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Oct. 11, 2024
À la plage
J'habite sur une île et j'ai habité ici pendant toute ma vie, donc ma maison est à côté de la plage, mais je n'y vais souvent pas. Cet été j'ai essayé d'aller à la plage plus souvent que j'y vais normalement. D'habitude, j'emporte une chaise longue, une bouteille d'eau, de la crème solaire, et un sandwich à la dinde que je fais typiquement faire à la sandwicherie. Cependant quand mes amis me rendent visite on emporte des pelles et des seaux pour construire de grands châteaux de sable. Pendant l'été c'est trop bondé et parfois je n'aime pas les touristes parce qu'ils sont énervants et ils sont parfois impolis, mais je comprends qu'ils sont très importants pour les économies de l’île. Dans l'ensemble, ça m'est égal. Si je pouvais, j'habiterais dans la forêt ou la campagne parce que j'aime plus la forêt et la campagne que la plage.
Oct. 11, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
A Smartphone Is More Important than a Smartwatch
Last night, I ran about 18.5 kilometers in about three hours.
In case of the malfunction of my smartwatch due to GPS error by the solar flare activities, I tried to run without the monitors by the smartwatch (Garmin, Forerunner 265). Actually, I used it, and got data while running, yet I didn't see it while running.
It turned out there wasn't that difference.
I ran the training course which I had run over hundred times, so I knew the distance quite well.
I was able to specurate my heart rate, and running speed because I had done the same thing over and over.
After finished running, I checked my data on my smartwatch and the bluetues-connected smartphone software, "Garmin Connect."
Lo and behold, my data last night was almost the same as my previous run four days before.
While running, I made a minor course change for changing air, which made me got lost.
I went to a very small country road and it brought me to a small graveyard. There were about ten or twenty tombs there.
I felt as though a bad ghost or spirit brought me there, and felt scared a bit.
Then, I wanted to go to the restroom for my business, "poop."
I asked Okay Google to identify where I was now, and the nearest covenience store's location and show me how to get there.
Google responded poorly at first, so I couldn't help thinking the participation of the bad spirit/ghost.
Anyway, I should have been more realistic than thinking about such supernatural phenomenon. I needed to poop right away.
Finally, Google showed me a convenience store where I needed 19 minutes on foot.
I got there in 15 minutes by running, and I was able to finish my business successfully.
Oct. 10, 2024
吃在中国/意大利
我很喜欢吃中国的菜，如果我没去过，但是我希望有一天我会去中国旅游，看很多的地方。我也要尝中国的特色菜。我是一个幸运的姑娘， 因为我的男朋友是中国人。每个星期我去他的家吃很多的菜。他妈妈说：“吃饭，吃饭！” 的时候，我们必须尽快走到餐桌旁。我的男朋友比我，每天吃中国餐。他教我怎么吃中国菜。
首先，中国人比意大利人用筷子吃饭。菜都饭在桌子中间，所以每个人自己用筷子拿。我觉得能够分拿食物是一件很美好的事情。这就是为什么中国人和意大利人是一样的。他们都对客人很好客。比如，我男朋友的妈妈知道我最喜欢吃红烧肉，所以她常常给我做这道菜。我的男朋友在我家的时候，我妈妈也做意大利面，因为我跟她说这是他的最喜欢的意大利吃饭。
Oct. 10, 2024
Mein Zwischenstopp in Island
Ich war zufrieden in Island für einen zwischenstopp. Der Flughafen war fantastisch erstaunlich und sauber. Das Mittagessen war billig und frisch. Ich habe ein Sandwich gegessen und ich habe Orangensaft und Wasser getrunken. Es war wirklich lecker. Ich vermisse Island.
Oct. 10, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
Watching The Sky
I enjoy watching the skies in the late afternoon, when the sun is setting. In addition to the vast array of cloud shapes that my imagination can almost always assimilate to pictures and figure, what I most like is watching the different colours that sky could be. Sometimes, it gradually gets darker only in a blue hue, sometimes it turns into a more orangish or even pinkier one. Anyways, the sky becomes different each day and it's really interesting and relaxing to daily compare its general changes.
I remember when I went to my aunt's house for vacation in southern Brazil early this year, and after some weeks, we traveled to the beach. It was the first time I'd stepped on sand's beach, so the memories still fresh. I don't want to talk about the whole experience I'd had because the text would be too long, I just want to highlight how different the sky was when you have another perspective of it. The horizon of the sea makes the whole experience feel different.
Oct. 10, 2024
A Laugh
I marvelous love when I can to laugh somebody or some group. I like hear a cackle. For me, it is the indicate my intellect. And I think if I can do for 0.1% better somebodys day and even my day was not good, I don’t spend the day in vain. My question for you: do you make a jokes today that people arond you laugh?
Oct. 10, 2024
The Sixth Step to Improving my Academic Writing
How do I choose my source material?
Writing essay could be a really challenging task for non-native students, especially when a reading list is given by experts in their field. That list could be impossibly long and if the reading skill is not excellent, it can take a long time. Several recourses that students can use for writing academic texts are: Google Scholar, Scopus, Web of Science, Wikipedia, academic journals, books and even online podcasts. For example, electronic libraries provide an indication of how respected books, theses, abstracts and article. Wikipedia can be a good start point for in case if a subject of essay is unknown. Essential point is asking other learners who took the course at last year, because they could provide useful recommendation. It is important to define which material is relevant to essay, that approach reduces the reading time. Of course, it would be good if students determine which authors are experts in academic field and what materials are authoritative and reliable. Understanding how information is relevant is one of the keys to success; therefore checking the date when book was published is necessary.
Oct. 10, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
T1-trouver un hôtel pour un ami
Salut Matthias,
Je te souhaite la bienvenue au Canada ! En cherchant, j’ai trouvé un hôtel appelé Jardins situé non loin du centre de Toronto. Le prix varie entre 50 et 100 euros par nuit selon le type de chambre et les services proposés. Pour t’aider à faire ton choix, je te ferai parvenir un catalogue détaillé. Par ailleurs, si tu effectues ta réservation avant le 10 octobre, tu pourras bénéficier d’une réduction de 20 %. Réfléchis bien, mais n’hésite pas à me poser des questions si tu as besoin d’aide.
À très bientôt !
Oct. 10, 2024
仕事に疲れて聞きたくなる曲 ＃１
たまにはこんな日があります。仕事に疲れてて投稿する時、頭が真っ白になっちゃいます。そのためにこの「仕事に疲れて聞きたくなる曲」シリーズを始めます。曲をおすすめして、少しその曲について書くつもりです。音楽が大好きで、詳しく知っている自信がありますので、いっぱいおすすめできると思います。好きな曲について話すと、疲れても簡単にできると思います。
では、今日のおすすめは怒髪天の「労働CALLING」:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6RyFB5IR97M&ab_channel=Dohatsuten-Topic
タイトルがThe Clashの「London Calling」に似てますね。きっと怒髪天さんたちにはThe Clashの影響が強いです。曲がストレートにパンクなんですね。事務所から運転で帰ると、たまにはこれを聞いて車の中で歌います。サビのセリフ、「泣くな、働き者！！！」がめっちゃ好きです。大声で歌うと疲れが溶けます。
では、明日もいい日になるように！
Oct. 10, 2024
A Line Graph Report in IELTS Writing Part 1
(This is the first time I use this website and I guess there's a bug here to post images.
So, this link below is the image of the original question
https://www.zcool.com.cn/work/ZNzA1NjEwMzY=.html
Thanks!)
This graph shows the proportions of audience to watch movie in 4 different age groups in the UK from 1990 to 2010.
We can witness that the majority group in cinema attendance was aged 44-54, while the minority was aged 14-24. Moreover, the percentage of each group generally has an increasing trend.
In 1990, audience aged 44-54 and 34-44 mainly accounted for the most – nearly 36%, and then, in 1995, the percentage of the latter remained almost at the same level and rose to around 45% in 2010, whereas the former predominated (40%), in 1995 and maintained it until 2010, reaching approximately 51%.
The percentage of watchers aged 14-24 comparatively flattened of all 4 groups, increasing from 15%, in 1990 to 21%, in 2010; there had been a relative oscillation in 24-34-year-old watchers before 2005, from roughly 24%, in 1990 to 33%, followed a same data in 2010, although all classes had decreased by 2000.
Oct. 10, 2024
Giovedì 10 ottobre
Scrivo sul diario da quasi 500 giorni. Mi piace avere una routine, ed essere costante è una delle mie cose preferite.
Sono felice di essere riuscita a riciclare le bottiglie d'acqua e di bevande. C'è un centro vicino a casa mia e ci sono andata stamattina. Non avevo molte cose da fare dopo essermi svegliata, quindi ne ho approfittato per sbrigare alcune faccende.
Mi lusingo di essere produttiva ed efficiente. Per me, niente si compara con la sensazione di sbrigare le faccende.
Quando penso al futuro, mi vedo di successo, tranquilla e con tutti i miei obiettivi raggiunti.
Oct. 10, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
Mudanças climáticas
Enquanto o sudoeste dos EUA está se recuperando do furacão Helene, outro furacão, o furacão Milton, está se aproximando rapidamente, ameaçando casas, empresas e infraestrutura. Há muitas pessoas que não podem partir para a segurança porque não têm dinheiro para a gasolina ou para as passagens aéreas. Essas pessoas são retratadas pela mídia de notícias como “escolhendo ficar”, mostrando uma realidade diferente.
Além disso, uma conspiração está se tornando mais popular, que diz que a mudança climática se deve à atividade humana. Embora muitos de nós possamos pensar que a queima de combustíveis fósseis, essas pessoas estão dizendo que os furacões recentes foram objeto de geoengenharia para os interesses especiais do governo. A desinformação na Internet é um grande problema, que é agravado pela terrível situação em que ela se encontra. Esperamos que os cidadãos da Flórida consigam evacuar para um local seguro.
Oct. 10, 2024
Oct. 10, 2024
领攀 (lead climbing)
在我当地的攀岩馆，我最近参加了一个领攀课。
我常常用顶绳（toprope)攀岩。大多人这样子室内攀岩，但是这个办法在户外不方便。你需要走到攀的上面准备锚，然后你能开始攀岩。为了开始领攀，你只需要走到攀的底面。为此，大多要攀岩户外的人都决定领攀。
两个办法需要一个保护者(belayer)，就是一个拿绳索的人万一攀岩人摔倒。
领攀涉及很多复杂动作。我没有所有正确的词。我只说，领攀是非常可怕的，比顶绳可怕多了。在顶绳中，如果你掉你只掉不远。不过在领攀中，你有时会掉得很远。
在这门课，我们需要练习摔倒了。我们都攀了四十英尺墙上，然后故意摔倒了。保护者接了攀岩人，所以他只掉二十英尺。
轮到我时，我没有问题攀路了，但是我到攀岩顶的时候，我非常害怕了。我必须强迫自己放开了。当我掉下来时我眼睛睁不开了。当然我的保护者把我接了，但是我希望了我不会如此害怕。
我想要去我第一次户外攀岩旅程，可以今秋。即使我不会领攀，我想知道如何保护其他攀岩人。只第一个攀岩人需要领攀，所有后的人可以用顶绳。
Oct. 10, 2024
Le résumé d'une étude
Jules Janin a estimé les descriptions de la vie quotidienne dans "le Voyage sentimental" de Laurence Sterne qu’il mentionnait fréquemment dans ses écrits. Il est donc possible que le critique français ait été le déclencheur de la réévaluation de Sterne en France au XIXe siècle.
Janin a opposé la complexité des "Mille et une nuits" et la simplicité de Sterne qu’il a tant appréciée. Il a découvert les vertus de Sterne dans son sens aigu de l’observation et dans son exploration du monde intérieur des êtres humains, qui reflètent la personnalité de l’auteur.
Dans "Un hiver à Paris", Janin a cherché à enlever les frontières entre la réalité et l’irréalité sans hésiter à transgresser les normes du récit de voyage et celles du conte fantastique. Nous constatons donc que Janin hérite de Sterne son attitude de braver les normes établis et de poursuivre les possibilités du roman.
Oct. 10, 2024
Introduce myself
Hii !
I’m Sonia , from France and I would like to be lvl C1 in only one year . I need it for my studies . So I’m actually lvl B1 almost B2 but I try every days to improve my English , I watch a lot of videos on YouTube for it . I have a few contact with English people so it’s cool for me . I love the Chinese culture and anyways I speak Chinese fluently. So I hope that you’ll can help me with my English .
For the information I speak American English instead British English cuz I thought that the American English was better but it’s a bit weird sometimes but anyways I just want to learn English, the basically English that everybody understand.
So bye bye everyone! 👋
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