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sivanc

Sept. 16, 2021

星期四的作业

今天老师让我们把12句话翻译到中文。目标之一是分别“以来”和“既然”的用法（在英文都可以说since）：

1：既然你知道他来不及，你不如约别的会？
2：我小的时候以来就一直喜欢听音乐。
3：既然他想上中国最好的大学，他这两年很用功。
4：小两口毕业以来就在不同的城市工作。
5：既然他生病了，他今天就没上学。
6：他两个星期前生病的时候以来，他依然没上学。
7：既然你生病了，你不如跟老师情个病假？
8：既然你天天都在那家饭馆吃饭，他们的菜一定很好吃。
9：既然他的钱不多，它不常常去饭馆吃饭。
10：既然她不喜欢吃意大利菜，我们就吃了日本菜。
11：既然她不喜欢吃意大利菜，我们应该去日本饭馆吃饭。
12：既然你对商业感这么多兴趣，你当初应该主修商科，不学英语文学。

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Ducky

Sept. 16, 2021

¿Hay algún momento del cual te hubiera gustado tener una foto?

The freedom to think anything

As the prompt does not specify it, I give the freedom to think anything. For example, I would like to have a photo of Christopher Columbus when he arrived to America. Or a photo of the Rome of Julius Cesar, or of Napoleon in Waterloo. In a family scope, I miss more photos of my with my father, in any moment, for example.

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ja_kr

Sept. 16, 2021

Robado

Mi primero día en Cali decidí explorar la ciudad solo. Tuve mi mochila, el celular, y unos audífonos. No recuerdo donde intentaba ir, pero usaba Google Maps en mi celular cuando realicé que estaba perdido. De repente me ocurrió que la calle no tuvo las personas, las tiendas, o las maquinas. Supe que tuve que dejar esa calle pronto, pero en lugar de dando la vuelta continué por la calle. No recuerdo que pensaba cuando un hombre apareció con una navaja grande y robó mi mochila, mi celular, y mis audífonos. Le ví como corrío con mis cosas. La calle era tranquila.

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remilien

Sept. 16, 2021

مقدمة

السلام عليكم

اسمي رودي. أنا فرسني الجنسية، هايتي الأصل. بدأت تعلم العربية قبل ما يربو على عشر سنوات حتى صرت معلم عربية للناطقين بغيرها. أود أن أطور مهارة الكتابة فهي أضعف المهارات لدي.

والسلام.

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heavensblade13

Sept. 16, 2021

鬱

今日は「鬱」の漢字を復習した。きちんと書くのは大変だ。ノートに書いたら多分ひらがなを使ってしまうと思う。綺麗な「鬱」を一列に収まる訳がなくて、収まってもひらがなに比べたら小さすぎて分かりにくい。漢字のせいで大概の言語より日本語を書くために電子機器は便利だと思う。

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acorngalaxy

Sept. 16, 2021

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O Edward Snowden (parte 1)

Para quem não o conhece, o Edward era um investigador que trabalhava na NSA, uma agencia estadunidense que monitora a atividade dos cidadãos, e soa o alarme se algo parece suspeito; por exemplo, se um homen realizar múltiplas transferências bancárias, ou se uma mulher professar sua paixão repentinamente por um grupo terrorista.

O que o Edward descobriu foi que, além do rastreio de atos criminosos, a NSA também estava usando seus recursos para espiar os estadunidenses. Não se pode desmentir que a maneira pela qual a organização governamental fazia a espionagem era bem maquinada; conduzia as operações através das câmaras afixadas aos computadores portáteis. Desta forma, não tinham a obrigação de comprar ou inventar câmaras que coubessem num furo num quarto.

Vou direito ao ponto. O Edward sabia que tinha de desmantelar esta picaretagem, já que infringia a constituição, assim como os princípios da democracia, sobre a qual se fundou o país. Este ultraje foi a seiva que o estimulou a inventar um plano ardiloso para enganar os diretores. Escondeu um microchip, que continha a evidência incriminatória, num cubo de Rubik, e assim saiu sem levantar suspeitas.

A desistência abrupta de uma profissão que pagava bem a ele constrangeu o Edward a procurar refúgio nos braços da Rússia; onde está radicado até hoje, ainda sendo um fugitivo nos olhos do gabinete presidencial estadunidense.

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raven15

Sept. 16, 2021

Colore preferito

Quando ero una ragazzina il mio colore preferito era il rosso. Quando ero al college, il viola è diventato il mio colore preferito. Poi ho avuto tre figli. Ora i miei colori preferiti sono il viola, il rosa, e il verde chiaro.

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raven15

Sept. 16, 2021

Color Favorito

Cuando era una niña pequeña mi color favorito era el rojo. Cuando estaba en la universidad, el morado se convirtió en mi color favorito. Luego tuve tres hijos. Ahora mis colors favoritos son el morado, el rosado y el verde claro.

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destaq

Sept. 16, 2021

认真思考，轻松生活

没有人该当工作或者学习的奴隶。我们不该被动，被条件影响得很，总是忙碌。其实，经常反省，思考等更好。多我来说，每个人应该一年十来次安静下来，深深的思考。这么做的话，至于效率，一定会提高的。再说，你会回复灵魂的活力并找到了个性或者行为的问题。

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kiwy

Sept. 16, 2021

A Bad Evening

I had class tonight. When I arrived at the first floor, I was stopped by the Moral Education officer. He told me that some of my students played poker at dusk. Their rule was that every loser need to take off a piece of clothes. They were so noisy that the other students were disturbed.
I went to classroom and asked the players stand up. To my surprise, eight students stood up, five boys and three girls. The monitor and deputy monitor included. It wasn't the first time that the deputy monitor violated the rules. He smokes, carries mobile phone to school which is banned by school, talking at class which interrupts teaching. How I wish he would be asked for staying home for a few days.
I realise that I've made such a big mistake to be a middle school teacher. But I can't quit right now. I won't regret anything. What I should do is try my best to be a good teacher.
However, I will leave this ugly place.

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rachelbr

Sept. 16, 2021

Mi postre favorito

Me encanta los postres, no puede ir mal con ellos. Pero, los brownies son mis favoritos. Me encanta la textura de los brownies y estoy obsesionada con el chocolate. Especialmente me encantan los brownies con helado de vainilla. Sin helado, los brownies pueden ser demasiado pesados. El helado de vainilla es ligero y frío, el complemento perfecto al calor y la riqueza de los brownies.

dessert

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rachelbr

Sept. 16, 2021

Mi postre favorito

favouritemydessert

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leeekayi

Sept. 16, 2021

8. Les fruits et légumes non-saisonnières Faisons un tour a

Faisons un tour au supermarché, on peut trouver
facilement des truies de toutes les saisons, comme les fraises, les poires et les pastèque en même saison. Impressionant, non ? Avec l'avancement des transports, on peut goûter tout ce qu'on veut à n'importe saison. Mais est-ce que c'est bon pour l'environnement, notre plaisir et notre santé ?

Tout d'abord, ces légumes et furies ne goûtent pas si bien à rapport au temps qu'ils ont en saison, par exemple, la meilleure saison pour goûter les fraises, c'est le printemps, surtout en mois de février à mars. On peut les trouver partout en février et mars, ce qui viennent du Japon, de la Corée goûtent très bien. Elles sont sucrées, juteuses et portent un arôme spéciaux. Mais quand je les ai goûtées le samine dernière, c 'étais vraiment acides, parfait pour équilibrer le sucré du gateau ! Mais sûrement pas pour manger seule. La raison, c'est que ces légumes ou finies ne grandissent pas dans le meilleur environnement que la nature a désigné. Donc, ils manquent de bon savour.

En plus, ces légumes et fruits coûtent cher. Le transport de ces produits non sentent a un prix qui est ajouté dans le prix de consummatur mais aussi contribue au réchauffement de la planète et à la pollution d'air. Nous savons bien que l'utilisation de l'énergie fossile émette beaucoup de gaz à effet de serre, notamment le CO2. En outre, quand on grandi des légumes qui n’est pas en saison, il faut centaines d'énergie pour la serre. De plus, on utilise plus de compost chimique pour compenser la déficience de nutrient de sol non-saisonaire. Et le compose Chemique émette de NO2 qui est aussi un gaz à effet de serre.

Au final, un petit point, c'est que ces légumes et fuies ne nous donner de plaisir, de torture d'attente de la saison avec ses produits !

En conclusion, pourquoi pas goûter seulement des produies en saison pour un meilleur goût, environ mat et la santé ? la nature est bien faite pour tous

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alisson

Sept. 16, 2021

Ein Traum

Ich hatte vor kurzem einen seltsamen Traum. Es gab Situationen, die sich in diesem Traum wiederholten, aber mit verschiedenen Menschen. Es war die genaue Situation, aber die beteiligten Personen würden sich ändern. Ich habe es sehr seltsam gefunden. Im Traum erinnere ich mich daran, dass ich dachte, das hätte eine tiefere Bedeutung und ich sollte es nicht vergessen. Im nächsten Teil des Traums wurde ich dann gerufen, um eine Präsentation zu halten. Das ist ja ein sehr übliches Thema in meinen Träumen. Ich ging in den Präsentationsraum und bemerkte, dass er riesig war. Wie eines dieser kreisförmigen Amphitheater der Antike, mit unzähligen Reihen. Ich versuchte, ruhig zu bleiben, aber tief im Inneren war ich nervös, weil ich nichts vorbereitet hatte. Ich wusste, dass ich etwas improvisieren musste.

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SummerTeaWater

Sept. 16, 2021

Healthy Food

Personally, I try to eat healthy every day.

First of all, I eat vegetables as much as I can.
When I was young, I liked to eat meat because it was delicious and made me stronger.
But now, it gives me more heavier and my stomach is not good enough to digest it.
That’s why I eat vegetables.

Next, I drink a lot of tea.
Pure water is not tasty, so I usually steep tea when I drink.
Tea helps my skin smoother, clean my stomach and relieve my stress.
Because of any toxic ingredients and many good ones,

Like this, I eat healthy food for my body.

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mellon

Sept. 16, 2021

J'aime faire du vélo...mais

C'est froid aujourd'hui. C'est environ +8 degrés et le vent est trop fort. Je suis triste car j'ai voulu faire du vélo me velo de montagne dans la park. Cet park est trop loin, je gelerai sur la route. Si, j'ai pencé que peut-être je dois aller a la piscine.

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nambatsuyoshi

Sept. 16, 2021

September 16th, 2021

Could you teach me about similar words? I usually use a word, motorcycle. Japanese people say motorcycle bike. However, I think bike often means bicycle in English. There is an another word, motorbike. Which word is the most appropriate? Or is there another word?

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JakobT

Sept. 16, 2021

Was schönes

Hier kommt die erste Übersetzung:

"Trinke Tee dass du niemals probieren hast, lese einmal mehr dein Lieblingsbuch, steh auf um der Sonnenaufgang zu sehen, schreib ein Brief, hör zu Vögel, strick ein schlehtes Pullover, backe ein hässliche Kuchen, sing aus vollem Leib, springe wahnsinnig zu Musik. Fühle, richtig fühle das Leben ohne Einschränkungen, egal wie groß." ~

Bitte korrigieren sie mich 😊

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ponta

Sept. 16, 2021

Spider Crane

A spider crane is heavy equipment and I like its appearance. The characteristic part is the outrigger which looks like a spider's arm. The crane also resembles a crab so it is called "Crab crane" in Japan. I think it looks like Tachikoma, a kind of multi-legged tank in "ghost in the Shell." In fact, the crane can't move using the arms, because they only support the body.
When the crane moves by the crawlers, the outrigger is folded and the body is compact. Therefore, it can be used in narrow places and indoors. It's often used for installations of tombstones at cemeteries and installations of machinery in factories.

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lcy5124

Sept. 16, 2021

Dia dezasseis de setembro

Nós nos deslocamos ao Porto depois.
O tempo do Porto durante a nossa viagem foi bom.
Esteve frio, mas fez sol.
Nós mesmo comemos o gelado!
Quando nós comíamos o gelado, nós ficavamos na praia e divertivamos-nos o sol.
Em Porto há muitas igrejas com azulejos bonitas.
Eu gosto de azuejos azuis.
Nós visitamos Majestic Café.
Ele é historico e lindo, e muitos visitantes visitam lá.
Nós visitamos a Livraria Lello também.
Diz-se que a livraria foi a musa de Harry Potter.
Na livraria foi decorada com coisas mágicas.
Nós compramos vinhos no Porto.
O sabor de vinho Porto é bom.
Eu nunca posso esquecer o gosto!
Eu me-tomava o vinho sozinho durante tempo curto.

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Jan

Sept. 16, 2021

So viel Arbeit

Schule ist ok.
Am Wochenende mache ich immer nichts. Ich spiele kein sport. Ich habe kein hobby.
Schule ist mein wochenende.
Einfact zu viel Arbeit.
Jetzt, ich Vielleicht habe zu tun Arbeit im Urlaub.

jemand bringt mir bitte deutsche Grammatik und Sprachstruktur bei (dieser Teil wurde mit Google Translate geschrieben)

grammarhelpschoolweekendhilfemitdeutch

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felixir

Sept. 16, 2021

수요일의 문법 :)

1. 도와 주세요! 아기가 왜 우는지 몰라요!

2. 선생님, 질문을 있어요. 숙제를 어떻게 하는지 모르겠어요.

3. 채영이는 왜 화 가는지 모르겠어요.

4. 우와, 저 차가 엄청 멋있어요. 저 차를 주인인지 아세요?

5. 내일 민아 씨가 바쁠 건지 말해 주세요.

6. 귀여운 강아지가 뛰는 것을 봤어요.

7. 재현이는 요리한 음식이 맛있어요.

8. 지수가 쓴 책이 진짜 재미있어요.

9. 남자가 노래방에서 부르는 것을 들었어요.

10. 오늘 차 사고는 나는 것을 봤어요.

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yumi

Sept. 16, 2021

decision

I want to speak English.Because my son is attending international nursery school.
So I decided to study English and I write diary everyday.

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Jack

Sept. 16, 2021

Journal

I remember I heard you speak Chinese. Although there are only one or two sentences, I am sure you speak very well.
I don't want to go to restaurants to eat, because they always put too much seasoning, and lose the original taste of the food.
I am sure I can't go aboard until I retire, unless I have immediate family members overseas because our country has some special regulations for civil servants.
If I had the opportunity to go to Canada, my first choice would be the town you live in or where you grew up, because I am curious, and the pictures you sent me are also beautiful.
Your video reminds me of when I was a kid. Every late autumn we would see groups of geese flying southward. They flew very high, and were always in a herringbone shape. When we saw the northern geese flying south, we knew the weather was getting colder and winter was coming.
I am very glad to read these lyrics for you, even though I am not a professional reciter. You know, a good lyrics is a poem, it can arouse people's infinite resonance.

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michael_sun

Sept. 16, 2021

042 What to Eat

042 What to Eat
Tom would like a light snack, but Lisa preferred a square meal. She complained that she was dying of hunger. Tom suggested they find a cafe and have a quick snack, but Lisa didn’t feel like a cafe, she wanted a slap-up meal. She had a healthy appetite and just had a hearty breakfast as well as some crisps. Tom was thirty, and all he wanted was a refreshing drink. Lisa stopped talking and began to eat her crisps. She was looking at a Mexican restaurant. Mexican cuisine was always her favorite and often reasonably priced. She determined her mind wand walked into it.

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