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Langcorrectors, I'm back
Today I have been organizing my schedule for April. A thing I really want to do again is writing English entries in this page. It has been a long time since I wrote something here. But it is better late than never.
Improving my writing through extensive practice is my objective right now, along with writing my thesis. I am seriously thinking about writing it in English, that is something I would like better than presenting it in my native language. It can be a difficult task, but the findings I managed to obtain are worth of being read by others in a more "international" language.
March 31, 2022
La Dame à la Licorne
La Dame à la Licorne est un groupe de six tapisseries de la Renaissance. Les premières cinq représentent les cinq sens. Il y a les couleurs riches, rouges et bleus.
L'ouïe, c'est la quatrième tapisserie.
Dans cette tapisserie, on voit deux femmes. Elles jouent un petit orgue. Il y a deux drapeaux, et la licorne est dernière elles. Il y a beaucoup des fleurs sur le fond. Aussi, il y a des animaux, un lion, des lapins, est des chiens.
March 31, 2022
Брюс Уиллис
Брюс Уиллис объявил, что он закончил свою карьеру из-за заболевании, которого влияет функций мозга; именно, навыки написать и запомнить информацию. Поэтому в данный момент он не может воспринять слов, говорящих кто-нибудь, хотя он будет получать лечение.
Это докажет, что даже богатые люди уязвимы к болезням. Они не в силах, чтобы остановить распространение вирусов. У них нет магического шлема, чтобы защитить их из неудач.
Они- тоже человеческие.
March 31, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 61
Summary no. 61
After interviewing the bank manager, Constable Twitten asked for a place where he could ponder over the investigation without being interrupted. The manager offerred his own office and Twitten accepted. Twitten was resolved to get to the bottom of Crystal’s murder (case) for good, so nothing must get in his way now. Being always so thorough, Twitten assessed every detail, evidence and clue, trying to make sense of them. After three, intense hours, Twitten had finally worked out who the culprit was. Craving to make his astounding report to his senior officers, Twitten stood up and went over to the door. He tried the handle, but the door wouldn’t open. There was also a striking silence outside in the hall, yet Twitten only now noticed it. Just as he tried again, someone opened the door on the other side. Mrs Groynes, the police station cleaner, was standing in the doorway with a gun in her hand. Twitten was startled by her sudden appearance, but his fright soon subsided. After all, he had just worked out who Mrs Groynes really was, so he wasn’t bewildered at seeing her pointing a gun at him.
March 31, 2022
Practicing future tenses
1. Next February I’ll be living in Tokyo.
2. I’m meeting my friends at 6 pm. Would you like to join us?
3. I’m going to celebrate my birthday at this bar next month.
4. Next Wednesday at this time we’ll be doing our exam.
5. What time does the train leave?
6. The public library closes at 7 pm every day.
7. It’s getting cloudy outside. It’s probably going to rain tonight.
8. I think he’ll be the one winning the race today.
9. I’m sure I’ll be home before the storm breaks.
10. Are you going to see that movie? If so, you’re going to see quite a lot of action!
March 31, 2022
JLPT N4 Practice 27
１．今日は日曜日なのに、早く起きてしまいました。
２．私はとてもお腹が一杯なのに、全部の食べ物を食べてしまいました。
３．私たちは晩ご飯を食べながら映画を見ました。
４．私は勉強しながら音楽を聞きました。
５．兄はフランスへ行きたがっている。でも、私はそこへ行きたくない。
６．
A：彼は何を欲しがっている？
B：新しい自動車を欲しがっていると思います。
７．田中さんが一番中国語が上手です。
８．ヨーロッパの言語の中でイタリア語が一番好きです。
９．家族で私が一番背が高いです。
１０．私は7月以内に大学を卒業すれば、旅行を予約します。
１１．次の電車に乗ったら、今夜以内に東京に着きます。
１２．あの本を読むなら、後日私に説明をしてくれますか。
１３．雨が降ると、猫が家に入ります。
１４．このグラスはカップみたいだ。
１５．あの猫みたいな猫がほしいです。
１６．私は彼女みたいになりたい。
１７．コーヒーは冷たくなりましたね。
１８．日本語での手紙の書き方を教えてくれますか。
１９．あの家に六年間も住んでいました。
２０．あのレストランに2週間ごとに行きます。
March 31, 2022
Eating a cup noodle instead of a waffle
I wanted to eat a waffle. I visited the waffle store that I had been paying attention. It was near library.
"Do you want waffles?" the owner said, when I entered.
'Of course, why do you think I'm here?' I thought.
"Yes" I said.
"We ran out of ingredients." he said lethargically.
"Oh... Okay..." I came out the store.
I wandered around. I had no idea what I wanted to eat then. The air was chill. The wind was blowing. I ended up entering the convenience store and found a cup noddle I had enjoyed.
"Can I eat the cup noddle inside?" I asked.
"No, sorry. I am worrying about the Covid." She said.
"Okay." I said, poured the steaming water into the cup noodle and waited 3 minutes and got out. There was two dirty outdoor tables so I started to eat standing. You know what? If it's windy when you eat a cup noodle outside, it tastes great. So I really enjoyed it. It warmed not only my stomach but also deep in my heart. Oh, I think I exaggerated too much. Actually it was not bad for a temporary.
March 31, 2022
31 mars 2022 - Drôle de couple (The Odd Couple)
Une maison ou un bureau en désordre vous rend-il nerveux
et de mauvais poil ou le ménage est-il une activité que vous
réservez pour la veille de l’arrivée de vos invités?
Je ne fais pas du ménage chaque jour mais environ une ou deux fois par semaine, ou bien plus. Ça dépend de mon temps disponible, ma statue mentale après le cours et bien sur le degré de désordre de ma chambre. Je pense que tenir une maison propre n’est pas un tache pour plaire les autres, mais aussi plutôt soi-même. Il y a aussi de recherches qui ont montré qu’un espace propre peut augmenter la productivité en ayant un meilleur esprit.
March 31, 2022
My study life
I took an optional course named "Biological basis of sexuality". Tonight's class was on the different sensation between male and female when they are having sex.
Professor of this course is an extremely humour and lovely old guy. He has been encouraging us to participate into his class actively since the first lesson. In China, we students often keep silent while teachers are blattering on the platform, and he always complains about that. Everytime we came back down into silence, he would stopped his lecture and grumbled "I'm the only one talking again.". It's an effective way to gain our hot responds because we were always wanting him to continue his lecture.
The content of this lecture was very straightforward, which contains many aspects of sexuality, such as 'How many times per week is good for health' and 'Different types of sexual position'.
This course really change my thought on sex. People always think this cannot be put on the table and refuse to teach children about sex. But it's just the very lack of knowledge on sex that put many children at risk.
March 31, 2022
Spring Fever
Recently, I have been really tired during the day.
I assume that it is caused by spring fever.
In order to get rid of spring fever, I used to swim or ride my bicycle before COVID-19.
Now, drinking tea is only way to prevent tired.
My friend suggested me to eat vitamin D supplements, because we weren't under the sun daytime.
He said the vitamin is good for vitality.
I will try to eat it tomorrow.
March 31, 2022
The Forecast
This month of March it's being some inusual. Since March 5 until today, March 31, Has been rainig a lot of days. We have had sunny days only two or three days, the rest was cloudy. I live in Barcelone, and I don't remember so many continued days with rain. Yesterday we had a heavy storm at night. Now, it is begin to rain and, the forecast for tomorrow is of rain too.
March 31, 2022
Życie idzie dalej, a ja stoję
Czuję, że wszystko, co robię nie ma żadnej wartości, bo w każdym razie nie ma miejsca dla mnie ani w tym społeczeństwie, ani ogólnie na świecie. Bardzo mi się podobałoby, gdybym żył na bezludnej wyspie, żyjąc samodzielnie, ale to dla mnie niemożliwe.
Czuję po prostu, jak ziarno piasku w oceanu: moje istnienie nie ma żadnej wartości i miejsce, w którym się znajduję mi nie pasuje.
Próbuję snuć plany na przyszłość, ale wszystko się zmienia zbyt szybko i ja zawsze zostaję w tyle. Wszyscy inni umieją znaleźć troszkę radości w ich życiach, a ja czuję, jakbym nadal był dzieckiem, które, mimo lat, nigdy nie zdało sobie sprawy, że świat dookoła już nie jest ten sam.
Czuję się, jak dziecko, które zgubiło się w supermarkecie i szuka matki, ale jej nie ma. A gdy ciągle szukam matki na próżno, wszyscy inni już skończyli swoje zakupy, wyszli z supermarketa i nawet nie widzieli, że potrzebuję pomocy.
March 31, 2022
Mutton Soup
The most delicious food from my childhood that I still remember today was mutton soup.
Back in that time, living conditions in the countryside were really terrible. I didn’t even have enough food to eat.
My father worked in the local government so he could get a salary every month. Although his salary was just a little (about six to seven dollars a month), my family did have a little money.
Sometimes, my parents bought a little lamb so we could eat mutton soup.
Before my mom made the mutton soup, she washed the mutton first, then boiled it and placed it in a kitchen cabinet. The broth was preserved for later use.
When she made the mutton soup, she sliced a few pieces of the mutton, found some sweet potato vermicelli, Chinese cabbage, ginger, green onions, a part of the original soup, then put them in the water that was already in the pot and heated them.
The Chinese cabbage and sweet potato vermicelli were the main ingredients of the mutton soup. There wasn’t as much mutton—often times there was not any.
But we still called it mutton soup because the soup that boiled the mutton tasted so good, and we liked that flavor.
This way, we can eat mutton soup many times by buying mutton once.
March 31, 2022
Thema Arbeit
Thema Arbeit
Ich bitte um Hilfe, ob diese folgenden Äußerungen sicher korrekt sind, wie die Deutschen sie verwenden. Ich will gleichzeitig mit dem Deutsch den Englischvokabeln lernen, die mittels einer DeepL-App ins Deutsche übersetzt werden.
✍️ Zu einem Vorstellungsgespräch eingeladen werden: zu einem Vorstellungsgespräch eingeladen werden
Obwohl er zu einem Vorstellungsgespräch eingeladen wurde, hat er noch keine Stelle bekommen.
✍️Selbstständig sein: ein eigenes Unternehmen haben
Mein Traum ist es, mein eigener Chef zu sein, weil ich alles auf meine Weise machen kann, wenn ich mein eigenes Unternehmen führe.
✍️Ein Nine-to-five-Job: ein normaler Job, der aus einem 8-Stunden-Tag besteht
Die Vorstellung, einen Nine-to-five-Job zu machen, ist für wenige Menschen ziemlich anstrengend.
✍️ Hinter einem Schreibtisch festsitzen: unglücklich im Bürojob sein
Vollzeit in einem Büro zu arbeiten, kann dazu führen, dass man hinter einem Schreibtisch festsitzt.
✍️Eine der Vergünstigungen des Jobs: ein zusätzlicher Nutzen, den man durch eine Arbeit erhält
Eine zusätzliche Mahlzeit ist eine der Annehmlichkeiten des Jobs, die die Mitarbeiter zufriedener macht
✍️Arbeitszufriedenheit: das Gefühl, Freude an der Arbeit zu haben
Die Zufriedenheit am Arbeitsplatz ist der wichtigste Faktor bei der Wahl des Arbeitsplatzes.
✍️Manuelle Arbeit: Arbeit, die körperliche Tätigkeiten erfordert
Viele Menschen üben manuelle Tätigkeiten aus, bei denen sie in gefährlicher Umgebung arbeiten müssen.
✍️Befristete Arbeit: Arbeit, die nur für eine begrenzte Zeit geleistet wird
Taxifahrer ist nur ein Aushilfsjob, ich bewerbe mich um einen besseren Job.
✍️Freiwillige Arbeit: ohne Bezahlung arbeiten
In meiner Freizeit engagiere ich mich freiwillig, um der Gesellschaft zu helfen.
✍️Gut bezahlt werden: ein gutes Gehalt verdienen
Die Arbeit im Bereich Wirtschaftsprüfung wird gut bezahlt.
✍️Arbeitsbedingungen: Arbeitszeit, Gehalt und andere mit der Stelle verbundene Ansprüche
Der Arbeitgeber sollte mehr Geld für die Verbesserung der Arbeitsbedingungen ausgeben.
✍️Eine Frist einhalten: eine Arbeit pünktlich erledigen
Letzte Woche war sie sehr gestresst, weil sie zu hart arbeiten musste, um die Fristen einzuhalten.
✍️Vorzeitig in den Ruhestand gehen: vorzeitig in Rente gehen
In letzter Zeit gehen viele ältere Arbeitnehmer in den Vorruhestand, dann haben sie mehr Zeit zum Reisen.
Thema alte Menschen
✍️Ein hohes Arbeitspensum: eine Menge Arbeit zu erledigen haben
Viele Arbeitnehmer beschweren sich über die hohe Arbeitsbelastung und fordern ein höheres Gehalt.
March 31, 2022
La litérature africaine
Il y a une semaine, j'ai assisté à une conférence sur litérature africaine. Le conférencier nous a parlé sur l'immese quantité de créations litéraires que existent dans le continent noir et sur la varieté de reflets de les différentes cultures que on peut trouver dans toute ca litérature.
La litérature africaine n'est pas très connu â l'Europe, mais, depuis quelques années, il est en train de devenir de plus en plus visible. Peut-être elle deviendra populaire tôt.
Je me suis mis à lire un des livres de lesquelles le conférencier nous a parlé. Son titre est: "La théorie général de l'oubli", par José Eduardo Agualusa. Il compte l'historia d'une famille d'origine portugais qui habite en Angola, et il fait un portrait de la manière en que leurs vies se mettent à s'abattre au moment oú tout change soudain.
March 31, 2022
March 31, 2022
Sobre a literatura africana
Ha uma semana, pude asistir a uma conferência sobre literatura africana. O relator explicou-nos a imensa variedade de criaçãos literárias que existem no continente preto, e a grande variedade de reflexos das diferentes culturas que podemos encontrar em toda esa literatura.
Em Europa a literatura africana não é especialmente conhecida ainda, mas está a ganhar força há alguns anos. Talvez sera popular cedo.
Tenho começado ler umo dos livros dos que o relator falou-nos. O seu titulo é "Teoria geral do esquecimento", de José Eduardo Agualusa. Conta a historia duma familia de origem portuguesa que mora em Angola, e refleta a forma em que a sua vida começa-se a romper quando chega a independencia do pais e tudo troca de repente.
March 31, 2022
Meine Woche
Hallo,
das ist mein erste Tagebucheintrag.
Diese Woche habe ich eine schlechten Note für Deutsch bekommen. Ich habe geglaubt, dass ich besser als ich wirchlich sind. Ich kann gut lesen und verstehen, aber nicht so gut schreiben.
Also habe ich versprochen, ein Tagebuch zu schreiben.
Bitte korrigieren Sie alles, das ich falsch gemacht habe.
Vielen dank.
March 31, 2022
Journal
I still vaguely remember the first time I caught a cold when I was a child.
Maybe I was just five or six years old. One day I felt very uncomfortable. I felt tired, my throat was itchy and I didn't want to move. My parents told me I caught a cold.
That was the first time I knew of the term "cold". Although I didn't know what it really meant, I knew it was a kind of illness.
At that time, I didn't take any medicine, I just had a sound sleep. The next morning I felt I had sweated at night, and the symptoms were all gone by then. Just over a night.
When I grew up and had a cold, it often lasted about a week, no matter whether I took medicine or not. Taking some medicine could only reduce symptoms, but it could not reduce the duration.
As I got old, things got worse. At the beginning of every winter, I would have a cold, and it often lasted two or three weeks, sometimes even more.
At the beginning of the cold, I usually don't want to take medicine. I always believe medicine has side effects, but every time I have to take medicine a week after catching a cold because it won't be cured if I don't take medicine.
March 31, 2022
Film beschreiben
Liber Ash,
wie geht's? Ich vermisse dich so sehr und hoffe, es geht dir und deiner Familie gut. Letztes Wochenende habe ich einen sehr guten Film gesehen. Am 16. Februar startet ein koreanisches TV-Serie „Semantic Error“ unter der Regie von Kim Su-jeong. Es ist eine Liebesgeschichte eines Paares in einer engen Gasse, friedlich, aber auch schelmisch und jugendbegeistert. Anfangs hatten sie keine gemeinsame Stimme, aber nach einer Zeit des Kontakts veränderten sich die beiden allmählich wegen einander.
Chu Sang Woo studiert Informatik im Hauptfach. Er ist ein starrer Mensch und stellt immer das Richtige an erste Stelle. Außerdem beschloss er, die Nicht-Macher aus der Präsentation zu entfernen. Einschließlich Jang Jae Young.
Jang Jae Young ist eine lebhafte, liebevolle Person und äußerst beliebt. Aber er konnte seinen Abschluss nicht machen, weil Chu Sang Woo seinen Namen von der Gruppenpräsentation durchgestrichen hatte. Er suchte nach Chu Sang Woo und folterte ihn seelisch. Doch als die beiden anfingen zusammenzuarbeiten, nahmen die Dinge eine andere Wendung.
Obwohl es acht Folgen gibt, ist es durchaus sehenswert. Jedes Detail im Film zieht die Zuschauer an. Deshalb freuen sich alle auf den zweiten Teil. Außerdem hat mein Haus einen großen Fernseher und wenn du Zeit haben, kommst du bitte und schaust du mit mir. Schreib mir bald!
Alles Liebe
Huan
March 31, 2022
悪い所良い所
人間なら、良いところ悪いところ両面があるだろうか。私達は一生で嫌なところを直して良いところを伸ばすという生きがいです（すみませんが、ここで生きがいは適当ですか、私の意味は英語で「purpose in life」 です。しかし、良い所は挙げにくいですが、悪いは取りやすいです。良い習慣をなれるために一ヶ月か一年間かかります、一日、一週間だけ悪い習慣も慣れてしまった。
私にとって悪い所は悪い習慣、自分の生活に良くない影響を与えるという意味です。始めるのはなかなか直さない小さいミスですが、後で悪い習慣になります。誰で悪い習慣があるのに私は影響を受けないのは大切です。
例えば、誰も健康にタバコを吸うことが良くないだと言うことは知っています。けれども、周りや家族までタバコを吸っている人は多いです。それで私達だんだんそいうことを普通として受け止めるばかりです。だからタバコを吸うことが男性の標準です、たくさん人は男の人はタバコを吸わないこの人は男の人じゃないと信じています。おっかないことに、間違いことを正しいことに変えてしまった。
P/s 良い所の言い換える言葉は分かりません、教えて下さい
March 31, 2022
Journal
The temperature in the spring in my place is very changeful. Sometimes it can reach 25 to 30 degrees, but sometimes it will drop around 5 to 10 degrees.
China has a proverb "二八月里乱穿衣‘’ (èr bā yùe li luàn chuān yī) which means the weather in spring and autumn is full of uncertainty, so people have to change their clothes frequently.
The changeable weather brings many problems to our daily lives, as well as to agricultural industries, and it is very harmful for crops. Some crops' yields were reduced because of the terrible weather.
People easily get cold during spring. They have to prepare two seasons' clothes at the same time.
My area also has a proverb "穷人别受富人哄, 楝树开花还猛一冷"(qíong rén bié shòu fù rén hǒng, liàn shù kāi huā hái měng yì lěng) my understanding of which is that the poor shouldn’t be cheated by the rich, the weather will be suddenly cold by the time chinaberry starts blossom.
The time that chinaberry blossoms is in late April and early May. Usually, it is very warm at that time.
The proverb is telling the poor to be thrifty to save money for rainy days, so we have the money for buying warm clothes when the weather suddenly becomes cold.
March 31, 2022
중고 거래 플랫폼을 악용하는 사람
최근에 한 20대 여성이 중고 거래 플랫폼을 통해 알게 된 남자가 갑작스레 보낸 문자 메시지를 스크린샷을 해서 인터넷에 올렸다. 여성 A씨는 어느 날 오후 40대 남성 B씨와 만나서 약속한 중고 거래를 별 이상 없이 마쳤다. 그러나 그날 늦은 밤에 B씨는 A씨에게 사적으로 만나고 싶다는 내역의 문자 메시지를 보냈다. 황당한 A씨는 그 메시지를 올렸고 남들이 A씨를 지지하는 댓글, 그리고 B씨를 비평하는 댓글을 남겼다.
인터넷 덕분에 중고 거래를 하는 것이 많이 간단해졌지만 A씨의 사례 같은 단점이 확실히 있다. B씨 같은 사람을 신고해서 플랫폼에서 강퇴 당하게 할 수 있지만 신고해야 한다는 것은 안 좋은 일이 이미 생겼다는 뜻이다. 성희롱과 성추행, 폭력 등이 피해자의 탓이나 책임이지 않은데 악의 있는 사람이 많은 데다가 누구인지 파악하기가 어려워서 특히 여성들이 중고 거래 등 모르는 사람과 만나게 되는 일을 할 때 조심해야 한다.
March 31, 2022
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