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Magyarországon barátja volt, akinél gyakran tartózkodott, de saját kis bérelt lakása is volt. Vidámak voltak ezek a hétvégi túrák. Magyar módra terveztük. Odafelé igen, de hazafelé már más tészta volt. Ezt csak akkor néztük meg, mikor haza akartunk menni. Egérbe mentünk pünkösdkor. Máskor csak Budapest környékére mentünk, de mindig érdekes kirándulások voltak. Sokat beszélgettünk, néha németül, néha angolul. Jeanette Bécsben is félévig tanulta a németet. Azt mondta, hogy vissza akar menni Amerikába. Egy amerikaival levelezett. Droghasználat miatt börtönben ült, de már tervezték a jövőt. Máskor itt arab barátja volt. Ő házasodott, mert otthon házasodnia kellett, és ez Jeanette-nek is volt az indító jele. Most már ő is akart hazamenni és családot alapítani. Így is sikerült. Ő kiszabadult a börtönből és egy olyan farmra költöztek, ahol drogosok dolgoztak, hogy leszokjanak a drogról. Jeanette és a férje szociális munkásként dolgoztak ott. Később házuk is lett és két gyerekük. Azt hiszem, boldoggá vált az élete. Sokszor még leveleztünk, de aztán megszakadt a kapcsolat.
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Le parc national de Yosemite
Le parc de Yosemite est situé dans l’État de Californie aux États-Unis. Ce parc national a été classé au patrimoine mondiale de l’humanité en 1984. Il s’étend sur 3 074 kilomètres carrés et c’est vraiment pittoresque. J’ai entendu dire que les ours noirs et les cerfs y vivent.
Le parc est plein de cascades, de lacs, de prairies et de grandes falaises. D’après les historiens, pendant l’ère glaciaire, tout était recouvert de neige. Même aujourd’hui, pendant l’été, on trouve des glaciers recouverts de neige. Ces majestueux glaciers sont éloignés et inaccessibles. J’ai lu que des milliers de touristes visitent le parc chaque année.
Le parc est plein de sentiers de randonnée et de campings. On peut y passer un jour ou plusieurs jours en profitant de sa beauté naturelle. Mon cousin a séjourné près de Yosemite et il m’a envoyé quelques photos. Il a nagé dans le lac Tenaya, fait certaines randonnées pour apprécier les cascades de Yosemite et les cascades de Bridal Falls. Pour autant, il a été déçu car il n’a pas vu un ours noir.
Aug. 16, 2023
Mon amie d’enfance
Sarah et moi, nous avons fréquenté la même école. Nos mères étaient les meilleures amies du monde et elles se sont rencontrées pour la première fois, à l’université où elles ont suivi les mêmes cours.
Depuis un jeune âge, Sarah et moi jouaient ensemble. Sarah vivait près de moi et chaque week-end, nous sommes allées au parc, à la plage ou à la maison de l’une ou l’autre. À l’âge de cinq ans, nous avons fréquenté la même école primaire. Une semaine, la mère de Sarah m’a emmenée à l’école et l’autre semaine, ma mère nous a emmenées à l’école.
Plus récemment, j’ai vu Sarah au supermarché. Je pense que ça fait une vingtaine d’années que je l’ai vue pour la dernière fois. Maintenant, elle est mariée et a deux filles qui sont à l’université. Ce jour-là, nous avons beaucoup parlé du passé. J’ai vraiment apprécié notre rencontre et nous avons promis de nous revoir encore.
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Please Review My Essay
In some high schools, part of the curriculum requires students to participate in community work such as helping the elderly or disabled.
In what way do children benefit from this?
So you think it should be part of the curriculum?
Certain high schools include community service as part of their curriculum. While this approach may be beneficial, I personally do not support it, as I believe it is more likely to backfire.
Community service experiences can benefit high schoolers. Such experiences can help them become more aware of societal issues and inequality, as well as the importance of adressing them. This fosters the development of empathy, understanding, and a sense of responsibility. Many colleges, universities, and potential employers actively look for students who possess these qualities, viewing them as individuals with a strong work ethic and willingness to go beyond personal gain to contribute to the betterment of society. Participating in community service can also improve students’ leadership, teamwork, and communication skills, as they often collaborate with others to address community needs and interact with people from different backgrounds. These skills are highly valued in both academic and professional settings.
However, community service should not be mandated as it can actually be counterproductive. High school students generally face with rigorous academic schedules and various extracurricular obligations. Integrating community service into their already packed routines can amplify stress levels and curtail time for crucial endeavors such as studying, bonding with family, exercising, and relaxation. Consequently, this can compromise their overall well-being and academic achievements. Such impacts are particularly alarming as high school is a crucial time for students to gather knowledge for university entrance exams, which can largely determine their future prospects. Moreover, these students may view such service as a mere obligation, resulting in disengaged and lackluster efforts that cause them to fail to realize the potential advantages. This half-hearted performance, combined with inadequate training and supervision, could lead to unintended harm to the people they aim to help.
In conclusion, although participating in community service programs can cultivate essential qualities and skills, enforcing mandatory involvement for high school students can negatively impact their mental well-being, academic achievements, future opportunities, and even potentially harm the very people they intend to assist.
Aug. 16, 2023
Rafting auf dem Fluss
Letzte Woche war ich in Rafting auf dem Fluss. Ich war sehr glücklich und lustig. Zum erst, haben wir Kajaks montiert. Ich mit zwei meinen Freundinen hatten ein Kajak, aber in ein Kajak hat 2 Paddel, und man in Kajaksmitte kann nicht schwimmen. Ich war die erste, die hat in Zentrum gesessen. Ich war in Rafting, als ich Kind war, und ich hatte ein bisschen Erfahrung. Aber meine Freundinnen haben ersten Mal in Kajak gesessen. Boot-Steuerung ist wir nicht gelungen, wir sind durch Fluss gefahren. Es war sehr lustig, ich habe gelacht bi seine Freundin von mir hat mir gesagt, dass sie schlagt mir mit dem Paddel auf den Kopf. Danach habe ich geschwiegen. Nächste Mal habe ich Kajak gesteuert. Und es ist mir gelungen! Meine Freundin haben gesagt: «Wow! Wir fahren so gut und schnell! Weil du zurückgezogen bist und das Boot ausgeglichen ist!» Ich habe gepaddlet sehr stark und habe ausgerichtet das Kajak. Was zum Teufel? Ich habe mich so bemüht!!!!!
Am Tag haben wir heranschwimmen und haben die Zelte entgepackt. Wir haben eine Suppe gekauft, sie war sehr lecker! Nach Mittagessen, haben wir geschwommen in den Fluss. Ich wollte ein Bier am Lagerfeuer trinken, aber ich habe es nicht gekauft. Wir haben ein Geschäft in Google-Maps gefunden. Wir mussten zum Geschäft 40 Minuten gehen. Nach 20 Minuten haben wir verstanden, dass wir sich verirrt haben und sind wiedergekommen. Zum Glück hat ein Mann das Bier gekauft. Es war sehr schönen Abend mit leckeres Essen und Lieder am Lagerfeuer.
Aug. 16, 2023
Please Review My Essay
Topic:
Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
My essay:
Certain managers expect their employees to remain accessible even outside of work hours and during vacations. While this approach might offer benefits to the company, it also brings about several detrimental effects for both the staff and the organization, offsetting the potential advantages.
The ability to reach employees at any time can indeed be advantageous for businesses. Firstly, it enables swift response to unforeseen challenges, allowing employers to address issues promptly. This ensures seamless workflow and minimizes disruptions. For instance, if an employee falls ill, the company can quickly arrange a shift change to maintain productivity. Secondly, this accessibility empowers businesses to seize time-sensitive opportunities ahead of competitors. Media outlets, for instance, can break news stories promptly, increasing readership and credibility by informing journalists to report on events 24/7.
However, the requirement for constant employee accessibility carries significant downsides, overshadowing its potential benefits. Employees, knowing they can be contacted about work matters during their off-hours, often experience heightened stress and anxiety. This can negatively impact mental well-being, especially when employers misuse this privilege for trivial issues. Furthermore, employees might feel their personal time is restricted, leading to diminished job satisfaction and a sense of being unable to fully disconnect from work. Consequently, they might seek employment opportunities that offer better work-life balance and respect personal time, leading to increased turnover rates. This disrupts operations and impedes growth for the company.
In conclusion, while managers' ability to contact staff around the clock can aid in managing unforeseen challenges and capitalizing on timely opportunities, it can also negatively impact employees' mental health, job satisfaction, and retention rates, which, in turn, hamper their organization's growth, surpassing the potential benefits.
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Today It Finally Rains.
Today it finally rains. It hasn't rained for many days until today. The air was very dry before, so I was anticipating strongly it could rain.
It had been a little stuffy before the rain, but once the rain finally came down, it was very cool and the air was very refreshing.
Although rain may be precious in a hot summer, it may also lead to disasters. If the rain intensity is very high and the drain system of the city can't bear it, a possible flood will submerge things and cause death. Nearly every year I heard news about devastating flood.
Aug. 16, 2023
Weihnachten
Im vorliegenden Thema geht es um die Zusammenhänge zwischen Weihnachten und Handel. Im Fokus meiner Arbeit steht, was für eine Bedeutung das Weihnachtsfest für die Menschen hat. Genauere Information zum Thema lassen sich aus der folgenden Grafik erschließen. Aus der Grafik wird ersichtlich ,dass der Gesamtumsatz des deutschen Einzelhandels im Weihnachstgeschäft im Zeitraum von 1996 und bis 2006 fast das Gleiche ist.
Der Grafik zufolge haben die Geschäfte in der Weihnachten im Jahr 2005 ein relativ hohes Umsatz erzielt. Spielwaren mit 31% Umsatzanteil stehen im Vordergrund, was dies mit Kindern zusammenhängt . Süßwaden belegen den zweiten Platz mit dem Anteil von 28,5% .Außerdem ist dies auch hauptsächlich auf Kinder zurückzuführen , weil sie und andere Familienmitgliedern in dieser Zeit große Menge an Süßichkeiten verzehren .Die Geschäfte warf am geringsten aus Unterhaltungselektronik ,deren Anteil 23,9 % beiträgt, einen Gewinn ab .
Meines Erachtens war Weihnachten ursprünglich mit der Religion verbunden. Im Laufe der Zeit hat Weihnachten jedoch seinen ursprunglichen religiösen Sinn verloren und sich mit der Zeit seine Bedeutung gewandelt und es wurde zu einem gesellschaftlichen Fest. Heutzutage feiern die Menschen Weihnachten , um entweder mit Freunden zu treffen oder Verwandete zu besuchen. Während der Weihnachten erzielen die Geschäfte in der Regel hohe Gewinne .Es liegt besonders darin ,dass in dieser Zeit die Menschen große Menge an Waren konsumieren. Ein praktisches Beispiel dafür wäre zu nennen , dass die Kinder auf Geschenke von ihrer Eltern hoffen. Ich möchte zur Sprache bringen ,dass in der letzten Jahre
zu Weihnachten Geschenke für die Menschen von großer Bedeutung waren.
Meiner Meinung nach ist die Weinachten mehr als nur Geschenke. Ich möchte hervorheben , dass nicht nur die Weihnachten, sondern andere Feste die Möglichkeit bietet, Zeit mit Freunden oder Familien gemeinsam zu verbringen. In meinem Heimatland, das multikulturell ist , feiern die Menschen Weihnachten aus verschiedenen Gründen , sei es aus religiösen Gründen , sei es Zeit draußen oder mit der Familie zu verbringen. Zusammenfassend lässt sich sagen ,dass Feste Gelegenheit bieten , mit Familien und Freunden zusammen abzuhängen.
Aug. 16, 2023
Un courriel pour madame
Bonjour a tous ! Je voudrais écrire un petit courriel à mon prof de français en lui disant merci. Pourriez-vous vérifier si tout est correct ? Merci !
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Chère Madame,
Avant que je parte à la fac je voudrais vous dire merci d’être mon prof pendant ces deux années dernières. Je suis reconnaissant d'avoir amélioré mon niveau de français et mes connaissances de la culture, et grâce à vous j'ai reçu un 5 à l'examen AP !* Actuellement j'aime bien regarder des séries et des vidéos en français, et j'ai hâte de continuer mes études à l'université ou d'étudier à l'étranger. J'espère que vous allez bien et que vous passerez une bonne année scolaire.
Merci !
(mon nom)
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* "AP French" est un examen de français aux États-Unis, il n'y a pas un propre traduction. 5 est le note le plus élevé.
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Sprechen Teil 2 B1 / Thema vorstellen und Struktur erklären:
Guten Tag meine Damen und Herrn. Heute möchte ich über das Thema " das Thema" sprechen. Meine Präsentation besteht aus folgenden Teilen. Zuerst beginne ich mit meiner persönlichen Erfahrung. Dann werde ich von der Situation in meinem Heimatland berichten. Danach werde ich ein paar Vor- und Nachteile nennen und natürlich meine Meinung deutlich äußern.
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Sprechen B1 Teil 2 / Im Urlaub verreisen.
Persönlich finde ich, dass im Urlaub verreisen eine Gelegenheit ist, um sich zu entspannen. Jährlich reise ich mit meiner Familie im Urlaub und letztes Jahr waren wir in Italien und unsere Reise war wunderbar.
Bei uns in Syrien reisen die Leute gerne, meistens nach Latakia, weil es ihre Gewohnheit ist. Denn, Latakia hat viele gute Sehenswürdigkeiten, eine gute Luft und das Meer.
Reisen hat, wie alles im Leben, Vor- und Nachteile. Einerseits kann man sich ausruhen. Man kann auch viel Spaß haben und neue Leute kennenlernen.
Andererseits gibt es Menschen, die Zuhause bleiben bevorzugen, als im Urlaub verreisen, weil es viel Geld kostet und man Zeit verliert.
Meiner Meinung nach ist der Urlaub eine Gelegenheit, Stress abzubauen. Man sollte einmal im Jahr reisen, dann fühlt sich wohl in seinem Leben.
Aug. 16, 2023
Mercoledì
Ho preso una pausa dallo studio per una settimana ed è stato davvero meglio. Stamattina mi sentivo rinfrescata quando ho studiato per un'ora.
Ho anche fatto una lunga passegiata intorno a casa mia. Purtroppo mi sono annoiata del parco, non ci sono da molti mesi.
Ieri sono andata dal papà per dare da mangiare ai suoi gatti; la casa è diversa da com'era quando ero bambina.
Mi preparo a iniziare a lavorare, ora accendo il computer. Fra poco dovrò aprire tutti i file di cui ho bisogno.
A domani!
Aug. 16, 2023
Slingshot
When I was a child, playing slingshots was one of my hobbies.
I made the slingshots by myself using the primitive materials easily found in the countryside. I made several of them during elementary school.
A slingshot usually consists of three parts: a handle bar, two rubber bands and an oval piece of leather.
The handle bar was very easy to find in the countryside. It was just a y shaped branch. The rubber bands were also very easy to find in families, because women used them to tie their hair. A piece of leather was also easy to find because some worn shoes were made of leather. After you connected the three pieces together, the slingshot was done.
As long as it wasn't school time, l'd like to take my slingshot going around in my village to shoot birds.
There were many different trees in my village and many different birds in the trees. Some birds were very popular in my area. They were sparrows, turtle doves and magpies.
The sparrow was too small to shoot. The turtle doves and the magpie were the best birds to aim at, because they are relatively big birds.
I remember that one time when I shot a magpie, the gravel hit right on its chest. I heard the sound when it was hit by the gravel. I saw a few feathers on its chest falling off. It was seriously hit. It seemed to be dizzy and fell from the tree. But it suddenly flew away one or two seconds right after it fell off. I knew the power was not strong enough to shoot it down.
I remember I shot down about 3-5 birds in total back then, but I can't remember which birds they were.
Even now, I still like to play slingshots, however.
I am not a young boy anymore, so I stopped playing slingshots.
Aug. 16, 2023
My school days
My school starts in September. To be more precise, it starts in the first or second September. In 1st in school we don’t study, because we have a ceremony. After eight, we go to the class in which our teachers tell for us about our studying in this year. In the second day, we already start studying. We’re studying six days in the week, so we just have one day to rest, but in this rest day we have to do our homework. It’s so bad. My school uniform is bad too. We must wear only blue uniform. Girls must wear only skirts. Often in 9 class we had six or seven lessons in a day and gone home roughly at 3 or 4 pm. Also, we have to do our homework. So we don’t have rests. We have four weekends in each season. The longest weekend in summer which is three months. Others have 1 week weekend. So now I have a weekend.
Aug. 16, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay
More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.
What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?
The growing trend of individuals leaving behind their agricultural origins to settle in urban areas brings forth several challenges. However, there are potential solutions to address this trend.
The rising phenomenon of people forsaking their farming heritage to move to cities poses numerous problems. As more individuals move to cities, the demand for housing, transportation, and public services rises exponentially. This leads to overcrowding, inadequate housing conditions, traffic congestion, lower service quality, and environmental degradation. The influx also intensifies job competition, resulting in higher unemployment levels. Moreover, the abandon of farming causes a decline in agricultural productivity, negatively affecting food security and sustainability. This means that people might have to rely more on imported food, leading to increased costs and supply chain vulnerabilities.
To tackle this trend, governments can initiate comprehensive incentive programs aimed at promoting agriculture. Financial aid in the form of grants, subsidies, or low-interest loans can ensure that existing and aspiring farmers have access to the necessary capital to start, maintain, expand, or modernize their agricultural endeavors. Tax incentives or exemptions associated with land ownership, equipment acquisitions, or income derived from agricultural activities further alleviate financial burdens. Crop insurance schemes that serve to safeguard farmers against crop failures can ensure financial security and stability. Educational and training initiatives tailored to agricultural practices, contemporary techniques, and effective business management can provide essential skills and knowledge required for success within the industry. Investments in rural infrastructure can establish a conducive environment for agricultural growth. This can include improving irrigation systems, establishing storage facilities to mitigate post-harvest losses, and developing efficient transportation networks to facilitate the smooth movement of agricultural produce to markets. These strategies can encourage individuals to embrace farming pursuits and current farmers to continue their work, reducing urban migration.
In conclusion, forsaking agricultural roots for urban relocation strains city resources, escalates their unemployment rates, and poses challenges to food security and sustainability. Yet, supporting and promoting agricultural activities can mitigate this relocation.
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Please Review My Essay
Topic: More and more business meetings are taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
My answer:
The prevalence of online business meetings is on the rise, and this trend comes with both positive and negative implications.
There are two primary advantages to conducting business meetings virtually. The first lies in cost savings. Companies can cut out various expenses associated with travel, such as ground transportation, parking, airfare, lodging, and meals. They also do not need to allocate funds for renting or maintaining physical meeting rooms and audio-visual equipment. These savings can be quite substantial, especially when dealing with meetings that involve participants from distant or international locations. The second advantage is enhanced time efficiency. Virtual meetings not only streamline the often time-consuming, back-and-forth process of coordinating optimal meeting times, especially with participants across different time zones, but also remove the burdensome responsibilities of arranging physical meeting spaces and managing lodging and travel details for attendees from out of town. Moreover, they completely eliminate time for commuting to and from the meeting venue, along with its related logistical complexities.
However, virtual business meetings also have drawbacks. The easy access to various devices and applications, combined with the physical separation and lack of direct supervision, can tempt participants to engage in unrelated tasks or multitasking. The lack of a structured and distraction-free environment can further divert their attention from the meeting's core objectives. Imagine someone participating in online meetings from home. They are exposed to a range of potential distractions, from household responsibilities and family members to pets and ambient noise. These distractions can easily fragment their focus, dampening their active involvement. As a consequence, participants in virtual meetings often exhibit a shorter average attention span compared to face-to-face gatherings. This reduction in attention can lead to crucial details being overlooked and valuable opportunities for meaningful contributions being missed, ultimately reducing the effectiveness of the meeting.
In conclusion, while conducting business meetings virtually rather than in person can result in cost and time savings, it can also lead to reduced attention span and effectiveness.
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