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第二次学舞蹈
因为中国的舞蹈老师很严格，容易对学生发脾气，我父母就没让我继续学习舞蹈。这是我长大后的一个遗憾，所以二十岁的我要重新开始积累舞蹈基础。在美国住发现这边除了专业舞蹈学院外就没有任何"狠"的老师，这反而让我感觉遗憾。小时候的我要是有温柔的老师会感觉如释重负，但现在的我却想认识一位严格，可以批评我的教师。
我已经不住在城市里，所以学舞蹈完全要靠自己努力。所以几个月前我为了从基础重学而开始练劈叉，得到了很多关于柔韧性的收获。以前我父母跟我说：“你都这么大了，不可能练出任何柔韧性。” ，所以我上高中时没有追求跳舞的梦想。现在我已经意识到他们所说的缺陷，但只要我坚持练习真的会有收获。我唯一后悔的事是没有早点做自己想做的爱好！
Jan. 16, 2021
ZZ2
Credo che, quello che ancora mi sembra molto difficile è capire gli scherzi in italiano.
Ho sentito un podcast che hanno detto tantissime ma, non ho capito niente. Alcuni usavano parole che non abbia sentito mai. So che gli umorismo è una cosa complicata di capire perché coinvolge tantissime idea precedenti, contesto culturale etc, etc.
Nella mia biblioteca ho trovato un libro di saggi da Luigi Pirandello chiamato; Umorismo, ma la cosa non va bene con quello libro, non mi fa ridere niente, dal altro lato, mi ricordo un libro; "Il nome della Rosa" scritto da Umberto Eco, mi sembrano molto grazioso, gli ho letto in spagnolo, inglese e in italiano.
Mi ricordo una parte che raccontava di come un pio sacerdote ha usato la sua intelligenza per umiliare a quelli che lo torturano... San Lorenzo...magari San Lucrecio, non mi ricordo bene...
Cosa devo fare? Vendere mia anima al Diavolo per farmi capire gli scherzi, oppure pregare tutto il giorno a Dio?
Mamma mia cosa dovrò fare per capire il umorismo italiano?
------Ho ricordato il passaggio-------
Si racconta di san Mauro che i pagani lo posero nell'acqua bollente ed egli si lamenta che il bagno fosse troppo freddo; il governatore pagano mise stoltamente la mano nell'acqua per
controllare, e si ustiona. Bella azione di quel santo martire che ridicolizzí i nemici della fede."
:)
Jan. 16, 2021
Comida casera
Esta semana he escuchado muchos episodios del podcast "Home Cooking." Los presentadores empezaron el podcast cuando la cuarentena empezó en marzo. Los escuchadores pueden dejar una nota de voz con una pregunta (las preguntas suelen enfocar en cómo usar algún ingrediente). Este podcast me hace reír :)
Jan. 16, 2021
Trecho de um livro, traduzido.
A sala ficou quieta novamente, exceto pelo assobio rítmico do respirador. O enfermeiro se sentou e esperou. Ele ia ficar lá na sala até que seu paciente abrisse os olhos dela. Depois ele ia beija-la, pois lá no fundo ele sabia que ele a amava; mesmo que não pudesse admitir isso para si mesmo
Jan. 16, 2021
Translation Practice
In 1999, He Qingkui wrote a short play for Zhao Benshan.
After reading the play, Zhao Benshan was worried about who was suitable for performing it. He thought that it was obviously not suitable for Gao Xiumin, so finally, he had to ask Song Dandan. Zhao Benshan called Song Dandan but he didn't directly tell her that he wanted to perform on the Spring Festival English Show with her.
He just told her that there was a good script that was worth seeing. After all, Song Dandan's partner was Huanghong at that time. Back then, Song Dandan faced a dilemma: it was also the time after Song Dandan's divorce with Yingda.
She had to raise her kids while working. It was a tough time for her. The negative effects from her divorce with Yingda are not small and her career was also in a tepid state.
Although every year she perform on the Spring Festival Evening Show with Huanghong, it didn't have an ideal effect. She also needed some changes. After seeing the script, Song Danda was tempted.
The script was so nice, and it would be a pity if missed the chance. After weighing the pros and cons, Song Danda agreed to go to the Spring Festival Evening Show with Zhao Benshan to perform Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow.. Nice script added excellent performer, it's difficult to perform badly.
The cooperation of the two was really a hit and the program successfully won the first prize of language program that year, which also started the prelude of the two people's cooperation for many years. In 2006, during the performance of Xiao Cui Said things, Zhao Benshan made a serious mistake.
He forgot his bag when he went up the stage. Fortunately, Song Dandan carefully found the mistake at the beginning when Zhao Benshan started to go up the stage. Song Dandan hurriedly winked at Zhao Benshan, because the props to be used in the sketch were in the bag, which was a book written by Song Dandan YueZi.
Song Dandan quickly helped Zhao Benshan to block the camera, and Zhao Benshan took the bag at the moment when the camera switched, so as to avoid causing major mistakes.
It's sad that after the performance, Zhao Benshan and Song Dandan wept bitterly in the backstage of the Spring Festival Evening Show, which shows that it's not easy to perform at the Spring Festival Evening Show. Recently, Pan Changjiang announced his return to the Spring Festival Evening Show, and many old faces will return to this year's Spring Festival Evening Show.
Zhao Benshan and Song Dandan, the gold partners, don't know if they can return to the stage of the Spring Festival Evening Show. If they can join hands again, I believe they will bring us more laughter.
Jan. 16, 2021
Essay for suggestions
Do You Prefer to Dwell in the Past, Live in the Present or Dream of the Future?
Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a saying from Kung Fu Panda movie which states that “The past is history, the future is a mystery, but today is a gift what it is called the present”. It clearly states that nothing is in our control except the moment we have. Personally, I would much rather enjoy the present than the past or the future because it makes me happy and inspires me to accomplish my goals.
To begin with, living in the present enables people to admire the moment they have, so they will be relaxed and happier. This means people will feel the things and love to spend time with them. For instance, I am working with a Pharmaceutical company as a data analyst in Hartford. Even though it is a nine-to-five job, I am happy with my work responsibilities like data analysis, project delegation, and report submission. During this process, I am not only improving my skills but also interacting with different people who will have funny conversations, and some are pretty subjective too. After office hours, I am a dad and husband spending time with them which is the most incredible time I ever got in my life. Enjoying my son’s activities and appreciating his artwork. Everything I have is the time that I can control and adore the happiness received from doing those activities. Therefore, for me present means living in the moment which I adore than the things that are not existing like the past or the future.
Besides living in the moment, I choose to be in the present than the past or the future since the present inspires me to strive hard for a better career. In other words, I prefer to work for a purpose where I will devote my time to accomplish the tasks. For example, right now, I am preparing for my TOEFL exams where I must get a required score of 26 in speaking and 24 in writing. Therefore, I am working arduously to get the required grades which is critically important for me to land my career in the USA. If I receive the desired scores, I will be eligible for Pharmacy license Exam which is the first step for getting a registered pharmacist position in the USA. Hence, the present gives me an opportunity to work on my tasks and fulfill my dreams.
In essence, I strongly believe that the present plays an essential role in people’s lives than in the past or the future. This is because it allows people to appreciate the moment and live happily, also present motivates people to work hard for a better possibility.
Jan. 16, 2021
Ma première fois en écrivant en français depuis 2020
Donc, c'est la première fois que j'écris en français depuis mai 2020 et je suis sûre j'ai déjà fait comme 10000 erreurs. J'ai decidé de utiliser cette chose parce que j'ai besoin de practiquer la langue. J'ai étudié le français pendant 4 ans à l'université (je suis étudiante de langes), mais vraiment, je sens comme si j'avais appris rien et je pense que mon niveau est très basique et maintenant j'ai peur parce que ce semestre il faut que j'écrive un essai/thèse (en français, bien évidement) pour obtenir mon diplome et je veux pleurer.
Donc ouais, j'essaiera d'écrire ici pour practiquer et améliorer et aussi pour raconter quelqu'un mon proccess avec l'essai.
Jan. 16, 2021
foråret og kulturen
Jeg tror, de fleste kulturer har mange gamle ordsprog om årstider og årstidernes skiften, fordi i fortiden, hvad vi kunne høste var ret vigtig for, hvordan vi levede. Især om foråret, når vi kunne plante afgrøder for første gang siden vinteren startede.
Foråret kan være uforudsigeligt. Vintersne og is smelter og jorden begynder at tø op. Men der kan ske foråret sne, selv efter vinteren er forbi. Store foråroversvømmelser kan ske, forbi smeltning kan få vandstanden til at stige flere meter.
Danmark har 2 forår relaterede skikke, som jeg kunne finde: Fastelavn og Påske. Begge er relateret til at bringe fertilitet efter vinteren.
Påske i Danmark består af 2 dage, men mange steder giver folk flere fridage. Nogle mennesker går i kirke, og der er æg relaterede aktiviteter for børn. Folk giver hinanden anonyme gækkebreve, med vintergække indeni, og prøver at gætte, hvem der sendte det, ved antaller af prikker underskrevet. Folk dekorerer med æg, reder, og gule fjer. Der er også påskefrokost.
Påske i Chile er 1 dag, en søndag. Der er også æg relaterede aktiviteter for børn. Folk dekorerer med æg, reder, og kaniner. Kaniner medbringer chokoladeæggene. Vi dekorerer ikke med gule fjer. Vi har ikke det gækkebrev tradition. Jeg ved ikke, om andre folk har påskefrokost, men min familie har der det ikke. Måske fordi vi er ikke religiøs.
Jan. 16, 2021
Gestern war mein Auto geschleppt war.
Gestern war mein Auto geschleppt war. Stellen sie sich vor, an die Straße gäbe es kein Auto. Das war meine Erfahrung. Die Straße war leer. Ich begriff endlich, was passiert ist. Das Straßenschild sagt zwischen 16:30 Uhr 1830 Uhr, man kann nicht parken. Das ist ganz seltsam, mindestens hier in Melbourne. Normalerweise, das Abschleppen passiert abends oder nachts und fast nie am Nachmittag. Ich habe danach gelesen, dass dieses Straßenschild revidiert war. Die Regierung hofft, dass das neue Straßenschild die Sicherheit im Straßenverkehr erhöhen. Ich war nicht dieser besonderen Situationen bewusst. Deshalb musste ich eine teurere Strafe bezahlen. Nie mehr wurde ich die Bedeutung eins Straßenschildes vermuten.
Jan. 16, 2021
El agotamiento
Creo que me ha afectado el agotamiento. No las son tan fáciles hacer algunas de mis cosas favoritas. No es porque no me divierten, aún quiero hacerlas. Sin embargo, es como si falte la voluntad. Quiero hacer algo, pero no puedo levantarme para hacerlo.
Estoy intentando una nueva manera de aprender español. Durante los últimos meses, he intentado experimentar maneras de aprendizaje diferentes, y cuando uno no funciona, tengo que intentar algo diferente. Me he dado cuenta de que esta manera actual no es sostenible, especialmente con todas las otras cosas que hago ahora. Espero reemplazar esta manera otra vez en el futuro. Opino que tiene muchos beneficios. Desafortunadamente mi horario no la permite ahora mismo.
Mientras busco otra manera de aprender, estoy rehaciendo otras también. Por ejemplo, he intentado por toda esta entrad escribir oraciones cortas. Cuando lo hago, me equivoco menos. Siempre me impresionan muchísimas las entradas de inglés que corrijo. Rara vez no puedo entenderlas. Lo que me impresiona lo mejor, sin embargo, es su gramática. Lucho contra la gramática de ambos idiomas, el de inglés y de español, sino la de ellos es fabulosa. La mayoría del tiempo, tengo que corregir frases específicas, pero casi nunca tengo que reescribir la oración. Así que, sé que me estoy equivocando con algo. Espero que a través de esta nueva manera, lo arregle y escriba mejor.
Dos oraciones con "tocar + infinitivo".
1. Te toca preparar cena ya que estoy muerto.
2. Le toca pasear con el perro a Juan.
Jan. 16, 2021
Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder
Just learn this word from my friend’s post.
And I also check few articles from internet as well.
After knowing more detail about this illness.
My personal comment would be we all have this OCD.
But some people might be so serious, hence they need doctor’s help.
Some people may be having that in slightly.
In fact, I saw some friends around me they all have that OCD behaviors.
But they all consider that is a “normal”.
Our “mind” power is the most powerful weapon.
If we control that well, we can become so success in many ways.
But if we loss control it will backfire ourselves.
You want to dance with the devil?
Jan. 16, 2021
15 января 2021
Быть уверенным в себе – это преимущество. Тем не менее, считается некрасиво быть самоуверенным.
Моя семья состоит из трёх детей и двух родителей.
У меня теперь более гибкий график, чем в прошлом семестре.
Когда моя тётя вышла замуж за дядю, она стала католичкой.
У меня та же самая ситуация.
Его сестра сходит с ума по мальчикам.
Сколько времени они женаты?
Jan. 16, 2021
Jan. 15, 2021
About "そうこなくっちゃ" (2nd rev.)
「そうこなくっちゃ」のこと。
I've been thinking about the feeling of 「そうこなくっちゃ」
((「そうこなくっちゃ」について考えていました。))
== references =========
【そうこなくっちゃ】とは
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>> 相手の提案・反応に対して歓迎の意を表す言い回し。
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-- 🌐「そう来なくっちゃ(そうこなくっちゃ)」の意味や使い方 Weblio辞書
https://www.weblio.jp/content/%E3%81%9D%E3%81%86%E6%9D%A5%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8F%E3%81%A3%E3%81%A1%E3%82%83
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【なくちゃ】とは
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( about "〜なきゃ＆〜なくちゃ ( = ~nakya & ~ nakucha) suffixes )
>> They mean “to have to do something” or “must do something”
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-- 🌐 〜なきゃ＆〜なくちゃ ( = ~nakya & ~ nakucha) suffixes – Maggie Sensei https://maggiesensei.com/2010/11/20/%E3%80%9C%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8D%E3%82%83%EF%BC%86%E3%80%9C%E3%81%AA%E3%81%8F%E3%81%A1%E3%82%83-nakya-nakucha-suffixes/
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そうこなくっちゃ≒そうこなくては
└そう that; it
└こ come // { こ = 来 }
└なく not // { なく = 無く }
└て if; conditional
└は then; about
→ if that couldn't come, then ...
-- "have to" :: "If that couldn't come, then everything won't go well."
↑ and ↓
-- "歓迎の意" :: "If that couldn't come, then everything couldn't succeed, so I've supposed that will happens."
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In my mind, I related "そう来る"("そう" + "こ"{来}) to "That happened." …
> "That happened."
> └ 'That' <- (about) { you did the act. }
"そう"来る
└ {" you did the act "} came (come)
"そう来ると思った" ≒ I thought coming the future/happening that includes you do the act.
( ` especially you, you do "that"(the act)` )
.....
Well, you know, it's just a way to remember/handle "そう来る" things; it's just my something. 🤔
So I accept the "do something" way as well.
>>>>>
そうこなくては
└ そうこなくては、期待よりも下回る
└ そうこなくては、おもしろくない
└ そうこなくては、好ましい・良い展開にならない
↓ ↓
だから、そう来た現実は、好ましい。よって、私は歓迎するのだ。
<<<<<
━━━━━━━
>>>>>
If that didn't happen,
└ If that didn't happen, it would have fallen short of my expectation.
└ If that didn't happen, I would have been disappointed.
└ If that didn't happen, it would not have gotten a good situation, which I like.
↓ ↓
That's why I like this situation that coming; I welcome it.
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Jan. 15, 2021
Die Rückkehr nach Deutschland!
Ich bin heute nach Deutschland zurückgekommen. Bevor ich nach Deutschland kam, wurde ich auf dem Coronavirus getestet. Ich habe mich ein Tag vor der Reise getestet lassen. Es war sehr schnell und leicht. Ab morgen würde ich jede Gelegenheit aufnehmen, um mein Deutsch zu üben.
Jan. 15, 2021
Mon livre préferée de mon enfance
Quand j'étais jeune, je lisais vraiment beaucoup des livres, mais il y a un livre que j'aimais plus que les autres. C'est un livre en anglais qui s'appelle "A little Princess" (une petite princesse). Le livre parle d'une orpheline qui s'appelle Sara. Son père était très riche, et à l'école tout le monde est très gentil avec elle. Mais après le mort de son père Sara doit être une femme de chambre pour qu'elle puisse vivre à l'école. Les autres écoliers sont très durs aves elle, et leur vie devient très difficile. On voit comment elle reste positif et gentille pendant tout ça, et c'est assez inspirant. Je ne vais pas raconter la fin du livre, mais c'est une fin très jolie. Après avoir lu ce livre je voulais toujours être comme elle. Le livre a eu une bonne influence sur moi. À cause de cette histoire, je suis devenue plus gentille avec les gens.
Jan. 15, 2021
Jan. 15, 2021
Was ich geworden bin
Ich bin ein großer Mann geworden, weil ich wörtlich 1,94 m groß bin. Das hat viele Vor- und Nachteile.
Zum Beispiel, ich kann sehr einfach Dingen erreichen, die sehr hoch liegen. Ein großer Nachteile ist dagegen, dass wenn ich im Bus bzw. Flugzeug sitze, sind meine Beine immer eng und oft fassen meine Knie die Rücklehne des Stuhl vor mir.
Auch sind Rücken-, Schulter- und Hüftschmerzen üblich bei mir aber daran bin ich mich schon angewöhnt. Mann lernt einfach, mit diesen Schmerzen zu leben.
Jan. 15, 2021
12. Tandläkaren
I dag skulle jag ha haft min andra lektion av Svenska som Andra Språk, men jag gick till tandläkaren istället. Jag hade inte gått till en tandläkare i lite mer än två år och jag var jättenervös. Jag brukar få åtminstone tio karies om året så jag vet att situationen var seriöst och dåligt. Jag hade inga ont i tänderna men man aldrig vet vad händer med tänder, eller hur? Man kan har ont i tänder och det är något eller man kan inte har ont och det finns något seriöst. Hur som helst, tandläkaren överraskade mig när han sa att jag bara har två karies... jag kunde inte tro det! Men det är sant. Det är fantastiska. Jag var så rädd för att ha flera karies men det är faktiskt okej.
Jag måste säga att trots att jag är 32 år gammal är jag mycket rädd för tandläkaren. Jag har mycket problem med mina tänder och jag har nästan en fobi för tandläkare... jag hatar att gå där.
Så är jag super glad. Det menar att jag tog mycket väl hand om mina tänder i de två senaste år! För att gratulera mig köpte jag kokboken ”Världens enklaste vegomat!”. Det är min första bok på svenska! Jag läste den lite när jag gick hem och jag är glad eftersom recepten verkligen verkar vara enkla och billiga.
Jan. 15, 2021
Le 15 janvier
Pas de grandes choses se sont passées aujourd’hui. J’ai appris une nouvelle expression très utile : « faire marcher quelqu’un » mais je n’avais pas occasion de l’utiliser. Je la garderai pour un poisson d’avril. Autant que je sache, en France on accroche un poisson en papier dans le dos d’une personne le premier avril. C’est pour cela ce jour porte son propre nom. Cependant, en Russie on fait marcher nos amis et nos proches. Normalement, ce sont des personnes avec qui nous sommes à l’aise et qui comprennent nos blagues.
Jan. 15, 2021
일본어 공부
2021년이 되어서 일본어 공부 계획대로 잘 하고 있다.
하지만 포기할까 생각이 많이 들었다. 그런 생각이 들 때마다 왜 공부를 하는지 생각해봤다. 그러다가 아무것도 생각나지 않았다. 한국어랑 어휘와 문법이 비슷하고, 문자가 예쁘고, 그리고 궁금해서 시작한 언어다. 일본 애니와 일본 영화도 재밌게 본 적이 있지만 그런 이유로 공부하는 것이 아니다. 문화가 신기하고 더 알아보고 싶지만 그것도 주요 이유가 아닌 것 같다. 아무리 생각해봐도 답이 나오지 않았다. 딱히 매료되는 점이 없는 것 같다.
그래서 한국어를 공부하는 이유를 생각해봤더니 많이 비슷하다는 것을 깨달았다. 단순히 한글이 예뻐서, 그리고 한국어가 들릴 때마다 뭔 말을 하는지 궁금해서 공부를 처음으로 시작해본 거다. 배운 것이 쌓이면서 문화 이해가 더 깊어지면서 재미 들은 것도 생기고 공부를 이어갈 이유들도 점점 많아졌다.
어학자들이 자주 하는 말은 ‘언어를 배우는 이유가 확고해야 언어 공부를 성공할 수 있다’는데 나는 이유를 모르게 한국어 공부를 한 지 벌써 3년 반 남짓 되었다. 신기하게도 단 한번도 포기하고 싶은 기분이 들지 않았다. 남들과 달리 나한테는 딱히 확실한 이유가 없어도 공부를 재밌게 할 수 있는 건가 보다.
Jan. 15, 2021
살아있는 한국어:관용어
이 책을 본 지 너무 오래 됐다. 2년 전쯤에 산 걸로 기억하는데 거의 읽어보지 못했다. 친구와 언어교환 했을 때는 잠깐 이 책에서 나오는 관용표현을 같이 공부한 적이 있지만 제11과까지만 보고 친구가 한국으로 돌아간 이후로 본 적이 없다.
요즘따라 관용어와 사자성어에 재미가 들어서 이 책이 생각이 나서 서가에서 꺼내봤다. 이미 알거나 들어본 적이 있던 표현들이 많았지만 완전히 몰랐던 관용표현들도 많았다. 그림과 짧은 스토리로 설명되어 있는 표현이 이해하기에 쉽고 재밌다. 장마다 주요 표현이 있는데 비슷한 표현도 같이 적혀 있다. 예를 들어서 제8과의 주요 표현은 ‘손이 크다’인데 ‘손이 모자라다’와 ‘손을 놓다’도 같이 설명되어 있다.