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Sept. 4, 2023
盗まれた財布を拾った子供たち
ユースによると、小さい子供たちが犯人を捕まることに役に立ったということです。今年6月、東京にある保育園の近くにある公園で遊ぶ時、子供たちが財布３つを見つけました。そしてそれを見て、保育園の先生が警察に届けました。警察を調べによって、財布が盗まれたことでした。公園の周りのカメラを調べると、財布を盗んだ犯人を見つけることもできました。財布を拾った子供たちにお礼を言いに警官と地域警察キャラクターが保育園に行ったということです。
私がこのニュースを読んで、子供たちが生活指導をよく受けたということを考えました。財布を見つけるとまず先生にくれたから。そして警官が子供たちにお礼を言うのはとてもいいことだと思います。そんなことは子供に楽しいから長いこと記憶に残るでしょう。警察を手伝った時を記憶して誇らしくて、いつも別な人に役に立つことを熱心してすることになったらいいです。
Sept. 4, 2023
Sept. 4, 2023
Nous avons une fuite d'eau
Ça fait plus que deux mois depuis nous avons dit à la propriétaire qu'il y a une petite fuite d'eau sous le lavabo. Sauf maintenant la fuite est pire et il faut que nous utilisions un déshumidificateur dans la cuisine. Cette machine génère beaucoup de la chaleur, et nous sommes dans une canicule cette semaine. Je laisse les fenêtres ouvertes mais les volets restent fermés parce que je suis gravement allergique aux moustiques. Quelques peuvent mêmes rentrent. Il n'est pas confortable ici.
Sept. 4, 2023
¿Cuál es mejor - clases o aprender por ti solo?
En nuestro mundo cada vez más dominado por las computadoras, saber cómo escribir código se ha vuelto una habilidad esencial, y no solo para los trabajos relacionados con los aparatos electrónicos. Cómo no, las clases de código se han vuelto muy populares, especialmente las de en línea. No obstante, aún creo yo que las clases ofrecidas por las universidades son mejores.
Las clases en línea no te permiten conocer a gente de la industria y, por lo tanto, terminas sabiendo cómo codigar pero sin algún contacto que te ayude a conseguir empleo. Las universidades, por otro lado, suelen tener recursos e incluso departamentos enteros dedicados a ayudarte ganar experiencia y, además, a menudo poseen enlaces con empresas locales, lo que te facilita aún más encontrar empleo. De hecho, es común ya tener un puesto de trabajo listo para ti para cuando termines con tus estudios.
Además, los profesos te exponen a un montón de temas y recursos que nunca encontrarías por ti solo. A menudo queremos enfocarnos en lo que creamos "útil" y olvidarnos de todo lo demás; sin embargo, el buen trabajo exige un entendimiento profundo y nos cuenta averiguar lo que no sepamos ya. ¡Por eso gastan gobiernos y empresas millones de dólares cada año! Aunque los profesores no sepan todo y a veces nos enseñen cosas que no vayamos a usar nunca, eso no es su objetivo - los profesores están para guiarnos y mostrarnos lo que desconocemos, por eso son tan importantes.
Hay muchos que discuten que no es necesario asistir a clases y pagar cientos de dólares para algo que se puede aprender por ti solo, en línea y gratis. Y tienen un punto - pero sigo creyendo en la importancia de asistir a clases, aunque sea solo por el "networking". Porque, aunque seas el mejor programador del mundo y sabes todo sobre la ciencia de la computación, aún te quedas sin trabajo si no conoces a alguien en la industria.
Sept. 4, 2023
Sweet Potatoes
Sweet potatoes were largely planted in my area when I was a child. They were our main food and usually planted in May, and harvested in October.
After harvesting them, people had two ways to store them. One, they sliced the sweet potatoes into slices and dried them in the sun, and then collected them and stored them in houses. Two, they dug cellars and stored sweet potatoes in the cellars.
People almost ate sweet potatoes for three meals every day. In the morning, mothers cut sweet potatoes into pieces and put them into a pot filled with water, and then heated the pot to boil them. Sometimes, people didn't even cut sweet potatoes, but directly put them in the pot.
As for the dried sweet potato slices, people had two ways to eat them. One was to crush the slices and put them into a pot filled with water to cook them. Another way was to grind the slices into flour to make food. People usually used flour to make noodles and steamed buns.
Let me tell you how to make steamed sweet potato flour buns. It was so simple: you mixed the flour and a certain amount of water to make a dough, and then made the dough into many small doughs and flattened the small doughs, finally stuck the flat doughs in a pot (water was at the bottom of the pot and didn't reach where the flat dough was sticking) to cook them.
As for those small and broken sweet potatoes, people put them under their eaves to dry them, because the less water in them, the more delicious they were. When people boiled this kind of sweet potatoes, they tasted more sweet than ordinary ones.
I grew up eating sweet potatoes and everyone grew up with it. So there was a common saying in my area, "sweet potato flour, sweet potato buns, without them we can't survive."
Sweet potatoes used to be the essential food to feed us, but now people have more good alternatives to them, and they have become an exquisite dish in restaurants.
Sept. 4, 2023
L'amour
Je pense que je suis d'accord avec cette phrase. Même si l’amour peut nous blesser, l’amour est une belle chose. Avec amour, nous créons de beaux souvenirs. L'amour nous incite à exprimer de belles qualités, telles que la patience, l'honnêteté et l'empathie. Même si ces choses ne soient pas permanentes si vous perdez l’amour, elles en valent la peine. Au total, l’amour est un bon sentiment qui vaut la peine de le perdre.
Sept. 3, 2023
3. September 2023
Heute ist der zweite Tag im mein schreibpraxis. Ich bin in meine Studentenzimmer mit mein mitbewohner, Mel. Sie ist sehr lustig und wirklich nett. Ich mag sie, und ich bin aufgeregt, mit sie zu leben. Dieses Jahr macht wird sehr spaß. Gestern ich fühlte krank, aber heute ich fühle ein bisschen besser. Ich denke, es war nur allergien. Meine Klassen beginnen am Mittwoch. Ich hoffe, ich fühle wird besser vorher. Ich bin sehr aufgeregt, aber auch nervös für meine klassen.
Sept. 3, 2023
Sept. 3, 2023
The world of the Shining Prince
I liked this books a lot, it's organized in a easy way and it's easy to understand. Heian Kyo was the capital of ancient Japan and a place of great sophistication and wealth, so much that they comunicated almost only using poems, as so a bad poem was meet with social shame. They were also obssesed with rank and style, so much that they had dictated by law which colors, tone and lenght on clothes could be used based on each person rank. This went so far that a woman, whose sleeves were the wrong tone (they used multi-layered ones), would have being subject to the court scorn, not directly of course, but through gossip and backhanded comments.
Sept. 3, 2023
IELTS Speaking Answers
Describe A Film Character Played By An Actor Or Actress Whom You Admire
I'm not a movie buff, so my options for choosing a film character are somewhat limited. However, there is one character who has left a lasting impact on me, and that is Katniss Everdeen from "The Hunger Games" film series, brilliantly portrayed by Jennifer Lawrence.
I first encountered this film series during my final year of high school, and I was immediately captivated by its intense fight scenes and the suspense of the tributes trying to survive the cruel survival game. As the movies progressed, I found myself deeply rooting for Katniss. Her brave decision to volunteer as a tribute for her sister, despite knowing the hardships she would face, her refusal to conform to the opulent and sugar-coated life that the Capitol presented, and her unwavering commitment to joining the rebellion, even after witnessing her close stylist and confidant being executed for their involvement, all resonated deeply with me. I eagerly anticipated the downfall of the Capitol, and the scenes where Katniss took a stand were incredibly satisfying.
The main reason for my deep admiration for this character undoubtedly lies in the remarkable performance of Jennifer Lawrence. She flawlessly captures Katniss's internal struggles, vulnerability, doubt, and love, even in scenes where there isn't much dialogue to explicitly express the character's thoughts—her actions and expressions speak volumes. Jennifer Lawrence truly brought Katniss to life in a way that felt authentic and relatable.
To shed more light on Jennifer Lawrence, while I may not know much about her personal life, I greatly admire her journey from a humble background to becoming a global superstar, which, in many ways, mirrors Katniss's own journey. I've watched some of her short videos in which she comes across as down-to-earth, likable, and relatable. Many people adore her because they see aspects of her character in themselves.
In conclusion, Jennifer Lawrence's portrayal of Katniss Everdeen in "The Hunger Games" was critically acclaimed worldwide. The character, brought to life by her outstanding performance, left an indelible mark on me and many others, showcasing the power of cinema to create relatable and inspiring characters.
Sept. 3, 2023
Sept. 3, 2023
Reise nach Venedig
Letzte Woche haben wir Venedig besucht. Bevor war ich niemals in Venedig oder Italien. Deshalb war das eine spannende Reise für mich.
Zuerst haben wir das Stadtzentrum erkundet. Es gab viele Sehenswürdigkeiten in Venedig, sie waren sehr interessant. Nachdem wir ein wenig erkundet hatten, haben wir das leckere Essen probiert. Die Speise in Italien ist besonders köstlich!
Nach das Stadtzentrum sind wir zu anderen Inseln gereist. Murano war besonders interessant. Da kann man viele interessante Glasgeschäfte finden. Wir haben einen Teil der Produktion gesehen.
Im Allgemeinen war es eine schöne Reise. In die Zukunft würde ich gerne wieder dorthin gehen.
Sept. 3, 2023
Sept. 3, 2023
Prezenty dla nauczycieli
Chcę wysłać moim nauczycielom prezenty dla Boże Narodzenie. Wiem, że są trzy miesiące przed tą dniem, ale lubię przygotować. Myślę, że amerykańskie przekąski i listy byłyby fajne. Czy Polacy kupują amerykańskie przekąski z sklepu? To prawdopodobnie zły pomysł jeśli każdy osoby mogą kupić te wszędzie. xD
Sept. 3, 2023
E-Mails
Bei meinem Vortrag geht es um das Versenden von E-Mails. Man darf nicht übersehen , dass elektronische Geräte wie zum Beispiel Computer, Handy usw. unersetzlicher Teil des Alltagsleben geworden sind. Es ist erwähnenswert , dass wir diese Geräte nutzen , um auf dem Laufenden bleiben zu können. Mit Hilfe von E-Mails können wir wichtige Informationen austauschen.
Für das Versenden von E-Mails spricht die Tatsache, dass somit sowohl mit Freunden als auch auf geschäftlicher Ebene mit Kollegen kommunizieren können. Außerdem senden wir anhand der E-Mails erforderliche Informationen, mit denen wir um eine Arbeitstelle bewerben.
Andererseits bringt das Versenden von E-Mails einige gefährliche Folgen mit sich. Beim Versenden von Informationen , die persönliche Daten enthalten ,bestet das risiko , dass sie von Dieben bzw. Hackern gestohlen werden können. Aus diesem Grund sollten wir Sicherheitssoftware auf unserem Pc hochladen , um nicht mit solchen Diebstählen zu konfrontieren.
Was die Situation in meinem Heimatland betrifft, möchte ich betonen, dass das Versenden E-Mails nicht so weit verbreitet ist. Die Menschen nutzen E-Mails hauptsächlich aus geschäftlichen Gründen.
Zusammenfassend lässt sich sagen, dass das Versenden von E-Mails einen wichtigen Teil des Arbeitslebens ausmacht.
Sept. 3, 2023
A Chat Message
Hello Tim, I hope you've been doing well recently. It is really nice to hear from you, and thank you for your reminders.
Now, I want to tell you more about my opinion on correcting others' essays. I have corrected foreigners' Chinese writings about 10,000 times. My principal in that is: as long as their sentences don't have grammar mistakes, I won't correct them. If I rewrite the sentences for improvement, I will let them know.
If I change their correct sentences based on my preferences or just for improvement and without any explanation left, they will be confused: is my sentence incorrect? Are they rewriting my sentences based on their preferences? Are they perfecting my writing? And so on.
Some people might say you need to make their writing perfect, but I don't think so. As long as their sentences don't have any grammar mistakes, over time they'll gradually improve their writing skills by themselves.
In Chinese, there is a proverb, 抜苗助长. The story is about a person who wants his crop to grow faster, so he pulls his crop seedlings up. Of course, he is doing a stupid thing and he ends up with his crop dying.
David (I don't know that his other name is Peter) does help many Chinese people on Hello talk. I also notice that he likes to make too many changes when he corrects other people's English writings. But I really don't know if he is doing the right correction. After all, English is not my mother tongue.
I see many Chinese people who correct foreigners' Chinese writings on HelloTalk, many times, they are over correcting. In my opinion, they are not helping foreigners, but doing the opposite. I know this because Chinese is my mother tongue.
Again, I am really grateful for your reminders. I will see that as different ways to express my thoughts. Thank you Tim. You are such a kind and helpful person. I hope for all the best things for you. Take care, and talk to you soon.
Sept. 3, 2023
Mi rutina de mañana
Todas las mañanas mi esposo y yo nos levantamos a las seis. Usualmente dormimos siete horas pero no sentimos descansados. Después de ir al baño y mientras tanto completar mi práctica de Duolingo. Después voy a la cocina a beber agua y abrazar a mi esposo. Luego nuestro abrazo voy a arreglar mi cabello y lavarme mi cara. Después de estirar y revisar mis tarjetas de españoles. En este momento son las seis y media y es hora a empezar a trabajo.
Sept. 3, 2023
Divagaciones 59
¡Ojo! ¡Que no dejes que el cangrejo te agarre con esas pinzas!
Con la palma de su mano, ella mató ese grillo como si fuera una cosa común y corriente.
Espero que logres aprobar el examen, pero por otro lado, yo sé que no has estudio tanto como deberías.
Se supone que deben utilizar el dron para inspeccionar los raíles de la vía férrea.
Sept. 3, 2023
At a Station
At a station:
Two Indian-looking girls who spoke only broken words, were asking a station staff something.
The station staff was answering in Japanese, so it didn't seem like they understood what she was saying.
So I thought about how to say it in English.
Maybe the girls wanted to go to Nagoya station, but they bought wrong price tickets, so I thought they wanted them to change.
The girls asking in broken Japanese while showing tickets to the staff "To Nagoya, only Nagoya."
The staff was answering while calculating with a calculator, and showing them, "If you change the tickets, you will have to pay a handling fee, which will make it even more expensive. So you had better to use this ticket as is.”
Sept. 3, 2023
L'alimentation bio
Bonjour à tous!
Je m’appelle XY et je trouve aujourd’hui qu’il y a un petit débat sur le forum au sujet des plats et des aliments issus de l’agriculture. En lisant chaque commentaire, je comprends les raisons pour lesquelles certaines personnes comme Anais ne s’intéressent plus à ces produits en tout niant leurs aspect positives. Personnellement, je crois qu’ils représentent beaucoup d’avantages qu’on doit réfléchir. C’est pourquoi, je décide de vous partager mes expériences en tant que consommateur des bios en souhaitant de changer votre point de vue.
Premièrement, la crédibilité des marques de production assure la consommation des produits bios. En d’autres mots, afin d’être vendu dans la grande surface, ils doivent répondre tout d’abord à plusieurs critères sanitaires dont la grille d’évaluation est très stricte. Par conséquent, on doit avoir l’autorité de certification sur l’hygiène des aliments avant de servir ces nourritures aux consommateurs. Donc, dans le cas où vous verriez des produits bios sur les rangs de la supermarché, ne doutez pas de sa qualité en mettant dans votre caddies!
Deuxièmement, dit produits bios, dit 100% des ingrédients sains. Théoriquement, les aliments que nous consommons tous les jours sont tous industriels qui contiennent des produits chimiques: les conservateurs, BPA,… mais à une petite quantité. Cependant, le point à noter est que plus on en absorbe, plus maladies qu’on souffre. C’est pourquoi, malgré le prix haut des aliments biologiques, on peut rassurer quand même la santé en évitant le cancer, l’allergie, etc…
Généralement, il me semble que je ne suis pas capable de changer votre stéréotype sur les produits biologiques. Mais, en tout cas, je voudrais que vous puissiez d’en consommer dans une courte période afin de non seulement vérifier mes affirmations mais aussi savoir la vraie qualité de ces aliments.
Voilà mon opinion sur l’alimentation bio. Merci de votre lecture!
Sept. 3, 2023
Military Training for New Students
Starting from September 1, local new students will begin their first studying term of this year, and will end by January next year.
As a new student in senior high school student, my daughter was asked to attend a mandatory military training for a week. Each of them will have to pay 510 Yuan (around $72), including three meals a day and clothes for training.
Additionally, anyone who is not able to join the training for physical issues also needs to pay the fees, or won't allowed to graduate.
By the way, please pay another 300 Yuan as an expenditure reserve for class daily usage
Sept. 3, 2023
Sept. 3, 2023
Am Computer lesen
"Am Computer lesen" ist ein interessantes Thema, über welches heutzutage oft diskutiert wird. Ich stimme Kinans Meinung zu.
Wann wir über das Lesen sprechen, sprechen wir nicht nur über die Bücher, sondern auch über die Artikel usw.
Das Lesen am Computer ist billig und es ist einfacher, ein neues Buch oder Informationen zu bekommen.
Außerdem kann man irgendwo und irgendwann am Computer lesen. Ich gebe zu, dass zu langer Zeit vor dem Bildschirm Augenbeschwerden verursacht. Zusätzlich ist es ein gutes Gefühl, ein gedrucktes Buch zu lesen.
Meiner Meinung nach ist das Lesen am Computer praktischer und besser.
Sept. 3, 2023
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