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March 25, 2022
A restaurant review
Discovering the Beer World
There is a place in my town where you can taste different types of beers, but in a more interesting way.
This pub has a special menu which you can try a broad variety of beers while you eat various dishes according with the selected beer savour.
In addition, you can enjoy the experience in a able isolated from the pub tumult. The table is enough big to spend the time with some friends what enlighten the experience.
Furthermore, each beer is explained by the owner, this way all of you learn about the history of brewing industry, the class of beers, the reason of theirs flavours...
Although the whole menu isn't cheap, I think it's worthy and recommend anyone who likes beer to give it an opportunity. Even i you don't tolerate gluten they adapt the food and the beers to gluten free versions!
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
me presenter
Bonjour! Je m’appelle est Wendy et J’ai trente ans. Je habite a Dublin, Ireland, et je suis Irelandaise. J’ai un grand famile avec deux parents, ma mere et ma pere, et six frères et seours – trois frères et trois seours. Et oui c’etait tres bruyant dans ma maison. Maintenaint, mon familie habittent partout dans le monde. Ma mere et duex frères habittent dans etatas unis, et mon pere et une seour habitant dans hongrie, ma grande seour habite en Qatar, et J’ai un frère et une soeur qui habitant dans Irland avec moi.
Mon experience avec le langue francais est compliquee. J’avais etudie francais dans l’ecole, mais il y a longtemps depuis lors. J’ai aussie etudie francais ici et la comme un adulte, mais parce que je n’ai jamais etudie en continu, je n’ai pas ameliore.
March 25, 2022
Banning the use of mobile phones (C1 CAE Writing)
A letter: Banning the use of mobile phones
Your town council is thinking about banning the use of mobile phones on public transport and in shops and restaurants.
Write a letter to the town council giving your opinion about this and why you think it is or is not a good idea.
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(Could you help me to make it sound more natural? Thanks in advance)
(ANSWER)
To whom it may concern,
Current mobiles phones can access on the internet, play multiple sorts of games, record audio, take photos,.... For these reasons, almost everybody has always their mobiles with them. This digital addiction sometimes interfere with daily life, for example, during a meeting with friends, in which some of them seem to be more interested in texting than having a conversation face to face. Despite this fact, banning people so far is not a good precedent in a democracy.
In my humble opinion, these are very severe restrictions for the citizenship, because they unable people communicating in the commonest places of our town, so if they are aproved it would not take so long until citizen take them down.
In a hand-on point of view, mobiles are helpful for people to use in restaurants and shops to pay or to do shopping list; even on public transport as a bus ticket, all of which is faster than the traditional way.
It is also true that people are abusing on their use, though it would be better educate people not to overuse mobiles and lift his head, rather than imposing so tight a banning.
Finally, what is worst, whenever politicians forced citizen to be educated by means of restrictions results are just the opposite. Moreover, it is usually the beginning of the end of freedom, which every one consider to be linked to democracy.
All in all, I do think these kinds of banning would be useful for nothing more than create controversy.
Best regards,
Jesús Correa Benitez
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
Learning New Things
While I read a book today, I found a nice sentence.
"If you study more, the resolution of seeing the world increases."
The depth of the trip changes how much I study there.
Even if I go to the same place, what I experience is different when I go to places I don't know and when I go there with a lot of research.
It seems like I am watching TV shows between FHD resolution and 4K UHD resolution.
For understanding this world more clearly, I will keep learning new things.
March 25, 2022
I always run away.
I always run away.
I hadn't tried to change you.
I couldn't be your opponent.
You were so vicious and frightening.
I wasn't confident to be against you.
You would've made me a mess.
But I am not a coward.
I well know you'd be crushed by a stronger opponent.
I'm cultivating a village for the broken.
you would be broken oneday and sunk
as if broken pebbles are piled up on the sandbank.
There would b e full of broken pebbles like you.
A village for the broken,
I wouldn't be there, though,
you'll be able to find my trace.
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
鶏の鳴き声
鶏に関する日本のテレビ番組を見たとき、その鳴き声にとても感動しました。なぜ私はそれに感銘を受けたのですか？これは、日本とベトナムで鶏の鳴き声が違うためです。
日本では鶏の鳴き声が「コケコッコー」で、ベトナムの鶏は「O O O」と吠えるからです。これは本当に面白いです。ベトナムでは、特に農村部で鶏を飼育している家族がたくさんいます。鶏は誰もが目ざまし時計として使用しています。鶏が早朝に鳴くたびに、みんなが目を覚まします。この意味に加えて、ベトナムで鶏の鳴き声には別の意味もあります。
人々は、鶏が午前1時に鳴くと、これは不運の前兆と見なされ、家は非常に火事になりやすいと信じています。午前2時に鶏が鳴く場合、これは泥棒があなたの家に入ってきてお金を失ったと見なされます。
結局、鶏の鳴き声の意味は何ですか？誰もが自分の考えを持っていると思いますし、上記の意見はすべて参考用です。鶏が午前1時か2時に鳴くのなら、あまり心配しないでください。たぶん鶏はお腹が空いているだけですよ。
March 25, 2022
Qué estoy leyendo ahora
Querido diario,
Hoy me gustaría escribir sobre una novela que estoy leyendo en español ahora y que ha aumentado mi capacidad para aprender español rápido. La novela es Harry Potter y la cámara de secretos, cuál es la segunda novela en la serie de autora J.K. Rolling. Creo que casis todo el mundo saber de esta serie porque esta una del más famosa de serie por adolescentes en todo el tiempo. Me encanta la novela por unos números razones, pero en principal tiene una tema y un argumento que sé bien, disfruto mucho, y la gramática no esta complejo. Además, estoy leyendo la novela con un Amazon Kindle cuál ayudar para traducir las palabras nuevas o frases gramáticas complejo. Estoy aprendiendo lenguaje diferente como mágica y bruja y varita además de expresiones común y útil por conversación.
Ahora, acaba de terminar capituló tres cuando Ron y sus hermanos rescatan Harry de su casa y volverse a la casa de Ron en un coche volando. El personaje en el libro que más me gusta esta Hermione porque es inteligente, simpática y bonita.
Pues, cuando acaba más estaré escribir una anotación del diario. Si disfruta Harry Potter déjame un mensaje con tu carácter favorito abajo y si prefieres leer con un libro o Kindle.
March 25, 2022
Aufregung
Letzte Woche habe ich ein sehr aufregendes E-Mail erhalten. Wider meiner Erwartungen war ich von der Regierung ein Stipendium vergeben, die mich erlauben werde, diesen Sommer Chinesisch in Taiwan zu studieren. Während der sieben Wochen des Programmes wird alles komplett kostenlos sein! Sogar meine Flüge und Essen werden bezahlt. Es ist eine unglaubliche Gelegenheit, weil ich noch nicht in der Universität bin, und mein Gymnasium ist zu arm Auslandsstudienprogrammen zu fördern. Ich freue mich riesig darauf, mein Chinesisch schnell zu verbessern.
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
25 mars 2022 - communauté idéale
La communauté est un rassemblement de gens, ce qui ne se limite que le lieu, mais compris aussi les personnes qui ont le même intérêt, le même passion ou le même façon de vivre etc. Pour moi, dans une communauté idéale, les membres doivent se soutenir et avoir confiance en l’autre dans ce groupe. La valeur principale est le partage : on peut partager notre sentiment et opinion à cœur ouvert ; on peut partager les moments heureux ou tristes ensemble. En gros, les membres doivent travailler pour la même vision.
Cependant, il est très difficile que cette communauté idéale existe parce que chacun a aussi son propre intérêt et souvent, c’est ça qu’on le met en primaire mais pas l’intérêt de groupe quand les deux sont contrastés.
March 25, 2022
March 25, 2022
A person was walking in the forest.
A person was walking in the forest. Suddenly, they were attacked by a terrifying monster!
As the blood spilled out from his arm, a sense of pain came to his mind.
"Am I underattack? What the monster looks like."
He quickly took a glance of the figure of the monster behind his back and realized that it is not a normal monster.
It's a very strange creature he sweared he never saw before in his entire life.
It has a bear's body but a human face.
The creature stopped moving and started to talk.
"I am your grand grandfather, sorry to hurt you, but I have to do this, listen son.."
March 24, 2022
1. La raisonpour laquellej'ai décidé d'apprendre le français
J'apprends le français depuis que je suis entré l'université, il y a presque un an. À mon université, il faut que tous les étudiants apprennent une langue étrangère. Ceux qui appartiennent à ma faculté doivent choisir une langue entre le chinois, l'allemand, le français et l'espagnol.
Moi, j'ai choisi le français pour plusieurs raisons. D'abord, je m'étais intéressé à la culture / langue française depuis longtemps. J'avais visité la France une fois quand j'étais un enfant, et j'aimerais bien y aller encore une fois. En plus, j'ai cru que le français doive être plus facile que d'autres, parce que le vocabulaire français a beaucoup de similarités entre l'anglais. Et finalement, je ne m'étais intéressé qu'au français. Je ne trouve pas le chinois et l'espagnol fascinants du tout, et je voulais apprendre l'allemand plus tard, quand j'aurai maîtrisé le français.
Mon but est d'acquérir au moins le B1 d'ici à la fin d'année 2022.
March 24, 2022
The Rules and the Drivers
In general, the drive rules are plain and easy. But each driver interprets the rules to its way. For exemple, a lot of drivers seem forget to indicate that go to turn in a crossroad with the turn signal. Also seem forget to drive for the right lane of the highway and to pass to left lane only for advance to other cars. A lot of people seem don't understand very well the speed limit; some people seem believe that it indicate the minimum of speed of the road. The security distance is forgotten too. Luckily, most of people follow the rules fine, and so we all can to drive with a minimum of security.
March 24, 2022
24 mars 2022 - compétition
Quel jeu, activité ou tâche fait le plus ressortir were esprit de compéciein ?
Dès que j'étais petite, on m'a déjà mise dans la compétition. Les notes scolaires sont sans doute le sujet brûlant de compétion, mais aussi la quantité des activités extrascolaires qu'on rejoint, par exemple ma mère m'a dit une fois :" Tu vois, Shelly (l'enfant de viosin) a déjà réussi l'examen de piano de grade 8 mais tu a seulement obtenu un pass dans l'examen de grade 4... Oh la la..." ça m'a rendue malheurese mais m'a donnée un esprit de compétition. Mais au fur et à mesur, ce n'est pas les parents qui me mettent dans la pression, mais moi-même. Je me souviens que j'ai eu vraiment envie d'avoir la meilleure notes dans l'examen de géographie dans la 3ème année de collège et puis j'ai fait l'argument avec ma prof pour chaque point que j'ai perdu. Mais elle m'a appris en disant : « Si tu veux gagner, tu dois être la premiere avec une excellente notes mais pas seulement avec une petite écart de note comparée à la seconde. Et quel est le problème si tu es la seconde ? " Donc, je me suis rendu compte qu'en fait, il n'y avait honte d'avoir le seconde si on a déjà fait de son mieux.
March 24, 2022
Korean Keyboard Layouts
The standard Korean keyboard is based on the two-pairs method (Du Beol Sik)
The system considers Korean characters combining both consonants and vowels.
On the other hand, there is one more keyboard method called three-pairs method (Se Beol Sik)
The system considers the characters combining initial consonants, medial vowels and last consonants.
Unlike the Qwerty method and the Dvorak method, three-pairs method isn't the standard now.
However, it is the fastest way of inputting Korean charcters, so stenographers usually use it.
And there is less chance of the carpal tunnel syndrome.
For these reasons, I prefer to use the three-pairs method.
March 24, 2022
30년 만에 5,000개의 행성이 발견되었다
미극 항공우주국(NASA)이 21일 65개의 새로운 외계 행성을 확인되었다고 밝혔다. 그 65개의 외계 행성을 포함해 태양계 밖에서 행성을 찾은 일이 시작한 1992년부터 지금까지 5,000개의 외계 행성이 발견되었다. 그 행성들 대부분이 온도가 높은 목성형 행성인데 지구와 비슷하게 암석으로 이루어진 행성도 있다. 과학자들이 차세대 우주 망원경을 사용해 이 많은 행성을 발견할 수 있었고, 앞으로도 새로운 행성을 찾고 생명체가 존재하기에 환경이 적당한 행성을 탐색할 예정이다. NASA는 2021년 12월 발사한 제임스 웹 우주 망원경을 사용해 은하계의 외곽에 외치한 행성을 찾은 테고 유럽 우주청(ESA)는 아리엘이라는 우주망원경을 2029년에 발사해 행성의 화학 분석 등을 할 것이다.
수 많은 행성을 발견하는 것자체가 훌륭한 일인데, 생물체가 존재할 수 있는 행성이 발견되었으면 훨씬 더 훌륭하다고 생각할 것이다. 나는 어릴 때부터 이렇게 크고 끝이 없는 우주에는 지구에 사는 인간들이 유일한 지각력이 있는 존재일 리가 없다고 생각해 왔다. 삶이 가능한 생성이 발견되면 언젠가 이웃이 발견될 가능성이 커진다.
March 24, 2022
March 24, 2022
March 24, 2022
Membership at a sports club
I've joined a sports club not far from my place and the underground station. I badly need to get in shape but I lacked motivation to exercise. Now I have access to experienced and certified trainers and whenever I'm in a slump my new club mates will shout out words of encouragement .
I have signed up for bodysculpting classes and ballroom dancing lessons and I'm going to attend them twice a week.
My first aerobics class consisted in exercises toning buttocks and inner thighs. The instructor turned out to be my across-the-hall neighbour Adam.
The next day my muscles were sore and I could barely walk. However I decided not to give up especially when Adam informed me that my membership included unlimited access to sea water jaccuzi, steam saunas and beauty parlours.
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