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Nov. 2, 2021
Le résultat des élections au Japon
Il y a deux jours, le résultat des élections législatives au Japon a été publié, et franchement c'était très décevant. De ce fait je n'ai plus beaucoup de moral depuis, mais maintenant essaie de me rétablir.
Je voudrais écrire dessus demain pour ranger mes idées et ce qu'on doit retenir de ces élections.
Nov. 2, 2021
Journal
Sorry, I am afraid I misunderstood you. If you were referring to the original time at 7 pm on your side, I think it's also okay, but it's just that we can only have our call for 30 minutes because this morning I will go to another city to hold field training, as I said to you before. During the trip we are supposed to go out of the hotel at 8 am, so I think I have to have my breakfast at least at 7:40. That's to say we can only have about 30 minutes' call. If it's okay for you, let's do it.
Nov. 2, 2021
Journal
I think so. What you were saying tomorrow means evening where I am. At that time, I already get off my work, so I think it was pretty okay. You are really talented. See you this evening (also tomorrow on your side.
One thing I need to apologize for is that 8:00 every night is when my regular lessons start, so we only have one hour's call, but it doesn't matter. If you want to settle the time down for a long term, I can postpone my lessons to 8:30 pm from the eleventh of this month so that we can have one and a half hour call. Please let me know what you think because I want to make everything very suitable for you.
Nov. 2, 2021
Meine Gewohnheitstabelle
Heute war ich sehr produktiv. Das macht mich sehr glücklich. Ich glaube, ich fühle mich schlecht, wenn ich mich für den ganzen Tag entspanne und nichts mache. Also, wenn ich produktiv bin, fühle ich mich super!
Ich habe gestern eine Gewohnheitstabelle vorbereitet. Auf diese Tabelle stehen Aufgaben wie; 6000 Schritte laufen, zeichnen, deutscher Podcast hören, Bücher lesen, usw... Ich habe diese Aufgaben gruppiert. Die erste Gruppe heißt jeden Tag, die zweite Gruppe heißt mindestens 3 Mal in der Woche, die dritte Gruppe heißt mindestens 1 Mal in der Woche und die letzte Gruppe heißt wenigstens 1 Mal in dem Monat. Ich glaube, warum ich die so gruppiert klar ist. Ich mache ein Kreuz, wenn ich eine Aufgabe erledige. Einfache Logik aber ich denke, dass sie mich sehr hilft. Wenn ich, was ich machen soll, schriftlich sehe, es ist klarer und auch ein greifbareres Ziel.
Ich werde versuchen so weiterzumachen. Hoffentlich, kann ich schaffen gute Gewohnheiten zu entwickeln!
Nov. 2, 2021
Ett mem på svenska
Jag försoker att skapa ett mem på svenska om att skriva på svenska som andraspråk.
Den handlar om det här memet: https://imgflip.com/i/5sqjlv
Jag undrar om det som jag har skrivit är korrekt (dvs. satserna 'en idé att skriva om' och 'min hjärna som blockerar varje svenskt ord jag kan').
Tack så mycket!
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Music
We all love music, we all like listening to songs, everyone knows that. I particularly like to listen to songs almost all the time. My favorite musical rhythms are Country, hip-hop, Electronic, and more.
It is so good to listen to songs, I mean, every time I listen to songs I feel like I am in another world. It is so good. There are times when the song tells exactly what you feel. Even though you are in problems, You feel better after doing that. . I like doing it in different situations. For example, when I start to learn a language, I like to look for songs that are sung in that language, so I can do what I like to do and learn a language at the same time and that is so good.
People are different. They have different hobbies and kinds of things like that. People have a favorite song, a favorite band, kind of thing, they also have a favorite rhythm. Maybe, not everyone has a favorite song or band, but everyone likes songs, so let me know what you think about, and what is your favorite musical rhythm?
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Вы можете привести пример очень хорошей рекламы?
Реклам который компания американская сотворила был назван "Got Milk"? Намерение реклама был вдохнуть страх в людях, через напоминать им важность молока, и без этого продукта очень важно, там будет очко в их жизни.
(This marks day 1 of learning/writing Russian! :)
Nov. 2, 2021
Упражнения со статьёй "Энергия будущего"
1) О чём идёт речь в статье?
Речь в этой статье идёт о потреблении разных источников энергии. Во-первых, автор описывает машину его соседа и подчёркивает его потребления бензина. Во-вторых, автор рассказывает про потребление энергии в быту и рассматривает разные возможности для будущей энергии, включая солнечную энергию, альтернативные источники и ветроэлектрогенераторы. Хотя он признает, что на практике будет очень сложно полностью перейти на альтернативную энергию, автор считает, что атомная энергия является многообещающей альтернативной текущим источникам, но только если мы относимся к нему с умом.
2) Какие вопросы поднимает автор?
Автор задаёт вопросы о практичности перехода на альтернативную энергию. Точнее, спрашивает какие есть плюсы и минусы альтернативных источников, и можно ли обойтись без текущих источников энергии. Он также спрашивает, как это изменение может влиять на транспорт, в частности на автомобильный транспорт.
3) Является ли эта проблема первоочередной или у человечества есть время подождать?
Я считаю, что проблема “чистой энергии” первоочередной. Дело в том, что влияет на личную жизнь каждого человека по-разному. Те, кто живёт близко к экватору должны готовиться к изменению климаты. Тем, кто живёт далеко от экватора почти ничего не угрожает.
Nov. 2, 2021
Funny Stuffs
1.My phone rang when I was riding my bike. I stopped to answer. A boy started, "teacher, I want to ask a leave." I replied, "who are you?" He told me his name and the reason that he had a toothache. I told him to wait till 7 p.m, then I would signed the note for his leave. It is a principle that if students who live in the dormitory want to leave during the weekdays, the teacher need to sign a note for them to make sure that the teacher knows their track. Furtheremore, their parents also need to submit a request to the teacher. After all these have done, the parents should go to the security room to sign a note and then leave with the students.
The boy is the guy who seldom takes part in the cleaning work and handing in homework. What's funny is that his parents never regard these as his fault but the teacher's. His father even called me and tried to blame me by these stuff once a time. However, I stroke back and won.
His mother sent a message to me tonight. I hestitated whether I should told her that her son hadn't handed homework a countless time, and was so noisy during some class. I really didn't want to waste my time to talk to her because she was so rude. However, I told her in the end since she had connected with me. She replied that she had aksed her son to complete the homework tonight and hand it to me tomorrow. After a while ,here came the funnist part: she asked me what the homework was. I replied that I had told the students on Sunday evening, and I left the homework in office, so I couldn't answer her question. She said that her son would finish the homework tomorrow then. I had implied that her son never paid any attention to the homework, but she didn't take it seriously or even got it. Besides, she would never use the polite words like,"thank you" and "please." That's why her son is so rude.
2.In the third lesson in the afternoon, a boy who sits in front of the teacher desk, kept transmitting notes under the desk（传纸条） with two girls sit behind him. I was reading at that time, but I could feel his eyes on me for many times before he passed or receipted a note. However, I pretended to focus on my book. It was quite funny, but I don't want to waste my time to stopped them because it really was not a big deal.
Nov. 2, 2021
Help me to understand English! ☘️
Which one is correct? What is the difference between these two ?
1. Did you see any friends of you at the funfair?
2. Did you see any friends of yours at the funfair?
3. This is a picture of me.
4. This is a picture of mine.
5. The largest jungle in the world is called the Amazon.
6. The jungle largest in the world is called the Amazon.
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
broken window
Yesterday was the sunny warm holiday day.
I have made all my work which I had left on these holidays and was thinking how would spend the rest my free time.
All my friends were busy at that moment and nobody could take me time.
Suddenly, I remembered that one of my friend, Alise, had said to me she was free.
She plays soccer well despite she is a girl.
So I called her and invited playing out in succer.
Firstly, I suggested, I was standing in a soccer gate, she was trying to score a goal.
During 5 minutes everything was getting well but the ball, from one of the kick, flew in the window which was located on the first floor.
The window belongs neighbous apartment. They were very angry.
Nov. 2, 2021
Les livres
«Quel pouvoir les livres ont-ils pour enseigner aux jeunes la tolérance envers les autres ?»
Je pense que cette question est trop vague, parce que tout dépend de l'auteur et du genre du livre. En autre, il faut que l'esprit du lecteur soit ouvert pour inspirer un changement. Je pense qu'il y a actuellement trop de stéréotypes dans les livres. Par exemple, les latinos sont représentés être faibles; quand je lis des livres qui s'agissent de crimes, les Mexicains s'avèrent les criminels qui vivent dans un fossé et ont un puits comme leur seul possession; dans le même sens, les alentours sont toujours un désert désolé, et les femmes craquent et satisfont toutes les désirs des hommes américains, qui résultant toujours être les vainqueurs quand ils élucident le mystère du cadavre disparu et/ou décapité.
En marge des pages, les films et les feuilletons nous conditionnent, à notre insu, à accepter les tells stéréotypes, quand ils exagèrent les mauvais côtés d'un pays et les présentent comme des éléments qui rendent un filme réaliste.
Il faut définitivement un projet pharaonique pour sensibiliser les gens à la tolérance et au préjugé. L'essor des films indépendants est un pas vers le bon chemin, en fermant l'écart éducationnel.
Nov. 2, 2021
The problem of YouTube!
YouTube are always my teacher for everything.
But recently I start feeling the knowledge that I get from YouTube is not that reliable.
But that is not YouTube’s responsibility.
Because all the information is free.
I don’t need to pay any money expect “time”.
Beside no one said you should 100% believe the information from YouTube.
Actually, I should be happy now.
Because when I watch any videos I will ask myself how accuracy about that information.
To be fair there still many good quality videos from YouTube.
Please do enjoy watch.
Nov. 2, 2021
Parks Near My House
There are four parks near my house which are not big but quite cozy.
On the left side of my residential area, there is a park for young students.
There are a library, a swimming pool and a playground there.
It is a very good place to take a walk, so I usually go there with my kids.
On the right side, there is a small park which has small paths.
Many pet lovers use the paths with their dogs.
On the south, there is quite bigger park than others.
Not only basket ball courts, but also long paths are there.
Near a fountain, there are always many kids to enjoy.
Like this, there are nice parks near my house, and I love them.
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Maus
Ich habe ein neues Buch gekäuft. Es heisst Maus von Art Spiegelman. Es ist ein Comic-Buch. Ich war sehr aufgeregt wann ich hat es bekommt.
Meine Deutschbucher Sammlung wächst schritttweise. Ich liebe Deutsch zu lesen. Ich verstehe nicht alles, aber es macht viel Spaß. Es ist wie ein Rätsel, dass ich lösen muss.
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021
Obama
Obama era un presidente che, sulla superficie, pareva essere la rappresentazione del cambiamento che anelavano tutti gli americani. Il suo giuramento è capitato a fagiolo, poiché il paese stava attraversando un momento assai difficile, visto che c'era una crisi economica e le tensioni razziali avevano raggiunto nuove vette, poiché gli afroamericani percepivano una disuguaglianza nelle condizioni di vita fra i bianchi e loro stessi; perciò l'arrivo di Obama è stato una benedizione per chi era marginalizzato dalla società (per esempio, colui che era stato consegnato all'inferno in affido a causa di una legge debole). Era anche paragonato alla venuta di Gesù Cristo.
I suoi discorsi erano scevri da errori; usava un linguaggio cavilloso, il che simboleggiava la sua intelligenza; la sua puntigliosità assicurava anche che i suoi rivali non potessero nemmeno incontrare una fessura attraverso la quale criticarlo. Non saltava di palo in frasca mentre stava parlando, in modo da dimostrare la sua onestà; anche se il tema era spinoso, continuava a parlare imperterrito.
Ma in realtà stava turlupinando la classe lavoratrice; approfittava del colore della sua pelle per far loro invaghirsi di lui. Ha messo il carico da undici sulla guerra in Afghanistan, e le sue riforme economiche non hanno dato frutti.
Ciononostante, la sua scaltrezza è degna di ammirazione.
Nov. 2, 2021
Nov. 2, 2021