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Kaj

March 6, 2022

제 친구들

1. 제 친구는 키안이고, 제 형입니다. 키안은 호주 사람입니. 키안은 그곳의 대학생입니다, 전공 컴퓨터 공학입니다.

2. 제 친구 이름은 세바스티안습니다고 미국 사람입니다. 세바스티안은 아티스틉니다, 대학생이 아닙니다.

3. 제 친구는 요아킴이고, 스웨덴 사람입니다. 요아킴은 고등학생입니다, 대학생이 아닙니다.

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leeekayi

March 6, 2022

6 mars 2022 - L'âge adulte

À Hong Kong, l'âge adulte legal est 18 ans. Depuis cet âge, on est responsible de toutes les actions qu'on fait et donc on reçoit des punitions légales si on commis une crime. De plus, on n'est plus protégé par la société et donc on peut boire de l'alcohol, regarder des films adultes et jouer aux jeu de l'argent. Les deux dernières choses ne m'intéressent pas. Mais, boire de l'alcohol, pour moi, c'est le symbole d'être adulte. Cependant, pendant le jour de mon anniversaire de 18 ans, je n'ai bu rien, parce que je suis allée dans le Parc de thème seule et j'étais assez épuisée quand je suis rentrée chez moi.

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aulne

March 6, 2022

El lago se helaba

El año pasado el lago se helaba. Eso pasa rara vez aquí. Además había nevado que es igualemente insólito. Pues todo el mundo quería caminar o patinar sobre el hielo. El lago estaba muy lleno y como un paraíso invernal. Al mismo tiempo, me sentí un poco incómodo por que estaba durante el confinamiento y multitudes eran prohibidas.

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SummerTeaWater

March 6, 2022

Buy some teas

I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn't possible because of COVID-19.

This year, I decide to buy my favorite teas online.

First, I like drinking Korean traditional tea, which looks like a cookie.

It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pure water all day long.

Next, I select some Pu'er tea at a special store.

There is a favorite influencer in Pu'er tea world, and I have followed him for 3 years.

I haven't bought his tea, but many people recommended to buy it.

Last one, I order some black tea at Fortnum & Mason.

I like ceylon tea of the brand and I order two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

Maybe, I will get them next week, and I am able to enjoy them with my family.

I hope the time will come soon.

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davidcfrank

March 6, 2022

El ITV

El miércoles por la mañana fui al Centro de Inspección para tener una Inspección Técnica de Vehículos en mí coche. La hora de la inspección era 0708. A mi esta hora parecía un poco rara. Vivía en Andalucía casi cinco años, y aunque citas nunca se hacen a la hora en punto, ni en la media o cuarto hora, jamás tenía una cita en la hora exactamente!
Afortunadamente, el tecnico hablaba inglés, y me dijo que si quería, puede hablar en mi idioma. Yo estaba de aquerdo, porque a mi parece que el quería practicar ingles

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yuraaa_

March 6, 2022

중고품 거래

경제적인 형편이 나빠지는 것과 물가가 점차 올라감으로서 비싼 물품을 구입하기 어려워졌다. 이미 부족한 돈을 많이 들여야 하기 때문이다. 따라서 중고 물품 거래를 하는 식으로 소비하는 사람이 많아졌다. 똑같은 물품을 원 가격보다 훨씬 싸게 살 수 있는 등의 중고 물품 거래의 장점 중에 하나이다. 또, 품질 좋은 브랜드 제품이 비싸세 팔리기 때문에 어떤 사람에게 살면서 사기 힘든 일일 수도 있다. 사람이 갖고 싶은 어떤 상품이든 싸게 구입할 수 있게 해주는 중고 물품 거래의 장점으로 볼 수 있다. 그렇지만, 장점이 있는 것처럼 문제 점도 당연히 있다. 사기를 당하거나 예상과 다른 물품을 받게 되는 경우가 비일비재다. 특히, 중고 가전제품을 살 때 며칠 이용했다가 고장이 나는 경우가 많다. 그래서 중고품 거래를 할 때 주의하는 것이 좋다. 또, 온라인으로 사기를 치는 사람들을 막도록 법적으로 규정이 생겨야 하고, 소비자도 믿음직스러운 웹사이트만 활용해야 한다. 그래야만 안전한 중고품 거래가 이루어진다. 뿐만 아니라, 똑같은 웹사이트 활용한 경험ㅇ, 있는 사람의 후기와 평가를 먼저 확인하는 것이 중요하다. 사기를 당하지 않은 데 도움이 되기도 하기 때문이다. 물품을 싸게 구입하는 것도 좋지만, 주의해서 거래를 하지 않다면 오히려 돈을 낭비하게 된다. 그러니 중고품 거래를 할 때 조심스러운 자세를 역시 취할 필요가

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haveagoodtime

March 6, 2022

登校

家から駅に行きます.そこから電車で他の都会に乗ります. 遂に地下鉄で高等専門学校に乗ります.

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prisci

March 6, 2022

polly and the cow

Polly live with her family of a farm .They are three generation in her family. Every morning she wakes up on 5 clock and works by the farm on the weekend .After the school make she her homework or plays with her girlfriends. She loves all animals and treats them good . In her free time feed she the rabbits and brushes the horse and the ponies. Especially like you her cow bella but than she new milk to fetch was she gone she could bella found anywhere . She looks really of the whole farm . After she go to her parents and mother found bella in the rascal but she look bad his belly was red and rare . Polly Mother call a doctor and she get babies to the world she was postilion. Polly love the babies from his favourite cow and they give great milk.

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shu

March 6, 2022

Video Conference

when is a video conference needed ？

Video conference needed to be started in defferent places, it depends that who we would talking to .
If we were talking to our boss,than the conference started in the meeting room of second floor, if we were talking to our partner ,than the conference started in the meeting room of third floor, when we were talking to our customer , the conference started in the meeting room of forth floor.
We always make sure the camera and internet connection are going well before the conference

It's inevitable that there are mistakes. I hope someone make a wonderful sentence.

Thanks a lot.

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sun111

March 6, 2022

O dia de hoye

Hoye é domingo e é um dia nublado e frio.
Eu tenho esquipado perto do rio há uma hora, com a minha namorada e com nossa cadela. Nós moramos num bairro rural, perto da minha cidade, Teruel. Somos muito afortunados porque é um bairro tranquilo qui tem muitos caminos para passear. Podemos faze-lo entre las arvores o perto do rio, mas sempre na natureza.
Mais tarde vamos comer a casa da minha mãe. Pizza!! À tarde iremos beber alguma coisa com os nossos amigos e falaremos um poco. À noite, de novo à nossa casa, olharemos alguma serie e jantaremos antes de ir dormir.
Um dia tranquilo. Um dia bon.
:)

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tana_gao

March 6, 2022

030601 - A Spring Jaunt

Yesterday I went to a new park and had fun there. There was a big lawn near an artificial lake, where people were flying kites. Many flowers were full in bloom, and various birds were singing. I love the motto: Carpe diem (especially in spring).

The park was so large that I walked for an hour to cover a small area. Next time I would rent a bicycle to hang around with my friends.

travelling

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shu

March 6, 2022

The project

Are you in some new project at work ?
What are you responsible for ?

I'm in a new project, our customer is related to vocational education, the marketing department spent three years to get this contract.
This project had finished research stage, as an engineere, it's time to show our technology.

It is inevitable that there are some mistakes . I hope someone make a more wonderful sentence.

Thanks.

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kayune

March 6, 2022

（＃３９）自閉症

昨日私の最後のレッスンは正直難しかったです。クラスに3人の子供がいます。私の生徒の中に、ある生徒は自閉症児です。ずっと机に座れなかった。窓に行って、ずっとぼっとしていました。ワークシートをする時、彼女はしたくなかったから、彼女を代わりに私が書きました。そしてゲームの時、順番に待つのはしませんでした。悔しかったです。

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jnpathetic

March 6, 2022

L'impression

Quand on voit quelqu'un on a déjà un avis de lui, c'est automatique sans que les gens remarquent. Même si c'est vrai que on ne doit pas juger quelqu'un sans savoir sa personalité, on va déjà avoir une impression de lui. Par exemple, imagine que tu es un etudiant et tu rencontres un autre pour la premiere fois. De plus il ne parle pas francais très bon, peut-être tu veux avoir l'impression qu'il n'est pas intelligent à cause de ca. C'est probablement pas vrai mais tu veux avoir l'impression. J'éspere tu arrives de comprendre que je veux dire.

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alamin5g

March 6, 2022

Myself

Hello, Good Morning, I am Md Alamin. I live in Bangladesh. I love to read book and helping people. I would love to be software engineer at Google. Currently I am studying at International University of Businesses Agriculture and Technology under computer Science and Engineering Department. I am learning C plus plus for competitive programming.

myself

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Bees

March 6, 2022

확인하고 갈 걸 그랬다

어제 남편하고 같이 서울에 갔다. 우리는 원래 나의 동료가 알려준 문구점에만 가려고 했는데 우연히 또 다른 갈 곳이 생겼다. 금요일 밤 인스타그램을 보다가 내가 좋아하는 모던 한복 브랜드가 서울 매점이 토요일에 오픈한다는 소식을 알게 돼서 가 보기로 했다. 그래서 토요일 아침 일어나고 준비하는 대로 집에서 출발하였다. 서울은 우리 집에서 멀지도 않고 가깝지도 않은 거리다. 버스를 탄 다음에 지하철로 갈아탔어야 우리의 첫번째 목적지인 한복 가게에 도착할 수 있었다. 나는 한 시간 동안 아름다운 옷을 보고 또 보고 고민 했고 그 다음에 사고 싶은 것 하나를 겨우 선택할 수 있었다.

옷을 산 다음에 지하철을 다시 타서 2번째 목적지로 향했다. 지하철에서 내린 다음에 한 7분 동안 걸어간 뒤 동료가 알려준 문구점을 찾을 수 있었다. 그런데 문이 닫혀 있었다! 나는 토요일인데 문이 왜 닫혀 있는지 궁금했다. 특별한 이유가 있나 싶었는데 문구점 웹사이트를 확인하다 보니 원래 주말에 쉰다고 써있었다! 나는 어이가 없었다. 당연히 사람들이 여기저기 잘 다니는 토요일에 문을 열 줄 알았으니까 미리 확인하지 않은 거였다. 다행히 한복 가게 때문에 나와 남편의 시간이 완전히 낭비돼지 않았는데 그래도 좀 안타까웠다. 집을 떠나기 전에 확인할 걸 그랬다!

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floofybirb

March 6, 2022

疲れています

今日はとても長かったので、大きな作文を書きました。今この作文を終わってしまいました。でもちょっと悪いけど考えませんでした。もっと時間がありたいので、いい作文が書けます。実は終日に頭が痛い。とても大変ですね。それではラメンが欲しいから、おゆがわいてあります。辛いラメンが大好きですので、私の母はスパイン人でたくさん辛い食べ物を作ります。
今少しラメンがあて明日はアジアのマーケットでラメンを買うつもりです。私の一番のライブは韓国のラメン。hwaというラメンを知っていますか。とても辛いです。私はスノーラックスのように食べ物を食べたいです。全貌の食べ物をたべられます。
今晩に不安な人になるとを夢見ていた。大学は本当に難しいと思いますから、先生はたくさん宿題を上げて,私の手がいたいな。
じゃあ、明日はいいといいんですが。

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galens

March 6, 2022

もっと上手になりたいです！

残念だけど、私は日本語の授業に行ったことがありません。日本語がずっと興味があったけど、今まで一人しか勉強していませんでした。

パンデミックのときの前に真面目じゃなかったから、能力の進歩はあまり速なかったです。独学がたくさんモチベーションと規律が必要ですね。だから、私はただ初心者みたいな感じがずっとありました。

でも、永遠に初心者になりたくないことにしました。そのため、ここ２年間ぐらい、毎日２時間ぐらいに勉強していました。

聴力のために３０分ぐらい、いろいろなポッドキャストを聞きます。それも日常とか異世界のアニメを３０分ぐらい見ます。ときどき、特に難しいアニメは単語の学ぶのために字幕を使います。

読解のために３０分ぐらいも小説と漫画を読みます。たまにもっと口語の会話のためにツイッタも読みます。読むのが好きだから、２時間に読める日もあります。

漢字と単語は「Anki」と「わにかに」というのSRSのシステムを使います。今、１５００ぐらい漢字を覚えて、８０００ぐらい単語も覚えたけど、使うのほうが難しいですね。毎日これらのシステムは４５分ぐらいをかかります。

アウトプットは今の所、私の欠点です。毎日１５分ぐらい発音を勉強しようとして、最近Italkiの家庭教師と話し始めました。もちろん、このサイトにも書き始めました。まだまだだけど、頑張り続ければ、だんだん上手になります！

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Bethany

March 6, 2022

我的新机器

昨天我陪室友去一个工艺商店。她想买针线包。我看见很多漂亮的布料。我决定我也想学针线。但是用手针线很难，我没有耐心。所以我居然买了一台缝纫机，还有几米便宜的布料。

日记

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oceandrive76

March 6, 2022

El primer idioma

Recrear el primer idioma - la razón por la que no vale la pena intentarlo

Aún no sabemos la fecha en que creamos nuestro primer idioma. Por supuesto que nunca sabremos la fecha exacta, pero lo que quiero decir es que no sabemos el periodo de tiempo en que los seres humanos empezaron a desarrollar la habilidad de hablar idiomas complejos. Algunos científicos creen que lo empezamos a hacer desde el primer momento, otros creen que otras especies, como los Neandertales, lo desarrollaron antes de nosotros. No obstante, al fin y al cabo, es muy improbable que lo averigüemos.

Hace unos años, se publicó en una revista científica un artículo por dos personas que decían que habían recreado algunas palabras del primer idioma hablado nunca. Un gran logro para los seres humanos y la ciencia ¿no? Desafortunadamente, aunque usaran un montón de largas palabras y demostraran sus métodos "científicos", sus resultados son equivocados. ¿Cómo lo sabemos? Pues, incluso las predicciones más cautelosas ponen la fecha en que los seres humanos empezaron a hablar hace más de cien mil años. Y los idiomas son como seres vivos: crecen, cambian e incluso mueren. Así que nunca sabremos cómo suena ni cómo era el primer idioma ya que hay tantos idiomas y familias lingüísticas que han desaparecido. Sencillamente, no tenemos los datos para recrearlo.

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amber28

March 6, 2022

高斯的天才1

尺规作图是可以使用只圆规和直尺（没有刻度的尺子）作图方法。尺规作图的一个有名的问题是作图正多边形。正多边形是所有角都相等，并且所有边都相等的二维形状。等边三角形，正方形是正多边形的例子。

在1796年，叫约翰·卡尔·弗里德里希·高斯的年轻数学家历史上第一次证明了可以用尺规作图作出正十七边形。（代替写17边形会奇怪吗？）

这个事件为什么被视为重要的？这是对这个问题超过两千年来的第一次进步。

那时，高斯仅仅19岁。

数学數學

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kidneyprivilege

March 5, 2022

2022/03/05

我在幾年前的夏天去倫敦旅行時，感到最意外的細節就是很多地鐵車廂裏都沒有空調。八月份的倫敦天氣不是很熱，除了經常下雨以外非常舒服，但每逢要坐地鐵時我都感到特別悶熱，很難呼氣，所以如果情況允許的話，我會選走路或者坐巴士。

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LePain

March 5, 2022

Voyage en Alsace

Je suis allée en voyage dont la distination était l'Alsace. C'est une région pas comme les autres, car elle avait été longtemps le territoire plutôt germanique. Elle est entrée sous le contrôl français pendant le régime de Napoléon, puis a été à nouveau annexée à la Prusse après sa victoire dans la guerre franco-prussienne en 1870. La défaite de la Prusse dans le cadre de la Première Guerre Mondial a rendu cette région française. Ensuite l'invasion du nazi l'a fait tomber dans la main de l'Allemand. Actuellement, elle fait partie de la France, abritant des particularités qui proviennent de la culture mélangée de deux pays.

Je vais raconter demain ce qui m'a marquée le plus après avoir fait quelques recherches à ce sujet : c'est l'exception de l'application de la loi de laïcité.

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selin

March 5, 2022

IETS Writing Task 1 - Cambridge 12 - Test 5

The bar chart illustrates the informations about the Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 in percentage.

If we look at the chart closely, we can see that women are more active in almost every age groups. The only exception is the group of "15 to 24". 52,8 percent of men and 47,7 percent of women do regular physical activity. The gap between two genders is not dramatically large, it stays usually at 10 percent.

The group of "35 to 44" has the biggest gap. 35 percent of men and 52,2 percent of women exercises regularly, this gap decreases to 10 percent for the group of "45 to 54". The smallest gap belongs to the group of "65 and over", the difference is almost one percent and approximately 47 percent of all of the senior Australians do regular physical activity.

Overall, we can say that Australians have a pretty active life style and they do not give up on it even if they get older. This is a feature that all other cultures should inspire of.

ieltstask1

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samu

March 5, 2022

The Spy and the Traitor - 15

Summary no. 15.
This is a real story.

When his posting* in Copenhagen was nearing its end, Oleg received an unsettling telegram from Moscow. The KGB had instructed him to cease any operational activity and limit himself to paperwork until he was back to Moscow. This sudden change, as the KGB explained, was a damage limitation* move. As it seemed, PET, the Danish Security Service, had been taking too much of an interest in Oleg. He had been on PET’s radar for too long. Hence the KGB had grown particularly concerned. The thought of a diplomatic case put Moscow at unease. So that was how the KGB had decided to deal with it for the time being. As Oleg digested** the full implications of it all, he felt a sense of deep unease flooding over him.

It was customary for diplomats to hold parties and invite colleagues at other embassies. At one of this party, held by a West German diplomat, Oleg fell into conversation with a charming Danish guy. One was a Soviet, the other was a Danish, yet they fascinatingly seemed to have a lot in common. They shared the same tastes in music, art, literature and so forth. Perhaps it was just as well that Oleg had no idea what lay behind that charming, appealing facade, for the Dane was a PET agent in mission. The Danish Security Service had laid a trap for Oleg, who unwittingly avoided it.

* British English.

**Assuming that the original sentence is correct, can I also say, “As the implications sunk in....”?