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Journal
This morning, I will go to Mazhai township to see my agricultural science and technology demonstration households.
This work was launched by the National Agricultural Ministry and is implemented nationwide.
I will instruct seven farmers in total. Three of them plant sweet potatoes, one of them plants sesame, one of them plants sweet potatoes seedlings, two of them plants pumpkin.
My responsibility is to help them to solve the technical problems they meet in the process of their planting.
Of course, I am not an all-rounder, but I know many channels to get information. I may not know the specific issues, but I can ask other specialists for help or find the solution on the internet.
I have set up a WeChat group and will invite them in. If there is any new benefiting farmers policy, I will let them know for the first time. If they have any difficulties planting, they can let me know in the group at anytime.
Of course, I will go to their place to meet them in person and go to their farmland to see the situation of their plantings.
I will teach them how to make the most of the China Agricultural Technology Extension App. This app is very powerful. Its content is very rich, including laws and regulations, market price, operative technology, agricultural classroom, network book store and so on.
Although I am an agricultural science and technology person, it's the first time I interacted with farmers in person, so I cherish this opportunity.
I hope through my joint efforts with the demonstration households, they really achieve the purpose of increasing agricultural production and farmers' income.
April 1, 2022
Un otro chiste
En el paraíso, Dios y el diablo están discutiendo del sexo de los ángeles. El diablo no cree en lo que Dios está diciendo.
"Basta ahora!, dice Dios. Si no me crees, voy a llamar unas periodistas y harán un reportaje para probarte lo que digo!"
El diablo empeza reyendo a carcajadas.
"¿Qué he dicho?, responde Dios. ¿La idea no te gusta?
— ¡Sí, sí, mucho! Pero mira dónde estamos", responde el diablo, mostrando el paraíso. "¿Realmente crees que vas a buscar a periodistas aquí?"
April 1, 2022
Description of my house: The exterior
My house is a little one. It's an alley house. My neighborhood is compound of a few blocks (not more than six) with a lot of houses inside them. The only roads suitable for motor vehicles are the ones that surround the blocks, for inside them all you can find is alleys by which the people move on foot or by bicycle. The alleys are not too tight. Between houses there were enough space for constructing one lane streets, still they decided to put a sort of green zone in the middle of every alley, on which the people have sown different types of plants. One can even run into trees bigger than the houses they are in between.
When describing my house to my friends, the first thing I say to differentiate it front the others is that there is a medium-size pink-flowered tree in front of it. The tree is probably the only special thing about it, in other respects it is just another old one storey house.
Nevertheless, sometimes at the sunset, while some cat, or a herd of them, horses around over its clay tile roof, and the sun light ricochets off its pure white facade with tiny windows, my house seems charming.
April 1, 2022
Study a foreign language as part of education
All young people should study a foreign language as part of their education.
Do you agree?
Nowadays educational system in my country is bilingual, that is some subjects are taught in a foreign language. I think it's a better and more natural approach to acquire a second language.
Dominate several languages is a great advantage when young people end up school period and begin to search a job. Every year many youngsters finish a degree and seek for their first job and language qualification can make the difference.
But a second language is not only important for their career. Youth is a great time of the life to travel around the world and mature learning from other cultures. For those journeys be able to speak other languages gives the opportunity to really immerse in foreign cultures instead of just be a sightseeing tourist .
I totally agree with the idea of young people should study a foreign language, because it's key to develop, in their future, their career as much as their personal life.
April 1, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 62
Summary no. 62
Mrs Groynes entered the room, still pointing the gun at Constable Twitten. She gestured at him to sit down, and so he did. In such dangerous situation, any good policeman would sharpen all their senses to make it out alive. However, Twitten fell into his own category. He was a reflective man who greatly valued logical reasoning and expected others to do it as well. That’s why he was eager* to explain Mrs Groynes how he had worked out that she was not only Crystal’s murderer but also a criminal mastermind. Mrs Groynes had always found Twitten amusing, so she didn’t see any harm in letting him boast about his investigative skills. She’d be ready to correct him if he’d got** something wrong. Twitten started by saying that at first there were minor details that had struck him as odd. For example, she certainly didn’t speak as any woman her age and social class would do. Then, she happened to be around crime scenes just in time to “witness” the crimes or to provide first assistance. What probably had given her away most was when she tried to talk him out of looking into the “Aldersgate Stick-up” angle. Only when he connected it all together, he was able to see the whole picture.
*Would it be better to use one of the following: “itching” and “craving”? Instead of “eager”? He really wanted to explain it.
**”Got” is the British spelling of “gotten”.
April 1, 2022
April 1, 2022
A proposal: Website improvements (C1 CAE)
A proposal: Website improvements
Your company has a website, but it is old and not very user-friendly, so the director has sent you the following email:
We have received a number of complaints about our website from customers and the number of visitors to the website has fallen in recent months. Please could you draw up a proposal outlining your suggestions for how we can improve the site and I will share it at the next board meeting.
Write your proposal
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(What could I do to make it sound more natural?)
How to improve navigation in our website
Introduction
Our company is extremely dependent on a good website, as most of our sales are done via online. Moreover, we are specialised at selling technological products, so it is needed an urgent change in website's structure.
Problems using the website
There are two main issues that people are complaining about: the page lacks a clear structure and there are too many ads, which often hide menus and picture of our products.
As regards the first problem, potential customers have difficulties to find the kind of product that they want, because of misleading menus, as well as a wrong indexation of the product in the correct category. For example, one of our clients complaints about finding a laptop in the gaming field.
As to the second issue, there is no need to having such a number of ads in our site, especially considering both the drop in client that we are actually suffering, and low incomes coming from ads.
Suggestions to improve the website
In order to avoid clients to get lost in our page, we need to reprogramme it, looking for any wrong indexation or related mistake coming from the html source code. It means hiring a good technical programmer, unlike the last time. The main investment in this company should be focused on making a good impression to the customer by means of our page.
Regarding advertising, incomes from this are pretty low, so why should we keep on this way? The best solution would be remove it all, since our main input comes from clients not ads.
If these suggestions are taken in place it will be able for us to turn the situation around for the better.
April 1, 2022
She quit the job.
She quit the job. She had worked on the eco environment scene. She had a PhD degree and educated people. I bought a cake and visited her. Her family welcomed me warmly.
Actually, she had suffered from her work. Her workplace was a big governmental institution. Maybe you heard of the bureaucracy. It was what it was. The mean supervisors who wasn't understandable. Too high a goal that pressed the employees. However they were envious of each others rather than loved each others. There were even hysterical manners that many employees cheated their performance reports.
She had been against them. She had fought for a long time. She was a bit principled and didn't compromise easily.
She said she was delighted to quit her job. And she said she'll never go back to there again.
A little while ago, she and her husband had not get along well. But today, they seemed to get along well and be in good mood. I hope this change would give good impact to her and her family.
April 1, 2022
Déluge de neige
La printemps vient au Minnesota - ou « MinneSNOWta » comme nous aimons à appeler cet, se référant à les quantités absurdes de neige (Anglais: "Snow") nous avons tous an. Maintenant nous commençons à expérience des températures plus chaudes, mais ne vous y trompez pas! Il y aura au moins un de plus déluge de neige en Avril ou Mai avant du l'été arrive pleinement.
April 1, 2022
кража
Когда кража приемлема?
Мы часто видим людей, которых выбегают из банков или магазинов с мешками денег, а после, если полиция задержит их, они избегут от трюму. Такие инциденты помогают образовать нашей перцепции типичного грабители.
Тем не менее, линия, которая отделяет хорошие поступки от плохие поступки обычно размыта в настоящем мире. Например, что сделаем, если увидим, как женщина без дома крадёт яйца , чтобы поесть?
Вот именно это пришло одному полисмену, которому нашёл такую женщину. Он заплатил для неё. После этого, он не задержал её, а сказал ей не вернуться, а придержаться жизни свободна преступления. Для этого, я глубоко уважаю этого человека.
April 1, 2022
The Spring
Yesterday afternoon we had a rain with hail. The storm was short and heavy, and only lasted for fifteen minutes. Later, we could enjoy of a nice and sunny afternoon. Today is Friday and we have a very nice sun but with a strong wind. The temperature is coolder than usual, but for me, this weather is fantastic. The Spring is here.
April 1, 2022
What made your cry ever?
To be honest, I cried many times in my life, Something makes me feel impressive is I used to cry alone and quiet in the bathroom because I am worse than other teammates in the grade of sports area as an athlete.
I feel that whatever how I am working hard, I am still the bad one on the team， especially I always get injured when my body is getting better obviously. That is like a rule that I can‘t break in my sports career.
I think you guys know how hard and bitter for being one of the bad grade guys.
Finally， I chose to study abroad and choose the other way to go on my life. I have to accept the fact I can‘t be one of the best sports player in the world. It is very sad and reality. But we have to go on after crying.
Go for it！
April 1, 2022
1 avril 2022 - I’imagination
Il y a un idiome chinois qui dit : « ne fait pas le rêve pendant la journée. », ce qui signifie : ne pas imaginer les choses inutiles ou impossibles. Oui, c’est important de ne pas penser trop du passé et du futur et se focaliser dans le présent mais en fait quand on imagine les événements qui pourraient passer à l’avenir, on pourrais se préparer mentalement. D’autre point de vue, on pourrais le voir comme de simulation. De plus, c’est bon pour des enfants d’avoir plus de l’imagination parce que ça entraîne l’hémisphère droit.
Cependant, je pense que si on passe trop de temps dans les choses imaginaires, on prendrais l’énergie pour le présent, et que si on mélange les réelles et les imaginaires, on prendrais la raison pour juger. Donc, c’est bien d’imaginer un peu mais pas trop.
April 1, 2022
What would you convince to take public transportation?
Before I start, please feel free to correct my sentences in terms of stylistic :) .
This entry will cover up my and mine friends experience’s about public transportation in Germany.
I am using public transport often, for example when I go to colleague or go shopping. I feel more comfortable when I don’t have to drive, because for me driving is an activity which needs a lot of attention, especially in the city.
This is the main reason why I am taking 40 minutes more time into account, compared to driving, when I go to school.
The time is a big disadvantage, even though it can be used in public transit for learning, surfing or in short, to relax. This was a factor for my former boss and my workmate to not take the bus. My boss would need 1h30 for a 20 min car ride. Another minus is the ticket cost, which decreased drastically after the subventions from the state. In addition, the fuel prices hindered people to take the car.
What is your opinion on this? And in terms of my English skills, please feel free to make suggestions aswell, maybe in terms of grammar.
April 1, 2022
My lockdown life on campus
It has been seventeen days since I was informed that my college was to carry out closed-off management.
I wonder if it's because I haven't been able to be outdoors for so long that I've grown so unsensitive to change in time that I can hardly distinguish yesterday from the day before yesterday.
It was just like a long dream. However, when I'm awake, I can barely remember what actually happened in the past two weeks.
April 1, 2022
New notebooks
I finally get a new notebook for writing journals in the morning.
Moreover, I bought two more notebooks that one is for my schedule and the other is for my idea.
Someone distinguishes them as a journal, a scheduler and a planner.
I haven't used a scheduler and a planner rightly, so now it is time to use them in earnest.
I hope I can enjoy good time with the notebooks.
April 1, 2022
ein Lied
Wer mag nicht Musik?
Ich könnte weniger Menschen, die hören keine Musik. Die Lieder erlauben über vielen Thema zu sprechen(zum Beispiel Die Liebe, die Natur oder die Gefühlten). Ich möchte heute über Gentleman reden. Er ist ein deutsch berühmte Sänger, der hat vielen Liedern schreiben.
Ich habe ihr mit Garten, das ein reggae Lied ist, entdeckt. Als die erste mal ich diese Musik gehört habe, verstand keine Wörter. Aber dieses Lied war so mitreißend,dass ich möchte schon es . Dann habe ich der text übergesetzt und das war die Entdeckung ! Ich liebe Natur : Radfahren fahren, spazieren gehen. Und indem, gefälle ich Frei, wie das Lied sagt. Ich will auch das Leben nur umarmen. Mein Leben, wie die Welt von Heute, ist zu schnell,und ich brauche Zeit. Für mich, das ist ein Zeichen um ein Leben mehr still in einem bessere Welt zu leben. Und manchmal, sollen wir die Leute reden lassen.
April 1, 2022
Journal
About earlier last month, the Covid situation in China started to get worse, especially in Changchun, Tianjin and Shanghai.
Later, Shanghai became the worst. I think that was because Shanghai has a large population.
At that time, we felt very lucky because we didn't have a single infected case.
At the end of last month, the first confirmed infection was reported in our city. The case is in Santa town, Yingzhou District.
Then Yingshang County reported that an infected case was found, and then a confirmed case was also found in Taihe county. These two counties both belong to Fuyang.
But these past two days, the infected cases have grown rapidly.
As of today, Yingshang County has 18 cases, Yingzhou District has 3 cases and Taihe county has 1 case. Among them, the majority of cases in Yingshang County are in Xieqiao coal mine. Fortunately, the majority of cases are asymptomatic cases.
It's worth mentioning that most of them returned from Shanghai, which shows how serious the epidemic situation in Shanghai is.
In addition, three residential communities in Yingzhou have been locked down. As for the other two counties, I don't know because I don't live there.
April 1, 2022
April 1, 2022
A letter of application: Weekend bar work (C1 CAE)
A letter of application: Weekend bar work
You see this notice on a noticeboard:
Staff needed
We are looking for new part-time staff to work in our busy bar at weekends. The work involves serving customers and keeping the bar clean and tidy at all times. The timetable is from 8pm to 2am every Friday and Saturday night.
If you would like to apply, please write a letter to us and let us know if you have bar work experience, and explain why you are the best person for the job.
Write your letter of application
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(What could I do to make it sound more natural?)
To whom it may concern,
My name is Isaac and I am 30 years old, I recently came to this town to do a master's degree. I have been mixing work in catering and stydies since I was 18 years old, which was really easy to me due to the fact all my closest relatives have always working in the familiar business. For that reason, though I have not often had a job in a bar, it is a work environment where I am familiar with all kinds of issues that involve, from cooking to serving customers as a waiter, though I have been working mainly on the last one.
As regards the work schedule, it is perfect for me, because I am actually really busy with my Master Thesis and I need some extra cash for daily life expenses. It does not matter how overcrowded the bar is at these hours because I am used to serve people at weddings, communions and baptism. Besides, I used to have part-time jobs as a bartender while I was stuying my degree, so I really know how to deal with stress and overexcited customers late at night.
As for me, I consider myself a rigorous, patient and tidy person, which are general skills that come from my experience in this sort of business. Like everyone I have weakness, such as being very talkative, but these do not interfere in my professional life; in fact that could be an advantage in a bar, whenever it is understood where you are.
All in all, it will be difficult to find such an experienced and working person for this job. By the way, I attached my curriculum vitae for further details.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon with a positive reply.
Isaac
April 1, 2022
BBC MUNDO
Perché Portorico si diventò nel paradiso di moda tra i cripto-milionari e investitori tecnologici?
Negli ultimi anni un massiccio gruppo di cripto-milionari e altri investitori arrivano in Portorico. Non cercano soltanto il calore e la tranquillità dei Caraibi, anche le sue famose esenzioni fiscali.
In tutto l’arcipelago, acquistano nuovi residence, avviano aziende e si trasferiscono con le loro famiglie dagli Stati Uniti e altri paesi.
Allo stesso tempo, molti portoricani denunciano che gli investitori sono i responsabili della salita nel prezzo degli immobili in alcune città e paesi, questo ha portato che negli ultimi mesi si sono convocate manifestazioni contro lo spostamento della popolazione locale.
April 1, 2022
Le vent
Dans la fiction fantasy(fantastique) on entend beaucoup de fois des forces éléments. Typiquement ils s'agissent de l'air, du feu, de l'eau et du vent(de l'air). Je l'impression que la majorité des gens pensent que l'air est l'élément plus faible. Donc j'ai decidé à defendre cet élément. Il y a beaucoup de choses que on peut faire si on avait la possibilité de contrôler le vent. Au premier c'est une source d'énergie infinite. Avec un éolienne et en peu de vent ça marche. En plus en combat c'est une grande avantage. Si vous voulez savoir plus regarde la série
"Avatar le dernier maitre de l'air".
April 1, 2022
Traduction d'un livre
Great courtiers throughout history have mastered the science of manipulating people. They make the king feel more kingly; they make everyone else fear their power. They are magicians of appearance, knowing that
most things at court are judged by how they seem. Great courtiers are gracious and polite; their aggression is veiled and indirect. Masters of the
word, they never say more than necessary, getting the most out of a compliment or hidden insult. They are magnets of pleasure—people want to be
around them because they know how to please, yet they neither fawn nor
humiliate themselves. Great courtiers become the king’s favorites, enjoying
the benefits of that position. They often end up more powerful than the
ruler, for they are wizards in the accumulation of influence.
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Traduction : Tout au long de l'histoire, les grands courtisans ont maîtrisé la science de manipulation des gens. Ils faisent le roi semble plus royal, ils faisent les autres avoir peur de leurs pouvoirs. Ils sont les magiciens de l'appearance, vu que au tribunal, tous sont jugé par leurs appearances. Les grands courtsians sont gracieux et poli, leurs agressions sont voilés et indirectes. Maîtres du mot, ils ne disent jamais plus que nécessaire, avoir le meilleur d'un compliment ou injure caché. Ils sont les aimants de plaisir--les gens voulais d'être avec eux car ils savent comment de les plaisir mais ils ne font l'éloge* ni se humilier. Les grands courtisans deviennent les favouris du roi, profitant les bénéfices de la position. Ils finissent souvent plus puissant que leur souverain, vu qu'ils sont les magiciens de l'accumulation d'influence.
*Je ne suis pas trop certain de ça
April 1, 2022
¿Cómo usas las correcciones para estudiar?
Querido diario.
Encontré este sito de web seis meses antes y pienso que es una comunidad fantástica para aprender español. Una función muy útil es la habilidad para dar correcciones para cada post. Cuando estudio, uso las correcciones para repasa gramática y algunas frases o para aprender palabras nuevas con tarjetas. Es difícil para escribir en un idioma nueva y creo que es muy importante que escriba cada día para mejorar y sentía más confianza escribiendo. Es por eso razón que voy a escribir un montón este año. Déjame una nota abajo cómo usas las correcciones también.
April 1, 2022
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