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C2 Übungssatz: Mobilität in der modernen Arbeitswelt
Sehr geehrte Redaktion der Süddeutschen Zeitung,
ich habe neulich ihre Artikelserie Um Thema „Mobilität in der modernen Arbeitswelt" gelesen und möchte mich dazu äußern.
Ich finde, Mobilität ist generell etwas gutes, wenn sie eine Möglichkeit für Arbeiter ist und etwas schlechtes, wenn sie Zwang ist. Dieses trifft auf etliche Zusammenhänge zu und wird im restlichen Brief von Bedeutung sein.
Zunächst einmal zu der Fakt, dass das regelmäßiges Pendeln zwischen zuhause und Arbeit ein riesiges Problem für Berufstätigen in Deutschland darstellt. Natürlich hat jedermann nur vierundzwanzig Stunden pro Tag, von dessen ungefähr acht mit Schlafen und acht mit der Arbeit aufgebraucht werden. Also ist klar, dass es belastend ist, eine weitere Stunde oder sogar mehr im Verkehr zu verbringen. Dieses verschlechtert natürlich die Lebensqualität.
Als nächstes möchte ich diskutieren, ob Mobilität „Menschen dazu zwingt, Althergebrachtes kritisch zu hinterfragen." So ein Thema lässt sich nicht einfach behandeln, da der Begriff „Mobilität" so generisch ist. Wenn man damit das tägliche Pendeln zur Arbeit (aus dem vorherigen Absatz) meint, dann doch. Das ist nur lästig. Wenn man eher das Wechseln der Arbeit meint, dann vielleicht bringt das tatsächlich Vorteil. Ich, zum Beispiel, arbeite als Programmierer und habe das regelmäßige
Wechseln der Arbeit schon erlebt. In dieser Branche zählt dieses Wechsel tatsächlich als etwas gutes, weil es normalerweise ein höheres Erhalt ergibt und zusätzlich eine Möglichkeit neue Fähigkeiten zu entwickeln beziehungsweise neue Technologien zu lernen. Andererseits erkenne ich, dass mein Feld in diesem Sinne zum Teil vom Norm abweicht. Wenn ein LKW-Fahrer oder Fabrikarbeiter von einem Roboter ersetzt wird, lassen sich neue Arbeitsstellen nicht so einfach finden, nichts zu sagen von besseren Arbeitsstellen.
Dieser Punkt führt souverän zum letzten Thema: Ob man beweglich sein muss, um nicht auf der Strecke zu bleiben? Dieses muss ich nach meinem Verständnis schlicht und einfach bejahen. Die Welt ändert sich immer schneller. Vor ein paar Generationen haben Menschen die gleiche Arbeit wie ihre Eltern gemacht. Vor ein oder zwei Generationen haben Menschen andere Arbeit als ihre Eltern gemacht, dabei im Regel die gleiche Arbeit das ganze Leben über. Jetzt befinden wir uns in einer Zeit, wo ein einziger Mensch in seinem Leben mehrere Jobs machen muss. Das ist zwar unangenehm, aber in der heutigen Gesellschaft unvermeidbar.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,
Caleb
Aug. 7, 2022
"I giornali della scuola dovrebbero essere soggetti a revisi
"I giornali della scuola dovrebbero essere soggetti a revisioni precedenti?"
Nonostante l'uso attuale dei social network per diffondere le notizie, le istituzioni scolastiche continuano oggigiorno a finanziare la produzione dei giornali scolastici dai corpi studenteschi, in modo che gli studenti possano essere ragguagliati sugli eventi accaduti nel luogo che frequentano più spesso; cioè le scuole stesse. Ci tengo anche a precisare che tale tradizione sorte anche un effetto secondario: la promozione della lettura.
Al parere della maggioranza delle persone che vivono nei paesi democratici, la suddetta domanda potrebbe sembrare a loro una sciocchezza; in una certa misura, ne hanno ragione. La censura è qualcosa che ha messo, appena pochi decenni fa, la maggior parte del mondo in subbuglio quando la Seconda Guerra Mondiale ha devastato il continente europeo, riducendolo in una landa.
Perciò, sono propensi a considerare a buon diritto (anche se tale argomentazione sia un po' radicale), che se una persona è sottoposta alle pratiche controverse della censura negli propri anni di formazione, pian piano lo accetti come una norma della vita e a lungo andare è possibile che la decadenza della democrazia diventi una realtà, quando i suoi coetanei assumeranno le redini delle istituzioni giurisprudenziali ed educative, poiché la censura sarà parte della loro filosofia.
A dispetto di quel ragionamento, dobbiamo tenere in conto che nell'età scolastica, ciò che viene scritto potrebbe essere non adeguato alle pubblicazioni ufficiali. La maggior parte dei saggi studenteschi trattano dei temi puerili, ad esempio le cotte o le battute oscene. In questa ottica, devo ammettere che le revisioni precedenti sono purtroppo necessarie, pur di sincerarsi che il materiale pubblicato non macchino la reputazione delle scuole.
Aug. 7, 2022
Aug. 7, 2022
Климат России и Австралии
Я хочу посетить Россию, но я предпочитаю погоду в Австралии, где я родилась. Климат в России континентальный с длинной, cнежной зимой и коротким, тёплым летом.
В Австралии погода теплее, чем в России. Там лето очень жаркое. Зима не очень холодная и снег бывает редко.
По-моему, снег красивый и я хотела бы посмотреть белые ночи, но мне не нравится холодная погода, поэтому я рада, что я живу в Австралии.
Aug. 7, 2022
Une ville secrète
Nous sommes à une ville secrète. C’est petit. Il y a une bibliothèque grande avec de numèriques livres. Les livres sont jeunes. Il y a un parc avec vingt arbres verts. C’est un petit lac et deux chevaux dans le parc. Il y a une gare, mais il n’y a pas en des trains. Nous cherchons une voie de la ville, mais sommes captives. Nous adorons les ponts gris et les bâtiments marron. Pourquoi sommos-nous ici? Je ne connaîs pas. C’est un hôtel à la ville. C’est clos, nous dormir en les trottoirs. C’est un marché en la ville. Les femmes vendent des haricots, des légumes et des pommes de terre. Nous n‘avons pas la monnaie. Nous allons faim. Est-ce que nous-sommos en la ville secrète? Quant nous-allons chez?
Aug. 7, 2022
Feedback from Japanese instructor
Twice a month, I teach the Japanese language to the foreigners coming to work in our city. They are hardworking because they must send money to their parents in their countries located in Southeast Asia.
Today, different from usual, a professional Japanese instructor looked around our lesson and gave us feedback. This opportunity was precious since none of us had learned how to teach Japanese to foreigners.
One of the feedback I can remember is to use polite Japanese, not a casual one. The reason is that some Japanese could feel offended when they hear foreigners use informal Japanese. She also added we, Japanese instructors, should explain using the です/ます form.
At the end of the feedback, she introduced us to some books which will help teach Japanese.
Aug. 7, 2022
Bien et le mal
J'en crois que personne né "mal" ou "bien"; c'est notre environment, notre experience et des gens dans notre vie qui nous forment. En plus je suis l'avis que nous ne pouvons pas dire que quelqu'un est "mal" ou "bien". Humains sont complexes tout le monde a des raisons pour qu'ils font ce qu'ils font. Dans quelques jours une personne pour être plus gentil que d'habitude et vice versa. Enfin je veux aussi dire que chaque personne est capable de grand mal et bien.
Aug. 7, 2022
Una carta para mi prima favorita
Escribe una carta a tu prima, contándole lo que sucedió en un evento especial de la familia.
Hola Angela:
Espero que te vaya bien. Estoy escribiéndote esta carta para decirte sobre un gran suceso que pasé ayer, con toda de nuestra familia: ¡mi fiesta de cumpleaños de dieciocho!
Sabes que mi cumpleaños es en el Marzo, pero, debido a los examenes, tenía que celebrarlo durante el próximo mes. ¡Era una noche mágico! ¡El pastel tenía tan capas que lo alcancé al techo! También, recibí un montón de regalos, si lo verías, sientes muy celosa. La música era de pop y todos de mis cantantes favoritos. La comida era muy rica y exquisita. Pero, ser honesta, creo que comía demasiada, porque me duele el estómago, y no puedo levantarme. No ha abierto ningunas regalos, esto hecho me hace triste, pero estoy emocionada para mejorarme.
¿Cómo es el campo? Te extraño mucho, deseo que no hagas muchas problemas.
Me repuesta lo más posible,
Tu prima favorita,
Fran
Aug. 7, 2022
Correo de electronica
Question: Reply to an email from your friend who has just arrived to her designation and has told you that the place is beautiful, but that it will not stop raining. Give her advice about what to do whilst it is.
Oye Claudia:
¡Qué mala suerte! Aquí, también, ¡está lloviendo a cántaros! Es invierno, no debería hacer mucho lluvia. Tal vez, ¿puedes ir al cine con tu familia? Me dijiste que el lugar es muy hermoso, y yo sé que te encanta tomar las fotos, ¿podrías ir a pie, y explorarías la local naturaleza? ¡Sidney hay parques grandes, afortunadamente! Si quieres, te quedarías en la casa, y tu familia y tú verían una película juntas.
Pero, intenta relajarte, y recuerda que es tus vacaciones
Ojalá que espere la lluvia,
Fran
Aug. 7, 2022
Escrituraaaa
Question: You and your friend are planning to go to the movies tomorrow but you will be late. You are leaving a note for your friend at her house. Write the note letting her know why you will be late and when you will arrive. Write 50 words in SPANISH
Oye Ally:
Yo sé que iremos al cine en la mañana, sin embargo, no puedo asistir a las tres, porque tendré que asistir una clase adicional y deberé quedarme hasta las cuatro en punto.
Pues, ¿podemos cambiar el tiempo de la película? ¡Ponía esta nota en tu cama, pues, no tienes razón por no me repuestas!
Hasta la mañana,
Fran
Aug. 7, 2022
Aug. 6, 2022
Aug. 6, 2022
Sakit perut
Sejak hari Senin minggu ini aku sakit perut. Ini bukan karena aku terkena penyakit menular, tapi karena perutku sesekali menjadi mudah diiritasi oleh makanan. Aku sedang meminum obat untuk mengobati sakitnya, tapi itu masih belum hilang. Aku selalu kecewa kapan pun aku sakit perut, bukan hanya karena itu menyakitkan, tapi juga karena aku tidak bisa memakan makanan pedas favoritku. Sampai sekarang, aku memutuskan untuk tidak pergi ke dokter karena sakit tidak terlalu parah dan aku mungkin harus menunggu saja sampai perutku sembuh.
Aku pernah mendengar sakit perut terkadang disebabkan oleh stres. Aku tidak yakin apakah itu memang benar, tapi pekerjaanku akhir-akhir ini membuatku sedikit frustrasi. Aku mengira aku lebih baik terus meminum obat, memakan makanan hambar, dan mencoba bersantai saja. Mudah-mudahan sakit perut ini akan hilang secepatnya!
Makasih banyak sudah membaca ini! Ada terjemahan bahasa Inggris di bagian Notes/Catatan!
Aug. 6, 2022
Life is Strange Prologue
The ferocious thunderstorm violently played between the air and the earth,the sky and the forest.A girl in black with hair in the same color silently lay on the dark and moist ground among trees,whose name was Max Caufield,kissing the ground intimately."Where am I?What's happening?I'm trapped in a storm?How did I get here?...and where is ‘here’?Wait,there's the light house...I'be safe if I can make it there...I hope...Please let me make it there..."The little girl woke up,picked herself up to feet, stretched out her hands in defence of the hard,rough wind,and started her trudge heading towards that light house.She exploited all her vigor in spite of the heavy,soaked shirt,with her hair dripping to the neck,down the whole body.As she was standing on the sea cliff,"what's happening”automatically unveiled itself to this innocent girl."Holy shit."she heaved a sigh of horror upon seeing this beautiful,significant,but terrible scenery.A huge tornado rotated itself above the sea,absorbing,and cruelly tearing up everything that was around.All of a sudden,the wreckage of a yacht hit the light house,and its top partf broke,falling down towards where Max was standing."Whoa,no!"
"Whoa!"screamed she,but what followed wasn't death.She was quietly sitting in the classroom,and Mr.Jeferson was conveying his lecture."Alfred Hitchcock famously called the film 'little pieces of time' but he could be talking..."On the table were her crap selfie,that out-of-date pencil case,the confidential journal,and-that giant old-looking camera.She came to herself.Blackwell academy,which she entered for her grand photograph cause,was just in the small town Arcadia Bay where she had lived 5 years ago,along with her ex-BFF Chloe Price.Luckily,her parents needn't pay any price for Blackwell for her distinguished grade which attained full scholarship.
Not knowing what to do,Max just took a picture,which attracted the attention of Mr.Jefferson."Now Max,since you've captured our interest and clearly want to join the conversation,can you please tell us the name of process that gave birth to the first self-portraits?""You're asking me?Let me think...Um..."blank,nervous,with sweat unconsciouly rolling down her forehead,Max was baffled."You either know this or not,Max. "Apparent annoyance clouded on the teacher’s face,urging him to tap the table.” Is there anybody here who knows their stuff?"”Louis Daguerre was a French painter who created'daguerreotypes'a process that gave portraits a sharp reflective style,like a mirror.(Now you're totally stuck in the Retro Zone.Sad face.)"Max was kind of astonished that the very bitch,Victoria,who regarded Blackwell her own fashion show,had talent in photograph and was exceedingly good at those complex French words at least to the boneheads,like Max.Her mind kept wandering around in the rest of the class until the bell rang."Huh."After dealing with the hard contest entry,Max was going to the bathroom to splash water on her face and make sure she didn't look like a total loser.The sombre and leisure song American Girls being played by the earphone temporarily took the little Max to another world,in which her peers’ laughter,the bullying obtaining in the school,and loadfuls of homework could all be shielded.
Having refreshened herself with colder water,she soliloquized.”Just relax.Stop torturing yourself.You have ‘a gift’…… Fuck it.”The poor selfie simply became the sacrifice of her rage.All at once a tiny flipping blue-winged butterfly caught her attention.”When a door closes,a window opens...”She took out her camera and took a picture of the butterfly when it rested on the edge of a bucket.And a boy got in,uttering something weird,”It’s cool,Nathan...Don’t stress…You’re okay,bro.Just count to three…Don’t be scared…You own this school…If I wanted,Icould blow it up…You’re the Boss…”A blue-haired punk girl followed in.
”So what you want?”
”I hope you checked the perimeter,as my step-ass would say.Now,let’s talk bidness-“
“I got nothing for you.”
”Wrong.You got hella cash.”
“That’s my family,not me.”
“Oh boo hoo,poor little rich kid.I know you been pumpin’ drugs n’ shit to kids around here…I bet your respectable family would help me out if I went to them.Man,I can see the headlines now-”
“Leave them out of this,bitch.”
“I can tell everybody Nathan Prescott is a punk ass who begs like a little girl and talks to himself-“the girl pushed the boy,threntening him by words.
“You don’t know who the fuck I am or who you’re messing around with!”the guy suddenly took out a gun from his waist,and the situation just overturned in a flash.His arm surrounded her and pressed against the wall.
“Where’d you get that?What are you doing?Come on,put that thing down!”the extreme fright of the silver cold-blooded killer in his hand was clearly on the girl’s face,while she couldn’t find a way to shake off.
“Don’t EVER tell me what to do.I’m so SICK of people trying to control me!”The boy roared,his rage on fire.
“You are going to get in hella more trouble for this than drugs-“
“Nobody would ever even miss your”punk ass”would they?”the boy humuliated the girl back.
“Get that gun away from me,psycho!”just before she could utter another word,as the boy was being pushed away from her,the bullet slipped out,right in her belly,leaving a horrific bloodhole.
“NO!”Max who was hidden in the corner shouted instinctively.Everything was clear at that moment.She could see the girl fall down onto the floor,that fucking gun drop out of the angry killer’s hand and thump with coldness.The world was anyhow dark,for the dim light waiting to be repaired,and the blue-haired girl’s eyes still contained that horror.Maybe the darkness behind Blackwell which enjoys good reputation all over the world had just tore a little hole ,before her.
“Whoa!What the fuck…?How?How can that be?”Somehow it was here again,Max,to whom has played a realistic murder plot by those two guys,was again sitting in the classroom.Badly horrified,her eyes turned red,tears uncontrolably running down her freckled face.”I was in the bathroom…He shot that poor girl…I held up my hand…and then I was back here.”she pondered.”Oh,shit!”mistakenly her elbow touched that ancient camera,and smashed it into broken pieces.”Okay,if I’m crazy,I might as well go all the way…Can I actually reverse time?”she held out her right hand again,and the broken pieces incredibly went back into a undamaged camera.”I did it!I actually did it!I’m a human time machine.”Max took a selfie of her for another time,thinking she might get out of the classroom and save that girl.”I’m sorry but I really have to use the bathroom.””Nice try,Max.But you’re not going to get away that easy.We can talk more after class.”She had no choice but to rewind again and copy Victoria’s perfect answer.”The Daguerreian Process.Invented by a French painter named… Louis Daguerre.Around 1830.””Somebody has been reading as well as posing.Nice work,Max.”This time,Mr.Jefferson beamed a smile at her,and her rival,Victoria glared.The bell rang at the same time,and Max was rushing to the bathroom.As she took that photo,everything went totally the same.”Don’t EVER tell me what to do…”Max moved the cleaning cart,took a hammer and did the fre bell in the corner.As the fire alarm rang,the girl quickly kicked on the boy’s balls ,”Don’t ever touch me again,freak!”,and left.”The boy took a glimpse of the shreded photo,whispered”Another shitty day”and got out.
“That did not happen!This cannot be real!I just saw a girl get shot and then saved her!What the fuck is going on?Do.Not.Freak.Out.”Yep,that’s real,you can indeed save others’life with your super power.Now everyday hero Max is on fire!
Aug. 6, 2022
Aug. 6, 2022
В субботу
Сегодня я отдыхала, потому что были выходные.
Я встала в девять часов утра и погуляла с моими собаками. В десять часов я ела яйца с грибами на завтрак, а потом встретилась с друзьями в кино, где мы посмотрели «Тор». Нам всем очень понравилось, но я предпочитаю «Капитан Америка».
После фильма мы пошли в русский ресторан. Еда была вкусной!
Я поздно вернулась домой, приготовила простой ужин для семьи и пошла спать.
День был хороший!
Aug. 6, 2022
Mode de vie
C'est frustrant quand tu veux changer ta mode de vie cependant tu vis dans une famille qui n'a pas une bon mode de vie. Par exemple une conaissance de moi fait constamment du sport mais sa famille a un mauvais mode de vie. Sa soeur et son père sont les deux obèses et paresseux. Je veux préciser que je parle d'alimenation.
Aug. 6, 2022
Aug. 6, 2022
A big tomato
John was preparing a meal for his girlfriend Alice, it was a surprise as it was his first time cooking. He prepared rice and soup with a big tomato and two cumbersome pieces on a single plate.
Alice replied no way with laughter as John brings his first ever meat, but what this big tomato has to do with meal, Alice asked
Well this is salad, john replied
No way, Alice replied, then she grasped the tomato and went to the kitchen to cut it into slices.
I don’t guess this was hard, John, she said with laughter
So when you are faced with a difficult tomato(task), slice it, cut it into digestible pieces that you can achieve.
For example you got difficult homework instead to tackle it all in one shot, try taking 5 minute rest after every 25, too easy? Try 10 minutes rest every 50 minutes, this is a technique known as pomodoro (the Italian word for tomato!).
Have you ever tried pomodoro or similar techniques, tell us on commects
And don’t be like John, slice your tomatoes!
Aug. 6, 2022
What outdoor activities did you do this summer? Did you bike
I wanted to do a lot of things this summer. Unfortunately, I could not do much, because I resigned my job. I was expecting get hired in another company, and I did, but I changed my mind. I decided that job was not for me.
Basically, I spent my summer looking for jobs and I did not even notice that it almost end. Among the things I would have liked to do, one of them was to ride bicycle. I have been wanting find places to ride since I arrived in this city. Another one would have been to stay in a cabin on a lake.
I know the next or any other summer I would do it. It just have not been the best summer. I am still fortunate or at least I feel fortunate to have the truly important things.
What I have done is to go to the gym. It might not be the funniest activity, but at least I feel I am committed. Also, studying English.
Aug. 6, 2022
Une question bizarre - L’entretien
Quelle est la plus bizarre question que vous avez eu pendant un entretien pour un travail?
J’ai eu un entretien avec une entreprise et ils m’ont demandé « combien balles de tennis peuvent s’adapter dans un avion ?» J'étais très confus. Mais je me souviens que j’ai dit « ça dépend sur l’avion » une jet privée, un Boeing 747, un Cessna. Je ne sais pas si j’ai dit un numéro. Mais généralement ils ne veulent pas une réponse correcte ils veulent savoir comment vous pensez rapidement.
Aug. 6, 2022
友達への手紙
＊＊さんへ
こんにちは！元気？
手紙を送るのが遅くなってごめん。
よく遅刻していますね．．いつもメッセージが遅くなっているし。
本当にごめんね。早く返事しなくて悪かった。
とにかく、今のところ今年の夏はどう？
大阪はめっちゃ暑いって言ったね。
手紙はそこに届くまでに暑さが和らぐといいな！
運よくこちらは大阪より寒いけど、まだ暑い。
秋を楽しみにしている！寒い天気が好きだから。
一番好きな季節がある？
もうすぐ夏が終わるなんて信じがたい。
日本では夏に祭りがたくさんあるのを聞いたんだけど、本当？
本当なら、お気に入り祭りがあるかな。
聞いたのは七夕だけのでもっと学びたい！
最近バイトを辞めた。8月4日（木）が最終出社日だったね。めっちゃうれしい…！そして数日後にミネソタ州に行って、家族を訪ねます。
楽しみにしている！いつ手紙が届くのか分からないから残りの夏を楽しんでくださいね。：）
＊＊さんと話出来てうれしい。いつもお世話になっています。
手紙を受け取るのを楽しみにしている！
アリより
Aug. 6, 2022
Aug. 6, 2022
¿Mis gatas me quieren?
Como mucha gente, me encantan los gatos. Mi ex-novia solía decir, "¡Tus gatas te aman!" No se sí estoy de acuerdo. Me encantan mucho mis gatas, pero no espero amor a cambio. O sea, los gatos son animales egoístas y pragmáticos. Para ellos, todo es comida o no.
Yo tengo tres gatas. Mi gata mayor es una gata bicolor y gorda. ¡Ella siempre parece confundida!
Mi gata del medio es gris y juzcadora. Yo creo que ella es una gata chartreux. A ella le encanta enroscarse y mirarme con furia aparente. ¡La llamamos un jueza-gata!
Mi gata menor tiene color mediterráneo y es la más impredecible. A ella le encanta mordarme y siempre quiere salir afuera. Por desgracia, ella tiene diabetes. Cada doce horas, tengo que poner una inyección de la insulina (¡muy cara!) a ella. Yo sé que ella lo odia, pero quiero que ella tiene una vida larga y sana.
Por supuesto, yo les compro juguetes y postes para arañar. Les acaricio y alimento y juego con ellas. No sé si ellas mi quieren, pero todos los días, estoy agradecido por ellas.
Aug. 6, 2022
M'entraîner à écrire français 2
Je vis dans un pays tropical près de l'océan. Mon pays a un long littoral avec les plus belles plages. En été, il fait très chaud. Mais grâce à notre position qui est proche de l'océan, il pleut beaucoup, donc la température n'est pas trop élevée.
J'aime le plus l'hiver. Dans mon pays, en fait, il n'y a pas d’hiver. Mais de septembre à janvier, la temps est la plus confortable. Il ne pleut pas beaucoup et la température n’est pas élévée. À cette époque, il y a aussi nombreaux de festivals comme la Festival de la mi-automne, le Halloween, le Noël…
Je crois que le culture de mon pays combine le culture de l’Europe et le culture de l’Asie. Nous célébrons la Saint-Valentin le 14 février, nous célébrons également le QiXi dans le calendrier lunaire le 7 juillet. En Valentine nous nous donnons des chocolats, à QiXi, nous mangeons de la soupe sucrée aux haricots rouges (mais certaines personnes donnent aussi des chocolats à leur petit ami/e, je crois que la raison est seulement qu’ils aiment manger des chocolats.)
Nous célébrons aussi le Janvier 1 et la fête de nouvelle année lunaire, la fête des Mères / la fête des Pères et la fête de Parents le calendrier lunaire le Juliette 15. Nous avons donc beaucoup de fêtes toute l'année.
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