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Een lied
Vandaag heb ik geluisteerd een nederlandse lied genaamd "Vliender van een zomer". De beteken van de zang is zoiets. Er was een vrouw wie vondt een man leuke. Maar de relatie is niet goede niet meer. Dit maakt de vrouw heel verdrietig. Ze denkt dat ze was maar een vlinder van een zomer voor de man en dat hij zal haar snel voor altijd vergeten .
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Das Skigebiet
Gestern war ich in einem Skigebiet. Ich bin mit ein paar Freunden mit ihrem Auto nach Lenggries (Bayern) gefahren.
Dort gab es natürlich viele Leute, die Ski gefahren sind. Aber etwas was für mich sehr erstaunlich: viele kleine Kinder lernen dort Ski zu fahren. Das hatte ich nicht erwartet, ist aber natürlich nicht so seltsam.
Feb. 24, 2020
단어 복습 1
괄호 안에 있는 단어를 알맞게 사용했는지 알려주세요~
1. (현안) 신종 코로나바이러스 때문에 논늬할 만한 여러 가지의 사회 문제가 시민의 관심을 끌지 못하고 아직 해결법이 없는 현안이 되어 버렸다.
2. (절실하다) 저출산고령화 사회가 되어 버런 한국에게는 인구를 유지하는 것이 매우 절실한 문제다.
3. (회개) 친척 4명을 살인한 사람은 심리 때 회개할 기색을 아예 내지 않고 종신형을 받았을 때 웃었다.
4. (주도하다) 용기 넘치는 소방대장이 팀을 불타는 빌딩 안으로 주도하였다.
5. (신랄하다) 정치인들이 어떨 때 중요한 일보다 상대편을 향한 신랄한 비판에 신경을 더 많이 쓰는 것 같다.
Feb. 24, 2020
Skiing, Part 6 - final
The finishing part of my ski experience contains an another topic, what about I plan to write on the following writing.
So, after the phone call it was sort of staff exchange. Two person have gone and two others came into the hotel. They were nice and speaking english well. Although the food wasn't being better, but it was also a result.
On the last they we ate in a hütte (buffet) at noon, when I checked my blood sugar and it was normal. After an hour later I didn't feel well. We were slipping down on the court, but I had to stop. When I measured back my blood sugar level, it was low. I put out my dried apricot and ate some. It took about 15 minutes to feel better again as usually. I became pretty tired. On the last court, which drived to our hotel I had a big fall, but fortunately I didn't have injury just ate a little snow and my staves were unbuckled.
I definitely feel I improved a lot. I'm also proud of my diabetes management, how I handled this whole process. It was only a little nuisnance.
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Der Führerschein bekommen
Ich bin fast 18 Jahre alt und meine Eltern drängen mich, ein Führerschein zu bekommen. In Amerika ist das wichtig, weil die meisten von unseren Städten keine guten öffentlichen Verkehrsmittel haben. Deshalb verlassen viele Amerikaner auf Autos, um verschiedenen Orten zu fahren. Ich habe im September meine Lernerlaubnis bekommen, und während der Frühlingsferien werde ich privaten Fahrunterrichten besuchen. Hoffentlich werde ich keine Autounfälle haben!
Feb. 24, 2020
¿Porque me preguntó ¿Dónde está la biblioteca??
Cuando estoy en la universidad muchas personas me preguntan ¿dónde está___?
No creo que soy muy guapo...pero me perese simpatico. Es como "resting nice face". Yo no sé si a otras personas ante me preguntaron o no, pero casí todos los días me se preguntó.
No es el peor en el mundo, pero cuantas personas son malas. Por ejemplo, una vez yo eschuchaba la musica mia caundo una mujer y su hija venaron a frente me. No pudo escuchar ellas por la musica, y no me pudo ir por ellas en frente me. Entonces, me preguntaron ¿dónde está la biblioteca? Le dijé la dirrection porque no soy un burro, pero no quiero contestar todos los preguntos sobre dirrectiones cuando estoy caminando. De nuevo, sea bien si solas unas vezes pero ¿casí todos los días?
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Sonntag
Gestern Nacht war das Wetter sehr windig und praktisch wie einen Tag im Sommer, denn es war fast 16 Grad in der Nähe von dem Tegernsee, Oberbayern.
Was ist eigentlich los mit dem Klimawandel? Es ist wirklich zu spät, um unsere Welt zu retten? Oder haben wir genug Schaden gemacht? Ich frage mich, was kann ich bzw. die Menschheit besser fürs Klima tun?
Feb. 23, 2020
Mis on vahed soomlaste ja eestlaste vahel?
See on väga subjektiivne arvamus, aga minu arvates eestlased on sõbralikumad kui soomlased, sest soomlased on üldiselt ükskõiksed, olgugi et ma püüdsin rääkida soome keelt kui olin Helsingis. Seesugune kogemus juhtus viimasel nädalal Rootsis. Ma soovisin Stockholmi vanalinnas olev soomlases kirikus soome keelt harjutada. Kirikus töötaval mehel on halba suhtumist. Kui käisin Eestis esimest korda, ja rääkisin eesti keelt eestlastega, nad oli õnnelikud sellest, et oskasin nende keelt. See on põhjus, miks tahan õppida eesti keelt soome keelt asemel. Mõlemad keeled on rasked, aga kui emakeeleoskajad on südamlikumad, raskus pole midagi.
Feb. 23, 2020
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From The News
There is a superstition in Mumbai of India that honking makes the red light of the traffic signal change to the green light fast. Drivers have to wait 90 seconds for the green. There is a second clock by the signal and the time shows in countdown style like 89, 88, 87 towards 0. The drivers can see how many seconds they will wait, yet they start to honk all at once when the singnal turns red.
The police attached a noise level meter under the second clock to improve this large noise. While the clock was showing the time in countdown, when the noise level reached 85 decibel, the time went back to 90 seconds as the initial value. And the countdown started again. Many drivers got angry and the police officers were doing a high five with each other.
It was so hilarious that I thought it was a comedy. But I figured out that it had been difficult to improve it so far as to do such a thing. I thought the police came up with a good idea.
Feb. 23, 2020
What I Get Through My Experience
I don’t want to do anything.
I want nothing.
I just want to become like sand and want to be blown away by the wind to disappear from this world.
Have you ever thought this way?
I have.
These thoughts had controlled my mind for over half a year.
Thanks to my supportive family, I’m getting through it.
Today, I went shopping with my mother to get some stuffs that I’d wanted, and I noticed that I was getting back myself.
Now I tend to be happy so easily because of my hard experience.
Delicious food, cute animals on TV, sunny days, funny story with my son.
These small things are so bright and lovely to me.
Still there are not good days in our lives, but I’ll keep on noticing good sides. :)
Feb. 23, 2020
Today
Writing is a daily struggle. I never know what to jot down, especially when it comes to IELTS or some formal stuff. For this reason, I try to read absolutely anything that I'll probably write an entry about. I've never passed the IELTS exam. Nonetheless, I'd like to pass it. Well, I downloaded one app about IELTS, then wrote my first essay. As a result, it turned out dreadful and weird, even though it's just an introduction and half of the first paragraph. Additionally, I mixed up informal and formal styles together. The topic was about crime if you're interested. I suppose I'll find out loads of useful tips to try and get a high score on the exam or at least a score that is enough to pass. In spite of an hour of writing the essay and racking my brain, I didn't lose the motivation to keep on improving. Still, I sometimes procrastinate due to a lack of ideas on how to answer the IELTS essay question.
Feb. 23, 2020
Could you check my English?
I have heard many times this song on the radio before.
So I have tried to translate.
You gave me butterflies in my stomach when I saw you first time
I longed for the adult wistful love when I was 21 years old
I felt that my makeup don't good on me because I was overdoing
The beginning of love
I can't help it because I like you a lot
give me a big hug
Sometimes, I would say selfish
Because I want to you hold hands all the time.
I love to burst into laughter
He always strong but I feel so happy when you sleep in my arms
I need you
I feel like that makes us stronger when protect something
The beginning of love
I can't help it because I like you a lot
But my heart aches a bit
The time that can't meet is the magic of bringing nice love
My heart is always looking for you
I can't help it because I like you a lot
I've never felt like this before
I want to still be by your side, please
Expressing my honest feelings is hard
Feb. 23, 2020
문구점에서 돈 날리기
문구점이 나에게 위험한 곳이다. 문구점에 들어갈 때마다 나는 무의식적으로 당장 필요없는 것들을 보게 되고 원래 사러 거기에 들어간 것에다가 이것저것을 추가로 사게 된다. 종이, 볼펜, 형광펜, 스티커... 유용하거나 귀여운 것을 보면 참기가 어렵다.
오늘도 문구점에 가게 되었다. 남편이 오늘 아침 인터넷으로 나에게 특별한 공책을 사줬는데 그 공책을 사용할 때 정해진 펜만을 사용해야 되니까 그 펜을 찾으러 문구점에 갔다. 쓸데 없는 것을 피할 수 있었는데 필요한 펜 브랜드를 너무 많이 사서 그래도 돈을 예상보다 많이 쓰게 되었다. 역시... 문구점이 위험하다.
Feb. 23, 2020
Pratique de grammaire du français
1. La voiture dont je rêve est très chère.
2. L’homme dont tu parles, portait-il une chemise blanche et un jeans bleu foncé ?
3. Ne mentionne pas la guerre en sa présence, il n’aime pas en parler.
4. Ce qui m’a choqué le plus, c’est leur manière de vie.
5. Mon frère a un enfant et moi, j’en ai trois.
6. – Pourquoi tu n’as pas acheté des pains aux raisins ? – Il n’en y avait plus à la boulangerie.
7. – Tu es sûr que c’était lui à l’arrête de bus ? – Je n’en doute pas.
8. Je acheté ce pull à la boutique à côté de laquelle j’habite.
9. La vase est tombée de la table et s’est brisée en petits morceaux.
10. – Est-ce que vous croyez aux fantômes ? – Oui, j’y crois.
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