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Pain wrapped around my body…
so I couldn’t move,
just lay down and think.

While looking at the moon,
playing with the stars
that twinkle like dreams.

Night falls quickly.
It feels like a reward,
so peaceful and sweet

Your body isn’t in pain
anymore,
but your mind is bleeding from regrets.

The sun will rise,
inevitably,
Bringing back your pain.

You will work without your will
and get nothing in return,
While the sun burns your soul.

[do not say that you don’t understand what is this poem about, because you don’t have to understand it. I just wrote what feels right to me]

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Poem #2

Pain wrapped around my body…

so I couldn’t move,

just lay down and think.

While looking at the moon,

playing with the stars

that twinkle like dreams.

Night falls quickly.

It feels like a reward,

so peaceful and sweet

Your body isn’t in pain

anymore,

but your mind is bleeding from regrets.

The sun will rise,

inevitably,

Bringing back your pain.

and get nothing in return,

While the sun burns your soul.

I just wrote what feels right to me]

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so I couldn’t move,


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just lay down and think.


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While looking at the moon,


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playing with the stars


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that twinkle like dreams.


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Night falls quickly.


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It feels like a reward,


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so peaceful and sweet


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Your body isn’t in pain


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anymore,


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but your mind is bleeding from regrets.


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The sun will rise,


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inevitably,


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Bringing back your pain.


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You will work without your will


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and get nothing in return,


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While the sun burns your soul.


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[do not say that you don’t understand what is this poem about, because you don’t have to understand it.


[do not say that you don’t understand what is this poem is about, because you don’t have to understand it. [do not say that you don’t understand what this poem is about, because you don’t have to understand it.

I just wrote what feels right to me]


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