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Feb. 7, 2020
Das Ziel von diesem Semester
Meine Freundin und ich setzen uns ein Ziel vom Semester.
Das Ziel ist es, zwei mal pro Woche zwei Stunden Fremdsprachen zu lernen.
Sie lernt Französisch, und ich lerne Deutsche. Wir treffen uns jeden Montag und Mittwoch.
Ich hoffe, dass ich wird in diesem Semester fließend genug, um Deutsche Memes ohne Hilfe zu verstehen.
Ich lerne hauptsälich Grammatik, weil ich es lustig finde.
Aber muss ich mehr Wörter auswendig lernen, um besser zu werden.
Das ist der langweiligste Teil von Spracherlernen, trotzdem werde ich das machen.
Feb. 7, 2020
Hallo zusammen
wollte mich noch kurz vorstellen, aber da sehe ich gerade eine Aufgabe: mich wird aufgefordert, eine Erinnerung aus der Kindheit zu beschreiben. Na gut.
Ich habe eine jüngere Schwester namens C. C ist vier Jahre jünger als ich. Als ich sechs war, saß ich putzmunter und lebensfroh auf dem Sofa. Höchstwahrscheinlich vertiefte ich mich in ein Buch. Allerdings ist C auf mich zugekommen, ganz verzweifelt, weil sie irgendeinen Kram aus der Küche wollte.
„Dudnacks“, meinte sie.
„Wie bitte?“
„Dudnacks, Brudi, ich will die Dudnacks, zack zack.“
Nach einer Minute stellte sich das Ganze heraus: Meine arme Schwester wollte Gummibärchen, d.h. „fruit snacks“.
Feb. 7, 2020
AP Español
Voy a tomar el examen de AP Español el mayo que viene. ¿Alguien puede darme unos consejos para tener éxito? He estudiado el Español para cinco años y es un idioma divertido en mi opinión. Espero recibir una exención de clases de Español en la universidad. Escuché que un título en la arquitectura es difícil y quiero más tiempo para estudiar y relajarme. Quiero aprender portugués en la universidad, así me gustaría tomar la clase como un curso opcional.
Feb. 7, 2020
本と読みの
私はいつもっと年下読むのが好きでしたそして、今に好のみつめます。でも、今に好きな本が見つけれないので、前ほど読みません。
読みのは英語学で重要ですよ。なぜ読みのは私を作家の考え方がむしろ分かるのが世話します。また重要は高度な本を古典とかよみます、なぜ単語が上がります。
さゆりが楽しかったと思いました、なぜ芸者の記はとてみ読みのが面白かった。例えばさゆりとその困難と世界大戦でとても同情できました。
私は今イーリアスを読んでいます。数千の年の前で書かれるので、まっと分かり難しいが、やっぱり読みのが面白いです。
太宰治はなかなかいい作家そうだ因って、本を未来で読む。どんな作家が彼ですか。どんなことが書きましたか。
長い書き込みを読んでありがとうございますそして、上手じゃない日本語で書いてすみません。
Feb. 7, 2020
Meine Kindheit
Meine Kindheit war sehr interessant. Nie war ich ruhig, und ich bin immer gerannt und gesprungen, und auf bäume geklettert. Als kind bin ich auch mit meiner guten Freundin Sanja gern spazieren gegangen. Später habe ich gern Bücher gelesen, aber ich habe nicht so gern gelernt. Meine Eltern waren oft wütend auf mich.
Am liebsten habe ich mit meiner Schwester gespielt. Sie ist zwei Jahre älter als ich, aber sie war nicht wie ich. Sie war immer ruhig.
Vor dem Krieg sind wir jeden Sommer nach Kroatien ans Adriatische Meer gefahren. Dort habe ich sehr gern gegangen. Später sind wir nach Bela Crkva gefahren. Es gibt dort viele Seen. Wir sind dort oft geschwommen. Aber ich habe Kroatien viel vermisst.
Feb. 7, 2020
A livraria
Eu gosto muito da livraria! Há um que fica só poucas milhas da minha, e sendo assim é meu favorito lugar para ir. Eu sempre vou lá quando me sinto entiada ou (em alguns casos) triste. Eu gosto de ler livros sobre a língua português e italiano, visto que eles sobre estes livros me ajudar a aprender mais e melhorar minhas habilidades em português.
Feb. 7, 2020
Nuevas Expresiones
Hoy compartir con vosotros unas nuevas expresiones que yo he aprendiendo más temprano hoy.
"Rizar el rizo":
1. Vine tarde, y cuando llegué al área de recogida, él ya ha salido, y rizó el rizo.
2. ¿Por qué siempre rizas el rizo?
"Echar leño al fuego":
1. Este política joven es el peor. El problema de inmigración empeora debido a él. Echa leño al fuego.
2. Cuando se trata de él, ella está echando leño al fuego.
"Aquí hay gato encerrado":
1. El detective pensó que algo allá hubiera gato encerrado.
2. Aquí no hay gato encerrado, tú siempre sospechas.
"Tener malas pulgas":
1. Después de trabajar, tiene malas pulgas.
2. Si tú lo hagas, voy a tener malas pulgas.
Gracias por leer! :)
Feb. 7, 2020
Mon dernier voyage
La semaine dernière, j'ai eu l'occasion de voyager à Marrakech avec ma famille et deux de mes tantes . Nous avons décidé de partir pour la première fois à Oukaimeden, endroit où il y a la neige. Nous nous sommes réveillés à bonne heure, Nous avons fait nos valises dans le coffre de la voiture puis nous avons pris l'autoroute. Nous avons passé presque 2 heures du trajet au lieu de 4 heures si on avait pris la route normal. Donc, c'était un meilleur plan. Durant notre chemin, je voyais des beaux paysages, surtout les montagnes couvertes de neige qui m'ont fasciné. J'avais vraiment hâte de parvenir à la station de ski. A notre arrivée, il faisait un peu froid et il y avait le soleil qui brillait. Malgré le fait que les reliefs montagneux n'étaient pas totalement neigeux, c'était le bon moment pour faire le ski. Nous avons grimper partout. C'était très amusant. Après ça, nous avons rendu visite la tante de ma mère qui réside à Marrakech ça fait des années. Cette dernière et son époux étaient sympatique envers nous. Ils étaient également très accueillants. Ainsi, ils nous offraient un refuge serein et nous servaient que des plats délicieux. Le dernier jour avant de quitter Marrakech, nous avons visité le mosquée d'El fna. C'était un grand lieu où il y avait autant de gens qui faisaient des spectacles et où il y avait un grand marché dans lequel tu peux acheter n'importe quoi à petits prix. Il y avait aussi des gens qui vendent des tableaux historiques concernant l'histoire du Maroc. Nous marchions sans arrêt. Au bout de quelques minutes, j'ai eu mal à la tête par ce qu'il faisait très chaud comme si nous étions en été mais c'était pas grave. J'aimais l'ambiance qui régnait là-bas. En fin de compte, nous nous sommes retournés chez la tante de ma mère pour leur dire adieu. Et nous avons repris l'autoroute afin de revenir au temps doux de Casablanca.
Lorsque j'ai vu Marrakech, j'étais bouche bée car l'architecture a embellie la ville. Actuellement, elle fait partie des villes plus touristiques en monde entier c'est la raison pour laquelle beaucoup de tourists y vont pour faire une expédition.
Feb. 7, 2020
Feb. 7, 2020
Feb. 7, 2020
Fed
Today, I learned about the Fed. It is kind of complicated for non-native speakers because the Fed stands for three institutes: the Federal Reserve Bank, the Federal Reserve Board, and the Federal Reserve System. You have to decide which institute the Fed refers to depending on the context. How difficult it is.
Thank you for reading!
Feb. 7, 2020
Feb. 7, 2020
What will you do?
Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect. In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?
1. Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.
2. Wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader.
3. Say nothing
If you heard something wrong, would you tell them immediately? It is a tough question sometimes, since you probably are not familiar with them or already deeply know them. Among the three choices offered in the prompt, I am more in favor of the second one— waiting until the class or the meeting is over and everybody is gone, and then tell the truth to the speaker.
To begin with, that said: yearn to receive a respect from other, we should esteem them first. Only through holding an esteem to people can we have same treat from them. If the teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect, wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then tell the right one. It shows the respect to them, since some speakers will not admit the mistake right way, especially, when they are professional in that field. Supposed you are in a company having a meeting with your boss. When the boss says something wrong and you totally disagree with him, will you tell him right away? Probably not. You do not want to leave a bad impression to your boss and lose the job. Therefore, respect the speaker first, and correct the mistake after the class or meeting, will gain more appreciation.
In addition, wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the speaker about his or her mistake, it will reduce the misunderstanding about you and not embarrass them. To be more concise, If you correct the mistake immediately, the speaker will think that you want to be outstanding in the class and embarrass them at the same time. For instance, most Asian countries, teachers have a high self-esteem. They does not listen to students’ opinions about their professions. If a student correct their mistakes in public, the student will not get a good grade perhaps. Hence, wait until the class is over, tell the truth that you believe, you will not embraces the speaker and lose a score who supposed have it.
Undoubtedly, some people might suggests that it is better to interrupt and correct the mistake right away or say noting. For one thing, correct the mistake instantly is able to spread the right perspective to audiences, which will not cause any misconception. In addition, say nothing to the teacher or meeting leader may prevent you from getting hate. However, I still think that wait until the class or meeting is over and the people are gone, and then talk to the teacher or meeting leader is a better choice. It is either can get a respect from them or will not embarrass them. Hence, choosing this way to correct the error definitely leave a good impression from the speaker. It will broaden future opportunities, after all.
Feb. 7, 2020
Pratique de la grammaire 4: impératif
1. La fête commence à sept heures. Ne viens pas en retard!
2. Il faut qu'on aie un peu de confiance. Ne soyez pas si timide!
3. Ne te couche pas si tard, il faut te reveilles de bonne heure demain.
4. Ma maison est plus confortable que la tienne. Viens chez moi après l'école.
5. Ce portable est le mien! Ne le lui vende!
6. Cette ville est un peu dangereuse, sois attentif.
7. N'utilisez pas mon ordinateur, utilisez le votre.
8. Brosse-toi les dent trois fois par jour.
9. Ne vous inquiétez pas trop de ce probleme.
10. Ne finis pas cette phrase, je ne veux pas entendre ce que tu vas dire!
Feb. 7, 2020
Sea Cows
The lecture and the reading passage have opposing views about the main cause of the sea cows extinction. Firstly, the reading mentions that sea cows had been overhunted by native people which caused the main extinction, since sea cows were a good source of food. Yet, the lecturer confirms that sea cow was a massive creature. Sea cows could feed the native people, but they were not large. So they certainly did hunt the sea cows, but they did not need a lot of them.
Secondly, the author thinks that ecosystem disturbances caused of the extinction for sea cows’ main source of food— kelp decreasing. In contrast, the speaker from the listening passage indicates that if ecosystem disturbances really happened that not just affected kelp but other parts of ecosystem as well. For example, it would have caused a decrease in whale. However, there did not report a decline. Since there was no ecosystem problems, so the kelp population was just fine and then the sea cows did not experience food shortage.
Lastly, the reading says that that main cause of sea cows extinction is that they were hunted by European fur traders, who had weapons that were able to kill a large animal quickly. Instead, the listening asserts that sea cow population was already small before the traders arrived.
Feb. 7, 2020
Feb. 7, 2020
What are habits? The key to success (part 3)
In this post, i'll write about how you can building a habits.
First of all, you must to understand to build a habits need time it's not a goal you can achieve in few days, that require time. Usually require 66 days to build a strong habits.
- But. how can you do that?
- Well, no matter what habit do you want to build. Always you gonna driving through on 4 phase.
To talk about those we use a example when you've the habit to smoking and every time you are stressed, you put your hand into your pocket, take a cigarette and begin to smoke. Then about that you are less stressed.
- Okay, the 4 ways, steps, or whatever is.
The First is: Signal
This represent the trigger, something which shoot a memory, a image in your brain, or as a simple action. Following this example, the signal is: to be stressed. Because for that, you begin to smoke
The Second is: Desire.
This represent the unconscious desire to feeling happy or less stressed. In this case you want to get away from stress
The third is: Conduct.
This represent the action do you do every time when the trigger is fired. In this example is take your cigarette and begin to smoke.
The Fourth is: Reward
This is the last one and the most important because when you finished to do the action, you get the rewards in this case is relax.
Feb. 7, 2020
Feb. 6, 2020
T14
Russia and India Seek Partnership in Military and Energy for Arctic Circle Development
Russia and India are rapidly (approaching each other? getting close? ). On the 5th of February, the Russian oil giant announced India’s participation in Russian oil field development in the Arctic circle. Both countries also agreed on introducing the Russian anti-missile system by the year 2021. The intention behind this partnership (?) is likely to exhibit strengthening cooperation in energy and military industries to use against (?) the Trump administration. The U.S. is anticipated to criticize India’s decision.
Igor Sechin, the director of the government-affiliated company Rosneft, met with the minister of petroleum and natural gas, Dharmendra Pradhan, in New Deli. They reached a basic agreement on the participation of an Indian company to Rosneft’s energy development project in the Arctic circle “Vostok Oil”.
The partnership will further be hammered out at the task force that is going to be newly established.
Rosneft signed a partnership with Indian Oil to export as much as 2 million tons of oil from a southern Russian port in 2020.
Vostok is a project lead by Sechin, a close advisor of president Putin.
The project consists of (?) several oil field development plans in the eastern Siberia, and the production is estimated to reach 100 million tons annually by 2030, occupying 20% of an entire production in Russia.
Russia sees India as the largest oil consumer next to the U.S. and China.
Investment is estimated to exceed 10 billion dollars. Sechin visited Japan in December 2019 and invited Japanese enterprises to join the project as well.
On the 5th of February, the executives of the Federal Service of Military-Technical Cooperation
visited the military expo “DEFEXPO" in India and confirmed on a possible delivery of an anti-missile system “S400” to India. The training for delivery and management is scheduled to commence by the end of 2021.
India, despite the opposition from the U.S., agreed on proceeding according to the plan on the contract.
The executives also commented that Russia is ready to start the production of the AK-47, Russian assault rifle, in 2020.
The approval for domestic production of the Russian tanks in India was extended until 2028. 460 tanks are planned for production.
India, with an intention to expand military production, insists on a domestic production even on a negotiation table with the U.S. and China. Russia agreed on this request and have provided weapons amounting to 15 billion dollars in the past three years.
Both Russia and India are carefully …(observing?) the relationships with China and the U.S.
Although India and the U.S. have been cooperating against China, India no longer receives preferential treatment on tariffs from the Trump administration.
Another background for partnering with Russia is the diversification of oil suppliers as India was forced to stop the oil import from Iran due to U.S. sanctions.
India is also carrying a negotiation with China on a possibility of expansion in trade against the U.S., in spite of their existing border disputes.
India’s intentions to weigh the U.S., China and Russia are a clear sign to attract more profit to the domestic economy.
As for Russia, with the lengthening of Western sanctions, strengthening the ties with India and China was inevitable.
The relationship with the U.S. is in a statement and the nuclear disarmament talks that are hoped to encourage (improve?) the U.S.-Russia ties are also slow in development.
With the outbreak of coronavirus, concern for a recession of the Chinese economy is increasing. Russia rushes to spread the risk by partnering with India in addition to its largest exporting partner China.
In 2019, the Trump administration pressured the Turkish government with a possible sanction and a freeze in the sale of a cutting-edge fighter aircraft when Turkey introduced S400.
The U.S. and India agreed on the joint production of fighter aircraft in 2017. India is potentially an ideal weapon export market for the U.S.
The U.S. and Russia each attempted to take in India, the former country within a “Japan-U.S.-India” partnership, and the latter within the “China-Russia-India” partnership. Russia’s aim to separate the U.S. from India coincides with China’s interests as well.
Feb. 6, 2020
6. Februar: der samische Nationalfeiertag!
Heute feiern die Samen ihren Nationalfeiertag, weil es der 6. Februar des Jahres 1917 war, an dem die Samen an einer politischen Konferenz in Norwegen teilnahmen. Sie waren jahrhundertelang eine marginalisierte Gesellschaft gewesen, aber seit diesem Datum haben sie sich mehr mit politischen Angelegenheiten befasst. Sie feiern ihre Identität, Sprachen und Menschen!
Feb. 6, 2020
Feb. 6, 2020
Feb. 6, 2020
Skiing, Part 4
Finally I had that skiing week. I feel it was enough. There were good parts and also bed parts. The road was 12 hours long, but fortunetly it didn't seem so long.
First of all we arrived on the hotel at 18 p.m. but on the reception the staff said, that we should have go to another. The misunderstanding caused, that it was two Hotel, but one owner and one e-mail adress. We weren't upset because the receptionist said, that the other Hotel is bigger and much better. Somewhere it was no question, that it should have better, cause it was a court accomodation.
We were never have a this kind of accomodation. We were happy as we knew, that we didn't have to drive to the court an back. It was always so much time (one hour) the procedure. We al ways had to pack in all the devices and the end of the day packing out. So it began very well.
We found the Hotel and occupied our rooms. In our room we were four, and it was a really small room. It was one cabinet, with two hangers. I went to the receptionist for ask four more at least. She wrote it and told me, that I'll get it tomorrow.
Everybody waited for the dinner, we were hungry...
Feb. 6, 2020
T13
Indonesian “Smart Fish Farming” Startup Provides Services to Neighboring Countries
EFishery, an Indonesian agri-tech startup, is reported to have been negotiating towards fundraising. The negotiation partners are Northstar, a Singaporean investment firm, and the investment department of an Indonesian ride-hailing giant Go-Ventures.
EFishery is a company that provides smart feeding machines for fish and shrimp farming and data infrastructure. The company was established in 2013.
EFishery’s technology leads to risk management for farmers and solves the issues of lack of funds.
The startup is aiming to raise 15 million dollars at this current investment round.
Patrick Walujo, a managing partner and a co-founder of Northstar Group, commented at the beginning of January that they are ready to support EFishery, without going further into the details. Walujo commented, “Our interest lies in how we can aid in providing this product to millions of farmers. Their product is gaining popularity not only in Indonesia but also in Vietnam and Thailand.”
EFishery successfully raised funds at their beginning stage in 2015 following with a 4 million dollars funding in 2018. Other investors were actively participating as well. EFishery did not accept an interview regarding this matter. Go-Ventures commented that they are not ready to respond yet, while Northstar said they do not comment on rumors in the market.
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