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herondale

Dec. 6, 2022

表演

孩子: 妈妈，这条项链很漂亮！我想试穿一下。
妈妈: 好吧。小姐，那条项链多少钱？
营业员: 五百元。
妈妈: 算了，我们去另一家商店。
孩子: 妈妈，我想去那家鞋店。他们的鞋很好看。
妈妈: 好，我们去那里吧。
孩子: 这么多鞋！我想买那双凉鞋。
妈妈: 白色的吗?
孩子: 对。
妈妈: 好吧，我会买的。
孩子: 等一下！妈妈，我忘了我的背包！
妈妈: 真的吗？让我们回到首饰店。

孩子: 我的背包不见了！阿姨，你看到过吗？
营业员: 背包？对不起，我没看到过。
孩子: 真糟糕。
妈妈: 也许你的背包在别的地方？让我们四处看看。

妈妈: 啊，还没看到。不好意思，你是商场的经理吗？
经理: 对。有问题吗？
妈妈: 我的女孩子把她的背包弄丢了。你能帮我们吗？
经理: 我建议你们去失物招领处。在那儿，你会登记你的名字和联系电话。
妈妈: 好，谢谢！

工作人员: 早安！欢迎来到失物招领处。有没有问题吗？
孩子: 我刚才在首饰店把我的背包放在地上。当我回来的时候，背包不见了。
工作人员: 好。请在这里写下你的名字和联系电话。
工作人员: 你的背包是什么样子的？
孩子: 蓝色和粉红色。
工作人员: 请你写下来。

工作人员: 如果我们找到你的背包，或者有人把背包送来，我们立刻给你打电话。
孩子: 谢谢阿姨。妈妈，对不起，我把背包弄丢了。
妈妈: 没关系。不是故意的。
孩子: 但是我太马虎了！将来，我不会那么马虎。

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Scarlett_Father

Dec. 6, 2022

the City I am Living (1)

I live in Chongqing which is the fourth municipality city of China, many people say that's a political city in the country. Before 1997, it was the biggest city in Sichuan province, the top local governor will generally be in a top position in central government, or jailed. That's a big gamble and challenging to work here, of course, I have no ability to be involved in it.
This biggest city in the world is situated in the Southwest of China along the Yangtze River, which rooms over 30 million people, I am not sure how big it is, and don't check it online. But I know it's not as well-known as Beijing, Shanghai, and Guangzhou to most foreigners. I want to write something about the city in which I have lived for over 40 years in my own simple words.

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Freya

Dec. 6, 2022

2022年12月05日

もう12月だ!去年は本当に早かったと思う。仕事があるしかも。だけど難しくて疲れる年だった。それでも、楽しい。

私は受け付け係だから、受容にクリスマスの飾りを置いた。きれいと思う。まだクリスマスツリーでわないが、買わない。そのは私の所為でわないの!

先週私はお腹が痛かったけど、今もう大丈夫。も風が引いた、それでもいい。

この週は楽しみにしている。

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tana_gao

Dec. 6, 2022

Russell Peters's Stand-up

Last Saturday, I went to a stand-up.

Stand-up is an art about the offense. If someone sits in the front of the performing platform, they usually become a part of a stand-up show —— be made a fool by the comedians. So I was very nervous but hopefully, my given ticket made me out of this exciting interaction, I curled up into my seat in the mountain and laughed with my classmates.

The show was really fun. In the first half, Russell baited almost half people in the first line. Then he shared his thought about the gap between generations, and typical Russell jokes -- stereotype about different races. His venomous tongue makes me scream with laughter.

Newark is a good place and I would visit there again.

writing

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juestebanmar

Dec. 6, 2022

やっと休み！

先週の木曜日は大学の授業がやっと終わりましたので、二か月ほどの休みに入りました。大学が完全に嫌いわけではないんですが、いろいろな理由があって好きづらいものになっています。今学んでいるオンラインコースの効率的な勉強方法のせいか、大学の授業はとても不効率的に見えてしまいます。もちろん完全にではないんですが。例えば、先生に直接聞ける質問の答えや自分の仕事についての感想を聞けることなどは自分一人でできないことなので、それは全て甲斐があるものなのです。でも今の自分はどうやってそのことを生かせるのかよく分かりませんし、授業の時間自体はほぼすべてはほかのものに費やせるので、授業の教育課程や日程に干渉されず、するべきだと思われるものをして、自分が進みたい速度にすすめるような状況にいられたいというのは仕方がないと思います。そのために来学期大学のことはさほど大きな問題にならないようにこの二か月に頑張りたいと思います。

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martin_pescador

Dec. 6, 2022

Entrevistas

El viernes, presenté mi currículum a unas empresas en línea. Últimamente no había estado satisfecho con mi proyecto en el trabajo, quizás porque involucra un tipo de código poco común y muy lento. Tengo ganas de utilizar herramientas más nuevas y por eso pide entrevistas.

Dos empresas me han contestado y uno me dijo que tendré una entrevista telefónica mañana. Es un papel avanzado y no sé si estoy realmente listo para hacerlo. El otro me preguntó una serie de preguntas como «¿Qué habilidades tiene un ingeniero superior?» o «Nos dé unos ejemplos en que una especie especifica de desarrollo ha ayudado.» Aún estoy esperando sus pensamientos en mis respuestas.

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beaujacques_chevalhomme

Dec. 6, 2022

Aimeriez-vous vivre dans le luxe ?

Je suis plutôt contre la richesse ostentatoire. Je crois qu’il y a tellement des gens démunis dans le monde qu’il est moralement douteux de vivre dans l’ultra-luxe, voire un signe de gros égoïsme. Mais j’admets que, si je devenais riche, certaines choses changeraient, à savoir ma maison et mes voyages, qui deviendrait plus fréquents. Je ne voudrais jamais une maison énorme, mais une maison de bon goût avec des très beaux alentours, ça je pourrais soutenir. En vérité, les choses brillantes ne m’attirent pas trop, mais je pense qu’une grande différence entre la classe moyenne et le plus aisée, c’est que le dernier a plus de temps libre pour poursuivre leurs vrais intérêts, et ce, parce qu’ils peuvent littéralement l’achète : quand on est riche, on n’a plus besoin de faire des ménages. Ça, je trouve attirant.

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 5, 2022

Homework: Finding a Roommate

Hello! I hope you're well. :)

Today I'm attempting to this homework.

I'm aiming for a formal written American English.
Please correct me if I use contractions because it's a bad habit.

Write 10 questions and answers to know the routine of your possible new roommate.
Example: What time does he/she have lunch?, does he/she exercise regularly?

What time does she get up? At 5:00 am

Does she go to work? Yes, she does.

What is her work? Police office.

Does she cook? or she would rather to order takeaway food? She would rather to cook.

What time does she go to work? At 7:00 am.

What does she do after making her bed? She says to herself 'today is going to be an awesome day.'

Does she travel regularly? No, she does not.

Does she shing when she takes a shower? Yes, regularly.

What kind of food does she like? She likes Chinese food.

How often does she exercise? She exercises every day.

Write five sentences where you explain the routine of your possible roommate. Remember that you will use the structure of the third person. Use the adverbs of time: first, after, then, finally.

This is my possible new roommate Samantha and this is her routine: first, she gets up at 5:00 am, she makes her bed, she repeat the statement 'today is going to be an awesome day.' After that, she takes a hot shower and she often sings while she is taking the shower, makes her lunch, puts on her uniform and she goes to work at a police station at 7:00 am. In her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.
She uses her bike to come home. After coming home, she exercises.
Finally, she cooks Chinese food for dinner and she goes to bed early.

Thanks for reading!

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dubrakva

Dec. 5, 2022

My superheroine

My superheroine's name is Eco-girl. She cares about nature and the environment. She is actually
a teenager, but during the night she becomes a heroine. Her real name is Eva and she is 14 years old.
Eva cleans the streets of Croatia using her powers. She can fly in order to be able to go around
the whole of Croatia and check if there is any trash on the floor or if everything is properly sorted. If she
sees something that isn't right, like litter, she uses her telekinesis to quickly clean it up. Eva has a special
costume, a green mask, skirt and shirt with a recycling sign. She wears it so her identity wouldn't be
revealed.
She does all this to encourage other people to take care of planet Earth. Eco-girl wants us all to
help her because the Earth is already in danger!

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knightsjohn2

Dec. 5, 2022

Traducción 18

En el día 13 de agosto del año 109, República de China.

El yuan ejecutivo pasó un acto modificado de la ley civil al que modifique la edad de clasificar un adulto a 18 años, que era 20 años, y la edad de casarse a 18 años. El primer ministro, Su Cheng Chang, señaló en la prensa que los jóvenes son un esfuerzo importante para el desarrollo social y el futuro para el país. Hasta ahora hay más de 110 países cuyo realizan la ley. Por lo tanto, el acto es para Igualar nuestros jóvenes de esta era, responder de la demanda de la sociedad y corresponder al mundo. Se espera que los jóvenes puedan ser independiente e insistir activamente los asuntos de la sociedad para aumentar la competencia del país.
Ya que el ley afectará el derecho de ciudadanos y en varios ámbitos, necesita al menos 2 año a realizar, que se estima realizar el día 1 de enero del año 112 ,República de China.

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tim315

Dec. 5, 2022

Mi mañana

Hoy yo levantarse a ocho y media. Para desayuno yo he cereal Cheerios con leche de almond. Yo tampoco el toastado con mantequilla de maní. Despues eso yo ejercito con eliptico para una hora.

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mahmoud_zhraldeen

Dec. 5, 2022

Email

Sehr geehrte Damen und Herrn,

vielen Dank für Ihre Antwortung.
Ich möchte dir berichten,dass ich einen Termin im Deutsche Botschaft Beirut am 26/1/2023 habe,und ich Masterzulassung vor 3 Woche von dem Termin erhalten soll.
Deshalb könnten Sie bitte mir früh berichten?.

Vielen dank für Ihre Verständnis.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,

Mahmoud Zhr Aldeen

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anouk

Dec. 5, 2022

? X

Avant heures de migraines avec les yeux fixés sur rien, il s'est décidé. Son coeur veut seulement se reposer un peu, son cerveau a besoin de dormir; mais le sommeil ne peux pas pas cicatriser cettes belssures. Si seulement il crût à la puissance du temps! Si seulement il crût à quelque chose!
Mais avant les années de cerveau et puis quelles de coeur, la séquence est pour lui clair; si clair que le couteau vient pris d'une main sans idées.
Et même si ses larmes de joie avaient mouiller quelques jours plus tôt, maintenant ruisseau de sang courent sur son cou; les genoux relâchant et le bruit sourd dépeignent parfaitement son vie.

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poggers27

Dec. 5, 2022

Мой Дом

Привет! Я Тиитус! я жить в квартира. Это не болшои или малинкий. Это нормалныйю

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nglyph

Dec. 5, 2022

12月5日

こんにちは、またここに書きます。今日は僕の一日について書きましてと思います。えーとね、今日はちょうとリラックスの日にだった。主に家の掃除をしましたけど。昼食にスパゲッティとミートボールを作れました。美味しくなりましたけどミートボールは少し焼きすぎました。後は2時間日本語を勉強しました。漢字は本当に難しいけどあきらめない。

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courageuse19

Dec. 5, 2022

Challenge, Day 65

Today is the 65 th the day of my daily English challenge. Today I felt amazing. No pain!! Thank to God.

I had breakfast healthy, I meditated and then I cooked. In the evening, I called to my mother to know her news of her health. After that I learned a bunch of new words and I also read the topics differents each other and I read them a loud.

The news word that I learned are: educated, acquire, to discover, hard, come in handy, to get away and look after.

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jsjoeio

Dec. 5, 2022

el 5 de diciembre

Hoy fue el primer día de trabajar de la nueva casa. Lo hice porque la mejora amiga de mi esposa estaba acá de visita y ellas podrían dejarme en la casa antes de ir a la tienda.

Tengo ganas de poder mudarnos en la casa completamente. Va a ser mucho trabajo pero valerá la pena.

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courageuse19

Dec. 5, 2022

Día 35 de mi reto

Hoy es el día 35 de mi reto de español. Ahora quiero escribir algunas las oraciónes.

-Estás engordando, necesitas perder peso y evitar de la comida chatarra.

-Estás engordando, necesitas dejar de comer dulces.

Creo que es diferente entre ' dejar de' y ' evitar de' ? ¿Me puede ayudar por favor?

-Ayer, compré una camisa. No me queda muy bien. Mañana, voy a devolver esta camisa.

Estoy agradecida por este sitio web y todos los que me han ayudado.

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cthylla

Dec. 5, 2022

Undertale (2/3)

It wasn't until this summer of this year when, thanks to TikTok, I became obsessed with a song.
Только летом в этот год, что, благодаря TikTok, я стала одержима одной песней.

It seemed like a sad but beautiful melody.
Мне показалось, что это грустная, но красивая мелодия.

The song is called 'Fallen Down'.
Песня называться 'Fallen Down'.

When I looked for it on YouTube to listen to it, I realized that this song belonged to Undertale.
Когда я ей поискала на Ютубе, чтобы слушать, я заметила, что эту песню принадлежала Undertale.

I listened to more songs and they're all great.
Я слышала больше песни и они все отличные.

I found a new job, and when they paid me, the first thing that I bought was this game.
Я нашла новую работу, и когда они заплатили мне, первый вещь, что я сделала была купить игру.

This game is amazing
Эта игра прекрасная.

I regret not playing this before.
Я сожалею, что я ей не играла раньше.

The story is really sad but passionate.
История действительно грустная, а страстная.

The characters are unique, and depending on your decisions, the story changes.
Персонажи уникальные, и в зависимости от ваших решений, история меняется.

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serhan

Dec. 5, 2022

Collection

The attached invoice of you will be paid tomorrow. It takes time to collect money from the client. Which is why it is difficult for us to pay your invoice as soon as you send it to us. So, please bear with us, we always struggle to pay the invoices with 30-35 days due.

I want to let you know the November invoices of you will be paid in the first week of January 2023.

Thank you for your patience. Best Regards

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atomcdismantling

Dec. 5, 2022

印尼的岛屿

五个最大的岛屿在印尼是爪哇岛、加里曼丹岛、蘇門答臘岛、苏拉威西岛和新幾內亞岛。它们是印尼的最主要的岛屿。印尼当然也有其他重要的岛屿，比如有名的巴厘岛。在中国，知道巴厘岛的人多不多?
我的家乡是萬隆，在爪哇岛的西。但现在我是住在其他城市。
哦，对了，我觉得蘇門答臘很难写! 如果没有键盘，我就不会写!

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orea5

Dec. 5, 2022

Graphs and a mix of tenses

1.Could you please tell me if it's correct to use so many different tenses in a piece of writing?

The rate of people living in poverty in Europe FLUCTUATED between the years 1993 and 2005. Until the year 2015 when the chart ends, we can observe a DOWNWARD trend as the number of poor people has been DWINDLING.
As for poor people in the Middle East and North Africa, the number FLATLINED from 1999 until 2013, after which it ESCALATED and reached about 6 million poor people in 2015. South Asia has seen a consistent PLUNGE in poverty levels, and even though it has done very well, it still hasn’t OUTPACED Eastern Europe’s achievements. Latin America and the Caribbean appears to be the most stable. We have seen very little change during the study, as we can see there is predominantly a flat PLATEAU, especially during the years 2008 to 2015. Sub-Saharan Africa seems quite stable. There is an increase during the years 1987 and 1993, then it almost LEVELS OFF between 1993 and 2002, then we see a soft drop after that.
The global number of PC and smartphone users mounted to 1.7 BILLION people in 2014.
Global population was steadily ESCALATING starting from 500 BC until1500, after which it started soaring and EQUALLED 4 billion people in 1979. The UPWARD trend has been continuing and it is forecasted that the number of people inhabiting our planet will SURPASS 8.5 billion people in 2025.

2. Is it grammatically correct to say that global population has been ESCALATING starting from 500 BC until 2025?

3. In the sentence " It is forecasted that the number of people inhabiting our planet will SURPASS 8.5 billion people in 2025", can I replace ' surpass' with verbs like outstrip, outpace, and overtake without change in the meaning?

4. Which word is stronger TUMBLE or CRASH, SOAR or ROCKET?
5. Should I replace " was steadily ESCALATING starting from 500 BC until1500" with 'ESCALATED'?
Thank you in advance

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satyras

Dec. 5, 2022

Ein Brief zum Freund

Ein Brief zum Freund

Lieber Sebastian,

Ich habe mich sehr über deine E-Mail gefreut.

Schön, von dir zu hören, dass du deine Ausbildung als Krankenpfleger begonnen hast und deine eigenen vier Wände gehabt hast.

Ich bin der Meinung ist es ein sehr wichtige aber schwierige Schritt für viele junge Menschen.

Vor drei Jahren habe ich vor der Universität absolviert. Damals war Jobsuche wegen Corona Pandemie ein harte Nuss für viele Menschen. Am Anfang verdiente ich natürlich nicht so viel, als die Hälfte meines Lohnes bezahlte ich die Miete. Allerdings wohnte ich ein WG-Wohnung mit anderen zwei Menschen.

Mein Zimmer war eng Und die Lage der Wohnung war entfernt von meinem Arbeitsplatz. Jeden Tag brauchte ich ungefähr zwei Stunden zu pendeln.

In meiner Heimatland gibt es viel Junge Menschen, die ähnliches Leben wie ich haben. Sie verlassen ihre Elternhäusern und auf dem Weg zum Großen Stadt.

Ein Vorteil dieses Lebens ist, dass sie mehr Freiheit bekommen und sich endlich erwachsen fühlen. Ich finde es bedeutsam für alle Menschen, auf eigenen Beinen zu stehen, weil Niemand von ihrer Eltern für das ganze Leben abhängen kann.

andererseits ändert dieser Lebensstil sich möglicherweise die Eltern-Kind-Beziehung.Wenn Junge Menschen eine räumliche Trennung machen, könnte diese Beziehung spannend bleiben.

aber man darf nicht vergessen, nachdem sie einen Auszug machen, müssen sie mit Eltern gute Kontakte bleiben. Familie ist immer am wichtigsten.

Was ich noch sagen möchte, dass nicht nur Freiheit begleitet sich mit der Auszug, sondern neue Verantwortungen.

Mann muss den Haushalt allein besorgen und sich um Geld und Essen auftreiben. Es wird keinen vollen Kühlschrank, keine Frische Wäsche und kein geputztes Bad geben.

Wie sollte man auf diese Situationen reagieren?

Ich denke, dass wir nur akzeptieren können und ein Balance zwischen Arbeit und Lebensqualität finden sollten.

Wenn du abends müde von der Arbeit kamst, solltest du zuerst dich gut ausruhen. An meiner Stelle würde ich auch so machen. Ich wird ein schöne Abend am Wochenende wählen und versuchen, alle Haushalte fertigzumachen. Ich finde, dass es manchmal eine Abwechslung werden kann.

Hoffentlich ist mein Wort hilfreich für dich.

Ich freue mich auf eine Nachricht von dir.

Mach's gut und bis bald!

Viele Grüße
xxx

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dongjune96

Dec. 5, 2022

Grammar

The beauty of men is not in their faces but in their personalities

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tommy

Dec. 5, 2022

Drinking culture

As far as I know, no animal drink alcohol willingly other than human being. Alcohol sometimes breaks one's career, relationship, or life at the same time it has created human history. We have acquired enormous number of technologies and food culture through an effort to have fan with liquor. Aside from Islamic society, every country has it's own drinking culture. People know drinking together is the simplest way to get acquainted without verbal communication.
I always wonder if I should turn down an invitation to a drinking party. Though I love the taste of alcoholic drinks such as beer, fruit cocktail, and Japanese sake, I'd like to chose friends to drink with. Some of my friends from university compel me to drink until I become nauseous. Even though most Japanese people can't drink a lot due to the lack of the degradative enzyme, they want to be drunk as if they believe that bad things happened to them can be disappeared. I think it is a negative part of Japanese drinking culture.

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