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ワクチンの注射を義務付けられるべき？
時として、政府は市民の自由より市民の安全のほうが大切であることを決める。例えば、たくさんの国ではシートベルトを締めないのは法律に反することや、日本のメタボ法律などだ。つまり、自分の健康を害する行動をしてはいけないということだ。だから、コロナのワクチンも同じように、注射を受けないと病気になる可能性があるので、義務つけられるべきだというポイントがある。
一方、私にとって市民の自由は大切なものだ。もし政府は、みんな毎日３０分運動をしなくてはならない法律を作ったら、それはおかしいと思う。確かに、毎日運動をしたら、それは健康にいいことだが、政府は市民がどう生きるかを選ぶ権利がない。難しい問題だが、市民の自由を守るため、ワクチンの注射を義務付けられないほうがいいかもしれない。
Sept. 23, 2021
A Big Surprise
OK, my students keep surprising me forever. In the morning, I was told by a teacher in charge of class 2, whose classroom was next to mine, some of my students drank with hers in the classroom last night. A teacher of grade 7 passed by and saw the incident, she said that she smelled the smoke smell as well.
I started to ask my students one by one. The first one was the deputy monitor. He said that he wasn't dare to tell the truth, because he was afraid of being revenged. He asked me to talk with the monitor, she would know. Then I asked the girl, she consisted that she knew nothing. The third one I talked with was a boy in Class 2, who was accusing of drinking. He also was the guy, whose father accused one of my students of threatening his son, but finally was proved that it was his fault. I asked him to tell me the details for about 5 minutes, but he said nothing. Then I asked a girl Xue, who joined the strip poker, she said she didn't take part in.
A few minutes later, a boy told me that he would tell some details. The monitor and another girl Ling, who also joined the strip poker, were drunk. Both of them had a red face and crying. He didn't sure that whether Xue drank or not, but she was very mad. There were girls smoking as well, but he couldn't sure who they were. Very soon, the boy told me that he regreted to tell me the whole thing, because he was threatened. I told him to ask help from me if anyone hit him or did something else to revenge.
The monitor's father used to be a student of my father. He always sends gifts to my father in many important festival for a long time. If he isn't at home, his parents will do the thing for him. In some case, my family and his family are quite close. He is about 40 years old, but had a heart operation two years ago. His son quitted from middle school two years ago at the age of about 15. It is illegal to quit the 9-year compulsory education, but the enforcement of law isn't strict.
In the first day of this term, I asked the monitor about her brother's situation. He had changed a lot of jobs and never could keep a job for a long time. I told her that she should study hard because of her family condition. Well, it seemed that she never heard a word.
I talked to her again. I told her that beconcerned about her father's health, I hadn't told him anything. If she violates the ruled the third time, I would invite her father to talk with the chief.
I knew the two girls smoked by accident tonight. So I went to the security room with the teacher of Class two to check the monitoring. The two girls smoked eventually. But the camera near my class was out of work, so I couldn't get the evidence of their drinking.
I would not say anything about the monitoring to my students. I didn't want to waste much time on them, they didn't deserve it. If one of them violates any rules, I will show the evidence and ask the parents to take them home for a big break.
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Persönliche Kontakte und Internet
ich finde die Menschen heute haben keine Zeit für treffen anderen Menschen. Internet ist sehr wichtig diese Zeit und für die Zukunft, aber die Leuten benutzt ihm für alles das sie brauchen, und bleiben nur zu Hause der ganze Tag ohne draußen gehen.
Ich denke das ist gut, weil Internet macht alles einfach mit der Computer oder das Handy, aber man soll manchmal Sport mit seinem Freunden machen, um gesund zu bleiben und nicht alles machen zu Hause, weil das Stress machen kann.
Sept. 23, 2021
My Hometown
My hometown is a small village far away from Seoul.
So there are lots of good places where many people don’t know and do ‘t visit.
First, there are nice place where a river flows around there.
The place seems like an island but one direction still connects with main land.
Because of this scene, people visit there and take pictures.
Next, there are many small valleys where children can swim.
The water is also clear, so we can see the bottom of the river.
So my family visits more than 4 times a year.
Because of these reasons, I like traveling to my home.
Whenever I have a chance, I go there with my family.
Sept. 23, 2021
Steigende Temperaturen
Es ist jetzt Frühling, aber es ist sehr heiß, mit Temperaturen um die 30 Grad Celsius. Vorher war es nicht so heiß, aber jetzt ist es so. Die Auswirkungen des Klimawandels werden immer deutlicher. Ich lese in den Nachrichten von einer Stadt in Pakistan mit Temperaturen über 50 Grad Celsius. Wie schaffen sie es überhaupt zu leben? Im Vergleich zu hier wirken 30 Grad gar nicht so heiß.
Sept. 23, 2021
「人は外見よりも中身が大事である」「外見が大事である」どちらに賛成か。
「外見が大事である」という意見に賛成です。なぜなら、今の社会は誰でも外見が重視していますから。例えば、初めて相手に会うとき、綺麗な外見がある人なら、良い印象を与えています。それから、二人の働きの成り行きはもっと簡単になります。逆に、初めて相手に悪い印象を与えていたら、働きの成り行きが大変になります。また、ある人は外見があれば、仕事に真面目で、慎重な人という傾向があります。
「人は外見よりも中身が大事である」という意見も否定できません。外見があるのに、仕事でよく働くことができないと、何にもならなりません。しかし、外見を大切にする現在の社会、外見を無視するべきではありません。それだけではなく、外見があれば、もっと自信を持つのに役に立ちます。それで、仕事をするとき、成功しやすくなるだと思います。
私は「外見が大事である」という意見に賛成です。
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Le chemin
Hier j'ai fait du vélo pour trois heures. J'ai découvert plusieures chemins étroit intéressants dans le parc. L'un d'eux m'a mené à un bel endroit près de la rivière. Le rivage était couvert d'herbe verte et douce. Quelques bateaux étaient sur le côte gauche. De l'autre côté de la rivière était une belle forêt, pleine de jaunes, vertes et rouges couleurs. Il a fait froid mais j'ai resté la et apprécie la vue.
Sept. 23, 2021
Un fragmento
"Soy el hombre que vive en la casa. Soy un prisonero en una jaula de madera. Con la lluvia que me guarde, me burla y me atormenta. No sé por qué estoy aquí. No puedo ver nada excepto el libro en el suelo y la lluvia desde la ventana y no puedo sentir nada aparte del dolor, dolor, dolor. No veo John planeando matándome. O el policía intendo salvarme. Solamente oigo a alguien golpeando la pared con furia. Lo que interpreté como la furia ... y ahora es conocido como un intento de comunicación. Soy el cuerpo que ves temblando en la cama de dolor, agonía y pena. No sé cuando moriré pero sé que pasará pronto." ~ E. Moran
Un fragmento lúgubre escrita (en inglés) por una compañera de estudios en Creative Writing :)
Sept. 23, 2021
Un article de journaux
Hier j'ai commencé à lire un article de journaux. C'était à propos de la montée d'étudiants vont à l'université. L'article a parlé à propos de comment après un an et demi de cours sur écran, environ 1,7 million d'étudiants regagnent à classe dans personne. Il a mentionné aussi que les étudiants retourneraient dans un contexte de sous-financements et que le nombre d'enseignement-chercheurs ont diminué dans les dernières dix années. Les deux l'étudiants et l'enseignements qui interviewaient pour l'article étaient heureux de revenir à les campus. Le taux de vaccination pour l'étudiants premiere dose de vaccin étaient environ 86%.
Pendant que tout le monde est heureux d’être de retour sur le campus, les problèmes avec sous-financement et surpopulation continueraient seulement à moins que des changements sérieux sont faire.
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
As Lambretas Eléctricas
Em Taiwan, quase todas pessoas podem andar as lambretas.
Nós andamos lambretas de comutar.
Normalmente, as lambretas tomam gasolina.
Nos últimos anos, as lambretas eléctricas mostram-se.
Muitas pessoas escolheram a marca, Gogoro.
As lambretas usam baterias em vez de carregarando.
Os usuários têm de ir ao ponto em troca das baterias.
Além disso, Gogoro não tem da chave pelo começo.
Ele usa o seu smartphone com a aplicação de Gogoro.
Ou você pode usar a cartão pelo começo.
As lambretas eléctricas não são muitas barulhas.
Às vezes, eu estive assustado de Gogoro.
Mas ele tem a desvantagem grande.
Ele é demais caro.
Ele custo aproximadamente USD 2,800, e custa USD 36 cadas meses pela electricidade.
Ele é mais caro do que as lambretas tradicionais.
Se calhar, Gogoro gastou dinheiros pelo este vídeo 😂
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQ4ppB7EYSM
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
My husband is cooking Spaghetti
Dear man! Do you not know how to cook spaghetti?
Do you need the help of an experienced cook?
I will help you:
Start with a very large pot of water-- about six liters per 1 kg of pasta.
Add salt and the pasta, and let it cook.
Try the pasta after a few minutes to see if it is soft and elastic.
Drain the pasta and it is ready to eat.
You can also pour some sauce over the pasta.
Sept. 23, 2021
My country
I'm from Austria and there are various stereotypes for the Austrian, many of which you might know. Some of these perceptions are quite harmless really: it's thought that Austrian people eat Wiener Schnitzel every week, and that we are quite snobby about Grinzing
(in the nineteenth district of Vienna) which is the only area in Austria that produces a special wine.
Or: It seems as if Saint Stephen's church is the symbol of Vienna to a lot of people!
Yes, it could be said that we do have high standards when it comes to food and drink ,after all Austrian cuisine is, as far as I'm concerned, the best in the world!
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Sept. 23, 2021
Journal
There are many festivals in the world, but I am only familiar with Chinese festivals because I am a Chinese person. As for foreign festivals, I only know of Thanksgiving, Christmas and Valentine's Day, but I don't know them exactly. Speaking of which festival is my favorite, I can't answer this question because you can say either I like them all or I don't. If I had to choose one, it would be the Chinese New Year. Why? Because it's the biggest festival in our country: during the Chinese New Year, there are many festival activities, many people involved. As a Chinese person, you may not know other Chinese festivals, but you must know this one, even overseas Chinese, they celebrate it every year. The deep impression that the Chinese New Year left me was when I was a child. At that time, all of our villagers were really poor. We didn't have enough food or clothes. Only when the Chinese New Year comes, can we eat a bit better food and have a chance to wear a piece of new clothes. So celebrating the Chinese New Year was our biggest and happiest thing. When the New Years were approaching, our family would prepare some New Year's stuff and make steamed buns with wheat flour (we weren't able to eat it unless at this festival), dumplings, buy some meat, couplets, candles and firecrackers. On New Years' Eve, we stayed late until 0 o'clock then set off firecrackers and fireworks. The exciting thing for kids was picking and collecting those unexploded firecrackers, though it's very dangerous. You know, life then was really boring, no toys, no fun, so even dangerous activities could make us happy. Of course, every year there will be a few kids who have damaged their hands and fingers. For some energetic kids, they would stay up a whole night playing cards or something like that. The next morning, people were supposed to get up early because it means that you would get as much fortune as you get early. Then the same root families would gather and go to their ancestors' graves in the fields to pay them homage by burning 冥币 (how to say it in English? ) And setting off firecrackers. Afterwards, they would go back to their villages and go door to door to pay New Year's greetings to their elders. Then they went back to their own house to enjoy their new year with being fully relaxed and doing nothing. From the next day, people would start to visit relatives until the fifteenth of the first lunar month. So it's very easy to see some drunk people lying on the road side or the fields with a fallen bicycle next to them. You know what? Visiting relatives, they would be treated with meat and Chinese spirits. Because they didn't have the chance to eat and drink them on regular days, they couldn't control themselves eating more and drinking more. After enjoying the meal and alcohol, on the way back home, they would fall down from their bicycles because they were drunk. Of course, every year, some of those drunk people would lose their lives because they drank too much alcohol.
Sept. 23, 2021
049 Pregnant with Triplets
049 Pregnant with Triplets
Mike's wife was pregnant with triplets. This day was mike's birthday and while they were celebrating it，his wife, Rebecca's water broke. They hurried to the hospital, but unfortunately their doctor’s appendix burst open. A new doctor who was quite senior and old came to them. Although he was old, he had lots of experience and he was an excellent doctor. He informed them the bad positioning of one of the baby. However, Mike refuse to talk about it. He insisted that they would walk out of the hospital with his healthy wife and his big three babies. Rebecca went into the surgeon room. When the doctor walked out of the room, he told Mike that Rebecca was fine. Her vitals were good and she just needed sleep. He said that he was sorry that Mike lost the third baby. His umbilical cord was cutting off his oxygen. He was stillborn.
Sept. 22, 2021
Essay about traffict
Good morning folks, I am new in this community, could you please help me with the following essay? Thank you in advance
Car accidents are very common in our society, and a lot of solutions and opinions about that field are on the table. To Illustrate this point, we will talk about the state of these essay, where two examples have been compared: the first one talk about Prunty County, where the solution for ameliorate the highway safety consist in lowered the speed limits from 55 to 45 miles per hour. On the other hand, we have Butler County which bet for improving their road infrastructure. Indeed, the second case had better results and I will elucidate the reasons in the following pragraphs.
First of all, the attempt of decrease traffic accidents of Prunty County has not been success, because they only give an order, but they did not attack the core point of car accidents. To illustrate this point, we realize that not all the people respect the speed limits and that the installation of cameras and instruments results expensive sometimes. However, these accidents could decrease if the road and highways are in a good state and present adequate signage, also cars will not result so damaged due to bad state of roads, that situation will help to driver to preserve their vehicles in a better way.
The case of Butler County reflex the idea of the invest things such resurfacing rough highways or improving visibility at dangerous intersections could give us better results instead new regulations of speed limits. Notwithstanding, these infrastructure changes demands a lot of investment by local government and in some cases that cannot be possible in poor counties. So, in this case, the investment could be made it in the school, a place where children could have been made aware about the importance of driving and respecting the transit regulations, that could be a good point to decrease car accidents in many towns.
Likewise, The government should help to the people with not big taxes to acquire a new car, because these car implements new technologies like blind spot sensor, lane assitant or GPS, these new cars could help to prevent more accidents and they could pollute less than older vehicles. Obviously that we do not know the difference in the age of automotive fleet between Prunty and Bubler county, but recent studies has demonstrated that cars with cutting-edge technology cause less accidents.
Sept. 22, 2021
Was für ein Tag!
Hallo Leute. Da ist mein erstes Einträge auf dieses Website, also sei nett bitte haha.
Heute, habe ich ein Präsentation für mein Arbeit gemacht. Es war so stressig, vor allem halt vor die Anruf auf Microsoft Teams. Ich weiß nicht wieso bin ich immer so nervöse vor ein Präsentation beworben, aber glaube ich dass das ist ein Teil von ein Menschen in diese moderne Welt sein. Als immer, die Präsentation geht gut und glatt, und ich war stolz über mein Leistung. Aber die großer Gefühl war Erleichterung. Ich bin schon sehr glücklich, dass ich haben es geschafft! Jetzt kann ich die Reste meine Woche genießen.
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
Reseña de película: "Barry Lyndon" (parte 1)
Recientemente vi una película llamada "Barry Lyndon", por el director Stanley Kubrick. Kubrick es un director muy famoso en los Estados Unidos, y he visto una de sus otras películas, "2001: A Space Odyssey", pero no me gustó. Pensé que esa película fue demasiada larga y muy aburrida. Pero me disfrutó más "Barry Lyndon", que es también una película muy larga: corre tres horas.
Tomando lugar en medio del siglo 18, La película empieza con una introducción del protagonista, Redmond Barry, un joven irlandés cuyo padre fue matado en un duelo. Vive con su madre en Irlanda rural, y Redmond se enamora con su prima Nora (un aspecto de la historia muy incomodo...). Un día, un batallón del ejercito ingles (recuerda que en esta era, Inglaterra ocupaba y colonizaba la isla de Irlanda) llega al pueblo, y tienen una danza, en cual Nora baila con un oficial del ejercito, John Quin. Después, Nora dice a Redmond que nada pasó entre ella y John, pero luego John pide que Nora se case con él. Redmond, lleno de celos y enfadado, le reta a un duelo a John. En el duelo, Redmond dispara a John y John se cae, aparentemente herido mortalmente. Redmond decide huir a Dublin para evitar la policía, tomando solo un caballo y un saco de monedas. En el camino, se encuentra un par de ladrones que roba a él de su caballo y todo su dinero. Ahora a pie, Redmond logra alcanzar el pueblo próximo, donde hay personas que están reclutando para el ejercito ingles. Ya que es su única opción, Redmond se une.
Sept. 22, 2021
L'histoire des syndicats
Aujourd'hui j'ai terminé ma lecture d'un livre sur les syndicats. Au Japon, nous souffrons en ce moment une stagnation de salaire, et l'auteur dit que ce phenomène s'explique par le manque des vrais syndicats au Japon.
En Europe, chaque ouvrier appartient à un syndicat industriel, alors qu'au Japon, la plupart des sociétés ont leurs propres syndicats, c'est-à-dire que les employés n'ont pas vraiment le pouvoir de négocier. Ce système a bien marché au cours de la périod de la grande croissance économique du Japon, qui a brusquement terminé lors de « la rupture de la bulle » qui s'est produit au début des années 90. Aujourd'hui, sans l'espoire qu'on avait auparavant, on a les mêmes conditions en matière de syndicats, qui n'aide pas du tout à abattre cette situation.
En plus, aux alentours de 2000, une loi sur les employés intérimaire a été promulgée, ce qui a crée la concurrence dans le marché des actifs, entraînant la baisse de salaire pour beaucoup de personnes. Aujourd'hui, 40 % des Japonais environs sont des employés intérimaires, et la différence entre les riches et les pauvres se creuse de plus en plus chaque jour.
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