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Oct. 17, 2024
Mein typischer Morgen
Ich stehe um 7:30 Uhr auf, dann putze mich die Zähne und wasche mich meine Gesichte.
Danach trinke ich zwei Glas Wasser.
Dann mache ich 10-15 Minuten Yoga weil ich meine Körper strecke muss.
Dann mache ich meine Skincare und kämme meine Haare.
Danach ich ziehe mich an, dann bereite ich mich einen Tee vor.
Endlich beginnt ich mit der Arbeit, weil ich zu Hause arbeite.
Oct. 17, 2024
Im On Diet
I want to lose weight, for once I was at the ideal body figurations. In all my lives, I dream off being that skinny white boy, asain good looking dude, type of a guy, that you look at, you would fall in love. Their body is tanted, skinny fat, slim I guess. Being one is not easy. Im now overweight. I can do anything now for that. Look at my boobs, the pac is gone. It look like women's boobs, it drowned down the head. I have to lose the fat, I'm embarrassed. I'll do anything to lose weight. I'm on my journey now. Cross my fingers.
Oct. 17, 2024
Oct. 17, 2024
Je viens de commencer la fac !
Salut - je viens de commencer la fac et j'étudie le français au niveau intermédiaire. Je disais que je gérais en français mais récemment, depuis le début de fac, j'avais du mal à comprendre beaucoup de choses, comme la grammaire et les compréhensions orales.
J’étais Au Pair cet été pendant trois semaines en France et j’ai beaucoup appris, et cette expérience m’avait aidé avec certaines choses mais à la fac, le rythme de travail est plus rapide et la difficulté a augmenté.
Je me rappelle sans arrêt que le français n’est pas une langue très facile à apprendre, mas c’est plus dur maintenant de rester positive et motivée à faire des devoirs ou étudier parce que tout le monde semble aller bien, et ils comprennent les choses sans beaucoup de problèmes. Simplement, je pense que j’ai perdu un peu de confiance en moi-même et je dois arrêter de me comparer aux autres.
Je vais essayer d’écrire en français sur ce site pour pratiquer plus mais, a part de ça, est-ce quelqu’un a des conseils pour la fac ? Est-ce les choses vont s’améliorer ?
Merci pour avoir lu ma écriture. <3
Oct. 17, 2024
Cooking(Lmao)
I love Gorden Ramsay, He s the best chef I know until I stumble upon Jaquin Pepin. Because today I find out that he's quite wit of an old man, cooking in over many places. I would love to watch their cooking tutorials. Today I just watched, Gorden way of stir fried chicken. I learn that, Gorden show me the correct way to balanced heat to perfection. First thing first, he add the chicken with salt pepper and olive oil. Secondly when the chicken all stir up, he add garlics, and stir them until they are all yellow. Now that's all informations I needed, the colors of the garlic tell him when to put off the oven, when it turn yellow it's when you can do that timing. Today I also watched, how to cook pork kidney, as I watched Jaquin Pepin videos, scroll through the comments I saw, people say him being a professional cook for france president. Not to oversharing, but he seemed quite old man, I dont know he's composure. I bet. That's the only proof I can find for my backup tutorials. So I prepared the meal with pork kidneys. With beer, garlic,... Then I just made the best sauces of all, thanks to him. I love him from now on. He seem legit.
Oct. 17, 2024
Les effets de la publicité sur les comportements des cons...
Les publicité font une grande partie de la société moderne. On les trouve partout. Durant les séries, sur les murs à la métro, ou bien dans les annonces. Les publiciteurs ont intégré les publicités dans la vie quotidienne. Cela pose un nouvel problème. À cause de l'intégration des publicités, il est plus difficile que jamais de différencier entre les avis véritables et les avis sponsorisés. Maintenant, on se demande si l'on peut faire confiance à ce qu'une personne se conseille à faire ou s'il y a une intention cachée, payée par un gros entreprise. En gros, les publicités ont contribué à une manque de confiance entre chacun durant une période déjà rempli d'une esprit de « à chacun son propre ».
Oct. 17, 2024
T1-Tu as commencé ton nouveau travail !
Salut,
Tu as commencé ton nouveau travail ! C’est comment ? Tu es content(e) ?
Ali
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Coucou Ali,
J'espère que tu vas bien. Je suis vraiment contente d'avoir rejoint un centre de langues très renommé au Canada, appelé EF. L’ambiance de travail est à la fois chaleureuse et professionnelle, et j'ai la chance de rencontrer des collègues venant de plusieurs pays, comme les États-Unis, l'Australie, ou encore l’Inde. Chaque jour, nous échangeons différentes méthodes d'enseignement et nous nous soutenons mutuellement dans nos tâches. Je me sens épanouie, car tout le monde est très accueillant et bienveillant. De plus, comme l’école est située près du centre-ville, il me suffit de 15 minutes pour m’y rendre en transport en commun. Franchement, je suis ravie de faire partie de cette équipe et j'espère pouvoir m'y engager à long terme.
Et toi, quoi de neuf de ton côté ?
À bientôt !
Oct. 17, 2024
Beginner, Hello world
Hi My name is Tri. I wonder how this website work. This is my first time using it. Hope I can find out about that after this writting. I hope I can learn English, and better my grammatical structures. I need your helps, please correct me. I'm a beginner. I love you.
Oct. 17, 2024
On Playing "Ni No Kuni - Wrath of the White Witch"
After completing *Dark Souls Enhanced Edition*, I left my Nintendo Switch on the shelf for a while. But God how much I love playing on the little Nintendo console. I can play on my bed during my lunchbreak, and don't have to use the same device I use for work (my PC).
I originally wanted to play *Breath of the Wild*. Unfortunately, I don't have the cartridge with me. I actually have, however, an unplayed game which has been waiting for my attention for a while.
I'm talking about Level 5's *Ni no kuni: Wrath of the White Witch* (for short, NNK). I bought the game almost five years ago, started it thrice, left it without even reaching the fantasy world the game takes place in. Short attention span at the time. Let's try again.
Here are the first notes I took after one hour and a half of playing. I feel the necessity to point out that I'm not a keen JRPG player. The only game of the genre I've ever finished is *Persona 4: Golden* on the PSVita. However, I'm interested in the genre as a whole and studied it a little. I'll probably say things which may sound naive to an avid JRPG player, though.
As usual, there will be SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS.
- Opening sequence in Motorville
- The game plays the Studio Ghibli feel card right from the opening. I read that Level 5 had most of the story and the worldbuilding finished before Studio Ghibli joined them to animate the cutscenes. Still, it feels like the game was conceived as "a Ghibli movie made game" from the start.
- Like P4G, it takes its time to start the actual game. The first 20 minutes are made up of basic interactions with NPCs and objects, while a pletora of cutscenes play for us. LET ME PLAYYYYYY.
- The death of Oliver's mother and the start of his journey hit hard, even though the tone is childish, akin to a fairy tale (as we intend them nowadays; in the XIX those stories were quite cruder than *Ni no kuni*). I may have shed a tear.
- From the beginning, I feel that the character of Oliver, his growth, and the acceptance of his mother's death will play an important role.
- In the fantasy world diorama
- After the long exposition, we find ourself in the world of Ni no kuni and in the middle of our first battle. Wow. Gameplay!
- Very simple gameplay, actually. As I was expecting from the genre, the game unfolds its systems one by one, very slowly. The first battle is nothing more than choosing the same option in the battle menu three times.
- The diorama where the player travels from a location to another is wonderful. Finding interesting way to represent travel is something I wish more games did; NNK chooses to make travelling pretty and evocative, while very simple from a mechanical perspective.
- Talking about mechanics. Moving to avoid enemies results most of the time in the enemy bumping into us anyway, but from behind. Having to fight multiple times without being able to avoid a fight is a little annoying.
- At the gates of Din Don Dell
- We have to get into the city of Din Don Dell, so we get to the gate, but the guard responsible for letting us in had his heart stolen by the Big Evil Guy (Shazar's the name). If we want to enter, we need to get the heart of the guard back. But to do so we need to make a stop at the Deep Dark Wood first.
- Classic obstacle to force us on a different path.
- I have to admit I hadn't seen one example of this plot device in a while. The fact that a developer feels confident enough to use it is kinda refreshing.
- NNK is a special example, though, for how strongly it evokes the feeling of a classic children fairytale.
- I don't know if contemporary JRPGs rely so much on this kind of plot devices anymore.
- The Deep Dark Wood
- It's a dungeon.
- It's a long liner corridor which splits into two equally linear corridors. On the first, we find the NPC which grants us our first familiar and a couple of new spells. On the second, the actual scary dungeon littered with monsters and the boss at the end.
- The third person camera takes its time to move while exploring, and is very close to Oliver. A little to close to get a good feeling of the environment, I feel.
- The music is unexpectedly epic for such a small, calm dungeon themed after a forest. I was expecting something one or two tones down. Joe Hisaishi is roaring here.
- Enemies respawn in mere seconds after you took them down. You can never clear the dungeon.
- I died once. And I wasn't expecting to.
- Also, I lose all my money if I want to go back to the game and not reload my last save. That's brutal, in a way.
- Need to use consumables a lot if I want to get out of the dungeon.
- A checkpoint right before the boss takes away some pressure. Level 5 doesn't want me to cry in front of my Switch/PS3/DS.
- By the way, I discovered today the first iteration of the game was for DS. *Wrath of the White Witch* was developed as an enhanced edition for the PS3. WOW. VIDEO GAME HISTORY IS SO COOL!
That's it. I may add more stuff if I play it again or find myself excited at the idea of sharing my silly notes.
Oct. 17, 2024
Oct. 17, 2024
Oct. 17, 2024
Night Mare (94)
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I just remembered it was really scary.
In the dream, I was trying to scream like "HELP", but I barely made a little bit of voice.
I was trying making a voice over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voice.
And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I work up.
I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.
I was like "thanks God, because of my cat I'm released from the scary dream."
I don't want to have a night mare any more
Oct. 17, 2024
章鱼烧店没有了
每个周末，我都会去教堂参加弥撒。唱圣歌，聆听神父的讲道，并祈祷。离教堂不远有一家章鱼烧店。我很好奇，在中国章鱼烧是不是常见？无论如何，这个商店是家庭经营的，不是连锁店。尽管不大，但厨师非常献身于制作出最正宗的章鱼烧。比如，他们只用新鲜的章鱼，而其他商店为了节省成本，通常用便宜的香肠，甚至鸡肉片。教堂附的商店卖外酥里嫩，内馅丰富的章鱼烧。不过正如那句俗话”好东西是有代价的”一样，价格比较高，所以我不常光顾。
有一个礼拜天弥撒之后，我去买了几个章鱼烧。果然好吃极了，但吃完后我还是觉得很饿，最后不得不又买午餐。那时我有点后悔并觉得刚才浪费了我的钱。上个周末，当我走过这家商店时，意外发现它已经永久关闭，并且很快就会被拆除了。这让我陷入了沉思。最终我感到很庆幸那天买了章鱼烧。这个经历让我想起了两句常听的俗话：“我们无法知道什么时候是最后一次”和“时光会改变我们对事物的看法”。
Oct. 17, 2024
Brahms 4
1862 wurde Brahms von Wiener Singakademie eingeladen. Er wohnte danach dort. Vor 1869 hatte er zu Wien seinen Hauptraum umgezogen. In diese Zeit schrieb er manche Meisterwerken, zu Beispiel Deutsches Requiem, das sehr geschätzt wurde.
1876 schrieb Brahms fertig die Sinfonie Nr.1 op. 68, für die er 19 Jahre lang aufwandte.
Oct. 17, 2024
帰国のレポート
日本に到着して、初めて周りに日本語だけの環境が広がる中で生活するという経験をしました。普段、教科書やアプリを使って学んでいる日本語が、実際に人と話す中で生きているものだと実感しました。たとえば、道を聞いたり、買い物をしたりする際に、日本人の皆さんが親切に応えてくれる姿勢を見て、もっと日本語を学びたいという気持ちが強くなりました。教科書とメディアから覚えたフレーズが現実の会話でどのように使われるのかを感じ取ることができ、今後の学習にも具体的な目標が見えたように思います。
日本語をまだ完璧に話せない私に対して、日本人の方々はとても寛容で優しく、私に聞いてくれました。このような経験は、間違えることへの恐怖心を少しずつ取り除いてくれました。例えば、レストランで注文をする時や、買い物する時、私は自分なりに日本語で話してみましたが、皆さんが笑顔で対応してくれる姿に勇気をもらいました。このような日常の中での小さな成功体験が積み重なり、日本語を話す自信が少しずつついてきたと感じています。
毎朝、日本の街を歩き、日本語のサインや広告があるのを見ながら、日常生活で実際に使われている表現に触れることができました。メディアで学んだ表現が、日本での日常生活の中で自然に聞こえてきました。特に、テレビやインターネットで学んだフレーズを実際に街中で耳にした時、その言葉がどんな状況で使われているのか、どのような感情が込められているのかが理解できた気がしました。例えば、電車内でのアナウンスや店員さんの挨拶などは、実際に人が使っているところを目にすると一層理解が深まります。日常での使い方を目の当たりにしたことで、言葉の意味やニュアンスが自分の中でしっかりとイメージとして残り、今後日本語を勉強する際の大きな助けになりました。こうして実生活で見る日本語を目にすることで、日本語学習に対するやる気もさらに増しました。
日本に実際に行ってみると、ドラマやニュースで見る風景が現実とつながり、日本の文化をより深く理解することができました。ジャマイカとはまったく異なる神社やお寺、駅の中の賑わいなど、日本特有の建物や景色を直接体験することで、日本文化の背景がより明確に感じられました。こうした経験があることで、日本の文化をテーマにしたメディアを見たり、日本語のリスニングをしたりする時の理解が一層深まると思います。
日本についてのガイドクラスでは、日本各地の観光地や歴史、さらには日本語の方言についても学ぶことができました。関西弁には以前から興味があったので、初めて正式にクラスで学んだことはとても嬉しかったです。また、先生の方々が日本語学習に役立つウェブサイトも教えてくださり、今後関西弁やオノマトペをより深く学びたいという気持ちが上がりました。特にJFのオンラインコースは、興味深い内容が多く、受講するのが楽しみです。
この研修を通じて、同じように日本語に興味を持つ友人がたくさんできました。帰国後も、私たちは日本語でグループチャットを続けていて、日々の会話や励まし合いを通して友情が深まっています。日本語を学ぶ仲間がいることは、自分の勉強のモチベーションにもなり、お互いに助け合いながら成長できる貴重な環境だと感じています。
この日本での研修は、私の日本語学習にとってかけがえのない経験となりました。日本の文化や言語に直接触れることで、教科書では学べない多くのことを学び、これからの勉強に対するモチベーションが一層高まりました。日本人の優しさや、日本語が使われる現場を自分の目で見て感じることができたのは、貴重な経験です。この体験を通じて、日本語をより深く学ぶ決意が固まり、次に日本を訪れる際にはもっと上達した自分で交流したいという目標ができました。最後に、このような貴重な機会を与えてくださったすべての方々、心から感謝します。皆様のおかげで、今回の研修がかけがえのない思い出となり、今後の人生にも大きな影響を与えてくれることでしょう。本当にありがとうございました。
Oct. 17, 2024
Giovedì 17 ottobre
È la giornata delle pulizie. Fortunatamente non è anche quella dello studio, altrimenti mi stancherei troppo.
Dopo aver finito le sessioni di training, mi sento delusa. Non mi sono piaciute e non so se mi sento così a causa mia o della persona che le ha tenute. Non importa tanto perché sono io che devo svolgere le mansioni.
Ci sono troppi cambiamenti che non hanno senso per noi e dobbiamo adattarci senza lamenti. È cambiato molto questo posto di lavoro da quando sono stata assunta.
Non è giusto che abbiano fatto tutti questi cambiamenti, ma è normale dal punto di vista di un'azienda.
Fra poco uscirò a fare due passi, ma prima di uscire laverò i piatti. A volte preferisco lavarli a mano invece di metterli nella lavastoviglie. C'è qualcosa di rilassante quando li lavo.
Oct. 17, 2024
HSC French Extension Journal Entry
Cher journal intime,
Ma décision d’embaucher Driss en le pariant qu’il ne pouvait pas travailler en tant qu’aide soignant était plutôt folle, mais aujourd’hui après son premier jour de formation, je suis sûr que c’était le bon choix. Malgré sa hésitation initiale, il s’est accordé d’une période d’essai, et il a commencé à faire des tâches sous la surveillance de mon infirmière Marcelle et j’étais assez inquiet mais à a la fois j’avais du mal à m’arrêter de rire, parce qu’il faisait tant d’erreurs, ce qui a rendu Marcelle très stressée. Une fois, il a même fait exprès de renverser du thé chaud sur mes jambes pour voir si je pouvais le sentir! Même si je m’attendais à ce qu’il ait du mal à s’habituer à des tâches plutôt exigeantes, j’étais choqué qu’il n’ait pas pu faire des choses assez simples, comme laver mes cheveux. Ce qui me plaît, c’est le fait que nous pouvons nous moquer l’un de l’autre, comme le moment où je lui ai demandé s’il savait lire - ça me fait penser qu’une belle amitié pourra se nouer entre nous
Ses valeurs et ses pensées sont parfois choquantes, j’ai observé cela particulièrement en ce qui concerne les femmes et la masculinité. Quand Marcelle lui a demandé de m’habiller en bas /de me mettre des bas , il était consterné et avait l’air de vouloir tuer quelqu’un, c’était hors de question pour lui, me demandant où était ma jupe et disant que c’était mieux de m’évanouir que de les porter! La chose la plus intéressante et étonnante, c’est qu’il porte un boucle d’oreille lui-même, ce qui est, à mon avis, beaucoup plus féminine! Et c’est vraiment ironique et drôle qu’ il ne s’en rende même pas compte!
Bref, il lui faudra du temps, c’est sûr, de s’attaquer à ses nouvelles responsabilités.
Philippe
Oct. 17, 2024
Oct. 17, 2024
Oct. 17, 2024
Sugar and Marijuana
We know that marijuana has been legalized in Canada for a few years. Many local Canadian residents think sugar and fat are more harmful than marijuana, but I personally don't vocal this sentiment. It could be challenging for me to testify it with scientific evidence, because even professional doctors are debating it. It is true that marijuana can somewhat bring people joy and cure or ease pain, but it can also drive some people into addiction. On the street, we can see some wobbly homeless guys, many of them result from this medicine, not from sugar.
Oct. 17, 2024
Oct. 17, 2024
今日のいくつかの考え
ギル・ケナンの『エンバーの街』（2008年）は、成長物語としての冒険と、ポスト核のディストピアについての暴露を兼ね備えています。
主人公たちの描写は気に入りましたが、この映画がポスト核ホロコーストがもたらす厳しい現実を軽視している点に失望しました。
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ジャウム・コレット＝セラ監督の2022年の大作『ブラック・アダム』を観た後、素晴らしい演技や没入感のある特殊効果だけでは、ひどい脚本の映画を救うには不十分だということが明確になりました。
もう少しましなプロット展開と、より説得力のあるストーリーがあれば、このハリウッド映画の失敗作はもっと成功していたかもしれません。
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改訂タイトル：『我が玉葱人生』への賛歌
要約： 政府の支出と良心の生き方についての考察。
キーワード：予算の優先順位、政府支出、軍事支出、軍国主義、軍需産業
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A：そして、ほとんどの人間はさまざまな点で盲目ではないでしょうか？
キリスト教は、司教たちが王を戴冠させる独断的な信条を発行する方法ではなく、謙虚な単純さで生じた信仰ではありませんでしたか？
シーク教の道は、他の人に階層を作ったり、説教したい人のための仕事を作ったりするのではなく、探求するように刺激を与えませんでしたか？
Oct. 16, 2024
Oct. 16, 2024
Tenth Step to Improving my Academic Writing
How can make notes effectively?
Non-native students spend considerable time making notes. If they are dissatisfied by result and feel that whole activity is useless that could be cause of frustration. Developing note-taking skill should be a priority. However, it is a hard work. Students learn successfully, if they create their own note-taking systems. It could be absolutely useful tool in their learning process.
Remember three aspects should be controlled. Thinking about distinguish what is and isn’t important could be a first step. The main task is prioritized information and defined which is and is not relevant and valuable in the context. Those notes can be summarized in student’s main idea and become the core of essay. Secondly, students have to make notes in English. It helps them activate target language and ensure that is not mistranslation. The third point is that notes have to make sense. It can be really exhausted spent much time making notes and then being unable to understand them. By paying attention on legible handwriting, shorthand and understanding logical development of idea, students could minimize such problem.
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