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July 16, 2021
Night Riding
My legs were sore, I thought I can't keep running today. So I decided to ride a bike to auntie's home. It was so hot in the afternoon, so I started at dusk.
When I arrived, I was told that auntie had went to the rice field. I chatted with her father-in-law a few minutes. Then I went to the field. A few people were busy working there. The ridges of the field were a little muddy. I pulled up my trousers and walked cautious. Water was flowing in the small stream, it was so clear that I can see the mud in the bottom. Birds were flying in the sky. Breeze was flowing. There were green trees around the field. It was very peaceful.
When I was on my half way, auntie recognized me. She told me not to approach because there were many ants. And she asked to go back to ask another auntie to help her. I did what she asked and waited for her in her front yard.
Her father-in-law pointed at a longan tree and invited me to pick some longan. He said they were sweet. I picked some and tried. Wow, to my surprise, they were so delicious. They were sweet, but not merely sweet. I can't describe the taste exactly. Then uncle picked some lobgans from another tree which he thought would be more delicious. But I thought it tasted so normal. So I stood under the first tree, kept picking and eating. I was so satisfied with the moment.
Auntie didn't come back until it was dark. She said the rice seedlings were almost dead because of the hot weather. It was lucky that she went to look after them and saved them in time.
After dinner, I began to ride back. I rode with my torch on. But I haven't use the torch for a long time, I didn't know that it was power off. Lukily, I can use my phone's light. When I was riding on the country road, I play music from my phone loudly. There was moonlight, it was a little dim but it was beautiful. I saw a few fireflies, they shone and shone. Because I was alone, I was a little nervous. I kept riding and riding.
I went to a night ride on the same road last summer, and I encountered many fireflies flying in the brushwoodsall the way. It felt like I was riding in the sky which were full of stars. It was the most wonderful night ride in my life for now.
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
The Glass Bead Game
Previously, my senior suggested to me to read a book, the Glass bead game.
The book is written by the well known author, Hermann Hesses.
I have read three times, but I still don't understand completely.
But I focused on the game which is described in the book.
The glass bead game is a result of high thoughts and meditations.
Masters can play beautiful sound with glass beads.
At first, I thought that it is similar like the Go game or else, but I can't image it.
Today, I find out that connecting contents between notes are similar the game.
When I connect the notes, I can make ideas and inspirations which are so beautiful sound in my brain.
I feel like I am a master of the game in this moment.
Like making nice sound of glass beads, I want to make nice ideas of my notes.
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
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Vivresti in un AirBnb invece di un albergo durante un viaggio?
Durante un soggiorno in un albergo, dal momento in cui si entra per le porte, tutto è già calibrato per lui; i dipendenti parlano inglese (la lingua franca), ci sono delle guide e dei libri nel vestibolo che gli consigliano i migliori luoghi turistici per spendere i propri soldi, e nel caso che non gli piaccia o non gli interessi la gastronomia locale (in tale caso, perché intraprendere un viaggio in primo luogo?), si può anche approfittare l’enorme selezione di cibo nei buffet quotidiani. Tuttavia, quando si vive in un AirBnb, bisogna imparare una lingua straniera, dal momento che è possibile che i anfitrioni non parlino l’inglese, altrimenti la sua madrelingua. Si dice che il linguaggio è il portale per tuffarsi nell’immersione, quindi lo considero importante quest’aspetto nella mia argomentazione. Ci sono anche il cibo fatto a casa, i suggerimenti e i consigli autentici, ma non approfondiamo.
Malgrado i benefici, una vacanza realizzata in un AirBnb può risultare rischiosa. È difficile verificare l’identità di tutti gli usuari sull’applicazione, quindi se qualsiasi persona con delle intenzioni contorte volesse approfittarsi della bontà e dell'ingenuità della gente, potrebbe farlo; ma la compagnia è stata fortunatamente lavorando sulla sicurezza della propria piattaforma dopo un filo di casi di rapimenti, stupri e anche omicidi, quindi forse in futuro non sarà una preoccupazione così grande. In qualche modo, non si può però rilassare la guarda, o si rischia di mettersi in repentaglio. D'altro canto, se non avessi goderti il tuo soggiorno, ci sarebbe una procedura nei hotel per determinare e valutare la sua qualità , ma in un'applicazione come AirBnb, le regolazioni e le procedure sono più arbitrarie.
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
Språkinlärning i barn och vuxna
Barn och vuxna lär sig på olika sätt. Det finns ingen kurslitteratur för barn i ett års ålder till exempel, men de klarar sig att lära sitt modersmål ändå. Jag tror inte att det beror på någon slags magiskt tillstånd av barnets hjärna, eller åtminstone inte bara på det. Den viktigaste skillnaden till vuxenlärande ligger i barnens förberedelse att ha fel och inte bli sur på det. De provar om och om och om igen, börjar med "bababa" och "dadada", leker med ord (vilket ger mycket glädje till föräldrarna) och slutligen bemästrar språket. Man får våga göra fel. Jag med. Det är därför jag skriver på langcorrect.
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
I'll go to sleep
I have decided to improve my English. Now, there is late in the night, I have written a couple of little English texts along the day. I jus came to know this page, already did some corrections. I hope somebody correct me, as I did with others. I have sleep difficulties, every time it is time to sleep, I try to do something else. Every day I say to myself I would not use screen past 10 pm, and every day I fail to myself. Aren't you experts in deceiving yourselves? I am that. I'll go to sleep, I expect to dream, to have English nightmares if necessary.
July 16, 2021
Dia dezasseis de julho
No próximo ano, nós viajamos para Hong Kong e Macao.
Hong Kong e Macao estão perto de Taiwan, e nós pudemos visitar aqui muitas vezes.
Este vez foi na férias verão antes do meu ano final em escola secundária.
Eu tinha passava bastante tempos de estudar por teste para entrada na universidade.
Neste viagem, eu achei que Hong Kong não muda muito, mas há mais chineses do que último vez nós visitamos.
As comidas de Hong Kong é ainda saborosa.
Nós visitamos a casa do amigo da minha mãe.
A casa dela foi localizando longa do central da cidade.
Além disso, nós deslocaramos a casa dela de autocarro.
A casa dele foi muita pequena, comparado da minha casa de Taiwan.
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
Les chats de mon amie
En ce moment je m'occupe des chats de mon amie. Elle m'a demande de m'occuper de ses chats pendant trois mois. J'aime les chats, donc je pensais que ca ne serait pas une probleme, mais ils causent beaucoup de problemes! Ils endommagent mes meubles, et ils se sentent mal. Je suis ennerve, je ne veux pas m'occuper de ces chats deux mois et une semaine plus, mais je ne sais pas si j'ai une option.
July 16, 2021
July 16, 2021
Das Regnen
Das Regnen in meiner Stadt ist sehr zart, sogar schüchtern würde ich sagen, weil man ein kleines Tau auf der Haut fühlt und das ist es. Während es regnet, kann man draußen spazieren gehen und es stört gar nicht. Als ich jünger war, habe ich mich sehr ruhig gefühlt, wenn es regnet hatte. Ich konnte die kleinen Tropfen durch das Fenster in meinem Klassenzimmer fallen sehen. Ich fand das ganze Ding faszinierend, die waren unsere Schneeflocken in einem Ort, wo es niemals schneit.
Alles in dieser Stadt ist intensiv, außer das Wetter. Das Wetter ist fast immer konstant, bewölkt, feucht und schüchtern.
July 16, 2021
July 15, 2021
Los robots
¿Te dan temor los robots?
La palabra "robot" es del checo, y aunque, al menos en inglés, pueda significar una máquina de metal, también a menudo se usa para hablar de la tecnología avanzada en general. Hoy en día hay muchísimos artículos diciendo que la tecnología nos va a tomar nuestros trabajos. No obstante, esto es una sobresimplificación. Además, aunque haya muchas películas en las que los robots destruyen el mundo, la realidad es que esto es poco probable. Incluso con los avances en el campo de la inteligencia artificial, aún es más probable que la tecnología y nosotros nos unamos en lugar de nos destruyamos uno a otro.
Aunque es verdad que los robots y la tecnología en general vaya a reemplazar a algunos obreros, el futuro no es blandió. No va a ser una gran falta de trabajos. ¡De hecho, mientras seguimos integrando la tecnología en nuestras vidas cotidianas, se va a crear más trabajos! ¿Por qué esto va a suceder? Puesto que vamos a necesitar a gente que puedan vigilar, montar y defender nuestros nuevos sistemas. Incluso con los actuales avances, los ordenadores aún necesitan a los humanos para mucho.
July 15, 2021
Une visite chez ma fille.
Je suis très chanceux d’avoir une fille qui a six ans. Mais, malheureusement mon ex-femme et moi sont divorcé et elle habite avec sa mère la plupart du temps. J’essaie de le visiter le plus que possible mais elle habite environ 5 heures de moi.
Elle s’appelle Katelyn et elle adore faire les activités en plein air. Elle joue au soccer et elle aime toutes les sports. En plus, elle est très intelligente et musicale.
Chaque fois qu’on est ensemble j’ai une tendance à le gâter. Il y a un magasin de jouets tres près de sa mère et on le visite souvent. En plus, elle aime nager alors on passe beaucoup de temps dans la piscine.
Pendant notre prochaine rencontre je vais l’enseigner comment faire de patin à roue aligner et ont va aller au zoo.
C’était très difficile de le visiter cette année à cause de la pandémie alors j’ai vraiment hâte de le voir.
July 15, 2021
Diary
What is taught in school is very elementary and far from adequate. Sober awareness is necessary. Don't let the slowness and gentleness of school kill your dreams. For many people, the only thing that the school really gives them is time. And it's really quite a shame that many students waste that time, or spend it restlessly in aimless effort.
July 15, 2021
Al cimitero
Mia mamma è andata al cimitero per pulire la tomba che è condivisa tra due famiglie. La sua amica dell'altra famiglia è morta, si deve compilare alcuni documenti e preparare la tomba per metterci l'urna. Non ci sono dei parenti oltre la figlia in America, allora mia mamma deve farlo.
Nonostante essere al cimitero, l'esperienza sembrava una commedia (sebbene nera). Mamma decideva a buttare una grande ghirlanda che era stata sulla tomba dal funerale. Era gialla e brutta e molto, molto pesante perché aveva piovuto tanto e così aveva assorbito un sacco di acqua. Naturalmente c'erano molti insetti sotto la ghirlanda. Era una cosa completamente repulsiva.
Mamma cercava di spostarla. Aveva solo dei vecchi giornali per cose come i vecchi fiori o candele. Non c'era abbastanza carta per avvolgere la ghirlanda e il cassonetto era troppo lontano. Tutta sporca, mamma portava la cosa, ora cadendo a pezzi, al posto a cui si normalmente trova il cassonetto... però non era lì.
Lei stava quasi piangendo ma per un motivo diverso da quello che si vede generalmente nei cimiteri.
"Vedo che sono arrivato appena in tempo," diceva un uomo che stava riportando il cassonetto vuoto.
A volta un netturbino è meglio di un principe su un cavallo bianco.
July 15, 2021
July 15, 2021
Les fruits
je l'ai déjà écrit pluesieurs fois, mais je déteste les fruits. Tout d'abord, je n'en aime pas la sensation dans la bouche quand je les morde. Ensuite, ce sont juteux et sucrés, ce qui m'ecœure.
Comme c'est plutôt rare de ne pas aimer les fruits, ça m'embête parfois, parce que certaines personnes m'offrent des fruits pour me plaire. Une fois ma collègue a commendé secrètement un gâteau pour mon anniversaire. Le fait qu'elle avais tous préparé pour moi m'a fait plaisir, mais c'était un gâteau à la fraise. Je savais que dès que je le mangais, mon visage se contournerait de la mauvaise sensation, donc je me lui suis excusée en disant que je n'arriverais pas à le manger.
ce genre de choses m'est souvent arrivé, et par conséquent j'aurais bien aimé les fruits. Mais, vu mon expérience jusqu'à maintenant, je ne pense pas que je puisse surmonter ce problème dans ma vie.
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