Aug. 3, 2020
Day 5
Hello again!
Today I don't have much to tell you. It has been a pretty boring day (from a reader point of view).
Fortunately, the heat wave that hit Spain last week is now over, so this morning, taking advantage of the cool of the morning, I took my dog, and we went for a walk. My dog is a black French Bulldog, called Hermes, and he is 9 (almost 10 years). French Bulldogs are a breed that usually have health problems, but in my case, I have been very lucky. In all this time I've been with him, he has only had an otitis, and it was when he was a puppy. I hope he stays healthy and he will be with me for a long time.
Later, I spent the afternoon playing to the computer, so I have nothing of interest to say about that.
Like always, thanks and see you tomorrow!
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Day 5
Hello again!
Today I don't have much to tell you.
It has been a pretty boring day (from athe reader's point of view).
It has been a pretty boring day (from the reader's point of view).
What you wrote is also fine, but sounded a bit odd to my ear for some reason.
Fortunately, the heat wave that hit Spain last week is now over, so this morning, taking advantage of the cool of the morning, I took my dog, and we went for a walk.
My dog is a black French Bulldog, called Hermes, and he is 9 (almost 10 years old). My dog is a black French Bulldog, called Hermes, and he is 9 (almost 10 years old).
One could also write "he is 9 (almost 10)."
French Bulldogs are a breed that usually have health problems, but in my case, I have been very lucky.
In all this time I've been with him, he has only had an otitis, and it was when he was a puppy.
I hope he stays healthy and he will be with me for a long time.
Later, I spent the afternoon playing ton the computer, so I have nothing of interest to say about that.
Later, I spent the afternoon playing on the computer, so I have nothing of interest to say about that.
In english, we "play on the computer" or maybe "play with the computer" if we are fixing the computer. But never "to the computer".
Like always, thanks and see you tomorrow!
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I'm happy to hear that your bulldog is doing well!
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Today I don't have much to tell you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has been a pretty boring day (from a reader point of view).
It has been a pretty boring day (from What you wrote is also fine, but sounded a bit odd to my ear for some reason. |
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Fortunately, the heat wave that hit Spain last week is now over, so this morning, taking advantage of the cool of the morning, I took my dog, and we went for a walk. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My dog is a black French Bulldog, called Hermes, and he is 9 (almost 10 years). My dog is a black French Bulldog, called Hermes, and he is 9 (almost 10 years old). My dog is a black French Bulldog, called Hermes, and he is 9 (almost 10 years old). One could also write "he is 9 (almost 10)." |
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French Bulldogs are a breed that usually have health problems, but in my case, I have been very lucky. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In all this time I've been with him, he has only had an otitis, and it was when he was a puppy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope he stays healthy and he will be with me for a long time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Later, I spent the afternoon playing to the computer, so I have nothing of interest to say about that.
Later, I spent the afternoon playing In english, we "play on the computer" or maybe "play with the computer" if we are fixing the computer. But never "to the computer". |
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Like always, thanks and see you tomorrow! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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