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Nov 12th Money Problem (映画館/鬼滅の刃)

Last time I go to cinema watch a movie is more than 10 years ago.

Since I haven’t done that for a long time.

I ask my friend for help.

I know if purchase the ticket early should be cheaper.

Actually, I am just half right.

He told me using VISA card to book a ticket now will be $66.00 compare to the original price $72.00.

So, I book the ticket immediately.

But if I go to cinema directly use VISA card purchase the price will be $56.00.

Another $10.00 difference!

However, now I am guarantee to have a seat that is the benefit.

Will you but a ticket in advance?

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Another $10.00 difference!

Nov 12th Money Problem (映画館/鬼滅の刃)


Last time I go to cinema watch a movie is more than 10 years ago.


LThe last time I gowent to a cinema to watch a movie iwas more than 10 years ago. The last time I went to a cinema to watch a movie was more than 10 years ago.

Since I haven’t done that for a long time.


Since I havedn’t done that for a long time, I asked my friend for help. Since I hadn’t done that for a long time, I asked my friend for help.

It's better to explain the reason and the action in the same sentence.

I ask my friend for help.


I ask my friend for help.

This was moved to be part of the last sentence.

I know if purchase the ticket early should be cheaper.


I know if I purchase the ticket early, it should be cheaper. I know if I purchase the ticket early, it should be cheaper.

Actually, I am just half right.


ActuallyHowever, I am just half right. However, I am just half right.

He told me using VISA card to book a ticket now will be $66.00 compare to the original price $72.00.


HeMy friend told me using a VISA card to book a ticket now will be $66.00, compared to the original price of $72.00. My friend told me using a VISA card to book a ticket will be $66.00, compared to the original price of $72.00.

So, I book the ticket immediately.


So, I booked the ticket immediately. So, I booked the ticket immediately.

But if I go to cinema directly use VISA card purchase the price will be $56.00.


But if I go to the cinema directly use VISA card purchaseand purchase a ticket there with a Visa card, the price will be $56.00. But if I go to the cinema and purchase a ticket there with a Visa card, the price will be $56.

Another $10.00 difference!


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However, now I am guarantee to have a seat that is the benefit.


However, now I am guaranteed to have a seat that, which is the benefit of booking early. However, now I am guaranteed to have a seat, which is the benefit of booking early.

Will you but a ticket in advance?


Willould you buty a ticket in advance? Would you buy a ticket in advance?

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