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私の夢
昨夜変な夢を見た。休暇へ行っていた。友達はアパートを借りた。私達が九人だったと思う。家のように大きなアパートだった。とにかく、若者の一団が来た。二十人ぐらいだった。その後、他の若者の一団が来た。家は満席だった。楽しかったけど、人に見つけるためにとても難しい。ロロノアゾロに見付けなければならないと思う。なぜそこにゾロがいた、本当にわからない。そして、友達とチャットをした。その後、買い物に行った。でも、私の友達と顔を付き合わせた。あの状況は恥ずかしい。誰も話したがらなかった。重苦しい沈黙だった。そして、女の子が話し始めた。私の感情を害するようなことは言った。まったく恐ろしいことだ。起きた時、私は悲しかった。
July 1, 2023
Clothes and fashion
As I mentioned in “Online orders” and “A sea trip”, I like streetwear clothes. Nowadays, fashion is more and more diverse and popular. There are lots of fashion styles for all ages, even for a student like me.
My wardrobe doesn’t have lots of my clothes to wear because I only buy more when some clothes was torn or didn’t fit me anymore. I bought some new clothes to prepare for the vacation just to change my style. When I am at home or hanging out with friends around my hometown, I’ve just dressed up in basic clothes. For me, the basic outfit is a combination of a basic T-shirt with basic trousers together this summer. It has no textures, just a little text to advertise the clothes brand where I bought it.
My favourite mix-up colours are black and white. These two colours contrast each other and are very simple. Besides, there are some uniforms that I usually wear to go to school. When winter comes, I always put on my school jacket - also winter uniforms to go out. When I was a kid, my mother always gave me clothes to wear.
One day, after getting used to shopping by myself, my mother said: “It’s time to choose your own clothes and follow your favourite fashion styles”. I was looking for my friends to see what they usually wore when they go out and find some information about famous online clothing stores. I started to buy it in grade 8 and that's when I started liking one of the most popular fashion styles: Streetwear. With some textured shirts or T-shirts, even polo shirts and cargo pants, mix with hats and sneakers, I have the coolest outfits to go anywhere.
Besides, I’ve also tried jeans clothes, but it’s not suitable for me, especially jeans pants. It is hard to tear, but because of it, I feel so hard to move while wearing it. Moreover, it doesn’t suit my body shape.
In short, it’s hard to follow the fashion trend, but everyone has their ways. Fashion styles represent their personalities and hobbies, and streetwear not only makes me feel better about my styles to other people but also I like it because of the modern and coolest that it’s eye-catching for teenagers like me.
July 1, 2023
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テーマは「誰かの人生に大きな変化をもたらした小さな親切な行為について書く。」じゃあ、自分のことに書きます。
数年前、僕は絶望の暗闇に迷っていた。当日、僕は全く寂しいんだった。一人ぼっちでした。自分の状態が日に日に悪化するばかりでした。思い出してるさえも鬱陶しい。誰も構わなかったようだった。それはやや確かった。家族関係は。。。控えめに言っても悪かった。コロナロックダウン中から学校に友達と付き合うこともできなかった。
毎日、同じ部屋、同じ人に囲まれた。幸せになることは一つもいなかった。楽しみにしていることもいなかった。行き詰まっていた。一つ一つの日は全部同じでした。
その時、まるで神からの合図、誰かを出会いしまった。
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彼は自分より十歳くらいです。自分の命を救ったというのは過言ではない。地獄から蘇る力をくれた。初めて愛を知りでした。彼は毎日自分を心を配った。悲しみと幸福ふ一緒に分かち合った。彼は自分の問題全てを判断せずに聞いた。僕にとって兄です。その時前、僕は誰にも大切な人ではないとずっと思った。
現在、彼はもう暇がなくてすごく忙しいなっちゃったので、もうそんなに話さいない。それでも、今も本当に感謝しています。
彼とのその日の思い出は懐かしい。
全然できないと思うけど、夢はいつか彼と一緒になりたい。
July 1, 2023
Practice Writing in English
The other day, I came across a young couple who I didn't know which country they were from, but I felt excited because it's rare to meet people from other countries in my city. Other people and I shouted at the same time in our dialect, "see, foreigners!" Unexpectedly, the two people said in Mandarin, "no, we are not foreigners, we are Chinese". They said they were from Cuba. I can't believe that they can speak Mandarin and can understand our dialect. At that moment, I wanted to speak English to them, but I couldn't. I didn't know what to say or how to say.
July 1, 2023
Équilibre
C'est important d'avoir un certain équilibre dans notre vie. Travaille dur, faire des efforts, poursuivre ses rêves ce sont tout digne du respect cependant en suivant leurs ambitions les gens parfois oublient de prendre une pause et se détendre. Ils ne s'arretent pas et leur vie ne consiste que du travail mais la vie est bien plus de justement travailler. Il y a rien du mal avec travailler dur et teinter de faire son mieux pourtant comme avec tous les choses dans la vie à un certain point c'est trop. On ne se devrait pas sentir mal pour prendre une pause on n'est pas des machines. Il faut toujours avoir de la balance pour ne pas gâcher soi même.
July 1, 2023
Random sentences #6
que sea de a dos - usa esa frase en su país sudamericana?
Ella Se jacta diciendo que su esposo habla muy bien Español.
Ella Se jacta que su esposo habla muy bien Español.
Necesito la palabra "diciendo" en eso frase?
Mi última meta es ser capaz de tener una conversación con hispanohablantes sin la otra person necesita relentizar sus palabras.
No he estudiado hace 3 años.
No había estudiado hace 3 años pero empecé de nuevo hace un mes(I hadn't studied in 3 years but I started again 1 week ago).
July 1, 2023
July 1, 2023
Ephemeris Journal #8
Che cosa ho fatto oggi? Lavoro nello sviluppo internazionale. Oggi ho preparato forme di filo e venditore per un partner di Albania. Concerna un progetto di emancipazione femminile economica in Albania, sono incaricato della preparazione della sua convenzione di sovvenzione. Ho inviato questi documenti al dipartimento di finanza per rivista. Poi, li ho inviati al dipartimento di approvazione. Oggi, il lavoro è stato lento, ma sono anche stato stanco. Quando non lavoravo, guardavo i video su youtube e pianificavo per italiano. Io pianifico frequentemente, perché mi aiuta a pensare.
Che cosa ho mangiato, ed ho portato? Oggi mi sono fatto un panino di pollo “jerk” - è una ricetta haitiana. L’ho messo sulla baguette col burro. Ho aggiunto anche una salsa di yogurt per raffreddarlo. Il pollo jerk è molto speziato. Ho grigliato il pollo marinato ed è stato succoso!
Ho portato i pantaloncini kaki ed un polo a scacchi azzurro. Ho preso le scarpe blu e marrone d’estate con le calze bianche. Benché io lavori da casa, odio portare tutto il giorno pigiami.
Che cosa farò domani? Domani lavorerò sui miei compiti di macroeconomica. Leggerò il capitolo ventinove, che è sull’inflazione.
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June 30, 2023
Un cocktail : le Caipirinha
On considère la boisson Caipirinha comme la boisson nationale du Brésil. C’est un cocktail qui est très simple à préparer. Il n’y a que trois ingrédients : des citrons, du sucre et un alcool de Brésil qui s’appelle Cachaca.
Cet alcool est une spécialité du Brésil. On le prépare à partir de la canne à sucre. On peut dire que le goût est un peu similaire à l’alcool de rhum qui est aussi préparé à partir de la canne à sucre. Cependant, les experts déclarent que c’est différent parce que le rhum vient de la mélasse et pas de jus de la canne à sucre. Connaissez-vous que le pourcentage d’alcool de Cachaca est 38 pour-cent ? C’est fou, non ?
Alors, comment prépare on ce cocktail délicieux ? D’abord, on écrase les citrons tranchés. On a besoin d’au moins un citron par verre. Ensuite, on ajoute du sucre et mélange avec les citrons. Puis, on ajoute une quantité généreuse de Cachaca et remue le tout. Finalement, ajoute de la glace et décore avec de la menthe. Ce cocktail est vraiment rafraîchissant ! Idéal pour l’été.
June 30, 2023
Un festival qui vous a déplu
Le sujet: Vous avez assité à un festival qui vous a déplu. Dans un blog racontez à vos amis cette expérience.
(Le festival dont je parle ici est imaginaire !)
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Un festival de la culture presque française.
La semaine dernière, j'ai assisté au festival de la culture française qui a eu lieu au centre-ville. Bien que j'aie hâte d'y assister, l'expérience n'était pas vraiment ce que j'attendais.
Ce qui m'a déplu le plus, c'est qu'en réalité, il y avait très peu de Français natifs au festival. Par exemple, dans des kiosques alimentaires : ils servaient de la nourriture française qui avait été fait par des chefs vietnamiens. D'un côté, je n'ai rien contre eux, mais d'un autre côté, je crois personnellement que c'est impossible de le présenter comme un festival français alors que la plupart des personnes ne sont pas des natifs.
Enfin, il faut dire que le festival n'était pas entièrement mauvais. Les organisateurs ont fait de leur mieux. Cependant, en tant que quelqu'un à la recherche d'une immersion un peu plus sérieuse dans la culure française, je dois dire que j'étais déçu par l'événement.
June 30, 2023
언어 배우기에 대해서
언어 공부라는 것은 쉽지 않죠? 저는 몇 년 동안 한국어를 배우고 있는데 배울 것이 참 많아요. 이 언어는 왜 공부하고 있는지 알고 싶다면, 제 스토리를 간단히 나눠볼게요. 2016년쯤에 방탄소년단이라는 밴드를 발견했는데요. 멤버들의 이름을 다 외우고, MV 다 챙겨보고 (그리고 기사를 배우려고 노력하고 [한국어 모르는 사이]), 팬들의 쓴 스토리를 읽고… 그런 것 많이 했어요. 그리고 물론, 한국어를 진짜 배우고 싶었어요.
하지만, 프랑스어밖에 아무 언어 공부할 때가 없어서, 처음에는 어떻게 해야 할지 굉장히 혼란스러웠잖아요. 다행히 많은 리소스 찾을 수 있기 때문에 (그리고 영어로 있기 때문에) 아무 문제 없이 시작할 수 있었어요. 언어 공부하다가 제일 중요한 것은 바로 인내심이라고 배웠어요. 아무 동기가 부여되더라도 철저한 계획 필요하죠? 전반적으로, 한국어 배우기가 저는 더 인내심이 있는 사람으로 변했다는 것 같아요. 바라건대 저는 유창할 때까지 인내심이 부족하지 않기를 바랍니다…
June 30, 2023
Cakes, breads and biscuits
I’ve just eaten a cake in the fridge. My mother bought it when she went shopping with her friends. The cake is simple. It is just a custard cake with some dried grapes and vanilla cream. But it brings me a lot of memories since I was a kid. There was one time, I really like this one. Every time my family go to the supermarket, I want to eat that cake when I feel tired to move.
But not only that, I’ve tried many cakes, and also breads and biscuits. In my opinion, a loaf of bread is only delicious when combine with many foods: salad, grilled meat with ketchup or chilli sauce. I’ve tried to add some mutants but it’s kind of spicy more than I expected, so I removed it.
About biscuits, sometimes my parents received them from my uncle. Because they don’t like it, exactly they don’t want to eat it too much so mostly I and my sister always try to finish it before it is out of date. Now I’m scared a bit. I stopped eating biscuits for some days.
At that time, I found a bakery where my mother bought a birthday cake for me. “Birthday is not fun anymore as I grew up”, I’ve thought so. Until they kept the secret to me, they made me surprised by the cake. That cake had my favourite taste with another twinkling decoration. Not only that chocolate birthday cake, but a mini firework and a birthday hat also made a day that I cannot forget now. Although my friends didn’t come because of their hectic schedules, I had my best birthday ever.
After realising this, I used my pocket money to buy a small doughnut because I was on my way to school. The last one in that bakery was also the first time I eat the doughnut. It isn’t the best cake, but it helped me to make me happy that day at school.
Cakes are one of my most-liked foods. The sweetness and softness make me unable to hate it.
June 30, 2023
A Reply
Hello Kai, I am very glad to see your message. I thought I may not hear from you again because it has been a long time since I received your last messages.
Gongji is just a small, ordinary town in China, which I think has about thousands of these types of towns.
Taihe is a county that China has about three thousand counties. I don't know if Malaysia also has counties. I'll send some pictures of the Taihe county, as to Gongji town, I am not sure if I could find its pictures online because it is too small.
I like your story about the little boy throwing starfish back into the sea. It is really inspirational. Yes, what he did may be pointless to all the starfish on the shore, but is vital important to the individual one being thrown back into the sea.
I am so happy to hear that you had wonderful trips and you feel thrilled about your journey.
I hope to hear more about your happy life. Thank you for sharing. See you later.
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June 30, 2023
La vie en...
Miel.. Tu aimes le miel? Tu combines du miel avec quoi..? fromage, yaourt, pain,thé de tilleul.. lequel aimes-tu le mieux??
A propos, y a-t-il quelque chose que vous vous inquiétez pour.. comme une minorité? Je n'avais pas du tout quand ma minorité. Mais récemment les jeunes comme vous vous inquiétez pour quoi?
Sinon, tu parais heureuse mais normalement il y a quelque chose.. pour tout le monde. Tu t'inquiètes pour quoi dans ta vie?
Moi.. je m'inquietes pour ma future apres ca maintenant.. au cort
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Le moment quand je ne peux pas arreter
Est ce que tu n'as pas de moment, alors, tu commences à prendre l'en-cas ou pommes chips une fois, tu ne peux pas en arrêter.. jusqu'à tout fini? Moi, aujourd'hui c'est comme ça. Je n'avais plus faim, mais je ne pouvais pas l'arrêter. C'était bizarre..
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