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Heutzutage habe ich entschieden, dass ich mein Deutsch verbessern muss. Seitlang habe ich fast kein Deutsch gesprochen, geschweige denn auf Deutsch geschrieben. Ich bermerkte die bedauerliche Lage meines Deutsches, als ich versuchen habe, ein E-mail auf Deutsch zu schreiben.
Das E-mail war zur eine Universität in Deutschland, in Zusammenhang von ein Forschungsprojekt, dafür ich interessiere mich seh. Das Projekt geht um die Beziehung zwischen lokale Regierung, die Verwaltung und Asylanden, was die sogenannte Tempohomes anbelangt.
Sowieso fand ich es so schwierig, ohne Wörterbuch zu schreiben und letzendlich, habe ich mich auf Deep L verlasst. In diesem Moment merkte ich wie schwach mein Deutsch geworden ist.
Mit hilfe meiner Freunden, war ich erfolgreich, eine Rückantwort zu bekommen, aber ich schäme mich - wie kann ich ein Diplom in Deutsch haben?!
Ich fühle mich als ob diese letzte 4 Jahren im Sande verlaufen. In der Zukunft möchte ich mit dieser Art von Forschungsprojekt arbeiten und Asylsuchenden helfen - aber dass ist undenkbar, wenn mein Deutsch nicht verbessert.
Also! Dieser Monat habe ich entschieden, für eine Deutsch-Prüfung zu vorbereiten.
Dieses Jahr ist noch ein Deutsch-Jahr ( obwohl ich in Japan studieren werde lol) und hoffentlich es ist mein letztes "total-Deutsch Jahr". Es ist mein Fehler, dass letztes jahr ich zu viel auf Wörterbücher getstützt habe.
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March 21, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 57
Part no. 57
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense (analyse it as if it’s unfolding as you read it).
As Sergeant Brunswick leaves Penny’s lodgings, he feels relieved and pleased. Brunswick has gathered a great deal of information from interviewing her. Before that, he knew little on Bobby Melma. Although he hasn’t gained any clear insights on Bobby Melma—assuming it is his real name—he has obtained some promising leads to follow up. Since he’s sure that Penny is concealing something, Brunswick will have her under constant surveillance.
Constable Twitten is on his way to the Albion Bank in Middle street. Even though the bank was robbed over ten years ago, he thinks it a clever move to return to the place where the crime unfolded. Despite his thoroughness, it hasn’t dawned on him that the bank may still employ someone that might have been involved with the crime. Once inside the bank, Twitten starts questioning the director. Twitten learns that the two perpetrators behaved like any regular customers at first, and when they took out the guns, no one dared to look at them. Though, what strikes Twitten the most, as well as the director, is that the robbery took place on the 16th, while the bank would have been full of money the next day.
March 21, 2022
Y una pizca de magia
Miro la show de televisión: Y una pizca de magia. Es sobre las aventuras de tres muchachas y se llaman Kelly, Darbie, y Hannah. Encuentran un recetario mágico. Hacen comida y cuando lo comen, la magia acontecío. La abuela de Kelly es enferma porque de el recetario y las chicas, especialmente Kelly, quieren hacerla mejor con la magia del recetario.
March 21, 2022
Why the USSR collapsed?
Many modern political scientists attribute the collapse of the USSR to its failed economy. Command economy, the economic scheme that the USSR adopted for its entire course, proved ineffective. Such a scheme lacked the power of the “invisible hand” to optimize productivity and relied highly on the economic plan of the leaders who, more often than not, had no access to critical and accurate information. The western world understood this well and started a “containment” strategy in which it contained the development of the USSR via economic and financial approaches. The involvement of the quagmire war in Afghanistan (a lesson that the US did not learn either) and the costly “Star war” campaign made things even worse. As people became angry and desperate when they saw empty stores, it seems true that the failed economy played an essential role in the collapse of the USSR. However, an angry and disappointing population is not uncommon in authoritarian systems, most of which, instead of destruction, chose to suppress such sentiment even harder in one way or another.
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Mystery in the dark
This is a creepy story of what I have lived through few weeks ago. It was Wednesday, I was walking home after my football practice. Outside was cold and dark which already made it scary. As I was walking I noticed someone walking in front of me 10m away, I thought nothing of it. The person was tall and he walked slowly and that made me nervous. Out of nowhere he made a turn to the left and dissapeared. That was weird because I could be sure that he went into the bushes. I started walking faster to see what happened but when I got there he was nowhere to be found. That gave me goosebumps and I was terrified. At that point I started running home to tell my parents what happened. To this day I don't know if I was tired and imagined it or I experienced something mysterious.
March 21, 2022
The swamp monster
In the evening of August, two friends went for a walk. They saw a nice place where they could sit and relax for a bit. Everything was calm until they began to hear squeaky sounds. At first they thought it was just some animal, but they kept hearing that noise. They noticed that they were not at a normal place, but next to a swamp. That swamp was actually abandoned and haunted because it was believed that a little girl drowned there. Her spirit is thought to wander there in the form of a monster. Suddenly steam began to appear, so they're blood ran cold. They set out to flee, but it seemed to them that they saw something. It started to rain and the wind was blowing hard. They felt as if something was following them and suddenly heard a scream. Behind them was actually a kind of green dirty creature. Did they manage to escape from him?
March 21, 2022
My terrible story
For 3 years I walked down a dark street. Strange things have happened in the street before and that's why I was afraid. The first time I went alone I only heard the barking of dogs, but the second time I went I heard some creepy creaking and I got scared. I hoped that I was just imagining and while I was thinking about it as if I saw the shadow of an older man ... I thought I was just imagining but suddenly I met him face to face and my heart started beating fast and I screamed to myself. He looked at me and asked "Are you afraid?" I was silent. And she tried to pass him but he wouldn't let me. He left, but there was still an eerie squeak, I started running and I said out loud to myself, everything is fine, nothing will happen to you. I thought I saw a light and I said to myself too, but it was the light of the same old man's bicycle. I wondered to myself, God, will you help me? He looked at me again and said “we are destined” I shuddered. And she turned and went on her way. Suddenly the dogs barked and I turned to see where they were, but we didn't see them. I reached the end of the street and I met again ...
March 21, 2022
une lettre
Salut Betty,
Je t'écris parceque je voulais te demander si tu as envie à faire une excursion avec moi. Je pensais que nous pouvons visiter la montage en France. Pour quatre jours dans un hebergement. Alors ce n'est pas le plus impressionnant mais assez pour le vit. En plus je me souvenir comme tu as moi direr que tu adores la montagne avec tout sa nature. Ce n'est pas grave si tu n'a pas de temps ou quelque chose similaire.
March 21, 2022
Why I learn english
Everything all begon with the school . I wasn't interested so of englisch. But when I took with my relatives I must speak englisch then the most can't speak german. In addition is that a major subject of my land from the school. It is very important for my building and my future.I comming so further in live. Because of this I must every day learn englisch. Also for my homework and my schoolwork and test. When we make holiday. I must also speak english by Italy Paris Africa neither austria and berlin . I watch sometimes my series of the computer of english it give a less of germany. While english is easyly language use the world that on most. For TV newspaper bussiness computer and other.
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March 21, 2022
Essay "about everyday shopping" (C1 CAE Writing)
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about everyday shopping
Some people like to do their everyday shopping at large supermarkets. Others want to go to several small stores or local markets to buy what they need.
Which style of shopping do you prefer and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.
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(Note: does everything sound natural? Could you suggest me other sentences that sounds better?)
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Local markets, where our parents and elder relatives always bought their daily chopping, has been steadily replaced by large supermarkets. These small business has been part of our lives both in cities and villages, due to, especially, they keep a closely contact with customers. However, the way of life has also changed, pushing ourselves more and more to buy at supermarkets instead, mostly because lack of time.
Both options has pros and cons. At supermarkets the main advantage is saving time, so we can get all kinds of product without having to move from one side to another, although quality, even often price, is pretty lower. Conversely, the "traditional" way supposed to go to the butchery, the greengrocer, the fish market,..., where it is found fresh products, though you have to go every day or spending a whole morning just for weekly shopping.
All in all, it will depend on my time that I choose an option or another. More often than I would like, I have no choice but to go to the supermarket, it is just a matter of time. Nevertheless, whenever I have spare time enough I enjoy buying at different places, looking for the best products in order to cook a special and tasty meal. So, after all, it deserves taking all this time.
Finally, in reply to the essay's question, I prefer the older style, in which remains communication with the client, as well as product quality's concerning. However, stressful weekdays unable us to keep this way, and weekends are conceived to rest rather more than going shopping.
March 21, 2022
Practicing Phrases
Now that I practice some phrases, I am going to make sentences with them.
Just because I study the phrases doesn't mean I can use them.
Without making sentences or speaking them, I would forget them.
I want to be used to them.
And I hope I will end up speaking fluently.
I am thinking of making sentences with the phrases.
However, it isn't easy to do that.
Hm.. I need to find another way to practise them.
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21 mars 2022 - Seul abandonné
Vous vous retrouvez tout seul pendant toute une journée dans une ville inconnue, sans argent ni amis. Où allez-vous ? Que faites-vous?
Ce genre de situation peut-être a l’air d’être très malheureux et effrayante mais en réalité, ce n’est pas le cas si on est dans une grande ville avec notre téléphone. Comme la technologie est si avancée ces jours-ci, on peut trouver un chambre d’hôtel facilement grâce au internet et même le payer d’avance en ligne. De plus, on peut tirer de l’argent au distributeur automatique de l’étranger facilement grace à la service de banque sur téléphone. (Ce n’est pas grave même quand on n’a rien parce qu’on peut quand même trouver la police ou bien le bureau de consulat responsable dans cette ville.) Après m’installer confortablement dans un hôtel et avoir de nouveau de l’argent, je vais me promener dans le voisinage et peut-être prendre un café aussi. Ensuite, je vais planifier mon séjour en voyant queux destinations sont intéressantes pour me rendre visite. Avant de me retourner à l’hôtel, je vais aller au supermarché pour acheter quelques nécessités. Je crois que ce sera un bon voyage.
March 21, 2022
Un moment embarassant
Je me souvenias que j'avais (ou eusse ?) 14 ans et c'était un diner avec des parents de mon ami. C'était leur première fois de venir au Canada, pour voyager et travailler au même temps. Ils m'ont demandé de quoi j'aime ce pays le plus, je les ai repondé « des villes » (elles sont vraiment belles au Canada).
Tout le monde sont un peu choqué par ce que j'ai dit, ma prononciation n'était pas si bon à ce moment-là. Ainsi, ils pensaient que je disais « des filles ». Malheureusement, je n'ai pas encore rendu compte ce que j'ai dit à ce moment-là. Puis, j'ai aussi dit « j'aime des petites villes parce qu'elles sont les plus belles dans ce pays » (c'est vrai personnellement). Je devine maintenant qu'ils pensassent j'ai dit « j'aime des petites filles parce qu'elles sont les plus belles dans ce pays » Le pire est que « ville » est aussi un nom feminine, la même que « fille »
Ils étaient plus choqué qu'avant, leur visage a affiché leur dégôut et peur envers moi, vu qu'ils ont aussi une petite fille qui avait environ 5 ans. C'était à ce moment, j'ai enfin rendu compte ce que j'ai dit. Je les ai expliqué en anglais je voulais dire « des villes », ils sont détendus et ri. C'était un moment vraiment embarrassant pour moi.
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March 21, 2022
C1-Sprachdiplom geschafft!
Hello Leute,
Ich habe diesen Monat das C1-Sprachzertifikat bekommen und möchte mich bei allen bedanken, die meine Journals korrigiert haben. Sie haben mir viel mehr geholfen, als Sie sich vorstellen können. Diese Plattform ist perfekt, weil nicht jeder das Geld für Sprachlehrer hat. Aber jeder beherrscht eine Sprache und kann sein Sprachwissen anderen als Quelle zur Verfügung stellen (Sprachkenntnisse statt Geld!). Ich liebe diese Community.
Danke besonders an thommythecat und detlef. :)
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