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Using a Mac PC
I bought a Mac PC for managing my Apple devices more easier.
It is the first time in the Mac environment, so I am not familiar not only to use a mouse device but also to copy files, to manage them and so on.
It seems like that I just arrived a new country.
My old experiences are not suitable for this new environment.
But this PC reduces my stresses about using my Apple-made devices.
It is more easy to copy musics into my iPhone, and it is convenient to manage files from my iPad.
I think, this PC will make many interesting experiences for me.
May 9, 2021
Das ist aus
Jetzt kanne ich anhand des Wortschatzes englischsprachige Männer von deutschsprachigen Männern in den Filmen unterscheiden. Die englischsprahigen Männer sagen immer "i'm so sorry" aber die deutschsprachigen Männer sagen "Das ist aus". Ich denke, dass der google Ubersetzer (oder ein anderer ) ihm diese Variante niemand anbieten wird, aber die Männer drücken sich genau so aus.
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Imparare una nuova lingua
Imparare una nuova lingua è un processo diverso per tutti. Può dipendere da molte cose quanto sia difficile impararlo. È più facile se si ha madrelingua intorno a si perché possono correggersi immediatamente o se si trove nel paese in cui sta imparando la lingua. È anche più facile se si ha già sentito quella lingua quando era un bambino.
È opinione comune che imparare una nuova lingua da adulti sia più difficile che in giovane età. Il nostro cervello elabora le informazioni in modo diverso, cosí dobbiamo cambiare il modo in cui apprendiamo quando saremo più grandi.
È anche più difficile trovare la motivazione da adulti perché spesso abbiamo altre responsabilità e l'apprendimento delle lingue è solo un interesse. Secondo me, stabilire un obiettivo finale chiaro è una buona motivazione. Ad esempio "Voglio essere in grado di vivere in quel paese un giorno" o "Voglio essere in grado di leggere i libri o poesie preferiti nella sua forma originale". La mia insegnante di biologia al liceo ha effettivamente imparato l'inglese per poter leggere Shakespeare.
Possiamo sempre misurare i nostri progressi verso il nostro obiettivo. Anche fare un programma settimanale può essere utile. Penso che quando non si riesce a trovare la motivazione si deve solo spingersi attraverso di essa. La motivazione non è qualcosa di trovato piuttosto che creato. Il suo successo e i suoi risultati possono motivarsi al meglio. Se si aspetta solo che arriva la motivazione, non arriverà mai.
L'apprendimento di una lingua a scuola dipende davvero dall'insegnante. Se non gli piace il modo in cui insegnano o se sono orribili, allora ha difficoltà a imparare qualcosa. È anche difficile apprezzare la materia se l'insegnante è orribile. Se sono troppo rigidi ma non spiegano mai nulla, dovrá prendere lezioni extra da un tutor privato per superare la lezione o comprendere i concetti.
D'altra parte, se ha un insegnante straordinario e gli piace la lingua, potrebbe voler imparare più del necessario nel curriculum. In tal caso potrebbe andare da un tutor privato in modo da poter diventare fluente più velocemente.
May 9, 2021
May 9, 2021
Journal
May 5 is the day that spring turns to summer in the Chinese lunar calendar. The temperature has increased rapidly since it turned into summer. These last three days, the temperature here has reached as high as 32 degrees Celsius. Now I just need to wear a T-shirt and thin trousers. Some girls already wear short skirts. I think it is too hot. If you move a lot or walk outside, you can easily get sweaty.
May 9, 2021
A Video
Today, I found a curious video when I was watching YouTube. The video was, nothing special, a teacher explained a basic math exam. It was suggested to me because the views were over ten thousand. Perhaps, the teacher forgot to set limited access. The problems were quite easy for me. For example, "Answer the absolute value of -5." I also studied math like that ten years ago, and I felt nostalgic.
May 9, 2021
Journal
The city you grew up in looks very nice. Green area, lush trees, clean river, blue sky and the snow mountains in the distance. It makes me feel pretty quiet, peaceful and satisfied. I prefer living in an area that has fewer buildings and people. Compared with cities, I prefer living in small towns in the suburbs because I like a very quiet environment.
May 9, 2021
4月の日記
4月から「グローバル・歴史」の授業が始まりました。1週間3日授業がありながらインターンシップに探して応募しますのは大変です。インターンシップは、8月前に見つけないといけませんよ。まだ時間がありますがストレスしています。
それに、修士論文は来年の春から書き始めますが、トピックと誰の教授が指導させてもらえますは今度決めています。細部はまだ未決で大丈夫けど。陰謀のセオリーを研究したいと思います。
デンマークで、大学しかない教育機関がまだ閉まっている。幼稚園生と小学生、中学生、高校生、職業を受けている人々はみんな普通に授業を受けることができる。政府が大学生を見捨てられた感じをしていますよ。
しかし、今度から試験は2つだけあります。その後に夏を少しゆっくり過ごせばいいね。
May 9, 2021
May 9, 2021
IT HAS BEEN SIX YEARS
It has been six years since I started learning English. It has been the most enjoyable period of my life. Every day, I do many things to improve my English skills. Although I live in a country where there are no English speakers, I try very hard to practice my English online. I know nothing is impossible, but one has to be patient and ambitious. Until now, I am still working very hard to become a writer in English through self-education, and I am sure someday I will achieve my goal.
May 9, 2021
Mi joya favorita
La joya que llevo más a menudo es un anillo de plata con elefantes, que siempre tengo puesto en el dedo corazón de mi mano izquierda. Lo quito casi nunca porque el metal no se daña en el agua, no me molesta cuando duermo (como los aretes) y no tengo miedo de perderlo porque me queda tan bien. Además, me parece muy elegante en la mano. No recuerdo cuándo empecé a llevarlo, pero un día lo encontré en la habitación de mi hermana. Mi padre se lo había comprado, pero nunca se lo puso.
May 9, 2021
Journal
Today is Mother's Day, but my mother is in hospital now. A couple of days ago, at dinner she ate a piece of cake, then she had diarrhea that night. The next morning I bought some medicine for her. She didn't continue to have diarrhea after taking the medicine. At night on that day, she suddenly felt unwell. Her hands and mouth shook hard and she couldn't explain herself. I called an ambulance to take her to the hospital. She was diagnosed with an acute intestinal infection and fever. It's been four days since she was in hospital. And every day she has to take some medicine and infusion. Fortunately, there is no big problem with her health. Maybe, after a few days of treatment, she can be discharged from the hospital.
May 9, 2021
May 8, 2021
18/30 ma ville idéale
Qu'est-ce ça semble, ta ville idéale ?
Il y a beaucoup de critères qui mesurent la qualité de vie qu'offre une ville. Par exemple le prix de l'immobilier, de nécessité quotidienne, et aussi le carde de vie, comme la météo, la qualité de l'air, l'offre culturelle, et l'espace vert ... etc. Bien sûr, elle prend en compte la qualité de l'infrastructure, comme l'éducation, les soins, la sécurité... pour n'en nommer que quelques-unes. Il y a une longue liste de critères qui en entrent en compte.
Pour moi, il y a 3 choses qui sont les plus importantes.
D'abord, c'est la qualité de l'infrastructure parce qu'elle fait le fondement de vie, c'est la nécessité. Si une ville nous offre une système de santé avancée et accessible, il ne faut pas s'inquiéter quand on est malade. Et avec de bonne éducation, ça rassure la qualité de la prochaine generation. En plus, c'est très important d'avoir de rues, ponts bien constminés pour l'accessibilité.
Ensuite, je concern le carde de vie. Je pense que c'est très important d'avoir de l'air frais, beaucoup d'espaces vertes et un météo agréable pour pas seulement d'être en bonne santé mais aussi s'y profiler et s'amuser.
Enfin, ma dernière critère, c'est de pouvoir rester en contact avec les proches ! La meilleure ville, selon moi, c'est là où on peut trouver nos proches et on peut rester ensemble ! Le contact physique est meilleur que le concert en ligne.
Donc ma ville idéale, c'est où j'y peux trouver une petite maison ou un appartement au bord de la mer avec de l'air frais, de soleil brillant et de vent doux, entourné par beaucoup de l'herbe verte. Et c'est où on peut voir nos proches très souvent !
May 8, 2021
May 8, 2021
How I have learned English
Since I was very young I had always wanted to learn English, but I couldn't afford to study the language. Later on, when I reached the age of 20, I decided to start learning English on my own. It was the most important decision that I had ever made. When I started learning English on my own, I had learned it incorrectly, because I didn't know how to start. Then, after a lot of trial and error, I found some ways to learn English through self-study, and all of them are very useful in studying the language. And they are:
.1 Using ESL Podcasts:
Podcasts are one of the best tools to learn English, they have so many episodes that will teach you something new every day, and with them, you can improve your English listening skills in no time.
.2 Graded Readers:
Graded Readers books are the best choice for learning the language; because some English learners would read something difficult that is not suitable for their levels. There come Graded Readers Books, they will help you to expand your vocabulary and to enjoy reading due to their simple language. They are written in simplified language for ESL learners. I use them personally to improve my English.
.3 You have to have an English Environment:
Since I started learning English, I have changed everything that I use to English like my smartphone, laptop, and the people whom I follow on social media. Sometimes, I would rather listen or search about products or anything important in English than my native language.
.4 Writing And Speaking:
When I started learning English I had neglected to practice these skills. So I tried to improve them by speaking with other people on the Hallo app and writing about my experience in learning English or about myself.
Finally, learning languages is easier than ever before. I still use all that I have mentioned above, and I see progress in my English.
May 8, 2021
Journal
This evening, I watched a video on Douyin. The poster recalled his life when he was in high school. 12 students shared one room, no shower system, pouring themselves with cold water in the winter to save 3 yuan bathhouse fee, and so on. His experience reminded me of my life when I was in middle school. Our dormitory was a big room, and all my classmates slept there. There were no beds, only floor bunks. I still remember that there were two big holes in the northern wall of my dormitory. During the windy night, we could hear the wind whistle and we always unconsciously grabbed our quilt in case it was blown away by the strong winds. At least for me, I didn't have a pillow, and I just put two bricks under my head instead of that. Our school didn't have electricity, so we had to use a gas lamp to do our early self-studies. We also didn't have hot water in the morning. When I got up and washed my face, I just went down the river that surrounded my school and broke the ice with a hard brick to wash my face. So every time I go to my classroom to do my early self-study, my hair is always iced. We didn't have good food back then. All we ate for three meals a day was just buns made of sweet potato flour and the soup that was also made of sweet potato flour. The only big dish was pickles and I remember that a small piece of that cost 5 cents rmb, but I couldn't afford it. Although the living conditions were very bad at that time, my grades were very good because I wanted to get a decent job by studying hard. These are the overall situations when I was in middle school. Next I will share my elementary school life with you guys. One thing that I want to tell you early is that we made our stools and desks. Can you imagine what materials we use?
May 8, 2021
Le français
À part la France, le français se parle dans beaucoup de pays dans le continent africain: la Tunisie, le Cameroon, le Maroc, etc. Je dois avouer que je ne faisais pas vraiment attention à ces pays africains. Au Japon, quand on parle de l'Afrique, c'est toujours l'emsemble d'Afrique et pas les pays individus. Mais depuis que j'ai commencé à habiter ici en France, je me sens beaucoup proche à ces pays : les infos faire passer des nouvelles sur chaque pays quand il y a des incidents. Je reconnais mieux chaque pays qu'avant, et je me suis rendu compte que les pays s'différent profondément.
Pour la deuxième question, j'habite en France alors je vais parler d'un pays africain auquel je voudrais aller un jour, et c'est le Maroc. C'est déjà une destination populaire par les Japonais récemment en raison de leurs beaux paysages et de leurs ustensiles de ménages très mignons. Le tajine est aussi devenue populaire parmi les Japonaises. En plus, maintenant avec ma capacité au français qui s'est amélioré un peu, je crois que je puisse communiquer avec les marocains.
May 8, 2021
Sterne
Ich hatte ein spannendes Gespräch mit jemandem über Sternbilder und dachte, ich könnte heute ein bisschen über Sterne schreiben. Sterne sind riesige Plasmakugeln, die aus Nebel gebildet werden. Die Klassifizierung von Sterne basiert auf ihrer Temperatur und sieht wie folgt aus (in absteigender Folge): OBAFGKSM, eine Folge von Buchstaben, die Astronomen eine witzige Weise zu erinnern haben. Entgegen der landläufigen Meinung sind die wärmsten Sterne eigentlich die blauen, die auch die jüngsten sind und nicht die roten, die älter und kühler sind. Unsere Sonne ist ein Typ G Stern, was bedeutet, dass sie zwischen beiden Extremen liegt. Viele Sterne sind Teil der sogenannten Sternhaufen, wie die berühmten Hyaden und die schönen Plejaden, die seit der Antike bekannt waren.
May 8, 2021
De sju skalliga rikemännen
De säger att i den gamla goda tiden i khan Åsnaörons rike, det fanns sju skalliga rikemännen och en fattig man - Sigsegir. De sju rikemännen hatade den fattiga mannen. De kände sig förolämpade för att han hade tjockt hår medan deras huvuden var nakna och skinande som flodstenar. Men mest hatade de honom för att han hånade deras fånighet.
En gång när Sigesir var ute på bete med andra människors hästar, riksmännen utan att tänka på det för mycket, tände på hans hus.
May 8, 2021
Esercizio 18-3, la punteggiatura
Scrivi una frase che contiene:
1) due punti:
Il sistema funziona così: non premere "inizia" prima di "accende".
2) il punto interrogativo:
Non mi hai detto la verità?
3) il punto esclamativo:
Dimmi tutto quello che successo ora in quella stanza!
4) le virgolette:
Maria disse: "Quell'informazione deve rimanere un segreto per sempre".
5) i puntini di sospensione:
Luigi disse: "Non so tutto che accade in quel negozio dopo chiasura, c'è qualcosa altra..."
6) tre asterischi:
L'anello era la proprietà del misterioso Professore ***.
7) le parentesi:
La ragione per la sua rabbia (oltre di disposizione solito) era a causa delle azioni di Roberta.
8) Il trattino:
La corsa in bicicletta Milano-Sanremo corre quasi 300 chilometri.
May 8, 2021
到着
明日はパリに戻りますので、荷物を詰める必要がありました。彼氏と私は車を持っていないから、彼氏の両親が車で連れて行きます。毎回、不安になります。多い荷物を持っているし、彼氏のお父さんは自分で車の中に荷物を積み込みたいし、とても怖いお父さんだから私がミスしてしまう場合は、恥ずかしくなります。
ですが、数回に両親の家に行って一緒にパリに戻ったことがあります。毎回、大丈夫になりますので、心配過ぎない方がいいですね。パリに戻って、学校にも戻るのは悲しいです。両親の家は広くて、家族でボードゲームを楽しめて、一緒に食べるのは面白いです。すると、ここには習慣がありますよ！一方、アパートに住んでいると、二人でもさみしくなります。
やっぱり、休みは楽しいですよね。でも授業は一ヶ月だけが残りますよ！ 後で戻ると思うと嬉しくなります。そして、自分のアパートは自分のところだから、戻るといい感情も感じます。
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