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Text 1: Thanks to revolution, each person of nation has right to be President. But in Ottoman era, only sultans's son was successor who nobody knew whether he is skilled or smart to be Head of Country. It was a tribe. That's why we are appreciated Mustafa Kemal Ataturk to bring Republic to our country. Now we can elect who gets 50%+1 as President. This way, Turkey's people improve themself.
Text 2: Erdoğan is afraid of Imamoğlu to lose next election. He won four election over Erdoğan. Therefore, a made-up accusations were created in order to avoid Imamoğlu to run for president. Every court session, they suggests baseless evidences for blaming him. Many students and Imamoğlu supporters have been arrested just for supporting him. It is ridiculous. Demostration is a constutional right.
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Tradução 09: Vapes
No domingo, os vapes descartáveis serão banidos em tudo o Reino Unido.
As medidas foram introduzidas no janeiro de 2024 pelo governo anterior e têm o objectivo de proteger a saúde dos jovens e evitar danos ambientais.
Lojas e estabelecimentos não poderão mais estocar e vender vapes descartáveis, pois o governo afirmou que esse tipo de vape é um "uso ineficiente de recursos críticos" que são frequentemente descartados como lixo, ou jogados de forma inadequada no lixo não reciclável.
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What do you think is the greatest movie of all time?
Even though it's very hard to pick up only one movie, I love "Spirited Away" of Ghibli. I like Ghibli's movies, among them I love "Spirited Away" especially because of world design and scenario. I've watched it many time, but it might be hard to watch in countries other than Japan.
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I studying aquaculture of inland region.
I studying aquaculture of inland region for my job. Since august of 2023, i found this company in Tokyo. My job is support for developing country and our objectives are achievement of Sustainable Development Goals No,14"Life below water" and No,2 "Zero Hunger".
But, My background was physical education teacher in elementary and junior high school. Therefore, i studying now about aquaculture in japan and fishier ringt.
In the future, i'll work in other country as a development consultant for my company.
Today is rainy, but tomorrow is holiday. I want to sleep in my bet a lot of time.
And more, I'll go to Nagano in Aichi prefecture for my job about, atendo a other country people in the training program of aquaculture inland region for one month.
I will try my best to speak as much English as possible.
Thank you.
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Gestern habe ich herausgefunden, dass ich in die ganze Zeit auf die falsche Weise den Laut ç (ch) ausgesprochen habe. Bisher habe ich ihn durch x ersetzt. Ich bin froh, dass ich diese Fehler nicht zu spät bemerkt habe, weil dann es deutlich langsamer und anstrengender wäre, diesen Laut erneut zu lernen. Ich möchte mich mehr in der Phonetik vertiefen, um so früh wie möglich die richtigen sprachlichen Gewohnheiten einzuführen.
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Resumen de HP y las reliquias de la Muerte - Parte 12
Parte doce.
En la mente de Voldemort, Harry tuvo que revivir el asesinato de sus padres. A la mañana siguiente, Hermione lo despertó y le dijo que había estado gritando toda la noche, y que había tenido que usar un hechizo para quitarle el relicario, que se le había quemado en el pecho. Harry pidió su varita, pero Hermione se echó a llorar y le dijo que se había roto. Intentó repararla, pero las piezas se separaron de inmediato.
Hermione había tomado un ejemplar de la biografía de Dumbledore escrita por Rita Skeeter de la casa de Bathilda. Harry la hojeó y encontró al joven rubio de la visión de Gregorovitch; el pie de foto decía que era "el amigo de Dumbledore", Grindelwald. Los dos quedaron atónitos, y la biografía reveló que él y Dumbledore habían planeado gobernar sobre los muggles. Hermione intentó tranquilizar a Harry, diciéndole que en ese entonces Dumbledore era joven e inmaduro, pero Harry se sintió más traicionado que nunca por él. Unas noches más tarde, después de que Harry se hubiera recuperado un poco, vio una cierva plateada y la siguió. Lo guió hasta un estanque helado en medio del bosque, y luego desapareció. Bajo el agua, vio la Espada de Gryffindor y se preguntó cómo él, la cierva y la espada habían acabado en el mismo lugar. No pudo invocarla con un hechizo, así que decidió zambullirse, pero el relicario empezó a ahogarlo y se desmayó en el agua. De repente, recuperó la conciencia a la orilla del estanque, con Ron de pie junto a él.
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Future of Electric Vehicle
I think it depends on the Country and government policy. It is the same whether the building train system is necessary or not. Some countries have built up and are quickly rising, some others have not built any trains or have not built more, but they are still top in the economy rank.
If the country believes in that, PHEV or EV or both, these are the future of my country, keep it and move on. Please don't change your mind, because it is so difficult to change normal habits, and when it has changed, coming back old habit is even more difficult. And, that isn't only the habit problem, this is also the infrastructure problem, and other things.
May 30, 2025
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