HThere, it used to be farmland and villages here. There used to be farmland and villages here.

HereBack then, it used to be farmland and villages. Back then, it used to be farmland and villages.

The artificial lake covers an area of about 360 mu24 hectares. The artificial lake covers an area of about 24 hectares.

Inside it, there are varioust has numerous types of water - plants , and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes. It has numerous types of water plants , and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes.

Inside it, there are various water -aquatic plants, and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes. Inside it, there are various aquatic plants, and around it, there are many different trees, flowers, and bushes.

"aquatic" better word, scientific term.

To the west of the park, there is a wWater sStreet, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops. To the west of the park, there is Water Street, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops.

Sounds like 'Water Street' is a name so no 'a' and has capital letters.

To the west of the park, there is a water street, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops. To the west of the park, there is a water street, which is a commercial street lined with various modern shops.

Maybe you can use "canal" for water street

NowToday, the park has become a tourist attraction. Today, the park has become a tourist attraction.

On weekends or holidays, many locals and even visitors from other placetourists like to gather here to relax and sightsee. On weekends or holidays, many locals and tourists like to gather here to relax and sightsee.

Or 'On weekends or holidays, many locals and visitors like to gather here to relax and sightsee.'

Shuangqing Bay Park is situated in the central area of Fuyang’s South New District and occupies an area of about one thousand musixty seven hectares. Shuangqing Bay Park is situated in the central area of Fuyang’s South New District and occupies an area of about sixty seven hectares.

A lot of English speakers won't know what a mu is.

In the center of the park, there is an artificial lake. In the center of the park there is an artificial lake.

Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the park started to be built as a supporting facility ofor the new district. Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the park started to be built as a supporting facility for the new district.

Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so the parky started to be built as a supporting facility ofbuilding a park as an addition to the new district. Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so they started building a park as an addition to the new district.

Original is definitely wrong grammar. Maybe you can also say (if i will use your vocabulary): "Around 2018, the local government decided to develop the South New District, so they started to build a park as a [ supporting facility or additional facility or auxiliary facility ] for new district." - but it still doesn't sound right.

As a result, farmlands wereas converted to construction land, and villagers were relocated to other places. As a result, farmland was converted to construction land, and villagers were relocated to other places.

farmland here is uncountable.

As a result, the farmlands were converted into construction land, and villagers were relocated to other places. As a result, the farmlands were converted into construction land, and villagers were relocated to other places.

Passable.

Now, around the park, there are many residential and office buildings around the park. Now, there are many residential and office buildings around the park.