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La presse
En classe on a discuté un texte qui parle d'un école, lequel allait visiter d'un journalist. Il a expliqué son travail et apres donner la classe un devoir. Il s'agit de faire un journal d'un sujet qui a un rapport avec la France. À cause de ce texte je réfléchir beaucoup de métier journaliste. Comme que ils doient faire tous les jours ou combien de temps ils travaillent. De plus il y a aussi différents sortes de journaliste. Donc quoi je veux dire c'est que journaliste est un plus dur et compliqué métier que j'ai cru.
March 18, 2022
A class excursion to the zoo
What about the trip?
Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagues to a zoo in Valencia. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I were talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.
What we did?
When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map. We go over almost all the animal zones
Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework.
Recommendation
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys. They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.
March 18, 2022
031801 - An email about curriculum schedule
****would you love to help me correct this email writing to a professor? Thanks****
Dear Prof. Huang,
I am Tana Gao in MSCS-22-Fall program, and so glad to know that you are my advisor! I am writing to ask about the curriculum schedule.
As my undergraduate major in sociology, and I have not learned basic computer courses systematically, I am on the 36-credits track. But I learned some web development knowledge and had a short internship in front-end development. I hope to work in the US in the Internet industry for some time after graduation. What do you think to choose courses will be properly?
And before I arrive at Hoboken, what should I do to understand computer science better? Would you love to recommend some books or courses for me? I would appreciate it.
Best wishes,
Tana Gao
03/18/2022
March 18, 2022
A short message
Hi Sabine, it's been a long time since I stopped contacting you. I hope you are doing well.
Just over a month ago, I went through a lot of difficulties. Although that was what I never wanted, I could do nothing about it.
All of that has gone. Life needs to continue.
I still remember your last message, "I will be here whenever you are ready", which touched me very deeply.
I am here now and I hope everything is going up for us from now on.
Best wishes.
March 18, 2022
18 mars 2022 - Impossible
« Tous les matins au petit déjeuner je m’exerce à imaginer six choses impossibles. » – La Reine Blanche, Alice au Pays des Merveilles. Décrivez six choses impossibles.
1. La position du ciel et de la terre serait reversée.
2. Je serais en France dans la seconde suivante.
3. Je me plongerais à l'eau et trouverais un groupe des sirènes.
4. Je traverserais le manteau et le noyau.
5. J'aurais des ailes et donc je volerais à côte d'un avion.
6. Je parlerais le language de chats.
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
Spending a Week With My Sons
Because one of my sons is infected by the COVID-19, all of my family members should stay at home for a week.
My wife and I did the remote work and my first son who is in an elementary school studied remotely.
This was the first moment that my son studied remotely at home.
So we weren't familiar with the system, and we faced many issues during classes.
Fortunately, we finally finished all classes of this week without any big accident.
Tomorrow, we will check again, whether infected or not.
I hope that no one has a problem on the test.
March 18, 2022
Journal
I first knew English when I was in the first grade of middle school.
My first English teacher was an old man. My school hired him from another town. He taught us only for a few months before he left for the reason I didn't know.
One English sentence I remember clearly so far is "Dongfanghong tractors are made in Luoyang".
Our second English teacher was a young man. His name was Liuzhengguo. He just graduated from a normal school and he was very good at playing table tennis.
After graduating from middle school, I went to a technical secondary school. Although there was an English subject in the school, I didn't study it hard because studying in this school meant that I already got an opportunity to work in the government department.
After I worked, I almost forgot anything I had learned about English.
Around 2000, I bought a personal computer and I got to touch English again, but I just knew nothing about English apart from "yes" and "no".
In order to use the computer better, I bought a small computer English dictionary, and learned some simple English words.
This time, I am learning English just for fun, and focus on writing and speaking.
March 18, 2022
About studying music (C1 CAE Writing)
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about studying music
In some schools, students must study music and learn to play a musical instrument. In other schools, studying music may not be required or there may be no music classes at all.
Do you think all students should have to study music?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples.
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(Notes: is there anything that doesn’t sond natural? What would you write in replace of?)
(ANSWER)
Nowadays, working market is extremely competitive and is especially interested in scientist and technical areas of knowledge. That is the main reason why music is not a mandatory subject in most of schools.
As an class related to arts, music is not as promoted as other subjects due to the fact that is considered impractical for children's future and, an entertainment rather than a job for adults. These misconceptions of music classes is nowhere near to be correct. For example, Albert Einstein played violin, and he often said that music had helped him improve his creativity, what was really useful for him in physics. In other words, music favours the development of a better working brain in general terms.
Music has been part of us since our origins, so why do people not demand it as a compulsory subject in all schools? My opinion on this topic is very clear, students should benefit from music as much as they have to do with maths, biology or chemistry.
In addition to the above, playing musical instruments is a really amused way of interacting and communicating with other people. That could be an important tool for the music teacher to use in order to remove barriers between differents groups of children in the class and help some of them socialise.
Another reason to support music classes comes from the music that teens and youth usually listen. It is very repetitive and lacks of creativity (using always the sames tunes and samples). I used 'it' to highlight that I do not refer to any especific musical genre, though most people only think in Reggaeton at this point, wrongly.
To conclude, schoools should not be influenced by political or economical ideologies, in order not to give more importance to technical subjects and take back music to the classes.
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
Mein Tag
Heute ist der achtzehnte März. Es war ein normaler Tag für mich. Ich bin zur Schule gegangen und habe viel gearbeitet. Ich hatte zuerst Gesundheitsklasse. Es war ok. Wir haben etwas über Fitness und Sport gelernt. Dann habe ich mein Essen gegessen. Während ich aß, wurde ich nervös, weil ich einen Mathe Test hatte. Ich denke, ich habe es furchtbar gemacht. Aber ich bin froh, ein neues Theme zu beginnen.
An meiner Schule haben wir die Wahl. Wir können Griechisch oder Japanisch lernen. Ich habe Griechisch gewählt. Es ist ein sehr schweres Sprache, und ich wollte sie nicht lernen. Es gibt auch viele nervige and laute Studenten. Ich hatte immer Kopfschmerzen.
Nach der Mittagspause hatte ich Wissenschaft. Ich finde sie interessant aber manchmal schwer und verwirrend. Ich habe am Montag einen Test. Ich sollte wahrscheinlich am Wochenende lernen!
Heute ist Freitag, und ich bin sehr glücklich! Schule macht Spaß, ist aber auch sehr anstrengend. Jetzt kann ich mich endlich entspannend!
March 18, 2022
A Reply
20 to 30 degrees Celsius would be the nicer weather for humans to live in, however there is no this place.
China has an old saying,"赠人玫瑰, 手有余香" it means that when you give roses to other people, your hands remain rose aroma. Giving always makes people happier than taking.
I haven't made posts on HelloTalk for a while. I don't even know the reason, but I suppose I would be active there after not long.
Yeah, it snows every year where I live during the Chinese New Year. Now I don't like snow because it causes many troubles in our lives. For example, traffic issues, agricultural issues and so on.
I like island countries because they have beautiful scenery. Vast sea, tall mountains, green trees and colorful flowers. Moreover, the air there is extremely fresh.
I checked some photos of KL. The twin towers are very beautiful, but I don't know their names, and what they are for.
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
复述的劣等的说明2
假设有在笛卡尔坐标系上两点（1，7）和（5，4）。会不会相乘它们？如果尝试做这样，大概相乘两个x坐标成乘积的x，相乘两个y成为乘积的y。老实说，我不知道这种乘法是否可以得到有用的信息。这个例子的目的是演示“怎样会相乘这两点”这个问题不太容易并且不太有意义，直到改变观点为复数。
复数只是实数和虚数的和，并且我们会相乘实数和虚数，所以相乘1+7i和5+4i没问题。会把(1+7i)(5+4i)这种表达，就像普通的二项式同样地相乘。
(1+7i)(5+4i)=5+4i+35i+28i²
因为i²等于-1，5+39i-28=-23+39i。还得到了一个负数。在表面上，也许仍看起来没用。
代替看复数为a+bi，也会观察会表达每一点为从原点的距离和角度。平时，计算的角度是从原点到某点的线和正实轴之间的那角度。
相乘两个复数的时候，从原点的距离成为原本的距离的乘积，而角度成为原本的角度的和。所以使用复数会容易的表达旋转。
March 18, 2022
カラスの鳴き声
Mở bài
カラスの声(こえ)はいつも人々を怖がらせます。特に夜です。昔からはカラスは死(し)を象徴(しょうちょう)する動物でした。しかし、事実はそうなのですか。私と一緒に下のスピーチで詳しく調べてみましょう。
Thân bài
科学によると、カラスは非常に頭がいい動物です。でも、ベトナムでは、この鳥が誰かの家に向かって鳴くと、それは不運(ふうん)で心配なことだと信じられています。
カラスが鳴く理由はたくさんあります。たとえば、怪我をしたとか、同類(どうるい)を呼び出すとか、道に迷ったとか、危険に遭ったとかです。
しかし、人間にとって、カラスの鳴き声は別の意味を持っています。お金が失う合図、仕事の失敗、そして死のお知らせです。しかし、これは全く正しいわけではありません。
Triển khai
時間帯に、カラスの鳴き声の意味はさまざまです。いくつか例は以下の通(とお)りです。
９時から１１時まで：もうすぐ幸運があるそうです
１１時から１３時まで：突然に命(いのち)に影響(えいきょう)を与えるために病気を防(ふせ)ぐ必要があります。
１３時から１５時まで：ぬすみやとみの損失(そんしつ)に注(ちゅう)意するように警告(けいこく)するそうです
１５時から１７時まで：仕事に関する協力をすれば、成功しやすいです。
ベトナム語でカラスの鳴き声は「qua - qua」が一般的です。実はカラスの鳴き声は４０通りあります。世界の他のどの鳥より多いです。詳しく注意すると、カラスの鳴き声は、朝、昼、夜に…すべて違いがあります。 カラスの鳴き声はベトナムの社会的で、精神的(せいしんてき)な現象(げんしょう)です。
Kết luận
カラスの鳴き声は何を兆(きざ)しましか？スピーチの通り、人々はそれぞれ答えがありますね。しかし、これは民間(みんかん)の観念(かんねん)だけですから。カラスの鳴き声を聞いたときは心配しないで参照(さんしょう)することです
March 18, 2022
March 18, 2022
Pagar por el lavado de cerebro
Anoche, un jefe anterior me llamó inesperadamente después de unos 11 años.
Charlamos durante unos 5 minutos sobre los viejos tiempos, y de repente nos pusimos manos a la obra. Empezó a hablarme de problemas personales en su juventud, de cómo tuvo que afrontar también dificultades en su vida profesional como joven adulto, y finalmente salió a la luz de qué se trataba realmente.
Cayó en manos de una extraña organización. No son una secta (no tienen creencias esotéricas directas), pero utilizan un vocabulario que suena a panteísmo u otras religiones. Y utilizan métodos cercanos al lavado de cerebro con el pretexto de enriquecer la personalidad y superar los bloqueos internos, y hay que pagarles caro por ello. Y las víctimas son contratadas como "misioneros" de forma gratuita, de ahí su llamada. Contar la buena noticia y el gran éxito es una de las tareas del programa del grupo.
Después de haber hablado conmigo durante casi una hora, le dije con toda claridad que no me interesaba la organización.
March 17, 2022
Любовь?
Я попробую перевести тему, на которую я хочу ответить здесь: "Говорят, что лучше любить и проигрывать , чем никогда не любить. Вы согласны с этом утверждением?"
Во фильме (и книге) "Имя розы", сюжет которого расследование монаха Уильям Баскэрвилский в то время средневековия, персонаж Адсо Де Мэлк (юченик Уильяма) влюбляется в молодой крестьянке, а Уильям ему спрашивает: "Адсо, ты уровен, что ты не перепутаешь любовь со страстью?"
По мнению ученного монаха, который конечно знал традиционную разницу греческого происхождения между "ерос" (чувственной, эротической любовью) и "агапэ" (братской, духовной любовью), очень плотский "ерос" — обмачив, тогда как настоящая любовь происходит из сердца. "Ерос" — только желание владеть кем-то, но "агапэ" — личное чувство братства.
Очевидмо, это очень христианское мнение. Но это показывает что-то интересно: есть разные понимания слова "любовь". Кстати, я считаю, что старые языки (как греческий язык) точнее, чем наши, чтобы рассказывать о любви, но это другая тема. Я имею в виду, что мы называем ошибочно "любовь" разные чувства, которые на самом деле страсть или просто плотское желание. Ошибка ещё общее в наше время, где "любовь" стал видом поверхностного потребительства. Мы встречаем с людьми на Тиндер и других аппликациях, "потребляем" их и сразу после, забываем их.
Несмотря на это, мы все любим (кроме психопатов, может быть). Есть 1000 разных манер любить. Мы не должны резумировать лубовь плотскому челанию. Конечно, "ерос" — красив, магический, но часто, самые глубокие, устойчивые и настоящие виды любви не относятся к страстью, которую возможно видеть в многих голливудских фильмах.
March 17, 2022
Journal
One day I saw in my QQ friend's moments a cherry tree was blossoming.
I suddenly realized oh, it was already spring for a time, but I hadn't seen a real cherry tree blossoming this spring because on my way to work, there was no one of the trees.
This makes me think of the past while I lived near the south bus station, although I have sold that apartment.
Around that place, there were no parks or green areas, but just opposite my apartment, on the other side of Yingnan road was the residential community of staff working in Fuyang power bureau.
The environment inside the community was really nice. Many various trees and flowers were well managed and I often took a walk there to enjoy the beautiful scenery.
I remember taking some photos there. Let me check and share it with you guys.
March 17, 2022
La livraison de la téléphone portable
Je vais écrire la suite de ce que j'ai rédigé hier.
J'ai payé 6 euros supplémentaires pour sécuriser ma livraison, car je garde un mouvais souvenir en la matière : une fois, le facteur m'a demandé de payer les frais douaniers sans le prévenir alors que je n'avais pas assez d'espèces car je règle tout le temps par carte. Ainsi, il a ramené ce colis et il a été renvoyé au Japon. De ce fait, pouvoir traquer un colis et assurer la livraison méritent naturellement quelques euros.
J'attendais impatiemment l'arrivée du colis, mais le temps passait sans que personne frappe à la porte. J'en étais sûre que le facteur viendrait devant la porte car on m'avait envoyé une code à informer auprès du facteur via SMS.
Finalement, j'ai vu l'écran du suivi changer en état complet sans que je reçoive le portable. Je me suis dépêchée vers la salle du concierge, et elle m'a passé un ledit colis, avec le regard demandant pourquoi j'étais aussi inquiète.
Mais je l'ai bien reçu, ça, c'est le plus important !
March 17, 2022
March 17, 2022
소비자를 속여 불량품을 파는 업체
부산시 특별사법경찰관은 최근에 식품을 의약품으로 파는 업체와 공업용 자료를 식품 제조에 사용하는 업체 등 불법 행위를 저지른 업체 11곳을 적발하였다. 요즘은 코로나 시대이니 만큼 수많은 사람들이 인터넷으로 건강 식품을 구매하고 있는데, 어떤 업체는 다양한 방법으로 소비자들을 속여 불량품을 팔고 있다. 예를 들어, 일반 액상차를 건강에 좋은 한약으로 파는 업체 5곳이 적발되었고, 1곳은 자사의 상품을 다양한 질병의 예방과 치료에 도움이 된다는 거짓으로 꾸민 광고를 하고 있었다. 그에다가 공업용 에탄올을 식품제조에 사용하는 업체 1곳이 있었고, 또 1곳이 쇳가루가 나오는 무표시 원료를 사용했다. 무표시 원료의 사용과 위생 부족 등 다양한 이유로 적발된 업체도 있었다.
이 사건에 대한 기사를 읽었을 때, 인터넷 쇼핑을 할 때 정말 조심해야 한다는 생각이 들었다. 특히 건강식품을 사려는 소비자들은 제품을 찾고 선택할 때 그 제품과 그 제품을 제조하는 업체에 대한 정보를 철저히 알아봐야 된다. 그러지 않으면 예상한 것보다 건강상의 이점이 없거나 아ㅖ 건강에 해로운 상품을 구매하게 될지도 모른다. 물론, 대부분의 책임은 식품과 의약품을 만드는 업체에게 있다. 그 업체들이 안전하고 건강에 좋은 원료를 사용하고 제대로 표시하고 과대광고를 안 하면 소비자들이 마음을 넣고 쇼핑할 수 있다.
March 17, 2022
会話
1. ご家族について話して下さい。
ぼくの家族は５人で、父と母と姉と兄とぼくです。父はしょくぶつえんではたらいていて、花やかんようしょくぶつをうっています。母はこうこがくしゃで、こうこがくのかいしゃをけいえいしています。
2. ご兄弟について話してください。
姉は大学でけんちくを勉強していいて、兄は今年りがくりょうほうしになりました。姉はえをかくことがとくいで、兄はピアノをひくことがとくいです。
5. ペットがいますか。/ペット(動物(どうぶつ))をかっていますか。
はい、ペットがいます。ボーダーコリーの犬をかっています。
6. どんなペットですか。
犬の名前はフロッスです。犬とさんぽをすることが好きです。
8. 家族はどんな家族ですか。
ぼくの家族はとても派手(はで)で、特(とく)に晩御飯時(ばんごはんどき)ですが、ぼくたちの会話が好きです。
9. 兄弟(きょうだい)と仲がいいですか。
ぼくの兄弟となかがいいですが、ぼくの兄弟は家で住みませんから、ぼくの兄弟をあまり見ません。
10. 兄弟(きょうだい)とよくけんかをしますか。
時々、でも今はぼくの兄弟とよくけんかをあまりしません。
11. 家族といっしょに何を(どんなことを)しますか。
週末は家族と一緒(いっしょ)に色々をします。週末は家族と父のしょくぶつえんに行って、仕事を手伝ったり、カフェに行ってコーヒーを飲んだりします。
12. 家で何か手(て)つだいますか。
時々、でもぼくはしゅくだいをかっていますから、家で手伝うのはむずかしです。
13. どんなりょうりをよく食べますか。
私の父はシリア人なので、私たちはよく中東料理を食べます。
March 17, 2022
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