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Człowiek z wysokiego zamku
Niedawno zacząłem oglądać amerykański serial, który ma na tytuł "Człowiek z wysokiego zamku". Serial jest trochę stary (od 2015 roku) i już usłyszałem o nim, ale niedawno zostało wspomniony na wideo, który spojrzałem i byłem ciekawy.
Serial to historyczna spekulacja. Akcja dzieje się na początku lat 60-ych w Stanach Zjednoczonych. W seriali Oś wygrała Drugą Wojnę Światową i świat został rozdzielony pomiędzy Niemcami a Japonią. Sami Stany Zjednoczone są rozdzielone na trzy części. Wschodni brzeg należy do Niemiec, zachodni – do Japonii, a centrum byłego państwa jest strefą buferową pomiędzy dwoma światowymi mocarstwami.
Główne postaci są trzy; Juliana Crane i jej narzeczony Frank Frink (to śmieszne imię), którzy żyją w japońskim San Francisco, oraz Joe Blake, który żyje w niemieckim Nowym Jorku. Juliana jest normalną kobietą, która interesuje się japońską kulturą i uprawia aikido, choć jej rodzice nie lubią tego, że interesuje się kulturą okupantów. Mieszka z jej narzeczonym w małym podziemnym mieszkaniu. Pewnego dnia widzi, jak Japończycy ubijają jego siostrę, bo była częścią ruchu oporu. Na poszukiwaniu odpowiedzi na śmierć jej siostry, znajduje się na strefie buferowej. Jej siostra musiała podać film do mężczyzny ruchu oporu, ale dlatego, że siostra umarła, Juliana postanawia udać, że ją jest.
Na strefie buferowej Juliana spotyka się z Joe Blake. Joe też ma film. Joe jest nazistą, a zakochuje się w Julianie i nie mówi do niej, kim on naprawdę jest.
Tymczasem w San Francisco Japończycy zdają sobie sprawę, że Juliana gdzieś znikła z filmem, który jest dla nich ważny. Frank nie wie, gdzie ona jest, ale Japończycy starają się sprawiać, że mówi, dokąd pojechała Juliana. Więżą Franka i go torturują. By przekonać go, żeby powiedział prawdę, grożą, że zabiją jego siostry z jej dziećmi (Frank i siostra mają żydowskiego dziadka). Japończycy znajdują torbę, w której Juliana przenosiła film, ale w niej filmu nie ma, więc myślą, że Juliana nie miała go z nią (w rzeczywistości pewna kobieta ukradła torbę, ale Juliana potrafiła ochronić film). Frank jest teraz wolny, ale jego siostra, siostrzeniec i siostrzenica już umarli przez Japończyków. Po tym wydarzeniu zaczyna nienawidzić Japończyców i zbliża się do ruchu oporu.
Filmy są bardzo ważne, ale nie jest jasno dlaczego. Jeszcze nie skończyłem cały serial, ale Juliana ogląda te filmy i co raz widzi w nich coś innego. Na przykład w pierwszym filmie Stany Zjednoczony wygrały wojnę, a w drugim pokazano, że na San Francisco spadła bomba atomowa. Filmy są zrobione przez Człowieka z wysokiego zamku, o którym nikt nic nie wie.
April 8, 2022
Мой первый текст на русском
Мне очень нравится изучать иностранные языки, поэтому я начинал русский, хотя я уже изучал китайский, Франсиско и испанский языки. До несколько дней назад я только видел видео в YouTube и сериал на русском. Однока, два дня назад я начинал поговорить с одной русский человек.
April 8, 2022
Progresso nell'apprendimento
Dopo aver apportato correzioni ai diari di diversi utenti, ora ho trovato il tempo per scrivere un diario proprio mio.
"Diario" - quest'è la parola migliore per tradurre il termine inglese 'journal' che ha scelto LangCorrect? Forse il consiglio, o almeno la confermazione, di un madrelingua sarebbe utile.
Comunque, durante i recenti lockdown ho colto l'occasione a migliorare la mia destrezza con la lingua italiana, la quale ho provato a imparare da tanti anni. L'imposizione degli arresti domiciliari (o così sembrava a volte) almeno permetteva l'opportunità a passare ore di studio senza interruzione. Guardare uno specifico canale YouTube, "Un Italiano Vero", diventava un'abitudine quotidiana, e perché ogni episodio veniva trasmetto in diretta, era possibile interagire con l'autore e chiederlo delle domande.
È difficile sapere anche con un minimo di certezza quanti progressi si stanno facendo nell'apprendimento di una lingua, soprattutto quando si è autodidatti o non c'è disponibile un insegnante competente. Comunque, posso dire solo che la mia conoscenza e abilità sono migliorate a vista d'occhio.
April 8, 2022
April 8, 2022
Zyklone
Ich komme aus Indien. Unser Land ist sehr vielfaltig. Wir haben Berge, Dürre und Küste.
Jeden Jahr haben wir haben Zyklone auf der Küste OstIndiens. Es ist eine Naturerreignisse aber wir können auf etwas tun die zu vorbeugen. Die Zyklone in der Ozean sind mit die Welttemperatur verknüpft. Mehr die Welttemperatur, mehr die Zyklone auch.
Es ist wirklich schrecklich.
April 8, 2022
Animaux
Il y a plus de 7 billions humains dans la terre et pour autant que je sache il n'y a pas un seul avec des "super-pouvoir". Frenchment le près de "super-pouvoir" on peut trouver sont dans la nature. Enfin par exemple super forte, le gorilla comparé à nous il a une forte incroyable. Voler, la majorité d'oiseaux ont cette qualité. Alors quoi je veux dire c'est que les "super-pouvoir" sont quelque chose de l'imagination c'est tous que c'est semble impossible pour un humaine mais parfois nous oublions que on n'est pas les seuls au ce planète et il y a de créatures avec de "super-pouvoir" réel.
April 8, 2022
Email about my first job
Hi Bob,
it's been a long time, I'm glad to receive your email.
In my first job I was a computer technician in a local shop. It was a part-time job because at that time I was still studying at high school. It's so I only had to worked in the afternoons and on Saturdays.
The main thing I learned obviously was how to repair computers, even though I was studying computing we seldom worked with hardware at school, so it was a great complement.
The other great skill it taught me was punctuality. After a few months working there, I got a copy of the keys and I sometimes managed to open the shop.
About the bad things, not much, but one problem I used to face every other month, was related with the payment. I could say the manager wasn't as punctual paying as I were opening the shop.
I hope the email is helpful for your project. Write me back if you need any further information.
Cheers,
Dani
April 8, 2022
un libro en español
Encontré un libro para nuevos estudiantes de español. Mi hijo le usó en su clase de español cuando tenía dieciséis años. ¡El tiene treinta y uno anos ahora!
Este libro esta bueno para mí. Entiendo casi todas las palabras. Empecé le leer hoy y leí una capitulo. Hay nueve capitulo en el libro. Espero le leer todo de libro en diez días
April 8, 2022
April 8, 2022
8 avril 2022 - Cheung Chau
C’est vendredi, ce n’est ni jour férié, ni weekend, mais il y a du monde sur cette île, parce que c’est les vacances d’ « été » pour les enfants. Hong Kong est en effet composé par différentes îles : les deux plus grandes, ce sont sans doute l’île de Hong Kong (ou on s’appelle simplement « Hong Kong ») et l’île Lamma ; mais il y a aussi d’autres îles plus petites et intéressantes comme celui que je suis allée aujourd’hui. Il y a des traits pour faire de randonnée, des plages pour se baigner (mais malheureusement il est fermé à cause du Covid) et aussi beaucoup de restaurants et bistros pour satisfaire notre goût.
Aujourd’hui, on peut y acheter de petit pain aussi. La fête de Petit Pain, qui a lieu l’avril de calendrier lunaire, est l’une de traditions les plus connues ici. Le pain qui est utilisé dans cette fête est ronde, et avec les mots « 平安 », c’est-à-dire « en sécurité ». C’est une activité religieuse qui a but de prier pour le bonheur. Pendant trois jours, tout le monde ne doivent pas manger la viande pour respecter le Dieu de leur religion et il y a aussi des parades. Après trois jours de cérémonie, on peut grimper un montagne fait par beaucoup de petits pains et prendre les pains qui portent bonheur.
April 8, 2022
Sant Jordi
There is a day for the books, gifts, roses, loving and dragons in my country. Sant Jordi is the book's day and the rose in Catalonia. For me is one of the better days for visiting Barcelona. People usually to give a book and a rose to their partner as a present. On April the weather is fine, and the streets are plenty of people walking and watching for buy books and roses. It is a funny tradition in wich people to give a rose to the girlsfriends, and a book to boyfriends. These gifts can be to bought in the street. Of course, all the book shops are plenty of people too. Usually, if you buy a book this day, you get a discount of 10% over the normal price. On the other hand, the price of roses can rise to 200%. The dragon and sant Jordi is also a symbol of this day. As I told before, it is the better day for walking for the Barcelona's streets. By the way, is on April 23.
April 8, 2022
El sueño
El sueño es una actividad cuyo papel es imprescindible en la función de los mamíferos. Durante años los investigadores han estudiado los beneficios que produce un buena noche de sueño como mejor enfoque y estado de humor. Además es el periodo que el cerebro organiza la información que había acumulado durante el día. También han habido estudios que investigaban lo contrario, o sea, los riesgos y daños que sufre una organismo que carece sueño suficiente. Me sorprendió al leer la historia de un chico que ganó un concurso de conducir por lo que le apodaron el conductor adolescente más seguro del país. Un tiempo después murió en un accidente de transito porque un día se adormecía mientras mientras manejaba un auto. Ultimamente el sueño se me ha vuelto bastante precario ya que me cuesta dormir toda la noche. Anteriormente me recetaban píladoras para dormirse que al principio cumplían su propósito. Sin embargo, nunca pude decir que realmente me levantaba descansado y temprano iban perdiendo su eficacia hasta que finalmente ni a mí me producían ningún efecto.
April 8, 2022
In a Bus Station
I am now waiting a bus to go home.
Unfortunately, I just missed a bus while I was waiting the cross signal.
For this reason, I should wait at least 20 minutes.
Many people are also going their home, some members are waiting in the bus station, too.
If my right foot were not hurted, I would go home on foot.
For my foot, I try to use a bus in a long time.
Please come the bus soon.
April 8, 2022
Essay: car park or history museum
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 220-260 words in an appropriate style.
You have listened to a radio discussion programme about which facilities are needed most in your area.
You have made the notes below:
Which facilitis are needed most in your area?
- Car park.
- Sport centre.
- History museum.
Write an essay discussing two of the facilities in your notes. You should explain which facility is needed most in your area, giving reasons in support of your answer.
You may, if you whish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussion, but you should use your own words as far as possible.
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(What could make it sound more natural? )
I recently listened to a discussion in a local radio program about the the lack of some important facilities in our town, such as a history museum and a parking area for residents' cars.
Those are not essential facilities for citizens, what it is good, as this indicate the comfort level in this area. That is likely to be the most reasonable reason why most people in the program were declined to build a new history museum, instead of wasting the public space for a car park, an option which only car owners benefits from it, like I heard from some participants in the discussion. Moreover, this city is an universitary one, so presumably most of the citizens during the course period, that is to say students from different parts of the country, will not need a car park for anything but to wrong-doings, as it is the perfect place to be hidden from the watchful eye of the police.
As regards to building a new museum, it is likely not an interesting idea for people of all ages, as I just explained above. However, it is an interesting place to make students from the differenst schools of our city getting into depth in our local history, far beyond what they have learnt in their classes. Therefore, it is at least an interesting tool for teachers to get their student involved in the subject.
All in all, without going into details, I consider that museums are the facilities most needed and less care for within the topic of the radio program.
April 8, 2022
голограммы
Какие применения голограммы?
Один из претендентов на французское президентство использовал голограммы, чтобы прочитать свою речью в многих городах. Это представляет гигантский шаг в политической сфере, если мы сравним это с митингами, которые случились век назад. Но ли у голограмм есть другие применения, кроме тех, которые помогают политикам с вещаниями пропаганды и обещаний, которые никогда не реализуются?
По-моему, потенциал голограмм более, чем трюки, чтобы ошеломить зрителей на мероприятиях. Они могут быть тоже инструментами образования. Например, учителя истории могут создавать исторических фигур, чтобы давать студентам более иммерсионные уроки с помощью изображений событий, которые могут быть рассказаны самыми людьми, которые вызвали их.
Голограммы также могут быть способами, чтобы вспомнить кого-то, которое уже умерло. Вместо цветочков, которые слишком банальны в настоящее время, семья может копировать человека в форме голограммы, чтобы иметь что-то, которое появляется особенно.
У разума нет пределов. Он только зависит от нашей решимости изменять наша действительность.
April 8, 2022
April 8, 2022
Traduction d'un livre en anglais
Never ask for too much, then, and know when to stop. It is the
master’s prerogative to give——to give when he wants and what he wants,
and to do so without prompting. Do not give him the chance to reject your
requests. Better to win favors by deserving them, so that they are bestowed
without your asking.
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Traudction : Ne demander jamais trop et savoir quand arrêter. C'est un privilège de votre maître à donner ce qu'il veut au bon moment, et lui donner sans qu'il vous demande. Ne lui laisse aucune chance à refuser vos demandes. C'est mieux à gagner des favors en les méritant, pour qu'ils soient conféré sans vous demander.
April 8, 2022
April 8, 2022
Quelles ont été vos meilleures expériences de voyage ?
Quelles ont été vos meilleures expériences de voyage ?
La semaine dernière je suis parti au nord pour passer la vacances. La plupart de temps, j'étais dans la rivière près chez nous avec mes cousins essayant d'attraper des poisson. nous avons bu, nous sommes sortis et nous avons fumé beaucoup de cannabis. 😁
April 8, 2022
What do you think of electric vehicles?
Electric vehicles are great means of transportation in terms of environmental and people convenience benefits.
To begin with environmental positives, I believe that these means of transportation are a neccessity to tackle global warming. Since these vehicles are powered by electric energy, which has been generated by solar panels, the usage of fossil energy will be reduced. Tesla company, in particular, produces electric cars, which are powered by solar energy resulting in the reduction of gas fuels and tackling with global warming issues.
Similary, vehicles running on electricity power provide benefits to their owners. One of the strong points could be the low noise they make when driving. People would experience less irritating noises when cars are passing by their homes, which results in their convenience and calmness at home.
April 8, 2022
Are there homeless shelters in your country?
I think there's quite a bunch of homeless people in the town where I stay. They usually spend nights in the abandoned living complexes or abandoned commercial buildings. Although, there's a chance to ask for nights at the shelters. They let you stay for a week and then every other two or three days.
I currently live in Russia and I visited a few towns here. The city where I passed by a homeless shelter was Moscow. In the other towns I didn't encounter them as long as I didn't stay there for a long time, nor did I set a goal to observe homeless shelters.
Now I live in the town of Rostov. I came across one homeless shelter that's situated not far from the river's embankment. One day my father brought a few packs of food there.
April 8, 2022
When will our lockdown come to the end?
I still can remember back to 2019 I was locked down in my community because of pandemic first surge. I felt I was in jail during that time. Now 2 years after, Covid variant again went across China. Especially in ShangHai. Until now, Shanghai is still under strictly lockdowns. I heard the news from media that many people in Shanghai suffered food shortage and medical insufficient. The local medical resources nearly run out.
I lived in a small city, not the metropolis city like Shanghai, But I also struggling everyday. I have to scan two codes before I entered any doors,whatever community door,supermarket door,park door,etc...
I once forgot to take my mobile phone. It's awkward,because I can't be entered in my own home without scanning the code.
I keep praying for Shanghai people, Hope they will get free soon. We can't just afford too much misery.
April 8, 2022
Recognize Relationship
How do you know if you’re in a relationship or if a friendship is on the way to being a relationship?
Why don’t you say the only friendship instead of a friendship is on the way to being a relationship? A lot of friendships are just friendships. I would like to say we are always affected by our subconsciously in every stuff and your mind thinking will affect your daily behaviors. In further, your relationship will start at that time when you think you can do everything for your lover, and you will continuously adore him or her. On the other hand, you will have a friendship at that time when you are prepared to support your friend and talk to some shit jokes which will make your friend laugh and feel a lit bit sick. The atmosphere between you and another will be changed and affected by your mindset subconsciously which is started at a tiny point.
You don’t need to know when is the time you should select a kind of relationship with others, these things will happen behind our behavior and mindset. The point is, that you just need to adjust your behavior and mindset when you get in touch with people. You do everything when you love a person, and the relationship will develop naturally.
There are two typical cases that can prove what I am saying for you:
1. You love a person that you really want to get him or her. You trying to grab his or her heart in every connection between you guys. Finally, you get him or her. This is a romantic and nice end.
2. You love a person that you really want to get him or her. You trying to grab his or her heart in every connection between you guys but it doesn’t work anymore. Finally, you choose to be friends with the one and you get into a new relationship with another one because you know you can’t get people’s love when they don’t love you whatever you do.
See! All of these situations are gradually developed and changed. You can’t stop loving a guy even if you think you only have a little bit possible to get this guy at starting time. You can’t love a guy when you really don’t love this guy. Almost everything is uncontrolled but people would like to think they can control it from a macroscopic perspective.
Just enjoying life and don’t think too much ya.
Thank you for your reading. Have a nice day!
April 8, 2022
Helping others online
Today when I recommended Snipaste to my classmates, I received lots of doubts.
Snipaste is a free, portable software allowing you to paste screenshots on the desktop. This unique function distinguishes it from Windows built-in features like printscreen. Then you can make marks, zoom the picture, adjust the transparency, etc.
Notes: I'm not advertising for it. I was impressed by its performance and wanted to share the productivity-increasing tool with my peers. But they just kept repeating the keyboard shortcuts, the chatting software QQ's screenshot function, etc.
Recently I'm losing the motivation to share or to help others, especially online. Maybe not "recently".
Last year I joined lots of discussion groups focusing on subjects like Mathematics and Physics. There I volunteered to deal with questions. Many lacked the basic politeness and were ignorant of how to properly state a question. So I often had to face unclear descriptions and blurred pictures taken from textbooks.
Once I met someone claiming to be a primary school student, on whom I spent an hour explaining what was "power" (in Mathematics). Then he told me he hadn't learnt division and asked me to teach him. After this incident I was lacking in interest to help others online for a long time.
I'm quite sensitive and susceptible, and it hurts when I get unkind response. I know I'd better change my fragile heart to a tough one. But I also hope that sincere help won't be treated as nothing. After all, anonymous identity shouldn't be the reason for bad manners in cyberspace.
April 8, 2022