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Ein Brettspiel namens "Santorin"
Gestern bin ich mit meinen Freunden ausgegangen und wir sind in eine Kneipe gegangen, um warm zu bleiben.
Nachdem ich eine Tasse heißen Schokolade mit Zimt bestellt habe, habe ich mich an einen Tisch mit meinen Freunden gesetzt, und einer von ihnen hat ein Brettspiel genommen, das ich nie gesehen hatte.
Das Spiel heißt Santorin, nach der griechischen insel, und es ist ein sehr interessantes und strategisches Spiel, worüber ich in diesem Text sprechen will.
Jeder Spieler hat zwei Spielsteine, die er auf einem 5x5 Spielfeld bewegen kann. Während seines Zuges darf jeder Spieler einen seiner Spielsteine um ein Feld in eine beliebige Richtung bewegen. Danach muss er einen Stock eines Hauses bauen. Ziel des Spiels ist es, ein 3-stöckiges Haus zu bauen und mit einem Spielstein darauf zu klettern.
Das Spiel scheint einfach (und ich habe nicht all die Regeln erklärt, sonst wäre der Text zu lang!), aber es ist sehr strategisch weil die Spieler natürlich versuchen werden, ihre Gegner am Gewinnen zu hindern. Darüber hinaus zieht jeder Spiel am Anfang des Spiels eine Karte von einem Stapel. Jede Karte hat eine besondere Fähigkeit, die das Spiel noch komplizierter und damit spannender macht.
Wir haben zwei Spiele gespielt, und das zweite habe ich gewonnen! Ich hoffe, dass ich bald wieder spielen kann.
Dec. 26, 2021
To Be Concise
Tomorrow is Monday, and I must go to work.
My workday is from Monday to Friday. Weekends are my days off.
My department is a part of the government, so you can see me as a civil servant.
The responsibility of my department is to train farmers in my district, and each year we train about 300 farmers.
We stay in hotels for theoretical training and go to some bases for field training.
We pay for everything during the training. Farmers don't need to pay a cent.
We will train them to plant crops, fruits, vegetables and so on.
My colleagues and I don't have the skills to train them. We are just organizers and we hire professional experts to teach them.
The purpose of writing this short essay is to try to be concise. I don't know if I did it.
Dec. 26, 2021
Mon nouveau passe-temps
Ce mois j’ai trouvé un nouveau passe-temps, c’est la coutrepointe.
J’ai toujours aimé la couture, mais je n’ai jamais essayé de coutrepointe jusqu’à récemment.
J’ai beaucoup des passe-temps, et il n’y a jamais assez de temps à faire tous. Je n’ai jamais essayer la coutrepointe parce-que j’en pensais comme une chose démodée. J’étais étonnée à trouver beaucoup des courtepointièrs moderns qui utilisent les techniques traditionnelles et font des créations vraiment contemporaines et fraîches. J’ai hâte d’apprendre plus en plus à propos d’art de coutrepointe et faire beaucoup de choses interessants.
Dec. 26, 2021
C'est Noël!
Aujourd’hui c’est Noël! C’est le meilleur jour de l’an, encore mieux que l’Halloween et même mon anniversaire.
Ma famille commence la journée par ouvrir des cadeaux. Tout le monde rassemble autour de la sapin be Noël, même des chats. Tout le monde ouvre ses cadeaux, pendant que les chat jouent avec le papier cadeau et courent vite à travers la salle.
Dec. 26, 2021
The One Épisode Quatre
Je suis en train de regarder pour la deuxième fois une série anglaise sur Netflix qui s’appelle “The One.” Ça raconte l’histoire d’une appli de rencontre qui promet de trouver ton âme sœur grâce à l’ADN. L’appli a étée cofondée par deux scientifiques qui s'appellent Rebecca et James. Le problème est qu’ils sont liés également à la disparition de son ami Ben.
Épisode quatre commence par un retour en arrière où Rebecca et James se rappellent quand leur colocataire Ben a été suspendu de son travail à cause d’une faille de sécurité. Son employeur–un database d’ADN–l’a accusé de voler des données. Ben est confuse parce qu’il n’a jamais mis les données dans une situation compromettante. La vérité est que Rebecca et James ont volé les données de l’ordinateur de Ben pour monter leur boîte. Ils laissent Ben pense que des hackers ont piraté son ordinateur au lieu de lui dire la vérité.
Dec. 26, 2021
Jour 38 : Une belle soirée
Ça faisait que 12°C et il pleuvait dehors. C'était plutôt une bonne idée de rester à la maison. Je n'avais donc pas envie de sortir ce soir-là mais j'avais promis mes amis de dîner avec eux. Elles m'ont persuadé d’y aller en disant : « Viens, ce ne fait pas froid ici et avec nous, tu auras plus chaude. Est-ce que tu veux manger ? On peut tout faire...... ». En tenant l’idée que « une promis est une promis » alors malgré le froide, j'ai sort quand même.
À la fin, je ne regrette pas de sortir ce soir-là parce que j'ai dégusté la meilleure pâte que j'ai jamais eu. Bien sûr, c’est aussi parce que j’étais avec mes meilleures amis et c'est toujours agréable de discuter avec eux.
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
JLPT N4 Practice 9
１．彼はアメリカン人に見えますが、イタリア人です。
２．私のスマホとあなたのスマホは同じに見えます。
３．あなたはいつ試験に勉強し始めますか。
４．何時に料理を作り始めましたか。
５．今日雨が降るかもしれないので、傘なしで出掛けないほうがいいです。
６．勉強することなしで言語を覚えることは難しいです。
７．仕事に歩くとき、7時に起きなくてはいけない。
８．天気は悪いとき、仕事に車で行きます。
９．家に帰ったとき、料理を作りました。
１０．あなたは日本語が上手なので、私に教えてくれない？
１１．あなたのアパートはきれいなので、そこで一緒に勉強しませんか。
１２．こんな本こそが大好きです。
１３．昨日母は私に本を買ってくれました。
１４．あの本を貸してくれますか。
１５．兄は三年前から沖縄に住んでいます。
１６．このコンピュータはいつから持っていますか。
１７．今日昼ご飯をもう食べたので、また食べなくてもいい。
１８．昨日彼は新しい帽子を買った。だから、彼に何か買わなくてもいい。
１９．今朝ケーキを作ってみます。
２０．今日、ラーメンを作ってみたい。
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Last week of 2021
There are only 6 days left in 2021.
Each day, I am reviewing my life of 2021 with 8 topics such as family, kids, hobby, English, work, health, note taking and mind.
Based on my old plan when I wrote down in the last week of 2020, I am checking the goals and it is very interesting for me.
Some items are already archived, but others are not yet.
Whether done or not, these feedbacks give me a lot of thoughts, and help to make next year plans.
I hope that I will be happy next year as well.
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
France
France is beautiful and so cute . It very big and capital is Paris . This city is the romantic there world. The Eiffel tower is so tall and fashion is so cute . But the Food is very different . How snail und shell but the cake is good . great is but the cookies . My family live in France . In the Holyday visit we they . We go to the park and in Disneyland . We drive with the merry-go-round . After that we go shopping we buy dress ,socks, shoes ,pants , candy , skirts and shirts . We play farther in park and after two weeks we go home.
Dec. 26, 2021
Ich weiße nicht ,was ich jeden Tag schreiben soll.
Gestern ist Weinachten,es ist ganz normaler Tag, ich habe nichts besonderes getan. Manchmal hoffe ich ,dass ich viel um die Ohren haben könnte, damit ich nicht langweile.
was hat am Gestern unnormal passiert? Nämlich bin ich gestern mit dem Fahrrad in so einem kaltes Wetter gefahren. nach der bewegung fühle ich mich sehr wohl. Ich weiße immer , dass man regelmäßig Sport treiben soll. Es ist nicht nur gut für unseren Körper sonder auch für den Geist.
Heute scheint die Sonne . trozdem ist draußen sehr kalt. jezt fange ich an zu überlegen, wohin ich in einnem schönen Tag gehen soll.
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Un jour
Je suis moi lever du mon lit. Ensuite je proser mes dents. Quand j'etais finir avec ca je decide de faire mon petit dejeuner. Un oeuf, d'orange et de pain avec du fromage. C'etait deliceux et un bon debut pour la journée. Apres je pris tous mes livres et fait les dans ma sac. Je suis partir à l'ecole avec le bus pour trente minutes. Lorsque, en route j'ecoute un podcast avec mes ecouteurs. Quand je suis arrivé à l'ecole, il commence immediatement. On a appris d'allemange, de francais, de mathematiques au fin on a aussi faire du sport. Ensuite je suis revenu à la maison. Je manger diner avec ma famille, fais mes devoirs, jouer au console et regarde un episode de ma serie préfére. Au fin je suis parti dormir.
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Dec. 26, 2021
Toby
Hallo Leute. Heute ich will über Toby erzählen. wir ist Toby? Toby ist ein schön Hund und seine Eigentümerin ist Claudia meine Freundin. Claudia seit einem Monat ist in die Vereinigten staaten von Amerika,weil sie seine familien besuchen ist deshalb Ich habe die haftbarkei von seinem Hund achten. Ich habe circa zwei Woche mit Toby und hat ein gut benehmen außerdem ich spaziere immer mit ihm zwei mal pro Tag. Toby isst am Morguen oder Nacht. Gestern war Toby sehr nervös wegen der Feuerwerkskörper aber heute hat er ruhig aufgestehen. Toby ist elf Jahre alt und er watet für seine Eigentümerin .
Dec. 26, 2021
Writing Practice
You're at a restaurant, what will you order?
I think this question is related to the attitude of someone to choosing their food.
For me, I prefer eating light flavored foods. I have the principle of eating: less meat, less oil, less seasonings and no sugar, no fried food.
Every meal must include wheaten food (for example, steamed buns, rice and noodles), vegetables, a little meat and soup.
For breakfast, I eat soybean milk or porridge, eggs and bread. For lunch, I eat rice or bread, meat, vegetables and soup. For dinner, I eat bread, meat, vegetables and porridge.
In my opinion, a nutritional meal must cover wheaten food or rice, meat, vegetables and soup or porridge. And less salt, no sugar, less seasonings, such as soy sauce, aniseed and so on.
Just using green onion, ginger and garlic to increase the dishes' taste is enough.
Anyway, different people have different tastes, but healthy diets are very important to one's health. We should attach more importance to it.
Dec. 26, 2021
Trying to write a story
Kyle was sitting on his laptop. Legs crossed and closing, his hands occasionally due to the cold Christmas night. It was about time for him to start writing, and he had quite an ambitious project in mind. His son entered the room.
Johnny could you get me that pen please - said Kyle keeping his eyes on the laptop.
Sure dad. Here you are - said Johnny handing the pen to his dad.
Dad, May I…. tried to ask Johnny
English please - interrupted his dad.
Oh, sorry for that, may I get this 1 euro coin that you left here on this shelf?. Johnny knew that he couldn't take any coins without his father's consent even if he knew he could steal them and they wouldn't even realize.
Sure. I'm happy that you asked this time - said his father who was also happy for his son's improvement in English in the recent weeks.
Now please leave me alone since I need some inspiration here and you´re distracting me - Said Kyle with a serious face.
Dec. 26, 2021
Seres extraterrestres
No hay ninguna duda en mi mente: hay que existir formas de vida fuera de nuestra sistema solar. Los humanos solamente conocen una parte muy pequeña de nuestro universo inmenso. Hay mil millones (¡aún más!) de planetas a través del universo. ¿Cómo no podría existir seres extraterrestres en solamenta una otra?
Además, es posible que la vida desconocida sea tan extraño para que no necesite vivir en una planeta. Hace muchos años, los científicos creyeron que toda la vida de la tierra necesita la energía del sol. Sin embargo, descubrieron vida tan profundo en el océano de modo que allá es totalmente oscuro. ¿Por qué no puede existir vida en el espacio profundo también?
Aunque no conocemos (aún) qualquiera seres fuera de nuestra planeta azúl, es posible que la vida extraterrestre ya nos conozca. Y, si es cierto, ¿se gustaría lo que ve ocurriendo aquí?
Dec. 26, 2021
È Natale ma sto lavorando come una bestia umana
Oggi è stata una giornata di moltissimo lavoro per me anche se è Natale. A proposito...auguro a tutti una bellissima giornata, anche se qui a São Paulo è già notte.
Sono stanchissima dato che sono uscita durante tutta la settimana per fare compere, le spese, andare al shopping center e sicuramente sdraiarmi un po' sul mio letto perché ho una influenza che si allunga da giorni.
Oggi ho sviluppato un sito per il nostro lavoro in gruppo ed è stato divertente...
Ho imparato a "giocare" un pochettino con i colori e la parte visiva della presentazione, ma un mucchio di altre cosa accadrà nel corso del tempo dato che abbiamo ancora alcuni mesi per modificare tutto innumerevole volte a seconda della nostra volontà e necessità.
Comunque sono soddisfatissima del mio risultato anche se è solo una piccolissima bozza per cominciare a pensarne più seriamente.
Devo ancora cominciare a anotare sulla mia agenda come sarà l'inizio dell'anno dato che devo ancora andare dai dottori e consegnare il lavoro del mese, dopo de guardare con cura le lezioni. Sarà di sicuro una pazzia come sempre.
Per 2022 vorrei avere un po' di pace spirituale e imparare meglio la lingua di Dante per superare il mio esame di livello a Dicembre ma con la quantità de lavoro che avrò, le giornate dovranno avere più di 48 ore.
Comunque adesso che ho appena trovato un libro scaricabile che lo cercavo da mesi, devo correre per leggerlo entro una settimana....il problema è che è in inglese e non mi piace molto questa lingua.... mi mette ansia!
Faccio la doccia e dormo che è già tardi e domani sarà un altro giorno di impegni .... ieri ho lavorato per 12 ore senza sosta per mettere la casa in ordine e oggi era tutta un casino ancora una volta. Nessuno in questo pianeta se lo merita!!!!
E devo ancora sentire assurdi di gente che se ne frega della situazione in cui mi hanno lasciato....ma sarà il tema di un altro testo!!! Adesso me ne vado.... ho sonno!!!! Sono davvero distrutta, cotta, esaurita!!!! Ma sono felice con me stessa perché non mollo mai....
Vi lascio una canzone che mi piace... NOTTE!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=saHhYGzdISY
Dec. 26, 2021
Writing Practice
The junior high school I studied in is in my hometown, which is called Gongji town. It is around 1.5 kilometers away from my village. All of my classmates came from different elementary schools, so we didn't know each other at first.
The school is located in the southwest part of Gongji town. Our classrooms were a few rows of bungalows. On the weekdays, we slept and ate in school. Only on weekends can we go home.
The east side of school was bordered by a pond, and every morning we went to the pool to wash our faces. If it was winter, we had to find a brick and break the ice to get water.
We had early self-study back then, so every morning in the winter when we went into the classroom, there was always ice in my front hair.
There was no electricity in my school at that time. We had to use two vapour lamps to light up the classrooms when we self - studied in the early morning.
Our dormitory didn't have beds, we just slept on the floor and used two bricks as a pillow. Besides, there were two holes on the northern wall of the dormitory, so we hardly felt warm on windy nights in the winter.
My school had a cafeteria. We brought 80 percent sweet potato flour and 20 percent wheat flour to it. Besides, we had to give it a small amount of money. Maybe it was just 0.5 RMB.
So three meals a day, what we ate were all steamed buns and salty porridge. Of course, they were made from what we brought to the cafeteria.
However, bad living conditions don't necessarily mean that we aren't happy. On the contrary, I was not only happy, but also got very good grades when I was in junior high school.
Dec. 25, 2021
University Investment.
Nowadays university prices are high, but do this kind of inversion give enough retribution to people?
Some people think that we should take this money and make a better inversion as star your own business or buy your home. They support this idea because buying your own home or business gives you stability and also in many cases it is the purpose when you begin to study, that you can find a good job and do this kind of inversion. However, this is not the only one argument, they say that the university does not coherent with the real life, that in many cases the people does not find a job or not in the way that they thought when they chose the career or university.
On the other hand, many people think that the knowledge that you gain in the university it is invaluable. This kind of experience builds you as person and allows you to open your mind to new cultures, realities, experiences, moreover you take new capacities that make you more competitive worldwide. The people in favor of the inversion in university think that the knowledge is the kind of thing that no one can take away from you, and this allows you to rebuild yourself as many times as you need. They take the knowledge as a tool against injustices and world improvement.
In conclusion, the university is as any inversion that should be taken with responsibility and by correct reasons.
Dec. 25, 2021
An essay on the role of journalists in society
We live in an era where news is spread in a blink of an eye, but the information has never been subjected to such changes and has not caused panic. Therefore, facing this situation, the main functions of a Journalist role in providing information and influencing opinion have to be reinforced.
Such sources as social media have changed the amount of information that journalists used to handle, and although this is a positive thing when used appropriately, it has increased the amount of hours they spend filtering the information and as a result they could feel tempted to be bias instead of setting out the facts accurately.
As citizens of the world we're all responsible for taking part on the decisions either locally or globally. We need profesionales that are well informed and take the time to back up their posture in politics, healthcare, social security,etc to make it easy for us to make up our minds in relevant areas.
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