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José Luis Rodriguez y canciones de los 70/80
¿Cuales son algunas canciones o artistas hispanohablantes de los 70/80 que los gustan?
Personalmente José Luis Rodriguez me gusta mucho, y mi cancion preferida es "Voy a perder la cabeza por tu amor". Podría bailar con alguien escuchandola durante horas. Ya he escuchado algunas de sus otras canciones y me parece interesante como aunque no lo entiendas todo todavía se pueden sentir los sentimientos de la cancion y del cantante. Poco importa la lengua, lo más importante es la alma de la cancion.
June 9, 2022
День 7
Диалог в книжном магазин.
Илья: Заглянем в этот магазин?
Анна: Не знаю… Сегодня не зарплата. Это правда, что этот магазин очень дорогой?
Илья: Нет, нет! Это ложь. Пошли! Я хочу купить всё! Здесь есть много распродаж!
Анна: Держи себя в руках! Не бросай деньги на ветер!
Илья: У них есть книги Пушкина! Я беру! Анна, пройди на кассу!
Продавщица: С вас семнадцать тысяч рублей.
Илья: Можно мне скидку?
Продавщица: Хорошо, это скидка двадцать пять процентов. У вас есть сдача?
Илья: Да! Спасибо большое!
June 9, 2022
Journal
Life in My Middle School.
After I took the middle school entrance examination in our hometown, I was enrolled in the township middle school.
Because the students were coming from different elementary schools, we didn't know each other and also didn't know each other's academic performance.
That year, three classes of grade 1 about 180 new students were enrolled. The three classes were marked by a, b, c and I was in class a.
We had eleven courses and they were Chinese, Mathematics, English, Politics, History, Geography, Physics, Chemistry, Biology, Music and sports.
The school had dormitories, so we stayed in school during our studying days. Only on weekends could we go back home (back then, each week only had a day off on Sunday).
Our school also had a mess hall. We needed to take a certain amount of 20 percent wheat flour and 80 percent sweet potato flour to the mess hall each month so that we could eat there.
Every day, apart from the formal six classes (four in the morning and two in the afternoon), we also had the morning independent study and the night independent study.
Studying in middle school was my highlight time because I got first place in exams several times. When I graduated from the middle school and took the high school entrance examination, I got first place again.
But I didn't choose to go to a key provincial high school, instead I went to a specialized secondary school. The reason was that going to a specialized secondary school meant I already got the chance to work in the local government.
Every matter has two sides. That choice left me with a big regret in my life for not having the opportunity to study in high school and university.
It's gratifying that I am still learning new things. Learning brings me benefits, as well as happiness.
June 9, 2022
June 9, 2022
Journal
Virtual conditional sentence practice
If I were in the United States, I would learn English quickly.
If I were in high school, I would perform well in the university entrance examination.
If I were a lady, I wouldn't want anything from my boyfriend.
If I had studied in high school, I could have done perfectly in the college entrance examination.
If I hadn't lived in the countryside, I could have got a more decent job.
If I had been abroad, I would have had a wider mindset.
If I were to go to the moon, I might fear it.
If I were to live in another country, I might miss my country.
If I were to marry, my wife would kill me.
June 9, 2022
수요일의 연습 문장들
1. 기회를 놓칠까 봐 직업을 받아들일 거예요.
2. 배부르고 해서 점심을 안 먹어요.
3. 그 사람이 다른 사람들을 밀은 탓에 경찰이 왔어요.
4. 이번 주에 부장님이 아프는 바람에 너무 업무를 끝내야 해요.
5. 몇 학교 동아리에 참가하느라고 바람에 매일 너무 이메일을 받아요.
6. 지원이 진실을 밝혔는데도 이야기가 빠르게 과장되었어요.
7. 우리 딸이는 외향적인 반면에 우리 아들은 소심해요.
8. 동희가 정말 똑똑하기는 하지만 숙제를 할 수 없어요.
9. 하지만 현실에 제일 좋아하는 연예인을 보고 싶어요!
팬이지만 연예인의 사생활을 존경하잖아요.
10. 지방에 왜 이사했어요?
도시가 비싸고 시끄럽거든요.
June 9, 2022
Public bath
I went a public bath yesterday.
My room has bath, but I take a shower all day, because it's all in the bathroom.
Sometimes I was sad or tired, I want to soak in the bathtub.
At that time, I go to the public bath to refresh.
The public bath near by my apartment is not big ,but
it is open until late at night, so I go to there after work.
I am happy to be slowly taken in the bathtub.
June 9, 2022
Memory
My first workplace was in another county and is about 200 kilometers away from the city I now live in.
Before I joined that department, there were only five people working there. Plus the two new enrolled employees (including me), there were seven employees in my first department in total.
Our department had a row of single floor houses that went from east to west. We used three rooms as our office. The three rooms had no walls inside them. They combined together as a big house. The other rooms are used as our dormitory.
Our office equipment was a typewriter, a dial telephone and a coal-ball stove. We used the stove to heat water. In the winter, we used the stove to keep warm.
There was a tap water tap outside our office, but it was locked up all the time. Even if someone sometimes unlocked it, there was still no water flowing out. It's said that the reason was that our office was on a small hill so that the tap water couldn’t go up that high.
We fetch water from a deep well in the southeastern part of our office. Because we were on a small hill, the well was really deep. When we looked into the bottom of it from the opening of the well, the water was like a small mirror. We only used a rope to attach a bucket to fetch water, so we had to be very skilled.
We also collected the rain as domestic water, so every time it rained, we took all our buckets, pots and basins under the eave.
Our office didn't have a closed wall. Only on the southeast of our office was there an iron gate, but on the southwest of our office there was an open area.
I shared a room with the person who was assigned to our office in the same year, but he graduated from another school. We slept on a simple wooden bed. In the winter, we laid a lot of rice straw under the reed mat to keep warm.
During summer nights, sometimes I would go to the county stadium to skate (it was not really skating. I only wear skating shoes to skate on the evenly cement ground). Unfortunately, I was not able to skate as well as the others and I often fell down.
After skating, I was always thirsty and sweaty, so drinking two bottles of orange squash was my routine.
I don't know how to describe the feeling of working there. On one hand, I was happy and excited because I had already grown up and started working for the government. On the other hand, I was a little sad about not having the chance to work in my hometown. Fortunately, four years later, I was transferred to my hometown.
In an instant, many years have passed since then. I have already become the Old Liu from the 小Liu [Chinese people like to call young people by adding a 小 (xiǎo, means small or little before their family names)].
Recently, I tended to look back on my youth. The reason may be that I am older. Life is time; life is also a memory. I wish everyone beautiful memories.
June 9, 2022
Une question d’entrevue bizarre
Quand j’ai postulé pour mon boulot mon patron m’a poser une question un peu bizarre. Il m’a demandé qu’est que je ferais si je travaillais avec un de mes amis et il était congédié. J’étais déstabilisé quand j’ai entendu la question, mais j’ai pris un peu de temps pour réfléchir et j’ai répondu comme ça.
Si la personne était un de mes bons amis je vais essayer de lui supporter le plus que possible. Premièrement, je vais essayer de comprendre qu’est ce qui c’est passé. Est-ce qu’il a fait quelque chose qui mérite d’être congédié ou est-ce qu’il était mal traité. Si c’était sa faute je vais continuer de travailler et je vais essayer de séparer mon relation avec lui de mon travail. Cependant, si il était mal traité je vais probablement quite mon poste et essayer de trouver un autre emploi. Je ne veut pas travailler pour un entreprise comme ça.
Après que j’étais engagé j’ai demandé à mon patron pourquoi il m’a posé cet question. Il m’a dit que ça avait vraiment rien à faire avec mon réponse. Il n’y avait pas une réponse correct. Il veut juste voir comment je réagir dans une situation difficile et stressant.
Comment est-ce que vous réagissez dans cette situation?
June 9, 2022
Sobre mí
Hola a todos! Esta es mi primera entrada en este sitio. Deseo a aprender español y lo es porque estoy escribiendo esto.
Español será la tercera idioma que aprenderé. El primero fue polaco porque estuvo nacido allí. Cuando tuvo diez años, la familia vino a los estadus unidos para hallar mejor vida y creo que lo halló :) Cuando llegamos en este pais, no hablo nada de inglés. Lo aprendía por dos años, a pesar de estaba en la escuela por 8 horas por día y estaba viendo las películas y series todo en inglés. Fue muy difícil. Debo ser la falta de confianza. Me temo que los demas se reirén de mi. Pero entonces, sobre dos años despues, estuvo acostumbrado a la idioma nueva.
En la escuela secundaria, tuvo cuatro años de clases de español. Aprendé un poco pero no fue usable en cualquiera manera. Hacia un año, quiso adquirir una otra lengua y pensé que si hay la posibilidad de aprender una, debe ser español porque tengo la mejor sabiduría de el. Entonces empecé a estudiar palabras que estan usado con la más frecuencia. Tres meses despues, empecé a leer mucho. Fue muy difícil, pero cuando terminé el primero libro fue más facíl despues.
June 9, 2022
野球とは失敗ばかり
野球とは失敗ばかり
Baseball is a game of failure
日本へ一年間を暮らした。
I lived in Japan for one solid year.
野球は全く知らなかった。
But I still don’t know much about baseball.
実はイギリスへに七年間も住んでいる。
Actually, I also lived in UK for 7 years too.
サッカーファンにならない。
But I never become a football fans.
個人的な問題だ！
That is my problem!
この諺「野球とは失敗ばかりのゲームです。」聞いて、説得になった。
Anyway, this phase “baseball is a game of failure” is compelling.
ビリヤードは大好き、毎日プロをなる夢が考えられる。
I love snooker, every day I dream to become a professional snooker player.
でも、プロの才能がない、上手くくらいにできなかった。
But I just don’t have the quality not even close to a good player.
野球、ビリヤード、更に人生も失敗ことがばかりでした。
Baseball, snooker furthermore our life is “game of failure” too.
失敗を超えるのはチャンピオンなった。私は失敗者として生きている。
If you can overcome against all odds. You are a true winner, I am not!
June 8, 2022
Baseball is a game of failure
I lived in Japan for one solid year.
But I still don’t know much about baseball.
Actually, I also lived in UK for 7 years too.
But I never become a football fans.
That is my problem!
Anyway, this phase “baseball is a game of failure” is compelling.
I love snooker, every day I dream to become a professional snooker player.
But I just don’t have the quality not even close to a good player.
Baseball, snooker furthermore our life is “game of failure” too.
If you can overcome against all odds.
You are a true winner, I am not!
June 8, 2022
June 8, 2022
Voyage à Stockholm
Avec mon mari, je me suis rendu à Stockholm en Suède en voyage. C'était la première fois que j'y était allée, mais pour mon mari, c'est un endroit plein de souvenirs. Il a étudié pendant un an et demi afin d'obtenir son diplôme de master, et il raconte toujours que calme ce pays était, ce qui semble constituer l'un des mérites qu'il appréciait.
Peu après avoir commencé à me promener en ville, j'ai vite compris ce qu'il voulait dire : il y a moins de personnes, ce qui entraîne naturellement moins de bruits. De plus, les rues étaient plus grandes, laissant plus de espace pour chaque personne qui marche dans la rue, ainsi moins de collisions de deux passants. Je ne sais pas si c'est pour cette raison, mais je sentais que le temps passait plus sereinement avec la cadence de vie plus lente. Je ne voyais personne qui était pressé, au moins qui montrait qu'elle était préssée.
À Paris, je rencontre souvent des gens qui étaient contrariés ou inquiétes. Cela me rend aussi soucieuse de craint de froisser quelqu'un et se fait gronder ou jetter un regard froid. 98% des serveurs, employées, passants ne sont pas comme cela, mais même ce 2% laisse la possibilité de se voir traiter de manière impolie. Surtout comme j'ai grandi au Japon, l'environement ne m'a pas poussé à m'y habituer.
Je me rappelle une professuer de l'école de langues qui me disait que les habitants à Paris sont trop préssés et stressés, par conséquent ils ont tendance à être indifférent envers les autres. Même moi avec moins d'expérience à Paris et à d'autres villes, je crois comprendre la différence d'attitude des serveurs entre à Paris et d'autres. Le voyage à Stockholm m'a rappelle qu'être entrouée par les personnes de bonne humeur est très imporant pour mener une vie tranquille.
June 8, 2022
5가지 사랑의 언어
"5가지 사랑의 언어"를 들어본 적이 있어요? 혹시 여러분은 사랑의 언어가 뭔지 아세요? 사람마다 자기 사랑의 언어 스타일은 하나나 두 개, 개다가 가끔은 3개까지 가지고 있을 수 있어요. 저는 선물 드리고 받는 것이예요. 언제든 사랑하는 사람들을 행복하게 해줄 선물 사고 드리면 저는 그 사람보다 더 행복해요. 그리고 사랑하는 친구나 가족한테 선물 받으면 날아갈 것 같은 느낌이에요. 기분이 나쁠 때 보통은 인터넷으로 사랑하는 누구 위해 선물 사는 것이 기분을 잘 풀는 방법이에요. 제가 열심히 일해서 버는 돈을 모을 수 있었으면 좋겠는데 이건 제 사랑의 언어라서 괜찮아요. 저는 이렇게 더 행복하게 돼서요...
June 8, 2022
La vida sigue cambiando
El viernes, voy a Francia para hospedarme con mi hermana. Estoy nerviosísima, pero estoy contenta de que no tengo que trabajar más. Fue un trabajo pesado. Ahora, todo que tengo que hacer es hacer mi equipaje. Tengo una maleta, un maletín, y una mochila. También tengo que comprar unas cosas de aquí antes de ir. Par ejemplo, necesito beber muchas más leche merengada… y helado de sabor leche merengada. Pienso que yo no puedo traer la leche merengada conmigo en la mochila… Una otra cosa que debo hacer es practicar el francés. Sé el francés mejor que el español, pero hace mucho tiempo que no practico, porque aprendo el español.
June 8, 2022
Una figata di un altro periodo
Per tutta la mia vita, mi sono appassionato dei computer. I computer personali si sono apparsi negli anni settanta, quando ero un bambino.
Un giorno in quel periodo sono andato al parco di divertimento con la mia famiglia. Lì c'è stata una bancarella che faceva magliette stampate con una foto fatta sul computer. Il fotografo usava una macchina di video televisivo per scattare una foto, poi il computer l'ha stampata subito. Infine il fotografo l'ha trasferita alla maglietta. A quei giorni era una novità meravigliosa.
Alla prima vista, ho saputo lì per lì che ne dovevo comprare una. Ho scelto io come soggetto nella foto. Mi indossavo spesso quella maglietta, mi era affascinante che un immagine di questo tipo potrebbe fatto sul computer.
Un giorno, qualcuno mi ha detto che io fossi egoisto e narcisistico per avere una foto di me a fronte di una maglietta che mi sto indossando. Ma non era vero. Non pensavo mai di darmi importanza, infatti l'idea non mi è venuta in testa. Invece pensavo solo che una foto fatta sul computer fosse una figata.
Adesso non capisco che qualcuno pensassi che un bambino avrebbe le stesse motivatizioni come un adulto per fare qualcosa.
June 8, 2022
Roi
Qu'est-ce qui fait un vrai roi? Est-ce que le royaume sert le roi ou le roi sert le royaume? À mon avis un roi est quelqu'un qui agit à la meilleure manière pour son royaume. C'est quelqu'un qui doit donner l'espoir et la fierte à ses gens. Quelqu'un qui est prèparer a mourir pour ses gens. En plus il ne doit jamais regreter ses décisions.
June 8, 2022
Schreiben Teil 1
Schreiben Sie nun selbst eine Karte, entweder an einen Kursteilneh menden oder an lhre Lehrerin / lhren Lehrer. Gestalten Sie thre Karte so, dass sie zum Adressaten passt.
Schreiben Sie,
- was Sie am Kursanfang schon erlebt haben.
- was Sie bisher im Kurs gut finden.
- was Sie im Kurs gern noch lernen wollen und warum.
- Formulieren Sie auch einen Gruß und/oder Dank.
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Liebe Ash,
wie geht's? Hast du deinen Test gut gemacht? Letztes Mal habe ich dir gesagt, dass ich Deutsch lerne. Wahrscheinlich eine tolle Entscheidung für mich. Deutsch ist nicht nur schwierig, sondern erfordert auch viel Geduld und harte Arbeit. Als ich zum ersten Mal in die Klasse kam, haben mir alle sehr geholfen. Wir haben zusammen gelernt, Spiele gespielt und abgehangen. Das gefällt mir !!! Ich möchte wirklich nach Deutschland gehen, also hoffe ich, dass ich meine Fähigkeiten verbessern und die B1-Prüfung bestehen werde. Hoffentlich sehen wir uns bald, mein lieber Freund :3
Alles Liebe
Huan
June 8, 2022
Cuarzo rosa
Estoy enferma desde hace sábado. Primero me dolía la garganta, y ahora no puede respirar con mi nariz, sólo a través de mi boca. Por lo tanto estoy muy cansada.
Viendo esto, mi hermanito (tiene 12 años) decidió sorprenderme. El domingo hubo una venta de garaje en nuestro pueblo, y fue a ver qué había. Cuando volvió ¡me regaló una pulsera de cuarzo rosa!
Lo que no sabía es que el cuarzo rosa simboliza el amor incondicional, la paz y la ternura. Me parece divertido porque pienso que representa bien nuestra relación: nos llevamos muy bien, y siempre será mi bebé. No hace falta decir que me encantó mi regalo :)
June 8, 2022
I was procastinating a lot, and then ...
I used to be a huge procrastinator. A huge. I could spend a whole day thinking about a small task I have to do and finding a lot of other activities before realizing the day was ending. Some times, before going to bed, I was wondering about what I've done that day, and I can't figure out. I had a lot of stuff staying everywhere in my place, like an old computer I wanted to fix, some cooking stuff, etc.
That was sometimes painful : I had to do some administrative tasks, I was finishing some important thing during the night because it had to be done in the morning, I was stressed by this situation. I hated this, but I can't help : I was procrastinating.
Right now, I don't think I'm procrastinating too much. Okay, at this very moment I have just remember the existence of LangCorrect and wanted to see if I can write something interesting in English, in the middle of one or two other tasks. But as soon as I complete this text, I will go back to my other activities ...
I think the big difference in my life is that now I do something only if I want it. And I want it because either it's like a game or something fun, or if I really need it. Some things doesn't fit with this new theory like I have some paperwork to do ... In this case, I try to think of my future me as a stranger I will give all the thing in my life. And I'm asking myself : "If I was this stranger, what would I think about the fact the current me didn't do this crap ?".
Maybe, my way of thinking changed a bit. It try to avoid to think too much, on the long term, etc. It help me focus on the present activities and to lower the emotional impact attached to it if I fail something.
There is also some changes in my life that help me to avoid procrastinating : I have no job, I live in a small place, I've disabled my phone notifications, the news, I avoid to look at the clock all the time, etc. etc. I'm not sure it's relevant there ... Finally, it's just that maybe procrastinating is now a harmless thing in my life ?
June 8, 2022
June 8, 2022
Verbs Pronominaux à sens réciproque
Mettez le verbe entre parenthèses au temps approprié:
Hier, les deux amis se a téléphoné. *se téléphoner*
Malheureusement, les voisins se n'ont pas entendu. *ne pas s'entendre*
La prochaine fois qu'ils se verront, Ils se tutoieront. *se tutoyer et se voir*
Hélas, nous nous avons disputé durement, le week-end dernier. *se disputer*
Heureusement qu'elles s'ont aimé bien. *s'aimer*
Nous nous avons parlé la semaine dernière.
Complétez par les termes manquants:
Les deux hommes se sont (___?), ils se sont traités d'imbéciles.
Elle refuse de (___?) la parole à sa collégue.
Les étudiants (__?) de nombreuses questions au professeur.
Si on qualifie quelqu'un de lâche, cela peut être une (insulte). En effect, dans certain cas, le mot est (___?)
June 8, 2022
Grammaire
les phrases ont été modifiées de l'utilisation du mot parce qu'à l'utilisation d'une autre expression de cause:
il n'est pas sorti à cause de la neige.
Nous n'avons pas dormi à cause du bruit fait par les voisins.
ils ont obtenu une bourse grâce à un très bon dossier.
il ne paye pas de loyer puisque il est le propriétaire de sa maison.
Comme il y a une grève de transport, ils ne partent pas en voyage.
il a fait des progrès à l'ecole grâce à l'aide de ses parents.
Complétez par les mots manquants:
nos voisins de (palier) viennent de déménager.
j'ai demandé au (voisin) de prendre mon courrier en mon absence.
la réunion des (corpropriété) a lieu une fois par an.
Il est important de respecter le (___?) de la (___?)
les (boîtes) aux lettres se trouvent dans entrée de l'immeuble.
June 8, 2022
comment prendre soin de sa santé physique et mentale
Prendre soin de sa sante physique et mentale, c'est que j'ai vraiment apris pendant le confinement. Tout le monde s'inquitait de la sante collective, mais c'est la manière de se soigner individuellement qui compte le plus, notamment ce qu'on fait tous les jours pour se sentir mieux. Il y a des petits plaisirs augmatants l'esprit, comme savourer le cafe matinal ou ecouter la musique preferee, mais c'est aussi important de pratiquer les choses qui, en faisant, ne sont pas de tout agreable. Par exemple, il faut pardonner les malfaits des autres ou faire de sport. C'est comment on se sent apres on les fait a quoi on tient. Parfois, une fois ne suffit pas - il convient de creer ses propres habitudes qui nous permettent de rester en bonne sante.