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Sustainable food
I am concerned about healthy eating and environment, that’s why five years ago I decided joining a consumer cooperative for my grocery purchases.
Almost every neighborhood in my city has one of this groups of citizens, that work together to make a better world. It’s trendy.
How it works? Periodically I can buy fruit, vegetable and meat directly from small farmers that use ecological procedures to grow them. That is quite considerable benefit for them because there are no brokers.
Obviously, this system is not as cozy as going to a supermarket. Veggies contain soil and sometimes snails. I must clean deeply every single item. In the other hand, this assures me that there’s no phytosanitary product applied. Hundred percent natural food without plastic containers.
I know that this will not improve the alarming status of the planet, but I try to do my small contribution.
Feb. 20, 2021
¿Te gustaría ser inmortal, y por qué? Si no ¿por qué no?
¿Me gustaría ser inmortal? Claro que no. Sería horrible... Es claro que el mundo no va a estar aquí para siempre. Si eres inmortal, incluso si el mundo acabarse tú tendrá que quedarte ahí.
Hay un cuento donde alguien tiene inmortalidad y él se convierte en el polvo. Cada pedazo del polvo tiene pensamientos y sentimientos. Pueden sentir dolor y no pueden morirse nunca. Así que no quiero ser inmortal.
Quiero vivir una vida contenta, incluso si es corta.
Feb. 20, 2021
The Tale of the Heike
The Tale of the Heike is one of the Japanese classics that people study in school. The beginning is so famous that many people can recite it. The sentences have a particular rhythm, so it's easy to memorize. The content is also meaningful. I like the next two sentences; The arrogant do not prevail for long, nothing but a spring night’s dream. The mighty in time succumb, dust before the wind. When I learned it, I didn't understand what it says completely. I realized the excellence now.
Feb. 20, 2021
Beat Saber
This morning, my father invited me to play with the VR game called Beat Saber. He is a freelance programmer and bought the VR headset, Oculus, to develop a VR chat studio. I was excited to play with Beat Saber even though I'm a terrible game player. This game reminds me of the popular arcade game in Japan called Taiko no Tatsujin, which is a series of rhythm games and was also released in North America as a PS2 video game titled Drum Master. People play this game with two sticks and a drum. It is really difficult for people like me who don't have a good taste in moving along with rhythm. I always felt embarrassed in front of my university friends since I couldn't clear an easy stage.
My parents are also poor at rhythm games, so they seemed to have already been bored with the game. Though they assumed that I wouldn't make it through even in an easy mode, they surprised that I could clear a hard mode within 20 minutes. They said that the period of time to be good at something must depend on one's age.
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Feb. 20, 2021
Le correct niveau de lecture
Je crois que lire les livres est nécessaire pour enrichir mon vocabulaire. Toutefois, le défi est de choisir un niveau de lecture approprié pour mes compétences dans la langue. Trop difficile et c'est décourageant. Trop facile et ça deviens ennuyant. Le plus approprié le niveau du livre, le plus je lis, et le plus je lis, le plus j'apprend. Heureusement, j'ai trouvé que les traductions françaises des livres écrits par Roald Dahl sont parfaites pour moi. J'ai déjà lu Charlie et la Chocolaterie ainsi que Le Fantastique Maître Renard. Maintenant, je suis en train de lire Le BGG. C'est amusant!
Feb. 20, 2021
SA C
Steve Aoki has just unveiled his collab with Capcom Sound Team!
The DJ announced on his Instagram today that he released the official remix of the theme song for Ryu of “Street Fighter 5 - Champion Edition.” The caption says:
“Fight!! Every day when I was a kid after school I used to sink in quarters and play my favorite character Ryu and battle fools and today we release my official remix! I called it the Moe’s Pizzeria Remix cuz that’s where the Street Fighter Arcade game was that I’d challenge all my friends to the end!”
“Moe’s Pizzeria Remix” is a festive big room track, which is highly reminiscent of Steve Aoki’s music in the past.
Capcom's “Street Fighter 5 - Champion Edition,” released Feb. 14, is the special edition of “Street Fighter 5,” which came out in 2016. Purchases are available on STEAM and the PlayStation Store.
Feb. 20, 2021
Una herida en el dedo
El otro día mi amiga se cortó el dedo mientras lavaba los platos y tuvo que ir al hospital. Hoy fue el primer día que se podía mojar los puntos y me llamó para animarla a tocar la herida para limpiarla.
Primero, busqué artículos de fuentes fiables sobre la cuida de puntos de sutura mientras ella preparaba el jabón, las toallas y los vendajes nuevos. Luego, se lavó las manos, evitando el dedo herido, y puso jabón en una toalla mojada. Decidió dar palmaditas suaves al dedo con la toalla para no frotar los puntos. Usé el temporizador de mi móvil para asegurarnos que había lavado su dedo durante suficiente tiempo. Después, secó el dedo y puso crema antibacterial antes de hacer los vendajes. Puso una pegatina encima para animarse a sí misma.
Me sabe mal por el dolor que siente y espero que la herida se cure rápidamente.
Feb. 19, 2021
Which is the best or easiest to start?
One of my habit is send videos to my friends.
Sometimes the video is may too long.
I will use an editing software to cut the length and make it shorter.
But recently I want to make a video with some effects.
So, like most people I search in internet to see which will best to start?
Answer: Too many!
I change the question to which is easiest to start?
Answer: Too many again!
I come up a best answer for me.
As for beginner all the software is same!
I go back to use the one already installed in my computer.
It was simple and satisfy all my needs.
Maybe when I become a frequent user than I will need a more professional one.
Feb. 19, 2021
Journal
Last winter, I might have frozen shoulder on my left shoulder. First there is limited shoulder movement, and then there are many pains. At first I didn’t see the doctor, thinking it would be better itself, but it didn’t. A few days ago, I went to a blinder massage shop and had a few massages, and my symptoms eased. But I think it is unscientific to just go for massages. It’s better to go to a regular hospital to get a treatment plan. This morning I am going to the Chinese Medicine Hospital for a doctor to see.
Feb. 19, 2021
The Expanse summery parti 1
J’ai découvert récemment une série qui s’appelle The Expanse. C’est adapter d’une série de livres que je n’ai pas lu. L’histoire est un peu difficile de suivre, mais c’est divertir. C’est une science-fiction qui a lieu dans le futur ou l’ONU contrôler la terre, Mars est régler par un état militaire, est des peoples vivre dans la ceinture d’astroïdes, connu sous le nom de La Ceinture. Mars et la Terre sont sur le point de conflit et la Ceinture n’aime pas la Terre car elle ne leur donne pas suffisamment du l’air qui est un nécessité de vivre.
On rencontre trois de charactères central dans un vaisseau qui l’extraits de la glace de l’astroïdes. Puis ils ont revécu un signal de détresse alors ils ont envoyé un petit vaisseau pour consulter le site. Le petit vaisseau, avec les trois charactères centraux, sont arrivé à la source de la signer, un vaisseau abandonné. Ils ont envoyé deux personnes pour regarder. Ils ont découvert que tous l’équipage sont mort dans une façon mystérieuse. Alors ils se sont préparés de partir. Soudainement, ils ont revécu un message du vaisseau original, le grand vaisseau. Il est attaqué par un vaisseau inconnu et est détruire. Suivant, l’attaquant mystérieux vient après le petit vaisseau. Le petit vaisseau parvenir à s’échapper mais mâtinent ils sont dans le milieu de l'espace.
Feb. 19, 2021
Feb. 19, 2021
Mein progress
Ich bin seit Sechs Monaten Deustch lerne und heute sehe ich mein progress. wenn war ich das Deustch beginnen immer hatte viel problem für Bücher verstehen , hatte ich schwierigkeit für Deutsch hören und ich habe Deutsch Sätzen einfacht geschrieben.
Heute beginne meine Zweite Buchdeutsch und schon kann ich mehr flüssig lesen auch kann ich wort mehr schwer schrieben. Mein Vokabular ist mehr ausgedehnt und alle danke mir anstrengung, ist ich sehr stolz mir, trotzdem mein schwachpunkt ist hören Deutsch für dieses ich hören Podcast,Pideos auf Youtube jeden Tag für kann ich bessen. Heute fertig mein erst Lektion von A2.
Dieses Jahr will ich ein B1 in deutsch erzielen ,ist mein Traum für dieses Jahr.
Feb. 19, 2021
Feb. 19, 2021
Better written than spoken.
I've just read about a guy who said that he had a sort of problem that consists of a hard understanding when it comes to listening, which means that the guy didn't get the things that another person say, due to that, he realized that the written and read things were way better.
Honestly, I not only felt bad for the guy, but I also got scared of it. I don't know why, but I think I may have the same problem or something like that.
At night, I use to listen to podcasts, I do understand what the person says, well... I'm like always translating to my native language, I know what word is the person saying, but after, like, 3 or 4 seconds, I forget the whole conversation, and I know that if I don't fix this soon, I'll have troubles in the future.
Feb. 19, 2021
Feb. 19, 2021
19. Februar
Am morgan stehe ich auf 6 Uhr aufgestanden und gehe ich ein bisschen spazieren. Als spazieren ich bin lerne ich mit meinem Kartekartien Deustch. Ich will jeden Tag funf neu Worte lernen. Vor kurzem habe ich uber Feierabend gelernt. Feierabend ist was Deutsche machen nach dem Arbeitstag. Zum Beispiel Feierabendbierchen ist ein Bier nach dem schwierig Arbeitstag. Fur mir, trinke ich nicht auf dem Woche aber mag ich zu kochen.
Am abend treffe ich meine Freundin. Wir kochen et was Asianisch zusammen. Sie kann sehr gut kochen. Ich auch kann kochen aber sie ist besser. Beim essen wir ein Video schauen. Die Video geht es um Morder in Korea und heist “Memories of Murder” oder Sa-rin eh Chu-Ok auf Koreanisch.
Feb. 19, 2021
Excerpt from practicing with a friend (日本語の話）
P1 = Person 1 (一人）
P2 = Person 2 (二人）
P1 - しゅくだいはむざかしくなかったです。べんきょうしましたから。
P2 - 日本語が勉強しましたは、楽しいね. 私の好きな本が今はざれがとです。あなたは？
P1 - 好きな本はThe 99% Invisible Cityです。 ざれがとのどうしてが好きか。
P2 - あの、簡単（かんたん）は読んで、一つ目。たくさん本を持（も）ちる、むずかしいです、でもこの本が楽しいですよ。あっ、主人公がバカです、草。
今は、天気とても寒い（さむい）ですよ。どうですか、君（きみ）の天気は？
P1 - ここはたくさんゆき。てんきはさむい。何のおしごとですか？
P2 - 寒いですね。えっと、「おしごと」は何ですか？仕事？私の仕事は私立です、ごめなさい。
あなたは好き日がありますか？好き夜ですか？どちらですか？
（どんな時は好きですか)
P1 - すみません。二つのしごとあります。 好き夜です。
P2 - いいえ、大丈夫ですよ。
Feb. 19, 2021
Feb. 19, 2021
Города, которые я хочу посетить (в Европе и Азии)
Я очень хочу посетить ещё раз Краков. Я уже был там девять лет назад и очень понравился мне город. В Польше я также хочу посетить Варшаву, потому что моя подруга там живёт.
Россия это очень красивая и интересная страна, потому что она богата истории, культур и природы. Конечно я хочу посетить Москву и Санкт-Петербург, потому что они самые важные города в стране, но я тоже хочу посетить города Сибири: Владивосток, Иркутск, Петропавловск-Камчатский и так далее. Я думаю, что Сибирь это очень интересное место, хотя немного людей там живёт и нет туристических достопримечательностей, кроме природы.
Я хочу посетить Париж, хотя у меня нет поводов, чтобы там поехать. Я однако думаю, что это красивый город, хоть я уверен, что во Франции нет никаких плохих городов. Я тоже хочу посетить Аяччо, потому что мне интересно Корсика.
В Тампере живёт мой друг и я хочу его навестить. Я очень люблю города на море, итак я хочу посетить Лиссабон. Греция это очень красивая страна, итак я добавляю Афины в списоке из-за своей исторической важности. Также Рейкьявик мне кажется интересным.
Я очень люблю Украину. Я хочу посетить Киев и Одесса. Киев – богат истории и архитектуры, а у Одессы море, которое так очень люблю.
В Азии я очень хочу посетить Ханой, Хюэ, Нур-султан, Улан-Батор, Бангкок и Пномпень . Потому что я изучаю вьетнамский язык, это бы было мило поехать в столицу страны. Я упомянул тоже Хюэ, потому что это очень важный город в истории (был город императора Вьетнама). Я хочу поехать в Нур-Султан и Улан-Батор просто оттого, что мне интересно Монголия и Казахстан. Это же самое с Бангкоком и Таиландом. Я очень хочу поехать в Пномпень чтобы посетить музей геноцида «Туольсленг».
Feb. 19, 2021
Feb. 19, 2021
Baking Pancakes
Today me and my mother were making pancakes filled with cottage cheese. Well, it was mostly she who did the main job - preparing the paste mix and baking. My part was putting a spoon of cottage cheese on a pancake, fold its edges in a small envelope and then roll it two times. I baked only last two pancakes myself and almost burnt my fingers, trying to flip the pancakes with my bare fingers like my mother did. I said it was insane and asked her not to do it like that anymore. I ended up using a little knife and an utensil with the flat grabbing part (I think it's called "spatula"). The pancakes turned out to be really delicious and I ate almost ten of them at a time. However, there are plenty of them left for tomorrow breakfast. Next time, I want to carry out the whole baking process myself and see if I could prepare them as tasty as now.
Feb. 19, 2021
L'Enseignement Mixité
L’Enseignement Mixité: problème d’âge du bronze
Je me permets de vous écrire suite lisant d’article choqué de Monsieur Millet qui a été publié dans votre article le 21 février 2021. İl a dit que, je cite << l’enseignement mixité cause l’effondrement des valeurs de la société>>. De plus, il soutient d’un système d’éducation séparé. Dans cette courrier, j’essayerai de vous explique la nécessité d’enseignement mixité.
İl est évident que l’enseignement ou l’apprentissage ne signifie pas justement les cours scolaire. À la derrière de cette notion, il existe une développement psychologie et une développement sociale. Les écoles nous offre une environnement sociale qui parallèlement contribue à notre éducation. Certes, la création de cette environnement n’est pas obligation primordial des écoles, cependant il fait exister sans une création humanitaire parce que s’il y a des humaines, la société se crée. D’un autre coté, toutes les études scientifiques tendent à prouver que l’enseignement mixité diminuer la criminalisation des hommes grâce à neutralisation des actes criminels dans cette environnement. Même si vous pouvez me poser d’augmentation des harcèlements à cause de l’enseignement mixité, malgré cela l’enseignement mixité n’est pas une cause du harcèlement et en plus la raison du harcèlement est constitution psychologique mal. Donc, si nous n’autorisons pas à la coéducation, elle sera des raisons des plusieurs harcèlement.
En conclusion, je vous en prie, ne nous montrez plus d’idées d’âge du bronze. İl faut que nous pensions la futur de nos enfants, y compris les valeurs de la société pas d’une personne déviant. Dans le cas d’interdiction de l’enseignement mixité, qui sera responsable de développement psychologique mal de nos enfants.
Feb. 19, 2021
Written Communication Is Better Than Spoken For Me (pt.2)
I have more difficulty than others in understanding what someone is saying, especially in the noise, but my hearing is fine. The symptom seems to be APD (Auditory processing disorder) , which I learned it from Reddit last year. Here is the explanation from the wiki. "Individuals with APD usually have normal structure and function of ear (peripheral hearing). However, they cannot process the information they hear in the same way as others do, which leads to difficulties in recognizing and interpreting sounds, especially the sounds composing speech." There is no effective treatment, and in China there is no research on this disease at all, so I just left it alone ¯\(ツ)/¯. I am far less effective in class than reading myself. I listen to podcasts, but it's hard for me to understand some channels. It seems to be related to the recorded equipment of the podcast. Some podcasts' recording equipments are professional that I can understand what is being said even walking on the street. However, there are some podcasts that are Zoom style (hopefully you can get it), or there are so many people speaking there. I was sitting alone in a quiet home, turning up the volume to the maximum, playing the podcast while having a meal, but I could only understand a few words in bits and pieces, even it's in my native language. I also like to listen to music, music from all countries. The language of the lyrics is not so important to me, because I usually understand the lyrics through the text. For me, vocal is just very cool and very unique sound design ......
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