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Nov. 19, 2024
19.11.24 - L’allergia all’istamina
Oggi sera ho mangiato un panino con mortadella, grandi fette di mozzarella e una salsa al pesto. Nonostante i primi bocconi fossero buonissimi, mi è venuta eventualmente la nausea. Quest’esperienza mi ha spinta a riflettere sui cibi che mi fanno male, anche se non sono gli allergeni tipici. In testi passati ho approfondito alcuni dei miei problemi salutari, i cui sintomi confondono la maggior parte dei medici che ho visitato. Qualche mese fa, leggendo nei forum frequentati da altre persone con patologie poco capiti, ho scoperto che molte persone con la mia sintomatologia hanno un’intolleranza alle istamine. Non si sente mai parlare di questo problema, ma ci sono istamine presenti in quasi tutti i cibi che mangiano e a volte fanno male alle persone con grande sensibilità a loro. I cibi ricchi di istamine, se ricordo bene, sono gli affumicati, il caffè, la maggior parte di formaggi, gli avocado e le uova, tra altri cibi. Noto che nel passato ho sentito nausea dopo aver mangiato avocado o certi formaggi. Forse farei meglio a provare una dieta senza istamine.
Nov. 19, 2024
Nov. 19, 2024
Now Time Has Changed in America!
I just read an article (written in Japanese) in which they said that plural influencers on social networking services declared that they voted for Trump.
Now that Mr. Trump by far won the election, there is no need for the US people to hide that they are the followers of Donald Trump.
Yes. Majority of the US people like Trump.
Therefore, on language forums like LangCorrect, I should think twice how I describe him.
In former days, non-native English speaker members on LangCorrect might have been better to speak ill of Donald Trump.
But it is not true now.
"Time has changed in America. They like the MAGA (make America great again) policy."
I used to write something rude for him such as he was saying MAWA (make America white again).
But I should shut my mouth now.
It's politically incorrect to speak ill of him now.
Therefore, from now on, I should not talk about him anymore from the viewpoint of political correctness.
Nov. 19, 2024
The importance of english and suggest some effective ways th
Learning English is one of the most important things in today’s world. If you learn English you will get a lot of benefits from it. Here are some reasons why you should learn English and some effective ways that help you learn English well.
When you study English, you find out that English is very important and interesting. It helps you get some vocabularies and teach you how to use them correctly to communicate with foreigners. In addition, English also helps you have job opportunities in the future if you learn English. Because nowadays this language is used all over the world, so some companies are taking on employees who can speak English. Besides, it also helps you widen knowledge when you travel in other countries, you have to use English to talk to them. And when you are talking to them, you will get more information about their culture, history, and so on. These are some reasons why you learn English. And now I will tell you some effective way to study English well.
Firstly, if you want to speak English fluently, you have to practice speaking skill every day. You can use some websites or apps which helps you communicate with an unreal foreigners. Secondly, practicing writing skill is one of the most important ways that makes you enhance your writing, vocabularies and grammar. You can study english on youtube, there are a lot of useful videos which teach you how to use grammar correctly. An app is called “Duolingo” which teach you how to learn English.. It gives a lot of vocabularies to learn a day. Thirdly, you have to improve your listening skill. If you can speak, write and read, but you can’t listen, it will be useless for you to learn English. Because when you can’t listen, it means that you can’t hear anything people says. So, you have to practice listening skills from the beginning. You can listen to English songs to improve it or maybe, watch some English cartoons. This can not only helps you enhance your listening skill but also writing skill. Because you can see some grammatical instruction in the video, which is not used usually in Vietnam but very popular in foreign countries. Finally, your reading skill is also important. If you can’t read you can understand all the text or something is telling about. You can practice your reading by read more books in English and do reading exercise.
In coclusion, English is one of the most important languages which you should learn beside your mother-tongue. It helps you have more job opportunities and now how to communicate with foreigners.
Nov. 19, 2024
c'est la première fois que j'écris dans cette langue...
À partir d'aujourdhui, j'ēcrirai en français, pour aider avec mon apprentissage de la langue françajse, surtout les jours décontractés. Je ferai de mon mieux, la plupart des choses écrites ici proviennent de la traduction puisque je peux à peine former une phrase!
Nov. 19, 2024
Nov. 19, 2024
Coffee with Milk
Every morning, I can't but drink a mug of coffee with milk. It's part of my morning ritual, and I've been doing it for ages. I'm one of those people who have to drink coffee to sustain yourselves throughout the day, but I only like coffee if it has milk in it. I think coffee by itself has a really strong flavor, so I mix with milk to soften the flavor and make it more enjoyable to my personal taste. Plus, milk adds some extra carbohydrates and vitamins like calcium to the beverage, which I personally think that it's good to health.
The only problem is that I might have a degree of lactose intolerance. When I drink milk in the morning, my stomach has the chance of start hurting a lot. It's very weird because this only happens during the morning; if I drink milk or eat any food that contains milk after noon, absolutely nothing happens. I'm not sure if that's the case for everyone who has lactose intolerance or if it's a psychological effect or something.
Nov. 19, 2024
Nov. 19, 2024
Einen Brief für B1Niveau schreiben
Sehr geehrter Herr Müller,
hiermit möchte ich mich entschuldigen, dass ich am nächsten Woche in den Deutschkurs nicht gehen kann. Auf Gesundheitsgründen. Aber mein Arzt hat mir gesagt, damit ich am 1. Dezember zurückkommen kann. Könnten Sie mir bitte nächste Woche die Hausaufgabe mitteilen? Denn ich muss zu Hause üben und für die Prüfung vorbereiten. Es wäre sehr hilfreich, wenn Sie mir die Aufgaben per E-Mail oder WhatsApp zu senden könnten. Vielen Dank für Ihre Unterstützung und eine schnelle Rückmeldung.
Mit herzlichen Grüßen
Nov. 19, 2024
Martedì 19 novembre
Ieri non ho avuto una giornata tranquilla. Il lavoro è stato stancante e non mi sono sentita riposata, malgrado avessi dormito a sufficienza.
Fortunatamente, le giornate meno ideali hanno un vantaggio: finiscono a mezzanotte. La cattiva sensazione causata dallo stress, dai fattori esterni e interni, dalle preoccupazioni non dura per sempre.
Mi assomiglio a una piccola barca su onde altissime durante una tempesta. La tempesta passa sempre e poi rimango in piedi: seccata, ma speranzosa.
Non so se l'aldilà esista, però credo che la vita stessa sia come un ponte su cui ci si ferma per goderci il viaggio.
Ci sono volte in cui penso che tutto sia troppo stancante e mi chiedo perché io lavori e studi ogni giorno.
In fondo, il futuro sembra sempre lontano e spaventoso. E poi mi rispondo che questa è la parte divertente - non saperne nulla.
Quando vado a letto e metto la testa sul cuscino, so sempre di aver fatto un buon lavoro ancora una volta.
Nov. 19, 2024
父の10年回忌
今日は父の10年の回忌です。今朝、母と兄と墓参りに出かけました。私は後生のことをあんまり信じないので墓参りとかは私にとって特に意味はないです。でも回忌とか、墓参りとか、母には大事なので反対するなどしません。
もう10年ですね。父が亡くなった時、そしてそのあと、ずっと思っていたのは「Life goes on」という英語の表現でした。訳して「人生が続く」で、もっと深く読めると「ひどい目に会っても時が止まらない」という意味もありますね。確かに、父が亡くなった時はつらかった。でも時が止まってくれなかったので、前に進むしかなかった。その暗い時を貫けてメンタルの強さが何倍レベルアップしたかも。
父との仲は複雑でしたが、とにかく優しい人でした。私の父であって感謝します。
Nov. 19, 2024
自分がまだできないことの中から２つの問題とその解決法を選んで、作文を書きます。
日本語は世界で最も難しい外国語の一つとして知られている。この言語を3年間学んだ後、私はこのことに完全に同意する。なぜなら、今でも日本語学習において改善しなければならない2つの問題があるからだ。
まず、日本語のコミュニケーション能力が問題です。学校で日本人の先生から教えてもらったり、日本語会話サークルに参加したりもしますが、いざ日本語で話そうとすると、頭の中の単語がごちゃごちゃになってしまい、まともな日本語を話すことができません。最近では、日本語の会話動画を見たり、日本語のポッドキャストを聞いたりして、コミュニケーション能力の向上を目指しています。
それに、日本語で書くことや、日本語に訳す練習をあまりしないため、文脈に合った正しい文法を使うことが難しく、簡単な文法しか使いこなせていません。先生からは、文法練習問題をたくさん解くことを勧められています。
日本語をマスターするには、時間がかかり、大変な努力が必要です。でも、私は毎日少しずつでも努力を続けたいと思っています。
Nov. 19, 2024
Neve
Hoje está nevando em Reino Unido. Estou uma pouca surpresa porque costumava nevar muito quando era pequena, mas nos anos últimos a neve tem diminuído. Muitas escolas no Gales estão fechadas, e há avisos sobre interrupçãos do tráfego e fechamento de estradas. Embora não esteja nevendo muito em Londres, eu já posso sentir o frio aqui.
Nov. 19, 2024
Nov. 19, 2024
Traduzione 1
1.La stroia di Calviono transportaci in Italia nei giorni quando ci si celebra Natale
2.In la si dice che questa festa e usato dai commercianti per la pubblicita e per l’attrazione delle acquirenti.
3.La ditta dove Marcovaldo lavorava aveva deciso di fare I regali a casa per suoi I piu influenti clienti.
4. Dovevano essere presentati da un uomo vestito da Babbo Natale
5.E stato difficile di raccoltare la candidatura perche la prima era molto basso e aveva la barba che raggiunge il pavimento, la seconda era molto grassa e il costume di Babbo Natale era angusto per lui, la terza era molto giovane, la quarta era molto vecchio.
6.Fino alla fine si sono decisi che il costume di Babbo Natale si addice a Marcovaldo e loro gil avevo promesso il premio speciale se fa 50 regali al giorno
7.Marcovaldo pensava che suoi bambini non conoscesserolo e dopo loro rideranno insieme.
8.Ma i bambini immediatamente sono conoschutolo perche l’idea di inviare i regali e venuta a molte ditte e i bambini si sono abituati gia di vedere dei Babbi Natali sulla strada.
9.Loro stessi preparavano il regalo per il ragazzo povero a cui Babbo Natalr non verra
10. Marcavaldo prendeva suo figlio con se
11.Lui voleva mostrargli come lui fara suo lavoro suplementare ma Michelino sperava di trovare suo ragazzo povere.
12. Ma il ragazzo da cui è venuto suo padre era ricco perche lui non e stato interessato ai cari regali, ma I fiammiferi e il martello che sono stati preparati da Michelino sono stati interessati per lui.
13.Il ragazzo ricco distruggeva tutto e dava fuoco a tutto che poteva.
14.La ditta piacque perche questo dava vivacita per Il comercio e aumentava il reddito
15.Il regalo ha ricevuto il nome «regalo distruttivo»
Nov. 19, 2024
外国語を早くから学ぶことについてどう思いますか?
早期外国教育はちょっと悪い点だと思います。 まず、人々は一般的に、子供が小さいほど知識を吸収しやすく、その結果、外国語をより上手に学べると考えています。そのため、多くの親が幼い頃から子供に英語などの外国語を学ばせています。しかし、具体的な目標や興味を持たずに、無理やり早期から外国語を学ばせることは、子供に負担をかけ、心理的に悪影響を及ぼす可能性があります。
さらに、幼い子供たちに英語を教えた経験のある者として、学んでいる外国語の文法や考え方の違いに戸惑う子供が多いことに気づきました。そのため、まずは母語をしっかり学ぶ時間を与えることが、外国語の学習を助けると感じています。
外国語の学習をより容易にするためには、適切な目標を設定することが重要です。そして、どの年齢であっても、情熱と忍耐があれば、その外国語を速やかに習得できるでしょう。
Nov. 19, 2024
ノートパソコン
半年前、私のノートパソコンが壊れちゃった。突然パソコンをつけられない、修理に出すと店員さんが「パソコンが古すぎて仕方ないんです」と言った。実は私のパソコンがそんなに古くない、ただ四年前に買ったの。技術の発展が速すぎると思う。四年前に買ったパソコンもう修理出来なくて、廃れてくる。今回の経験でちょっとびっくりして、「パソコンの寿命がそんなに短くて、残念だね」と思った。その後、私はパソコンを買わなくて、割引を待っていった。実は昨日、新しいパソコンが買ってきた。今そのパソコンで字を打っている。現代のパソコンとスマホの設計があまり好きじゃないと思う。毎年、多くの会社がたくさんの新製品を作って、製品は３、あるいは4年内に廃れていく。ハードウェアの状態が良かったら、ソフトのアップデートができない。英語で"planned obsolescence"と呼ばれている。そんなわけで新しいパソコンとスマホを買わなくちゃいけない。工場で古い製品の修理時に必要な部分を製造しないので、修理も出来ない。状況は勿体ないですね。
Nov. 19, 2024
T1-changer la décoration de votre appartement
Cher Aurélien,
J’espère que tu vas bien. Je t’écris pour te demander ton aide afin de redécorer ma maison au samedi prochain. Après une longue période d’y habiter, les meubles chez moi ne sont plus en bon état. Il serait donc préférable de tout changer dans mon salon, surtout le canapé. Comme il y a de nombreux choix au magasin, j’ai besoin de ton avis pour faire le bon choix. Concernant les peintures, elles sont lourdes à déplacer, alors je sollicite ton aide pour les transporter en toute sécurité.
Qu’en penses-tu ? J’attends ta réponse !
À bientôt,
Nov. 19, 2024
Nov. 19, 2024
Nov. 19, 2024
こんにちは! テキストの修正を手伝ってください。
不平等な結婚
ヴァシリー·プキレフは1832年12月、トゥーラの平凡な農民家庭に生まれた。彼はモスクワの絵画学校で11年間学んだ。その後、プキレフは肖像画とアイコンを描いて生計を立てました。1863年に彼は彼の最も有名な絵画の1つである「不平等な結婚」を描いた。
その絵はある年老いた男性と若い女性を描写している。彼らは結婚しようとしている。しかし、新婦はまったく喜んでいない。結婚式に出席したお客さんもやはり驚きです。作家自身も絵の右隅に描かれている。彼の最後の婚約者が新郎のそばに立っている。 彼女は白い服を着ています。彼女の死は花嫁を心配させる。
絵の核心ディテールは花嫁が引く手だ。涙のせいで赤くなったん彼女の目
その絵は過去の慣習のあらゆる不当さを表している。当時は様々な年齢層の人々が強制結婚をするのが一般的だった。
新婦の痛みを感じることができるので絵が好きです。私にとって老婆は死んだ昔の新郎の妻であるだけでなく、その結婚生活で若い女性になる人だ。
Nov. 19, 2024
The best way too travel in a city is on foot
Traveling is the best way to broaden your horizons, but not that many people can travel abroad their country. If you want to travel, you can go around your city on foot.
It could be quite difficult for people who never do fitness, but it you will do a small steps and add a couple of kilometers by week, it will be easier.
In my opinion, if you will travel without a map, it's more different experience than you usually do.
In conclusion, I want to say that, travel around the city by your own foot could be more interesting and you will learn more about your city.
Nov. 19, 2024
Nov. 19, 2024
A Place Renowned for its Ginkgo Trees
I went to a scenic area on Saturday.
It's renowned for its ginkgo trees, which have a long history. The oldest was planted over 1500 years ago, even 100 years earlier than the famous Tang Dynasty. You can find it at the beginning of this video: https://youtu.be/KoiKUEfYeik
It was the third time I've been there.
The first time I visited there was with two friends' families many years ago. At that time, we went there specially to drink the fresh tea in the spring.
The second time was one year ago. It was just at the end of a hiking trail.
This time, I visited with a friend to see the ginkgo trees with their yellow leaves.
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