Sept. 16, 2021
A Bad Evening
I had class tonight. When I arrived at the first floor, I was stopped by the Moral Education officer. He told me that some of my students played poker at dusk. Their rule was that every loser need to take off a piece of clothes. They were so noisy that the other students were disturbed.
I went to classroom and asked the players stand up. To my surprise, eight students stood up, five boys and three girls. The monitor and deputy monitor included. It wasn't the first time that the deputy monitor violated the rules. He smokes, carries mobile phone to school which is banned by school, talking at class which interrupts teaching. How I wish he would be asked for staying home for a few days.
I realise that I've made such a big mistake to be a middle school teacher. But I can't quit right now. I won't regret anything. What I should do is try my best to be a good teacher.
However, I will leave this ugly place.
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A Bad Evening
I had class tonight.
When I arrived at the first floor, I was stopped by the Moral Education officer. When I arrived at the first floor, I was stopped by the Moral Education officer.
Not sure what a Moral Education officer is. Like a counselor maybe?
Their rules wasere that every losertime someone loses, they need to take off a piece of clothesing.
The rules were that every time someone loses, they need to take off a piece of clothing.
You can also just say "strip poker" in the last sentence, there's a word for this type of game.
They were so noisy that the other students were disturbed.
I went to the classroom and asked the players stand up. I went to the classroom and asked the players stand up.
To my surprise, eight students stood up, five boys and three girls.
T, the monitor and deputy monitor included.
, the monitor and deputy monitor included.
connect to prev sentence.
It wasn't the first time that the deputy monitor had violated the rules. It wasn't the first time that the deputy monitor had violated the rules.
He smokes, carries his mobile phone ato school whiceven though it's banned by school, talking at, and talks a lot in class, which interrupts teachingclass.
He smokes, carries his mobile phone at school even though it's banned, and talks a lot in class, which interrupts class.
How I wish he would be asked for staying homesuspended for a few days.
How I wish he would be suspended for a few days.
I realise that I've made such a big mistake to be a middle school teacher.
But I can't quit right now.
I won't regret anything.
What I should do is try my best to be a good teacher.
However, I will eventually leave this uglyterrible place.
However, I will eventually leave this terrible place.
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I had class tonight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I arrived at the first floor, I was stopped by the Moral Education officer. When I arrived at the first floor, I was stopped by the Moral Education officer. When I arrived at the first floor, I was stopped by the Moral Education officer. Not sure what a Moral Education officer is. Like a counselor maybe? |
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He told me that some of my students played poker at dusk. |
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Their rule was that every loser need to take off a piece of clothes.
The You can also just say "strip poker" in the last sentence, there's a word for this type of game. |
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They were so noisy that the other students were disturbed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went to classroom and asked the players stand up. I went to the classroom and asked the players stand up. I went to the classroom and asked the players stand up. |
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To my surprise, eight students stood up, five boys and three girls. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The monitor and deputy monitor included.
connect to prev sentence. |
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It wasn't the first time that the deputy monitor violated the rules. It wasn't the first time that the deputy monitor had violated the rules. It wasn't the first time that the deputy monitor had violated the rules. |
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He smokes, carries mobile phone to school which is banned by school, talking at class which interrupts teaching.
He smokes, carries his mobile phone at |
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How I wish he would be asked for staying home for a few days.
How I wish he would be |
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I realise that I've made such a big mistake to be a middle school teacher. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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