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Jan. 8, 2023
le situation critique de Les Abandonées
Dans l'histoire de Warcraft, il y a un homme. Il s'appelle Arthas Menethil. Il y a un moment, il a été corrompu d'une épée maudite. Maintenant, son nouveau nom est "Le Roi Liche". Le Roi Liche commande une armée des mort-vivants. Il utilise son armée pour détruire les civilisations des humains.
Il y a un petit groupe des morts-vivants qui sont maintenant libres du méchant Roi Liche. Ils s'appellent “Les Abandonnées.” Le meneur de Les Abandonnées s'appelle Sylvanas Windrunner. Elle est une banshee vengeresse. En fait, toutes Les Abandonnées ont envie de se venger contre le Roi Liche. Ils sont furieux de leur malédiction et leur esclavage.
Les Abandonnées ont un autre problème. Tout le monde pense qu'ils sont mauvais. Le Roi Liche et son armée ont tué beaucoup de gens, particulièrement les humains. Personne ne se rend compte que Les Abandonnées sont différentes. Les humains sont en colère et racistes contre tous les mort-vivants. Même leurs anciennes familles les détestent.
Finalement, "Le Horde", une alliance entre les orcs, les trolls, et les tauren (mi-humain, mi-vache) a accepté Les Abandonnées. Le Horde avait besoin d'alliés, mais était mal à l'aise avec Les Abandonnées.
Ces jours-ci, Les Abandonnées cherchent la vengeance, une identité, et un avenir.
Jan. 8, 2023
C'est l'anniversaire de ma sœur
Je ne suis pas toute contente avec aujoud'hui. Pour l'anniversaire de ma sœur, nous sommes allées au centre commercial avec notre mère. Nous étions silencieuse pendant le voyage, sauf de ma mère qui radoitait comme tourjours de la politique. Aprè nous étions arrivées, nous ne saisions pas quoi faire parce que nous n'aimons pas faire du shopping beaucoup et ma sœur était fatiguée parce qu'elle est un peu malade, alors nous avons erré et acheté quelques boissons. Ma mère utilisait son portable pour la majorité de temps
J'ai parlé un peu avec ma sœur, mais pendant le jour j'ai essayé plusieur temps de ne pleurer pas, quand j'ai vu ma mère distraite par son portable. Je lui étais plaint avant pour interagir rarement avec nous et pour quelques autres griefs du passé, mais puis nous avons disputé et elle a refusé de m'admettre et ameliorer, donc j'ai cessé d'essayer. J'attends avec l'impatience du jour de déménager, quand je trouverai des nouveaux gens qui sentiraient concerné de passer du temps ensemble.
Jan. 8, 2023
My biggest motivation is: shame
I don't know how to write the tittle better in order to express my feeling. I hope trough the text you can figure out what I am trying to say.
Since high-school I became aware of shame. As I experienced many failures, regarding to love, subjects, etc. I realized how strong it was, how would cause a pain as big as if your skin was burning.
Since then I started working so hard in order to avoid shame, the shame of failing, mistaking, loosing. High school was for me one of the best years of my life, even though I was constantly working so hard just for not feeling ashamed. But by that time I did not realize that.
In order to avoid shame, I've been working so hard, which has lead me to certain positive things such as: get in a good University and get a job.
The problem is that no matter how much I love what I do, I am not fulfilled.
So, I was thinking. "Why after I succeed my emotions are not so strong as when I fail?" and that's because I work so hard not for praising but for avoiding the shame of "you are supposed to know that", "that was really not difficult to do", "you're clever then why did you fail".
The same goes in love. I cannot take a relationship in which I do not feel like I am winning. I'm sure this is not healthy at all. Feeling ashamed is natural every now and then but I do not think is something to find motivation in.
I feel happy where I am, but at the same time I feel like "is the minimum you could do".
Jan. 8, 2023
Day 1 of my English Challenge.
I have read and corrected so many posts by people who write every day. For example the user courageuse19, a spanish learner who post on langcorrect every day, she has a streak of sixty eight days posting a diary entry on langcorrect. The user Mari, a Japanese learner, also writes every day a post in Japanese. So, I want to try the same. I'm going to write every day a diary entry and post it here to be corrected. One of my favorite says is "if they can do it, I can too" (I heard it from my mom when I was fifteen). So if courageuse19 and Mari write every day a diary entry every day and post them in here, I can do it too. I think that this challenge could really improve my English.
Jan. 8, 2023
クリスマスと正月
クリスマスと正月のため、最近はひどく忙しくて、ここで文章を書く余裕がなくなってしまった。しかし、今から暇で、毎日書くようにしている。
今日はクリスマスと正月に何をしたについて書きたいと思う。
私の家族はキリスト教だから、クリスマスを祝う。それは言っても、実はおばあちゃん以外家族では誰も神に信じることはないと思う。それでも、毎年家族でクリスマスを祝う。今年はうちの家でもてなして、母の弟の家族と昼ごはんを食べた。母の家族では大きくて、みんなで八人の兄弟がいる。
それから、大晦日の夜に友人の家族のパーティに行った。家族を会うのは始めただからちょっと緊張したが、とても親切な家族で、楽しかった。
Jan. 8, 2023
Jan. 8, 2023
Las tendencias entre los nombres
Según el Departamento de Salud de Nueva York, los nombres más populares en 2021 fueron Emma y Liam. De hecho, más de 1,100 bebés nacieron con uno de los dos nombres este año. Otros nombres populares de la lista son Olivia, Noah, Mia, Ethan y Sophia. A lo largo de los años, algunos han desaparecido de la lista y otros se han añadido, pero a mí ningún nombre de los últimos años me parece raro. Al ver esta lista de los nombres más populares, me pongo a pensar en los nombres más extraños y menos comunes que he visto. Lo primero que viene a la mente es el nombre «X Æ A-12» que Elon Musk puso a su hijo. Entre los famosos, elegir el nombre más único, aunque sea extraño, para llamar la atención e ir contra la corriente. Incluso se puede decir que se trate de creatividad. Pero yo lo veo como una forma de narcisismo que pasa por alto las posibles consecuencias adversas, sobre todo el acoso escolar, de tener ciertos nombres.
Jan. 8, 2023
Jan. 8, 2023
Jan. 7, 2023
January 7th / Day 8: 今車で書きます!
こんにちは！そうです。今車で書きます。
いつもパソコンでLangCorrectに書きます。でも今日携帯電話で書きます!
いまイタリアの家に帰ります。まだ旅行しています。
•旅行の前について•
今日は10時ごろに起きました。朝ご飯を食べて、宿題をしました。十二時お父さんの友達が来ました。彼はとても面白いです!
昼ご飯は唐揚げでした。昼ごはんの後で荷作をしました。ブラチスラバから午後5時ごろに出発しました。
•旅行について•
ブラチスラバから出発して、オーストリアに通りました。午後9時半にオーストリアからイタリアまで通りました。今ボロニャの近くにいます。もうウディネとベネシアとパドヴァを通りました。僕の家の町はピザとフィレンツェの間にありますから、旅行はまだ2時間半かかります。
•道中について•
ブラチスラバからずっと携帯を使いました。でも書いたの後で寝る試します。夕食はトーストとコラーでした、もうおなかが空きましたけど、朝ご飯まで待っています。
今はちょっと眠いですから、車で寝る試します。。。
それではバイバイ。また明日!
Jan. 7, 2023
Jan. 7, 2023
ウェディングの準備１
今年の春には結婚します。婚約の前に結婚式に色々な準備をしなくてはいけないと覚悟していたんですが、想像することと実際にやることは違うものです。
まずは結婚式場を見学すること。もちろん場所を確保しないと結婚式自体を挙げないのは当たり前ですけど、ウェディング初心者の私には、これが最初のステップだとぼんやりと把握していたぐらいでした。アメリカでは結婚式がよく行われる会場というと、教会（チャペル）、ゲストハウス、ガーデン、ビーチと、ホテルです。ホテルだと遠方から来た客様がいれば泊まるし、同じ場所で披露宴もできるし、一番便利かなと思いました。でも結婚式というとロマンティックなガーデンで愛を誓うセレモニーというイメージを子供のころから私は持っていましたから、ホテルの利便性とガーデンの雰囲気を合わせる会場を見つけようと決めていました。
色々なところに見学に行ってヒアリングしてもらって案内してもらいました。高級なホテル、植物園、などなど。ようやく歴史的な雰囲気のある、ガーデン付きのホテルを見つけました。初めて近寄った時、これ、いけるかも！と思いました。ホテルの前にはチューリップが植えられてる花壇に囲まれたレンガの道のガーデンがあります。ちょうど希望の日程の前の時期に咲くそうです。ホテルの内装は１９世紀のエレガントなデザインで出来ていて、入ると過去に戻った気分になります。2階への木製の階段が右側の壁にあります。結婚式が始まったら、ウェディングドレスの姿で私はこの階段を降ります。
Jan. 7, 2023
Cuidar del planeta
Para empezar, quisiera decir que para mí, todos los «pequeños actos» cotidianos para el planeta, como bañarse en menos de 10min, son como vendajes para un tipo sufriendo de un cancer: son insuficientes, considerando la severidad del problema global. Nos sirven a nosotros humanos, para que nos demos buena consciencia, pero no ayudan el planeta porque es el funcionamiento mismo de nuestra sociedad moderna que está haciendo el planeta enfermo. Sin voluntad política de transformar toda la sociedad, estos actos, aunque naturalmente contribuyen en un sentido positivo a la lucha ecológica, tendrán un impacto casi nulo a escala mundial.
Todavía, voy a responder a la pregunta. No tengo ningún coche, porque no tengo ningún permiso de conducción. Por tanto, uso el transporte público, lo que produce menos gases a efecto invernadero, comparado con los medios de transpore individuales.
También trato de substituir mis aparatos electrónicos lo más tarde posible. Mientras aún están funcionando, no los reemplazo. Credo que cambiar el teléfono o el ordenador cada año es un desperdicio de dinero y recursos naturales. Así, tengo un teléfono de 4 años y un ordenador viejo que tiene 10 años, pero no lo uso más como ordenador principal, ¡ya que es muy lento ahora! Hago la misma cosa para la ropa: no compro mucha, y la cambia cuando está realmente gastada.
Por fin, cuando salgo a alguna parte, por supuesto no tiro mis residuos a la calle o a la naturaleza. Es una cuestión de respecto.
En cambio, tengo costumbres que no son particularmente buenas para la ecología, por esemplo, comer carne. No sé si mi estilo de vida es globalmente bueno o malo para la Tierra. Supongo que es ni lo peor, ni lo mejor. En cualquier caso, no me engaño a proposito del impacto real que mis pequeños actos tienen.
Jan. 7, 2023
Princess
Which girl doesn't dream to be a princess. With beautiful dresses, a big castle and a crown. This live seem perfect and great. Yes it gives a big bedroom a many money and power. But would ýou like to know my minds. To be like a princess could be a nightmare. You think that I crazy then listening to me. Princess have horrible stress. Since there are little children must a princess hard work and study. For everything have them the best teachers and the hardest instruction.
They stuck perfection their whole live. All that they learn dance, fight, horse rinding and music. But the most horrible thing as a princess your live isn't your own. All want always that you the best and everyone tell you what should you love and what not. Even who you married just because of money. When you be a princess you haven't a freedom. Your just a perfect barbie that all makes happy.
Jan. 7, 2023
カフェに行くの話
「カフェ歩き飲み」という趣味があります。別々のカフェに行って飲んだことがない飲み物を注目します。
One of my hobbies is "Cafe hopping." I go to different Cafes and try a new drink.
憎い味がほとんどないし何でもを飲んでみようと思います。
There aren't really any flavours that I don't like so I will try just about anything.
本を持って一人で行くのは好きです。特に、雨が降る日にも出かけて瞬間だと思います。
I like going alone with a book. Especially on days when it's raining.
あまりクリームアートが気にしなくて、ラッテがクリームアートあったかなかったとうかぜんぜん気にしないです。
I don't really care about the cream art . Whether my latte has it or not I dont mind it.
でもカフェのカップに目を留めます。
But I do pay close attention to the cups the cafe has.
サイズとかデザインとか気にします。
I care about the size and design of the mugs.
よく分からないけど気にします。
I dont really understand it but I do.
Jan. 7, 2023
카페에 가는 Going to the Cafe
저의 취미는 다른 카페에 가는 것이예요.
(One of ) my hobbies is going to different Cafes.
각각의 카페에서 미신 적이 없고 카피를 주문하는 편이에요.
I usually order a drink that I've never had before.
법의 알레르기 없고 비위가 상하는 맛을 거의 없어서, 아무것도 정도 먹고 시도할겠어요.
I don't have any food allergies and there aren't really any flavours that I dislike so I will try just about anything.
비가 오면 일에서 카페에 가는 제일 시간이 생각해요.
I think that the best time to go to the Cafe is on the days it's raining.
책을 읽고 휴대폰을 사용하고 일기를 쓰고 한 편이에요.
I usually read a book, look at my phone or journal.
카페 게중에는 아주 가고 바리스타랑 스몰탁크를 했어요.
Some Cafes I go to often and chat with the baristas.
직업이 스토레스 되게 시간이 있으면 런지에서 카페에 잠깐 가고 언니과 오빠한테 표현해요.
If my job gets too stressful I'll go a cafe on my lunch and vent to my sister or brother.
이런 시간이 있으면 SNS으로 전화 할게요. 크게 소리로 전화를 너무 안 좋아해요.
When that happens I text. I hate it when people talk loudly on their phones in the cafe.
Jan. 7, 2023
Jan. 7, 2023
Why Present Perfect and Past Perfect to Talk about Charts?
The sentences below come from the internet but might not all be correct. Could you please explain to me why I have to use PRESENT PERFECT or PAST PERFECT in the numbered examples? Could I just use past simple instead of them?
The chart refers to the past years of 2000 and 2009 and I have attached it below.
1. The given bar chart shows the data on the total number of new houses constructed from 2000 to 2009 in the neighboring cities Derby and Nottingham. Derby 1) HAS BUILT more new houses in the later years when compared with Nottingham. It can be properly understood that initially, it was Nottingham who had more houses constructed but by the end of 2009, Derby had more houses built compared to Nottingham.
While Derby built 45 new houses Nottingham 2) HAD BUILT 50 houses in the year 2000.
Overall we can observe that Nottingham had fewer houses than Derby. Nottingham's house construction 3) HAS FALLEN sharply in 2006 and 2008 to fewer than 5 and 10 houses respectively. The only other time when Nottingham built more houses per year than Derby was in 2007.
2. In the year 2009 both Derby and Nottingham 4)HAS INCREASED its construction of houses to 345 and 250 respectively. Thus overall, the number of houses in Derby increased consistently while there was an anomaly in the rise of houses in Nottingham.
3. Nottingham seems to have more houses in 2000 with 50 houses and by 2007 the number of houses in construction increased to 190 compared to 120 houses in Derby. This was a sharp rise from previous year when fewer than 5 houses were constructed in Nottingham . Howevver, in 2008 there were only 10 houses that were constructed in Nottingham while Derby had 275 houses. Finally in 2009 , the construction of houses in Nottingham increased to 250 and Derby 5) HAD SURPASSED its neighbouring city to have built 345 houses.
Jan. 7, 2023
Top 5 scariest moments at home.
This is a list of top 3 scariest moments at your house.
3°: The first moment is when you turn off the hallway's lights. This is actually very spooky, especially when you just finished watching a horror movie. So to avoid all ghosts in the hall, you start to run as faster as you can to the end of the hallway.
2°: The second one happens while you are trying to fall asleep and you have not close your wardrobe door. After a few seconds, you realize that you need to keep the monster inside, so you go to the door and you close it, instead of just try to fall asleep as a normal person (just kidding).
1°: And finally, the last moment occurs in your bathroom in the middle of the night. It is just so unsettling be down there, but the worst part is when you take a look at the mirror, a chill vibe goes to your mind when you remember that it is 4 AM. It is so spooky, but in a weird way it is also so epic.
Jan. 7, 2023
비디오에 대한 일기 0
오늘은 커페 단어에 대한 비디오를 봤어요.
Today I watched a video about Coffee vocabulary.
비디오는 [Santoverse]이라고 Youtuber 나왔어요.
The video was by a Youtuber named Santoverse.
비이오에서 커피를 주문하는 법을 가르쳤어요.
In the video she teaches how to order coffee (in korean).
시작에 "카페"의 발음은 [까페]인데 설명했어요.
In the beginning she explains that cafe is pronounced as [까페].
"케페"과 "까페"의 발은 차이점을 아직 모르겠지만,
I still have can't tell the difference between these two pronunciations but,
이런 말이 저한테 정말 중이 높어서 꼭 연습할겠어요.
this word is very important to me so I will practice this diligently.
Jan. 7, 2023
Les vacances à Paris
L'été passé, j'ai passé une semaine à Paris avec mon copain. Parce qu'on est restés dans un appartement au bord du centre-ville, on pouvait aller à pied à la grande part des attractions touristiques.
Comment je n'ai que commencé apprendre français, j'ai à peine utilisé mon français et j'ai plutôt laissé mon copain faire les commandes dans les cafés et restaurants. Mais ça va changer la prochaine fois où je vais en France ! Je vais pratiquer mon français tous les jours pour le perfectionner.
À Paris, on a visité plusieurs musées. Mon favori entre eux était le Musée des Arts décoratifs qui avait une exposition sur la créatrice de mode Elsa Schiaparelli. Il y avait des robes originales conçues par elle. C'était fantastique !
Un souvenir très spécial que je garde, c'est notre visite d'un cave de jazz. Une chanteuse américaine y a performé et on y est restés le soir entier. La chanteuse était génial et alors, tous les gens-là à dancé sur la musique.
Après tout, j'ai savouré beaucoup mes vacances à Paris et je voudrais y aller une autre fois.
Jan. 7, 2023
Diary 1/7
Today I went to the library in order to complete today's learning process. It is difficult for me to concentrate on books when staying at home. Because of many temptations at home, I can't help but get distracted. After everything was done, I went to my grandparents' home to eat dinner. My grandpa is suffering from the health problem. It is painful for him to sit or walk, so he spends almost entire day lying in bed. Last time I went there but didn't see him, because my grandpa had a painkiller and then caught up on some sleep. Today I saw him sitting by the bed, feeling so uncomfortable. I tried so hard to hold back my tears. I feel heartbroken that he was just diagnosed with cancer about two years ago. I know the only thing I can do now is spend more time keeping him company and talking to him. Everything will be fine.
Jan. 7, 2023
Jan. 7, 2023
Random practice
Bonjour tout le monde. Moi, je suis un étudiante et je étudie français. Je voudrais écrite français qui n'est pas simple pour moi.
Aujourd'hui, j'ai étudié pour mon examen de français qui est à Lundi. Le leçon est verbes. J'ai joué les jeux videos avec mon frére. J'ai joue au basket, ce me intéressé. J'ai mangé du poission, du polulet et de la crabe. J'ai bu du jus d'orange et de l'eau. Moi, je voudrais parler et écrite le français trés rapidment.
À bientôt