wir normalerweise nicht ausgebildet sind, tolle Menschen zu sein, sondern Regeln zu folgen.
Dass wir die Ausbildung falschrum haben, habe ich persönlich erlebt.
Früher—mit neunzehn, oder so—wollte ich alles wissen. Es schien mir wichtig, die Hauptstädte alle Länder zu kennen. Ich dachte, die Klugheit sei etwas wie eine Sammlung. Ich wusste zwar nicht, ob ich mich an genug erinnern könnte, um ein Genie zu sein, aber ich wollte es versuchen.
Noch früher, bevor ich alles wissen wollte, wollte ich gar nichts wissen. Ich hätte lieber im Schrank gewohnt und Tagelang Youtube Videos angeschaut—auch das kann die Ausbildung schaffen.
Als Kind wurde ich beigebracht, keine Mühe zu geben ohne sicher zu sein, dass ich dafür Löhnung bekommen würde. Lesen würde zu Arbeit, wofür ich Geld bekommen könnte. Ich lernte Mathe zu befürchten und immer im Buch nachzuschauen, anstatt an mich zu vertrauen. Als ich älter würde, wurde es ständig von Uni und die viele mögliche Karrieren die Rede. Ich könnte kaum irgendwas genießen, ohne gefragt zu werden, ob ich es mir vorstellen könnte, so etwas mal beruflich zu machen. Von meiner Zukunft war ich erstickt. Mein Eifer wurde gegen Angst getauscht.
Wir lernen falsch, wenn wir aus den falschen Gründen lernen. Es hat lang gedauert, mein Eifer zurückzugewinnen.
Jetzt liebe ich es, zu wissen. Und ich liebe mein Wissen nicht, weil es mich klüger erscheinen lasst, oder ein gutes Einkommen bietet, sondern weil es mich aus ein Stück Holz gebastelt hat: ausgechnitten und schöngeschnitzen hat es mir.
Jan. 5, 2025
Jan. 5, 2025
Ce que j'aime sur mi ville
La ville oú j'habite est une ville assez grande. En fait, c'est le plus grand ville dans tout le pays. J'aime les villes métropolitaines. Certaines personnes n'aimment pas les villes grandes parce que ils préfèrent plus tranquilité. Mais pour moi, j'aime le fait que toujours il y a quelque chose faire dans la ville.
J'aime la diversité dans ma ville. Cette ville est une ville vraiment multiculturelle et on peut voir une grande varieté des personnes qui viennent d'autres pays. J'ai un group d'amis très diversifié et je suis capable connaître un peu de leurs cultures grâce à eux. Par exemple, d'eux j'ai appris beaucoup sur leurs langues, leurs traditions culturelles, et leurs types de nourriture.
Mais le plus important que j'ai appris d'eux est leurs vues différentes de la vie. Chaque culture a une vue ou une perspective differénte sur certaines sujets. Je pense que c'est incroyable à partager nos philosophies et croyances entre nous.