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Pillret
Jag tycker om att äta och jag tycker om att laga mat men ja, det skulle jag.
Det skulle vara trevligt att inte behöva tänka på mat hela tiden. Man måste tänka på vilka mat man har i kylskåpet, vad mer behöver man köpa, vilka måltider man kan göra, om maten är nyttigt, etc. Det skulle spara pengar, tid och resurser. Utan behov att äta skulle finns inget behov att köpa mat, tvätta tallrikar eller vara säker att man äta en nyttig kost.
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Dec. 16, 2020
Längd, bredd, djupt och buller
Jag är ganska lång för en fransk kvinna. Jag är JÄTTElång för en tahitisk kvinna. Men jag är ganska kort jämfört med svenska kvinnor. Min pojkvän, som är svensk, är längre än jag. Före träffade jag honom var det alltid jättesvårt för mig för att hitta en partner lika lång som jag eller mer.
Jag är inte fett men jag är inte heller tunn. Vissa skulle säga att jag har en perfekt vikt. Jag säger att även om jag ser bra ut, att jag inte är bekvämt med min kropp och att jag kunde förlora några kilogram. Faktiskt har jag redan förlorat sju kilogram sedan sommaren och jag är jätteglad över det. Men jag behöver förlora några mer.
Jag är en kreativ och emotionell person. Jag gillar att vara med vänner men bara för ett par timmar. Jag behöver vila och vara på egen hand med böcker eller musik.
Jag gillar inte - nej, jag hatar buller. Jag hatar att vara inne platser där finns det högt buller. Det är därför har jag aldrig varit till en konsert. Jag gillar att dricka öl men jag kan inte göra det i en bar med högt musik. Det är svårt för mig. Om jag är överväldigad av buller så kan jag få panikattack, gråta eller skrika. Det här kallas ”misofonia”, eller hat för buller. Det finns inte massor människor som förstår misofonia, eller som vill förstå.
Jag gillar att dansa i dansklubbar och jag alltid går inne med hörselskydd. Det är bra för två anledningar: för det första filtrerar det nivån av buller (bullernivån?) och för det andra skyddar det mina trummor. Jag vill inte vara döv för snart! Folk brukar reta eller håna mig när ser man mina hörselskydd och jag förstår inte varför. Alla borde göra samma sak. Nivån av buller i dansklubbar är för högt och det behöver inte vara lika så.
Dec. 16, 2020
Eine E-Mail für meinen Chef
Sehr geehrter Herr Lehmann,
herzlichen Dank für Ihre Einladung! Selbstverständlich komme ich gern. Ich möchte mein Mann mitbringen und ich wollte wissen, ob es ein Problem damit gibt. Außerdem könnten Sie mir bitte wieder noch den Weg zu Ihnen erklären? Ich habe den total vergessen. Ich warte auf Ihre Antwort.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Claudia Müller
Dec. 16, 2020
Shortsentences27
1. Genellikle beyzbol izlerken Fındıklı kase dolu yerim ve soğuk bira içerim, ama her gün bira içmem. Usually while watching baseball i will eat a bowl full of peanuts and i drink cold beer, but I don't drink beer everyday.
2. Yarın, Emine yaptığı aşure tüm komşularına teslim edecek. Tomorrow, Emine will deliver the aşure she made to all her neighbors.
3. Nasıl her şeyi müşterilerimize teslim edecek miyiz? How will we deliver everything to our costumers?
4. Çeşme sokaktaki evine olan tehlikeli köpekleri hiç teslim etmeyeceğim, dün gece onlar benden peşinden koştu. I will not deliver to the house on çeşme Street which has dangerous dogs anymore, last night they chased me.
5. Amazon için çalışırken her gün farklı kargo teslim ederdim. While working for Amazon, i delivered different cargo everyday.
6. Düğünümüz için bir salon kiraya arıyoruz. We are searching to rent a hall for our wedding.
7. Sonraki hafta Murat, benimle yaşamaya başlayacak, şu an kiram pahalı olmayacak. Next week, Murat will start living with me, now my rent won't be expensive.
8. Antalya şehrin merkezindeki bir daire kira benim için çok pahalı. The rent of an apartment in downtown Antalya is very expensive for me.
9. Zonguldaktaki dağın eteğinde güzel ev kiralıyoruz da denizden uzak değil. We are renting a nice house which in Zonguldak at the foot of a mountain, also its not far from the sea.
10. Elif, benim duygularımı yanlış anladın, onu iyi bir insan düşünüyorum ama erkek arkadaşını olmak istemiyorum. Elif misunderstood my feelings, i think she is a good person but i don't want to be her boyfriend.
11. Beni yanlış anladın, tabağımda hiç mayonez istemedim. You misunderstood me, i did not want any mayo on my plate.
12. , seni yanlış anladım, yine tekrar edebilir misin? i misunderstood you, can you repeat it again?
13. Yaz boyunca bütün turistler sahillere akın ederler, güneşlenmek ve yüzmek için giderler . During summer, all the tourist flock to the beaches, they go for sunbathing and for swimming.
14. Kış boyunca Amerika'nın kuzey eyaletlerinde yaşayan insanlar Florida'ya giderler, orada kış mevsimi çok zor değil. During winter, people who live in the northern states of America go to Florida, the winter season is not hard there.
15. Karıncalar, Piknik masanın altındaki ölüyen kerkenkele akın ediyor. The ants are flocking to the dead lizard which is under the picnic table.
16. Bazen rüyalarımda bir şey beni dadanıyor ama onu bilmiyorum. Sometimes something haunts me in my dreams, but I don't know what it is.
17. Eğer kötü çocuğu olmaya devam edersen hayaletler senin rüyalarında dadanacaklar. If you continue to be a bad child, ghosts will haunt you in your dreams.
18. Mukaddes'le bağda yürürken hafta sonu için planımızı hakkında bahsettik, bir filmi izlemeye beraber karar verdik. While walking in the vineyard with Mukaddes, we talked about our plans for the weekend, we decided to watch a movie together.
19. Mukaddes,biz filmi izlemeyi önce patlamış mısırı için kaseye ihtiyacımız var. Mukaddes, before we watch the movie, we need a bowl for the popcorn.
20. Emine ders çalışırken kirazlı kase olan dolu ona götüreceğim, bence sabahtan beri hiç yememişti. While Emine is studying, I will take a bowl full of cherries to her, i think she hasn't eaten since the morning.
Dec. 16, 2020
Journal 5 my experience as a volunteer.
Journal 5 My Experience as a volunteer
In my research for a different activity that helps me to improve my English and increase my vocabulary, today I went to help the people in the center for food. I started getting on the food in the car for the people that need it. Today I could have met interesting people and finally practice my English in real life because in this pandemic I couldn’t meet people in person and real experience either. I will be tomorrow to continue to do a very nice experience in English.
Dec. 16, 2020
معرفی
سلام و درود بر همگی!
اسمم ارشد دوئی هست. من از ایالت یوتا توی ایالت متحده هستم. الان من در کالفرنیا و شهر سن دیگو زندگی میکنم. من داوطلب کلیسایی هستم و هر روزداوطلبانه اونجا کار میکنم. چند تا چیز که دوست دارم انجام بدم اینه: دویدن خوندن و ویولنسل زدن. الان من برای کریسمس خیلی هیجان زده ام. بخاطر ویروس کووید نمیتونم به خانواده ام سر بزنم ولی هنوز با فیسبوک مسنجر صحبت میکنیم. اونها توی یاتا هستن و اونجا کار میکنند و درس میخونند. امیدوارم کریسمس بهتون خوش بگذره!
Dec. 16, 2020
Mon cours français
Au début du cours, le professeur nous saluent et elle commence par l’organisation du cours en nous offrant les travails individuels.
Deux gens du cours décident d’écrire un petit texte sur le Noël cette année et je choisis de rédiger cette compte rendu de séance.
Après l’organisation, nous nous focusons sur le fichier que le professeur a téléchargé pour nous. Ce filier consiste des petites pièces d'un poème Prévert avec une petite tâche . Une personne de notre groupe lit cette tâche et elle devoit la résumer avec sa propre mots afin que toute la groupe le comprenne.
Le professeur nous offre aussi la possibilité de demander si nous n’avons pas compris certains mots de notre travail. Notre tâche est remiser les petits pièces du poème en ordre complète et justifier notre choix d’ordre. Cette tâche est individuelle, donc chacun doit travailler seul sur cela. Après quelques temps, le professeur nous offre plus de trois minutes puisque certains d’entre nous ne sont pas fini avec la tâche.
Dec. 16, 2020
Einen Brief für einen Freund
Lieber Marco,
ich freue mich auch schon auf Deine Anreise! Wir wollen zusammen viele Sachen machen: am Strände und auf schöne Inseln fahren, Wandern gehen, am Strand einen Spaziergang machen und so weiter!
Das Wetter ist immer gut und es wird schön bleiben. Es regnet sehr selten und tagsüber ist der Himmel strahlend und die Sonne scheint.
Du sollst leichte Kleidung mitbringen. Verpass deine Winterkleidung zu Hause! Und vergiss auch nicht viele Badewannen zu mitbringen. Wir werden stundenlang im Wasser sein!
Sehen wir uns bald.
Liebe Grüße
Claudia
Dec. 16, 2020
Dec. 16, 2020
I'm back
I feel like taking a break for a week was good. However, I still haven't done any of the things I meant to do. I want to keep studying English by myself but in a serious way. I'll need resources for learning theory and exercises, which I should have looked for. I also wanted to revise my old notes and read my old English books. I have some notes and photocopies I used for practicing, but I can't find my books, so I guess I gave them to my brother. I also haven't re-read books I own in English. I've just remembered I wanted to read a Word document about essays too.
To sum up, I've got a lot of things to do. I'm not really sure how to track my progress in terms of writing. I'm also not sure how to actually learn from corrections. I guess I'll have to figure it out.
Does anyone else think they overshare when writing journals? Because I do, but that's probably because I actually do overshare.
Dec. 16, 2020
Dec. 16, 2020
Nach dem Spiel ist vor dem Spiel
Heute habe ich meine letzte Prüfung des Jahres gemacht. Es hat schlecht geläuft. Die Prüfung war zu groß und wir hatten nur 3 Stunden alles zu machen. Ich glaube ich könnte mehr dafür vorbereitet habe aber jetzt gibt es keine Zeit zu weinen. Weitere Chancen nachstes Jahr kommen werden, ich muss nur weiter lernen.
Dec. 16, 2020
Dadurch...
Thomas lernt dadurch so viel, dass er jeden Abend ein neues Buch liest.
Thomas lern so viel, indem er jeden Abend ein neues Buch liest.
Ich arbeite jetzt dadurch in Deutschland, dass ich in meinem Heimatland eine gute Bildung erhalten habe. (Geht das überhaupt? Oder würde ein einfacher Satz mit "weil" hier passen?)
Ich arbeite jetzt in Deutschland, indem ich in meinem Heimatland eine gute Bildung erhalten habe.
Die Lehrerin versuchte den Kindern zu helfen, indem sie alternative Übungen vorbereitete.
Dec. 16, 2020
Exercise –Abandon ship
The order to abandon ship was given. It was so unexpected that everyone unprepared and,don't know how could they manage to it at all. Everyone was seized with panic and confusion. People were all rushing in all directions for their lives. A flood of crews came up from below because the 16 watertight compartments of Titanic was almost filled with water. As a result of lifeboats lowered,people could just jumped overboard. The lifeboats fulled soon,for people all struggled to get into lifeboats.
For some people,it's fortunate they left and survived the drown,but for the other people it's another thing. Looking the Titanic sank rapidly,people in water were desperate for death. Lifeboats moved away one by one,not only people in water but people who in lifeboats all cries for despair.
Dec. 16, 2020
Journal 16/12/20
At noon, when I arrived at a box lunch store to eat my lunch, the store owner told me the meal was sold out, so I turned to another Chinese fast food store, but when I arrived at the store, it was closed. So I turned to a noodle shop that I used to go to. Fortunately, the shop was still open. Apart from several types of noodles, the shop provided various small dishes. The one I liked the most was braised lamb chops. I used to eat it several times and I thought it was very delicious, although it was very spicy. Today I bought lamb chops again. Its price was 160 yuan per kilogram and that piece of the chops cost me 26 yuan. This time it was still spicy as usual and this also was an aspect I hated the most. I have complained about this to the shop owner several times, but he didn't seem to take my suggestion to decrease the chop’s spicy.
Dec. 16, 2020
One of my hobbies----writing
This is something I actually don't talk to anybody about but I’m really addicted in writing some articles in English. And I shared it in a corrective website to correct my mistakes. What’s more. It taught me how to communicate, how to craft a narrative effectively, and also how to be interesting. The best thing about writing is that it actually has improved my verbal communication skills.
I haven’t written for a long time after the graduation from the senior high school. What’s more, my writing skill has been limited to a rigid format. In China, we were allowed to recited many advanced, beautiful sentences for the exams, not practical, helpful ones. In my views, the first step of writing is express what I thought with my own words and receive more corrections from others to improve them. Practice makes perfect, the things I learnt not like a strangers I greeted but more like a close friend. It could be a part of mine; it could be my weapon to took; it even could be my life. I do hope I will never forget the period of time on writing and stick in it.
Dec. 16, 2020
Dec. 16, 2020
Mit dagligt skema.
- Jeg vågner op fra klokken 5:00 til 8:00.
- Jeg laver min hunds morgenmad når han vågner op omkring 9:00 til 12:00 og jeg lade ham ud.
- Jeg studerer til klokken 13:00.
- Jeg bruger tid sammen med min kæreste til 18:00
- Jeg laver aftensmad og studerer omkring klokken 19:00 til 21:00.
- Min hund spiser også omkring klokken 19:00 til 21:00.
- Jeg går i seng klokken 22:00 til 00:00.
Jeg er mere et morgenmenneske. Jeg vågner op tidligt, fordi jeg kan koncentrere mig bedre om morgen. Også, dage føles længere.
Jeg kan godt lide mit dagligt skema! Jeg organiserer det min selv, og der er nok tid og plads hvis jeg må flytte tingene rundt.
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Dec. 16, 2020
Dec. 16, 2020
Journal 16/12/20
I want to talk about some situations in our country and I have always had some points on it. I don’t know if there is a situation in your country. I worked in a public institution which is funded by the government. When it’s the end of the year, our department is required to book a lot of next year’s newspapers and magazines. They are published from all levels of the departments of governments. For example, Party Style and Clean Government, China’s Discipline Inspection and Supervision, Yingzhou Evening News and so on. This kind of cost every year is almost around ten thousand yuan. But no one really reads them. We just put it alone and some day sell them as waste. This kind of situation really makes us sad, but we can do nothing about this. The publishers belong to every high authority department, and these departments are our leading departments. For instance, China’s Discipline Inspection and Supervision is issued by the CPC Central Commission for Discipline Inspection and you all know that it’s the department focusing on each official behavior, and everybody who works in a department that is funded by the government is afraid of it. Our district party committee also has its Discipline inspection committee. And it is the department that requires us to book that magazine. Who dare refuse its demand? Except you want bad things to happen. So why don't people read newspapers and magazines? Because nowadays, information is particularly developed and you can get a lot of information on your phone, and very fast. In this kind of situation, who will read those newspapers and magazines? Will this happen in your country?
Dec. 16, 2020
Dec. 16, 2020
Are Animals in a Zoo Happy?
This question is very difficult to answer. In the perspective of freedom, the animals don't have freedom because they can't do what they want to do instinctively. For example, birds want to fly over the sky but they can't because of cages. On the other hand, they are guaranteed their safety. If they get sick, vets will treat them. Besides, they won't suffer from starvation and natural enemies. We can't ask whether they feel happy or not, so it's impossible to answer the question. However, I think we should take care of animal rights as same as human rights.
Dec. 16, 2020
debate on private colleges and universities
There has aroused a heated debate on whether private colleges and universities are benefit to our education or not. Views on this issue vary from person to person. From my point of view, before airing my own opinion, I do think it's necessary to analyze this thorny issue from different perspectives.
Those who declare that these universities could enable more students to have access to higher education present the following reasons. To begin with, private college provide an opportunity for students who cannot enter public universities and experience 3-year learning life. In addition, because of the 3-year experiences, they also get the ticket to access to the bachelor or Master degree.1What's more, if the student don't want to continue the study, they will acquire a specific technique by 3-year studys that will help them get a job after graduation.
Although the explanation is rational, other people may explore this issue for another angel. for one thing, the private colleges and universities are operated by private groups whom aim at high profit rather than education quality. For another thing, the teacher's quality should also be concerned because of good resources might chose the public universities for stable income and future.
In conclusion, although it's very hard to arrive at an absolute conclusion on this issue, considering these factors, I will assent to the former viewpoint because the defects cannot obscure the virtues.No matter how bad the teacher quality or the education, those can be solved through the government's overview. However, if we don't have these private colleges, our society will lack professional technician. In addition, those students cannot continue study will enlarge the unstable factor of society which might cause various social problems
Dec. 16, 2020
Journal 16/12/20
This morning, I attended the Fifth Congress of Yingzhou District, Fuyang City, China Communist Youth League. Present at the meeting were Sun Cunkun, deputy secretary of Yingzhou District Party Committee, Zhou Xuan, deputy secretary of Fuyang Municipal Committee of Communist Youth League and other relevant leaders. A special section was where four young pioneers from Liu Qi Primary School delivered speeches to the conference. The conference was successful and I had seen the hope of our country and our cause from those young pioneers and Communist Youth League members. This meeting reminded me of how I had become a communist youth league member. It was in sixth grade. My PE teacher told me that I could apply to join the Communist Youth League, then he gave me a form to let me fill it. I took the form home after school and told my father all about this. My father was very pleased and helped me to finish the form. Many years later, I just realized that the form was a volunteer book for joining the Communist Youth League. No wonder how beautiful it was. I didn’t join the Young Pioneers because our primary school was remote at that time and didn’t carry out this work. The young are hope and future. It is because of their existence that our cause can keep moving forward.
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