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Favorite winter memory
Cuando era joven, tenía mucho tiempo cuando nevó en mi ciudad. Nevaría por muchas horas durante la noche. Cuando me llevando, yo ví una montaña de nieve. La calle estaba blanqueta de nieve y no tenía persona en la calle. Mi padre miraba afuera de la ventana.Él era feliz. La escena fue pacífica. Nosotros nos gustó cuando los lavos de nievos movieron la nieve. La nieve se ensució. Yo sé que esté es el trabajo de estos trabajadores, pero me deseo que las calles estén aradas y al mismo tiempo la nieve esté blanca. Me divertí mucho cuando nevó.
Dec. 30, 2021
Thunfisch Gefahr
Heute fange ich an ein Tagebuch auf Deutsch zu schreiben. Ich liebe die Sprache und möchte sie beherrschen können. Ich finde die deutsche Kultur sehr interessant und möchte eventuell in dem Land ziehen. Ich wohne in Schottland, aber ich glaube dass Schottland ist zu kalt und ich will herausziehen. Heute Abend werde ich Nudeln mit Thunfisch kochen. Ich koche es fast jeden Tag und finde es sehr lecker. Ich habe gehört dass das Meer weniger und weniger Thunfisch hat. Das ist sehr schade. Es gibt zu viele Leute die zu viel Thunfisch essen, und ich bin schuld, aber ein Leben ohne Thunfisch ist für mich fast unmöglich. Im November habe ich meinen Finger auf eine Thunfisch Dose geschnitten. Es gab Blut überall in meiner Küche. Ich musste meinen Finger mit Toilettenpapier binden. Nie wieder werde ich mit einer Thunfisch Dose so rücksichtslos sein. Thunfisch ist gut für den Darm und die körperliche Gesundheit. Es ist auch hilfreich für die geistige Gesundheit. Wenn mann Thunfisch isst, werdet man sehr glücklich, weil es so gut schmeckt. Ich koche Nudeln mit Tomaten, Paprika, Pesto, Salz, und Thunfisch. Es ist sehr billig und ich bin für eine lange Zeit satt. Ich bin nicht der bester Koch, aber ich kann diesen Gericht sehr gut kochen, weil ich so viel Übung habe. Erst muss man Wasser in den Kessel kochen, damit man schneller Nudeln kochen kann. Danach muss man die Tomaten und Paprika schneiden, und mit Pesto und Thunfisch zusammenmischen. Dann kann man die Nudeln und die Soße kombinieren und schmecken. Es ist sehr lecker und ich kann es sehr empfehlen!
Dec. 30, 2021
TOPIK 64회 쓰기 54번
청소년기는 아동에서 어른으로 넘아가는 아주 중요한 기간이다. 이 기간 동안, 청소년은 많은 신체적, 정신적 변화를 겪는다.
청손년기가 중요한 이유는, 이 기간에서 얻은 특성은 개인이 어떤 성인이 될 지 결정하기 때문이다. 또한 인생의 목표를 생각하고 미래의대한 고민하는 시기이기 때문이다.
청소년기의 가장 중요한 특징 중 하나는 신체의 변화이다. 청소년은 외모에 더 많은 관심을 기울이기 시작하고 동료와 자신을 비교하는 경향이 있다. 가족은 자녀와 함께 충분한 시간을 보내하고 이 기간 동안 사랑을 보여주는 것이 매우 중요한다. 이 시기의 또 다른 특징은 성적 욕망의 출현이다. 부모는 적절한 성교육에 대해 청소년과 이야기해야 한다.
청소년기는 담배, 마약, 술과 같은 나쁜 습관을 쉽게 습득 할 수있는 기간이기 때문에 부모는 자녀의 행동을 잘 관찰하고 그에 따라 행동하려고 노력해야한다. 이 기간 동안 청소년들은 가족보다 친구들과 더 많은 시간을 보내기 시작한다. 부모가 청소년의 친구를 알아가고 그들이 함께 무슨 일을 겪고 있는지 알아내는 것이 중요한다.
Dec. 30, 2021
아르바이트
저는 16살 때 아르바이트를 구하기 시작했어요. 그때 엄마한테서 용돈만 받아서 사고 싶은 것들이 많으니까 아르바이트를 하기로 결심했어요.
아이스크림가게에서 일하게 됐어요. 처음에 일을 정학하게 어떻게 하는지 몰랐기 때문에 조금 어색했지만 며칠 후에 손님에게 도와주고 보니 익숙해졌어요. 게다가 그때의 잊을 수 없은 추억들을 만들었어요. 친구에다가 남친도 생겼어요.
그러고 보니, 돈의 가치도 배우데다가 엄마 부담을 덜었어요. 처음에는 새로운 일를 하는 게 낯설기 마련이지만 경험을 쌓다가는 익숙해질 거고 잘 할 거예요.
참, 이걸 쓰고 보니 낯선 일을 시작할 때 더 열심히 해 가겠어요. ㅋㅋㅋ
Dec. 30, 2021
Mi primer texto en español
¡Hola!
Soy un estudiante francesa y aprendo el español desde trés semanas.
Me encanta estudiar los idiomas. Ahora puedo hablar francés, inglés, japonés y espero un poco de español.
No conozco muchas palabras y muchos verbos pero quiero escribir un poco aquí.
He estudiando el presente y algunas palabras de vocabulario.
Estoy aprendiendo el idioma porque yo quiero hablar a mi abuela en este idioma. Mi abuela es española pero nuestra familia vive en Francia. Entonces, todas las personas de mi familia hablan en francés y no en español.
La semana pasada he visto el primer capítulo de la sería que se llama "La Casa de Papel". No era muy difícil pero no sé si es porque es la segunda vez que lo veo o si lo he verdaderamente entendido en español.
Es la primera vez que escribo una cosa en español. Espero que no estoy haciendo demasiado errores.
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Dec. 30, 2021
Jour 41 : Un nouveau travail
Il s'agit de relire et corriger les transcriptions des entretiens. C'est un projet de recherche d'un master dentise. Au début, je pense que c'était un travail très facile à faire mais seulement après quelque minutes que j'avais essayé, je voudrais quitter. J'ai quand même fini le permier document en ayant l’esprit de «Je suis la meilleure assistante de ma ancienne prof.» Mais ça ne me plaisait pas du tout.
En fait, je peux le quitter sans grand problème mais je crois que ce sera plutôt une bonne opportunité d'entendre de différents moyens de pratique dans le monde réel. Comme le dite ma meilleure amie dans l'école dentaire : « Tu révéleras une nouvelle conquête ».
Dec. 30, 2021
Glad that i ve found this platform
Hi guys,
first of all, I need to tell you that I am so glad that I have found this platform. I am very grateful for every mistake that is found and I look forward to bringing myself into this community.
So far my English isn´t very advanced. So I need to improve a lot. Currently, I am reading every day 30 pages of my book to learn new vocab. Also, I work with a grammar book which I can recommend a lot. The Name is Longman English Grammar from L.G. Alexander.
Today I muse a lot about punctuation. Mostly I set commas when it feels right, but I imagine I already did a lot of mistakes. If somebody knows a tip for me I would gladly take it.
Until this point, I searched for a method to write my own sentences but also to have someone to tell me what I did wrong.
I have several penpals, but they won't tell me what I did wrong. I hope this is changing with this platform.
Thank you very much and best wishes for the New Year to everybody using langcorrect!
Richard
Dec. 30, 2021
Writing Practice
What do you remember from your childhood? Any memories that pop out?
I was born and raised in the countryside. Back then, my village only had 26 families, and about 130 people.
There is a piece of land in the west of my village and each family had a small vegetable garden there.
Those gardens were very well arranged, which were divided into several sections for different vegetables. They both had a few ditches and a well to water vegetables.
To make it easier to take water, every well had a special water lifting device: a wooden pole stood by the well, the top of the pole connected with a horizontal wooden stick, one end of the stick connected with a bucket and the other end had an additional weight.
When you take water, you have to pull the bucket down into the well. When you lift the bucket full of water up, it will be very easy because of the additional weight.
Apart from planting garlic, green onions and gingers, each family also plants cucumbers, tomatoes and various other melons during summers.
On summer vacation, we teenagers liked to water the vegetables because after that we could pick some melons to eat, and they were really delicious.
At that time, all the vegetables we ate were all planted ourselves and they didn't have any chemical fertilizers and pesticides.
But now, my villagers don't grow vegetables anymore. They buy vegetables at farmers' markets or supermarkets.
Dec. 30, 2021
Two Seasons By Global Warming
As you may already know, there are also four seasons in Korea.
But in my opinion, there are only two distinguished seasons because of the global warming.
Summer and winter are longer, spring and fall are shorter and shorter.
I am disappointed of the short period of fall just because I like the season the most.
Cool weather and deep blue sky are facing danger by the abnormal weather condition.
I hope there are not disappearing.
Dec. 30, 2021
Einkaufstour
Hallo liebe Nasrin,
wie geht es dir?
Ich hoffe , dass alles gut läuft. Ich war am sonntag mit meiner Freuindin zum Einkaufstour gegangen. Da haben wir reichlich schöne kleidung und eine Sonnerbrille gekauft und es hat mir spaß gemacht.
zwar war Einkaufstour eine schöne Erfahrung aber waren die Preis nicht günstig.
Ich hätte den Wunsch , die rote Hose dortin einkaufen aber das war sehr teuer als irgendwo, deswegen habe ich noch nich gekauft.
übrigens , wollte ich dich fragen, ob wir uns am Freitag abend
um 9 Uhr bei mir zu hause treffen könnten?
Lass es mich gerne wissen
Ich würde mich freuen , bald wieder von dir zu hören.
liebe Grüße
deine Hadi
Dec. 30, 2021
La frustration
Je crois que la frustration est une réponse émotionnelle quasiment inutile. Presque tout le temps, elle nous gêne et est destructrice. De plus, cette réponse est complètement sous notre contrôle.
C'est clair quand on en rend compte. Un exemple simple : l'autre jour, j'ai ouvert le réfrigérateur et un grand pot de yaourt est tombé et a éclaboussé partout. Cela a été à cause de la négligence de ma copine. Je me suis fondamentalement trouvé face à un choix. Soit je pouvais agir de manière frustrée et jurer ou crier ou soupirer et dire à ma copine d'être plus prévenante, soit je pouvais accepter ce que m'avait donné le destin, nettoyer l'éclaboussure sans plainte et me passer à autre chose.
J'ai trouvé que mon dialogue interne est beaucoup mieux et que je suis plus à l'aise depuis que j'ai fait ce changement d'état d'esprit. Bien sûr, je ne suis pas parfait tout le temps, mais la chose la plus importante est de réfléchir chaque fois et d'aspirer à s'améliorer peu à peu. Le but est d'être complètement imperturbable dans telles situations et d'être comme le rocher sur lequel les vagues continuent de s'écraser.
Dec. 30, 2021
Dec. 30, 2021
Livres à propos de l'histoire de France
J'aimerais lire les livres en français sur l'histoire de France. Par exemple, la Révolution Française ou Napoléon. Cependant, je ne sais pas quel livre est le meilleur et j'aimerais avoir quelques recommandations sur des livres français à propos de l'histoire de France.
Je veux connaître plus de l'histoire de France quand je voyagerai en France, celui me permet d'avoir plus de connaissance sur le pays et peut aussi enrichir mon vocabulaire en lisant.
Si vous avez des recommendations, veuillez-vous me recommander. Merci !
Dec. 30, 2021
연말
2021년이 이제 거의 다 끝났다. 내 주변에 2021년을 욕하면서 2022년이 조금만이라도 더 빨리 오기를 바라는 사람은 한두 명 아니다. 나는 개인적으로 연말을 맞이할 때 어떤 감정을 느껴야 맞는 건지 잘 모르겠다. 2021년이 많이 힘들었는데 올해의 다양한 시련을 극복해서 더 강한 사람이 된 것 같다. 나의 회복력이 어느 정도인지 알게 되었고, 내가 다른 사람을 도와주려고 어디까지 갈 수 있는지를 알게 되었다. 물론 어려운 시간을 겪지 않고 그 것들을 배울 수 있었으면 좋았을 텐데 이미 지나간 일이라서 불평하는 건 시간 낭비에 불과하다.
새해가 오면 새로 시작할 기회도 온다. 내가 바라는 건 하나 뿐인데, 그 게 바로 올해의 나보다 조금 더 좋은 사람이 되는 것이다.
Dec. 30, 2021
Honnête ou malhonnête
Je ne pense pas que les gens sont honnête ou même malhonnête. Cela dépend sur la société qu'on vive. Une socéité est très importante pour notre épanouissement, elle nous forme ce qu'on est, nos comportements, nos croyances, etc. C'est aussi une protection de soi, on choisira si on ment ou on dit la vérité, tout dépend sur les conséquences on va rencontrer après.
En conclusion, les gens ne sont pas nés honnête ou malhonnête. Cela dépend sur la société, l'environnement qu'on vive.
Dec. 30, 2021
Dec. 30, 2021
新年に試してみる体操
この一年間はあまり運動する機会がなかった。そのため、家で怠けて、引きこもりみたいな暮らしをしていた。だから、いろいろな体操をしなきゃいけないと思ってきた。かつて毎日バスケをしていた。また、剣道もしていた。当時はよく眠れたり、集中できたり、体のいい生活だった。それは改めてそう思った。体を動かさないと腰や膝が固くなったり、毎晩の睡眠までもよくできない。来年の計画は少しずつ体をもう一回運動に慣れさせるつもりだ。そのために最初は近所の周りを毎日散歩しようと思っている。そして、時間があれば、ジムなどで過ごしたいと思っている。簡単じゃないと思うけどこの決心を実行できれば、うれしくなります。
Dec. 30, 2021
수요일의 문법 :)
1. 태민아, 왜 슬퍼?
시험에 떨어졌어.
걱정하지 마. 피곤하지? 음식을 살 거야.
2. 지성 씨가 정말 잘생겼네요!
얼굴이 잘생긴 데 반해 나쁜 성격을 가져요.
3. 무슨 시간이 출발할까요?
나중에 많이 막히일 테니 지금 출발할까요.
4. 여섯 마리 고양이를 키워요.
오모! 한 마리 고양이만 키우는 것은 줄 알았군요!
5. 가지는 싫어요!
가지는 싫기는 하지만 아주 건강에 좋아요.
6. 하늘이 갑자기 어두워져요.
눈이 곧 올지도 몰라요.
7. 전화를 안 받아요?
도서관에서 공부한 모양이에요.
8. 사월에 드디어 결혼할 거예요!
진짜요? 결혼식이 사월에 있을 줄 몰라요.
9. 내일 파티에 진짜 가요? 바쁠 것 같아요?
네, 어차피 파티에 갈 테니까요.
10. 무슨 일이 일어났어요?
일찍 두 명 싸웠거든요.
Dec. 30, 2021
Dec. 30, 2021
インプット対アウトプット
俺は日本語でたくさん読む、ライトノベルやビジュアルノベルや日本映画の字幕や。そして、たくさん聴くけど、耳がやや聞こえないで困ってる。日本語を磨きたいが、アウトプットしないと、上手にならないと知っています。
あまりポッドキャストを聞かないけど、Japanese With Norikoというポッドキャストが好きだ。日頃から聴こうとするんだけど、よく忙しい。第４６話には、書いたり話したりすることに重きを置く「アウトプット大全」という本を述べた。でも、第７３話とか、多読や多聴するSteve Kaufmannというポリグロット の動画を述べた。２つの段違い方法だよね！じゃ、どちらが使うべき？
中道の誤謬かもしれんけど、成るべく両方だろうか。私は、ここで「話したり、書いたりするときは緊張します」と言ったことがある。まだそうと思います。その産出の緊張は、本当に習ってるわけかも知れない。所詮、効果的な勉強が挑むべきだね。
Dec. 30, 2021
Silvana Sin Lana
Acabo de terminar una serie que se llama, “Silvana Sin Lana”. Es un recuento de la vida de una familia que era rico, pero el padre estafó a sus socios y huyó del país. El gobierno le embargó su mansión y la madre, la abuela, y las hijas tuvieron que mudarse a un dúplex en un barrio de clase media. Como todas las telenovelas eran muchas relaciones, infidelidad, y por supuesto una boda. No veo este tipo de programas en inglés, pero para ser honesto, la serie era entretenida y amplié mi vocabulario mucho.
Ayer empecé otra serie en Netflix que se llama, “¿Quién mató a Sara?”. Sólo he visto el primer episodio, pero estaba gratamente sorprendido con la cantidad que entendí.
Dec. 30, 2021
Mi primera escritura
He estudiado español por más o menos 2 años.
Puedo comunicar hablando, pero no escribo bien porque no practiqué a redacción.
Reempiezo el estudio de españor otra vez para pasar el examen de dele.
Mi nivel fue b2 4 años antes, sin embargo, tal vez se bajó ya que casi no he utilizado la lengua en estos 3 años y se me olvidó.
Debo estudiar y practicar la gramática de nuevo.
Aprender trabajando sería difícil, tengo que estudiar juiciosamente.
Dec. 30, 2021
Chairman's New Year's Speech! -- Help...!
Dear billiards family!
The new year of 2022 has dawned.
I hope that the new year will be bright and hopeful, leaving behind the memories of COVID-19 that has been difficult for many people.
Last year was a very difficult time. Due to the prolonged COVID-19, industries around the world have suffered many ups and downs, and the professional sports industry including the PBA was no exception.
Despite the difficult circumstances, the PBA is having a successful third season, starting with a strong opening match at Gyeongju Blue One Resort.
In the team league, where NH Nonghyup Card and Huons newly joined, about 50 players are competing in 8 teams. As the team league is now divided into the first half and second half leagues, players are showing higher concentration in the games. PBA team league has become a dream stage that many billiard players envy both in name and in reality.
The PBA also set up a stable tour structure. By establishing a perfect ascending system that leads to the 1st Tour, the Dream Tour and the Challenge Tour, we have successfully created the gateway for amateurs to becoming a professional athlete.
With each season, the interests of fans, media, and especially of sponsors, are growing. Even in the COVID-19 situation, we have expanded the TV and internet broadcasting platforms, and more fans are enjoying PBA, proving to the sports world PBA content’s effectivity on marketing.
All of these achievements would not have been possible without the help of all the people who believed in the PBA. Billiard players, sponsors, association staffs, and fans, thank you.
In the new year, PBA will devote itself to a higher goal.
We will put more effort to concretize construction of a professional billiards-only stadium. The PBA formed the <Exclusive Stadium Construction TF Team>, and we are working hard with the plan to confirm the site for an exclusive stadium in the first half of 2022. I am sure that the construction of a dedicated stadium will become a cornerstone for taking PBA to the next level.
From the early days of its inception, the PBA advocated ‘participation of the players’. We will further expand cooperation with the players who are the heroes and heroines of the tour.
Recently, the PBA held talks with the Professional Billiards Players' Association, in order to expand the base and strengthen the status of billiard players, such as by nurturing young talent, revitalizing school sports and cooperating in the 2nd and 3rd part tour. We agreed to work closely together. The PBA operating with the players will be the most ideal.
We will strive to improve the quality of game content. We will continue our effort to make a more professional game system. We will introduce a video review system to ensure clear judgment and sophisticated game operation. We will also focus on strengthening the expertise of referees and game management personnel.
We will continue to cooperate with foreign billiards organizations and other domestic organizations. PBA will not only pursue the success of professional billiards but will also seek to cooperate with amateur organizations, aiming to work together for the development of billiards.
In addition, we will spur overseas tours for global fans. In preparation for the time when the barriers of COVID-19 are lifted, we will not neglect to prepare for a global tour that extends to the world.
We will do our best to become a PBA where fans can fully enjoy their presence at the games. I hope that our players will soon be able to interact with the fans at the stadiums as restrictions ease with <With Corona>.
In the new year of the tiger, a symbol of bravery, I wish you all good health and good luck.
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