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My Town- General French practice
Je habite dans une petite village à la campagne, ce n'est pas près de beacoup magasins. À mon avis, c'est assez calme et tranquille, c'est ma tasse de thé!
Cependant, si j'avais le choix, je voudrais habiter dans la ville, par example en Paris. Il y a six ans, je suis alleé déja en France avec tout ma famille, c'était incroyable. J'ai hâte de aller en France encore.
Je vais au lycée dans ma ville, et je étudie Le Français, mais J'ai du mal gagner bonnes notes. J'aimais aller au lycée, mais malheuresement, maintenant c'est trop difficile. Je rêve de devenir une infirmier à l'avenir, parce que ce n'sera pas en plein air. J'irai en France faire le boulet, ce serait le cerise dur le gâteau.
June 15, 2022
Vacances
Je dirais que mon destination de vacances preferee serait en Croatie parce que les paysages semblent epoustouflants et le climate est tres chaud.
Je crois que je voyagerais en avion parce que c'est le plus vite et il m'economiserait un peu de temps, mais il n'est pas super comfortable.
L'annee derniere j'ai visite ma tante qui habite en France a la campagne. C'etait tres amusant parce que j'ai visite la mer tous les jours et j'aime bronzer sur la plage.
A l'avenir je voyagerai en Italie parce que la culture la-bas est incroyable et je veux essayer la nourriture delicieuse.
June 15, 2022
L'ou com balla
How every year, the "Corpus Christi" day comes with this antique tradition, "L'ou com balla", dated from 1600. Tomorrow june 16, if you come to Catalunya, likely you can watching in many fountains, an egg moving in the top of a waterjet. It is a curious entertainment the view of this egg dancing during hours without falling it. You can see this show in the courtyards of churchs and oficial buildings, during all day. You can watching it in videos, but in confidence, I can tell you is more funny to see it in live.
June 15, 2022
General Practice- French
Normalement, j'aime aller au magasins avec ma famille mais, maintenant je prefere acheter des vetements avec mes amis.
Si je peux, je voudrais habiter dans France a l'avenir parce que je pense que c'est belle pays. Peut-etre je habierai dans Paris ou a la campagne a lieu de le ville, je ne sais pas.
Weekend dernier, je vais aller au cinema pour regarder un film d'action et je vais manger un peu de pop-corn
June 15, 2022
Personen beschreiben
Johanna ist eine hübsche Frau. Sie ist schlank und mittelgroß. Seine Haare sind blond, kurz und glatt. Sie hat braune Augen und Sommersprossen. Seine Schwester ist ganz anders: sie ist klein und pummelig aber sie ist auch hübsch. Seine Haare sind braun und lockig und seine Augen sind blaue. Sie tragt eine blaue Brille.
June 15, 2022
Mon dernier jour d'école
Aujourd'hui, c'était le dernier jour d'école. Pour ça raison avons-nous commencé plus tard et je pourrais dormir plus longtemps. Donc, quand je me suis levé à huit heures je me sentais très bien. J'étais preparer pour le jour.
Pour le petit déjeuner j'ai pris deux pains avec du beurre et j'ai bu des café. Après le petit déjeuner j'ai regardé mon montre et j'ai vu que il a resté deux heures avant j'ai eu besoin de aller à l'école.
Quand pendant que je attendais, j'ai joué de la guitare. Plus tard, après j'étais finir, j'ai réalisé que c'était seulement dix minutes à mon bus part et je n'étais pas prêt. Vite, j'ai couru à ma chambre et je me suis habilité. Alors je me suis brossé les dents et je suis sorti ma maison juste à temps pour pris le bus.
À l'école, tous les étudiants ont groupé dans la plus grand salle. Quelques professeurs parlaient de comment bien nous étions pour compléter le dernier semestre quand l'alarme incendie a sonné et nous avons eu besoin de sortir. Une fin abrupte:)
June 15, 2022
Première entrée
Salut tout le monde!
Je suis australien et c'est mon première entrée sur ce site.
J'ai commencé à apprendre le français il ya deux ans. J'écoute et lis souvent en français mais je n'écris ou parle jamais. Alors c'est cette raison que je suis là. Je suis très timide et je peux être très subconsient avec ma pronounciation et j'a difficulté constuire des phrases alors j'ai beaucoup de peur parler avec les gens. Pour devenir plus assuré avec mon français, d'abord je vais pratiquer écrire quand il n'y a pas perssone sauf moi.
June 15, 2022
15 juin 2022 - Il pleut, il pleut bergère
Vous êtes bien au chaud, à l’abri pendant que la pluie tambourine sur les toits... Décrivez votre après-midi pluvieux idéal.
Comme il pleut pendant plus de deux semaines ici, ce sujet convient parfaitement. Quand il pleut, j’aime bien rester sur les toits, près d’une fenêtre ; regarder les pluies tombées sur les surfaces, les gens qui coulent dans les rues et écouter la chante de la pluie. Rien n’est mieux que d’avoir une tasse de thé chaud à la main, de brûler des chandelles et de lire un livre en même temps. Ou bien, c’est aussi une bonne idée de regarder un film. Une chose qui ne me plaît pas quand il pleut, c’est que les vêtements ne se sèchent jamais et que je suis coincée à l’intérieur quand il pleut si longtemps.
June 15, 2022
How to Speak with Russians about What Happens in Ukraine
Yesterday, when looking for something interesting to watch on YouTube, I came across a video about the women risking it all on the streets of Russia. Since the war in Ukraine began, I have seen many videos related to this war and the many things Ukrainians have gone through. It’s very sad to see how much harm a single person can do.
I have heard on TV and the internet what Ukrainians who have arrived in my country, the ones who are staying in Poland and even some of the ones still living in Ukraine say about what have been happening in their country. Undoubtedly, the people who are suffering the most are the Ukrainians. However, millions of Russians have also had to flee their country because otherwise, they would be arrested and imposed a sentence of up to 15 years in prison for spreading “fake news”. Right now, you can learn about everything that is happening in Ukraine but learning about what is happening in Russia is a bit trickier. Therefore, what I have done is to try to speak with as many Russians as possible. It isn’t an easy task. How do you ask someone who you don’t know or whose life could be in danger about what he or she thinks about the war in Ukraine? That has been what I have been trying to do. I have spoken with Russians who were as happy as a sandboy and when I tried to raise the issue of Ukraine, they didn’t seem very happy to speak about it. I also met a Russian lady who told me how much she was suffering watching their country invading its neighbours. She also told me that every day it was a struggle for her to remain human. That Russia was becoming such a terrible country and Russians were becoming such, sorry but this part is completely literal, stupid people who liked to hear and repeat lies and live in filth, poverty and that they had fanatical faith. The so-called West isn’t paradise but it’s much closer to be it than Russia.
I began my post writing about a video I came across yesterday. However, at the end I have written about everything but the video. So I’m going to leave its link so that you can judge by yourself whether or not this video is worth seeing. For those who want to learn about what’s happening in Russia, this video will be an eye-opener
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHzPrayS8dU
June 15, 2022
Am Wochenende
Lieber Alper,
Ich freu mich schon auf das Wochenende und ich habe auch schon Plane gemacht. Am Samstag können wir zuerst ins Kino gehen. Es gibt viele Kinos in Soma. Nach dem Kino können wir in Somas beliebtestem Restaurant etwas essen. Am Sonntag wollen wir nicht Berglandschaft sehen? Der Berg in Soma ist wirklich beeindruckend. Natürlich können wir wie alle Touristen einen Stadtrundgang machen. Wir brauchen keinen Reiseführer weil ich in Soma wohne. Was denkst du? Ist dieser Plan das Richtige für dich? Einverstanden?
Viele Grüße Güven,
June 15, 2022
Frühstück um 4:00 Uhr
Was haben wir für Frühstück am 4:00 Uhr, wenn kein Schlaf möglich ist ? Ist Kaffee besser als Milch, um vielleicht der Tag zu starten. Oder versuchen Sie Milch wieder zu schlafen? Das ist eine schwierige Entscheidung für mich. Wenn der Tag so früh beginnt, habe ich das Gefühl, deass er langer dauert. Aber das ist selten effektiv, meistens brauche ich Schlaff nach dem Mittagessen, und am Abend kann ich weniger schaffen. Im Gegenteil, wann ich um 4:00 Uhr Milch für ein Getränk wählen, schlafe ich noch 1-2 Stunden aber es ist schwieriger aufzuwachen und dem Tag frische starten. Doch, es ist immer besser bis 6:00 Uhr zu schlaffen, dann braucht es keine "grosse Entscheidung".
June 15, 2022
Journal
My teacups part 4
This time I bought two glass teacups. The cheap one was 300 ml and with a stainless steel filter inside the opening of the cup, the other expensive one was a type of tea-water separation cup.
Inside the lower half of the teacup, there was an isolation valve and people could open or close the valve through revolving the bottom lid to separate or connect the water and the tea leaves.
After I received the expensive glass cup, I suddenly felt if I used it I would feel pain.
Considering that I already had a few teacups, I gave the tea-water separation teacup to my former leader, who helped me a lot when I was young. Of course, he retired years ago.
In the meantime, I thought I should have found a filter for my first insulation teacup on the internet and I regretted very much for not thinking of this idea before I bought the second insulation cup with a filter.
Before long, I found a very nice stainless steel filter on an e-commercial platform and bought it. When I received it, I immediately put it into the opening of my first insulation cup and it fitted the cup so well.
With the accumulation of the experience of using the insulation cups, I also found out how to use an insulation cup to make tea.
The tip was that after you poured the boiling water into your cup, please don't cover your cup lid, except that the water would become cold.
Presently, I won't need to buy more teacups because I already have four cups. Two glass cups and two insulation cups. Three of them are in my office while one of them is in my home.
June 15, 2022
Journal
My teacups part 3
It's not hard to find a "zojirush" teacup with a filter screen. This time I still chose a black one, but this one was not 360 ml, but 340 ml.
Its filter screen is not made of stainless steel, but plastic components.
Before I made tea, I would wash the tea first. Because of the filter screen, washing tea inside the cup was very easy.
After I washed the tea, I preferred taking the filter screen away. Somehow, I didn't like drinking tea with the filter screen on. I think maybe I have a kind of obsession.
After I used this cup for a few days, I learned information which said that the insulated cups were not suitable for making tea and even harmful sometimes.
People think that glass cup is the best cup for making tea, so I want to buy glass teacup again.
To be continued.
June 15, 2022
Journal
My teacups. Part 2
Soon after, I bought this kind of teacup on a commercial platform.
After using it a few times, I lost fresh feelings about it and stopped using it. The main reason, I think, maybe that its lid was too clumsy and I was not used to it.
A few months later, I thought I should form the habit of drinking tea, because I felt I was not a young man anymore and I should learn to take good care of myself, so I decided to buy another teacup.
Because it was winter back then, I felt I should buy an insulation cup so that the tea water wouldn't be cold very quickly.
I checked insulated cups on the internet to find out which brand had better quality and finally, I made a decision to buy a Japanese brand "zojirush".
It was a 360 ml volume cup and really had a good quality of keeping warm. But it didn't have a filter screen, so often times, the tea leaves would enter my mouth when I drank tea.
I felt I should buy another teacup with a filter screen, thus it not only can prevent tea leaves from entering my mouth, but also be very useful for me to wash tea leaves before I make tea.
I still wanted to buy the "zojirush" brand because its keeping- warm function was very effective.
To be continued. I sincerely thank you for your trust and support.
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Journal
My teacups
Two years ago, my oldest brother returned to the city I lived in to see my mom and I saw the teacup he was using, which I thought was very nice.
The teacup was not like an ordinary one. The lid of it actually connected another smaller cup above it and inside the lid, there is a filter screen. The smaller cup was used to hold tea leaves.
When people make tea, they pour boiling water into the teacup first, then cover the lid. Afterwards, stand the cup upside down.
Therefore, the boiling water goes down into the smaller cup below and the tea leaves are soaked in boiling water, so the tea is made.
A few minutes later, the tea will be done. After that, flip back the teacup and the tea water flows into the main teacup again, so the tea leaves and the tea water are separated.
After I saw this kind of tea cup, I wanted to buy one late.
To be continued. Sincerely thank you for your trust and support.
June 15, 2022
About running and learning German
I usually try to run at least 1 hour every other day, but last week my feet were recovering from an injury, so I just walked 1 hour every day instead (it sucked).
I started running about 2 and a half months ago. I still remember how much I hated running at the beginning. It was so hard, I wanted to stop after the first step, and I never felt like doing it. To be honest, nothing ever changed. I still hate running (during the period I'm running), it still hard, it's demanding and I never feel like doing it.
The good part about running is that I face a huge challenge right at the beginning of my day, so everything else that I have to do throughout the day feels way easier. I feel more focused, proactive and diligent. Looking at my progression makes me feel great; I could barely run 2 min non-stop. Now I can run between 9 to 10 km non-stop consistently. It motivates me to stay on the grind in other areas of my life, like learning German.
My German is terrible. I can only understand A1 and A2 texts; If a native starts to speak just a bit too fast, I can't understand a single word; My writing sucks; It feels like I'll never be capable of pronouncing /ʁ/ and /ç/. Still, I think that if I keep practicing, my German will get way better as time goes by. Running did not only change my body, but it changed my mindset too. That's why I can't wait to run again tomorrow.
Edited:
I usually try to run at least an hour every other day, but last week my feet were recovering from an injury, so I just walked 1 hour every day instead (it sucked).
I started running about 2 and a half months ago. I still remember how much I hated running at the beginning. It was so hard, I wanted to stop after the first step, and I never felt like doing it. To be honest, nothing ever changed. I still hate running (while I'm running), it still hard, it's physically demanding and I never feel like doing it.
The good part about running is that I face a huge challenge right at the beginning of my day, so everything else that I have to do throughout the day feels way easier. I feel more focused, proactive and diligent. Looking at my progress makes me feel great; I could barely run 2 minutes non-stop initially. Now I can run between 9 to 10 km non-stop consistently. It motivates me to stay on the grind in other areas of my life, like learning German.
My German is terrible. I can only understand A1 and A2 texts; If a native speaker starts to speak just a bit too fast, I can't understand a single word; My writing sucks; It feels like I'll never be capable of pronouncing /ʁ/ and /ç/. Still, I think that if I keep practicing, my German will get way better as time goes by. Running did not only change my body, it changed my mindset as well. That's why I can't wait to run again tomorrow.
June 15, 2022
June 15, 2022
Me importo un pepino
Un día en la carretera...
María: Ay, Juan. Mira al medidor de combustible, tenemos que encontrar una gasolinera o vamos a quedar sin gasolina.
Juan: No te preocupes. Tenemos bastante gasolina para llegar a la cabina. Hay una gasolinera cuando lleguemos allí y entonces podemos llenar el tanque.
María: Pero, Juan. No vamos a llegar a la cabina si quedáramos sin gasolina antes de que llegáramos a la gasolinera allí. Tenemos que encontrar una gasolinera. ¡Mira! ¡Una gasolinera!
Juan: ¿Dónde? No puedo ver nada.
Maria: Exacto. Estás conduciendo pero no ves ni tres cuartos. Mira a la derecha hay una gasolinera. ¿Puedes mirarla? Debemos dejarnos aquí para llenar el tanque y limpiar el parabrisas. Está llena de bichos muertos.
Juan: ¿Una gasolinera? ¿Bichos muertos? ¿Dónde? ¿A la derecha?
María: Juan, ¿dónde están tus lentes? Estamos viajando de velocidad 95 kilómetros por hora en la carretera, ¿y no tienes tus lentes?
Juan: Ah, sí. Mis gafas. A veces se me olvidan usarlas cuando conduzco. Sé que se supone que debo usarlas cuando conduzca, pero a veces no puedo recordar dónde las dejé.
María: ¡Ay! ¡Es un milagro que todavía estamos vivos! Aquí están en la guantera. ¡Póntelas!
Juan: Pásemelas, por favor. (María se las pasa.) Ah, sí. Gracias. Ahora puedo ver a dónde vamos.
María: Y acabamos de pasar la gasolinera. Date la vuelta.
Juan: ¿Por qué? Me importo un pepino. Va a aparecer otra gasolinera muy pronto.
María: Juan, estamos en las montañas. No hay muchas gasolineras aquí y no me gusta la idea de caminar a la cabina. Vamos a tener la negra si no nos diéramos la vuelta para comprar gasolina.
Juan: Me importo un pepino. Tenemos bastante gasolina y... (de repente su auto quedó en pane).
María: ¿Me estabas diciendo?
June 15, 2022
歐盟為兒童讓網絡更安全
現今住在發達國家的人大部芬都很容易地就可以上網。特別歐盟發現開始接觸網絡年齡比10年前小得多。小孩子們越來越多上網玩遊戲、參與網絡課堂等。雖然有不少為兒童安全的網站，還很容易接觸虛假信息、有害的內容、非法的內容等。歐盟委員會就通過了一項 "為兒童打造更好的互聯網" 的戰略。該戰略的目標就是讓網絡更安全。
為了這項新戰略，歐盟委員會要制定在線年齡驗證標準和數字身份。他們也想建立為網絡霸凌受害者的熱線。而且歐盟委員會也打算為兒童、教師和家長組織特別的培訓，就提高他們的網絡素養。
我覺得歐盟的戰略很好。現在有很多孩子幾乎從出世的時候一直用點腦、智慧型手機等，但那並不是說那些孩子了解網絡的危險的意思。我們得保護小孩子。
June 15, 2022
14.06.2022
Hallo, Leute. Wie geht es dir? Heute schriebe ich über die Jahreszeit in Brasillien. Es ist Herbst jetzt hier. Das Wetter ist sehr kalt diese Woche. Man muss seiner wärmstenen Kleidungen anziehen. Der Herbst ist sehr hübsch.
Also heute habe ich die Regeln für Feminin, Maskulin und Neutrum zu Ende gelernt. Ich beginne den Nominativ und den Akkusativ zu lernen.
Heute habe ich deise Wörter gelernt:
• einladen
• einkaufen
• einsteigen
• einmal
• die Einladung, die Einladungen
Ich versuche ein Paar Sätze mit diesen Wörtern hier zu schreiben:
• Ich einlade sie zu einem Feier. (Ist Dativ richtig hier?)
• Sie einkauft den Kaffee.
• Er gewann das Spiel einmal.
• Gestern Sie stiegst in den Zug ein.
• Ich schreibe die Einladung für meine Geburtstagsfeier. (Ist ein Objekt mit "für" immer Akkusativ?)
Danke schön für das Lesen. Auf wiedersehen.
Edited:
Hallo, Leute. Wie geht es euch? Heute schriebe ich über die gegenwärtige Jahreszeit in Brasillien. Es ist jetzt Herbst hier. Das Wetter ist diese Woche sehr kalt. Man muss seine wärmste Kleidung anziehen. Der Herbst ist sehr hübsch.
Also heute habe ich die Regeln für Feminin, Maskulin und Neutrum zu Ende gelernt. Ich beginne den Nominativ und den Akkusativ zu lernen.
Heute habe ich diese Wörter gelernt:
• einladen
• einkaufen
• einsteigen
• einmal
• die Einladung, die Einladungen
Ich versuche ein Paar Sätze mit diesen Wörtern hier zu schreiben:
• Ich lade sie zu einer Feier ein. (Ist Dativ richtig hier?)
• Sie kauft Kaffee ein.
• Er gewann das Spiel einmal.
• Gestern stiegen Sie in den Zug ein.
• Ich schreibe die Einladung für meine Geburtstagsfeier. (Ist ein Objekt mit "für" immer Akkusativ?)
Danke schön für das Lesen. Auf wiedersehen.
June 14, 2022
Wie ich wohne
Ich wohne in einem Haus mit meiner Freundin und meinen Hunden. Mein Haus ist ziemlich groß, und es besteht aus drei Zimmern und zwei Wohnzimmern. Meiner Ansicht nach ist das Haus zu groß, aber wir mussten irgendwo wohnen, im wir mit unseren Hunden wohnen konnten. Es gibt einen Hinterhof, der eingezäunt ist, und das ist perfekt für unsere Hunde, die vorher keinen Spielplatz hatten. Ich muss arbeiten an dem Hinterhof, weil es fast keinen Rasen gibt. Es hilft nicht, dass meine Hunde im Hinterhof graben, aber das ist nicht ihre Schuld, weil sie nie vor einen Hinterhof hatten, deshalb muss ich sie abrichten.
Einer der Zimmer ist mein Homeoffice, wo ich arbeite und Videospiele spiele. In einem Wohnzimmer gibt es einen Fernseher und ein Sofa, aber in dem anderen gibt es Sachen, damit ich Fitness mache. In diesem Zimmer gibt es auch unsere Waschmaschine und unseren Trockner. Am Anfang hatten wir weder keine Waschmaschine noch Trockner, denn das Haus ist alt, und hat Arbeit an der Sanitärinstallation und der Verdrahtung gebraucht. Das war neu für uns, weil wir nie bei einem Waschsalon besucht. Aber alles ist jetzt in Ordnung. Es gibt noch einige Kleinigkeiten, an denen ich arbeiten muss, aber alle größere Probleme sind aufgelöst.
June 14, 2022
Journal
What is the meaning of life? I have been asking myself for many years, but so far I haven't gotten the right answer.
Coming to this world is not our choice, it's only random. However, it is still a good thing.
I think the meaning of life is not to be an official or to be a rich man. It is not and it shouldn't.
But since we humans came to this world, the first thing we should do was to live well and love our parents, children, as well as our friends and relatives.
At least, we should have a positive attitude towards our lives. Always think good and do good, no matter how ordinary we will be.
Maybe we are weak and incapable, but there will always be a thing that we can do to support ourselves.
God is just. He treats everyone fairly. He always gives each one a road. Don't be afraid that we may not be excellent enough. As long as we are healthy, everything will go well.
I am an ordinary person and I have been trying my best to live. Although I haven't achieved great success, I have tried my best.
I still don't know what the meaning of life is. I only know that we should live healthily, happily, positively and diligently.
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